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friendsall

@friendsall

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Dilo mamma s yet again brilliant!!! love it

He nn more jhatka like dis for him to confess in d serial!! wud luv to read wat happ to Tanveer!

Pl continue

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Nice OS...kept it suspenseful 'till end! Mom knows her Asad well..

feel better soon...

-Sona

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Puneet

@AsYa_fan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Wow amazing update!!! I loved the ending, it was amazing!

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e_enigma

@e_enigma

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Absolutely love this Zoya! She rocks!

Great job! :D

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Barayah

@irock321

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Absolutely loved it! Woman take care of yourself!!! Yeh Os' baad mein likhna!! Amazing! He deserved a bit more torture but good anyways! Hope you get better! I hate being sick ...once I get sick then it takes me forever to get better no matter how many pills or cough syrups I take -.- It's just hectic and horridly boring!

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Laila Banu

@Laila2009

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

this was a really well written story except a rushed ending really hurt the story. I thought you did a fabulous job and wished you'd have added more to the end and given more about Asad and Zoya's inner reactions towards the end. You had a great climactic ending that could have been built up some more and the with more towards the end. It was too matter a fact rather than with the depth and emotion you gave in the earlier part. I really liked it and consider this one of the more mature and well thought out stories that I have read. i definitely think you gave us a much needed maturer Zoya whom I really liked. I just WISH it had not had such a rushed ending.