Mothers Day with asya:os

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hiii frnz...
i wanted to write an os for mothers day
so here v gooo...
asad is still angry with zoya on day blood sample ...
zoya in kitchen.
zoya: of ho najma bass..itna may dalo..
najma: ohh sory zoyawo kya he na muje ye banana nhi ata..
zoya: sshhh... Dhire... Zor se Mat bolo najma phuphi sun legi..
najma: ohh sory... Ye kab banega..
zoya:wait na njma...
zoya: ye lo ye gaya oven me ab bas 30 mins me ye ready ho jayega...
najma: yupii kitna mazaayegA na zoya.. Basab sirf 1hour hi bacha he.. Off hoo ye pura kitchen ..
zoya: ye sab chodo tamater... Jaldi jakar change kar lete he varna lat ho jayenge..
after 30mins...
zoya: wow ye cake to ban gaya na..
najma: hmmm ..its smelling so good..
zoya: wait najma..let me do iceing 1st...
najma: wow zoya its look so beautiful..
zoya: tamater jao candle to leke aao..
najma: abhi layi...
meanwhile asad came in kichen 4 some water...
asad got soo angry by seeing the mess in kitchen...
asad: miss farooqui... Ye sab kya he..
zoya: Mr.khan vo aaj ...
asad: bas itna sab kuch ho Jane k bad bhi aap ye sab ..apne cake banaya.. Ohh ha apko to ye sab karne me maza aa raha hoga na..
zoya: got so angry.. Allah miya wats wrong with u Mr.khan...aap,jab dekho tab muj Paris. Chilate kyun rahte he.. Aaj mothersday he to iss liye mene socha k me ye cake..
asad: aap sochti kyun he miss. Farooqui.. Or ye ura kitchen u messed it.. Or aaj apne cake kyun banaya .. Aapki ammi to...
najma: zoya.., ye lo candle..
Asad soon realise what he told zoya .. He was so angry so he blurred the things which he never mean it.
zoya's face fell by hearing that she just don't wanted to cry infront of najma..
asad: midd.farooqui me vo. Actually i didn't...
najma: bhaijan dekhiye zoya ne kitna achhacake banaya he..
chalo zoya12 bajne me 2 min hi baki he .chaliye bhaijan jaldi..
asad was staring atzoya he cNsaw how hurt c was.. Cwas smiling but the smile was fake...
In dilshad's room:
surprise... Najma shouted to wake up her ammi...
dilshad : happy mothers day ammi...
dilshad: thank u najma. Aree wahhh itna sundar cake kon laya..najma: amii zoya ne banaya khas apke liye or ye ura idea bi unka hi tha..
dilshad: thaank uzoya and she hug zoya n after that asad..
asad was feeling guilty for zoya..
dilshad cut the cake n again thank zoya ..are Oya itni dur kyun khadi ho pas aao na asad or najma k pas muje ek pic chahiye tum tino ka...
zoya": nhi phuphi me thik hu.. Aap,ko ye moment najma or Mr.khan k sath enjoy karna chahiye...
dilshad: zoya tum mere liye najma k barabar hi ho or abto tum meeri bahu bi ho to khabardar jo aainda aesa kuch kaha to...
zoya hugs dilshad
after that all went to their room
asad: knock onzoya's room...miss farooqui may icome..
zoya: Mr Khan pls ab muje kuch nhi sunna... Or abi kuch sunane k liye rahe gaya he..
asad: I'm sorry zoya...
zoya started crying.. Asad can't bear tears in her eyes after that whatever she had done for his mother...he always need awife who loves his mother more than him n today he got that girl..
zoya: i kno Mr.khan apke liye ye sab fake he par mene ye sab phuphi k liye kiya.. Me janti hu k me apke liye misfit hu.
asad: zoya plsss meri bat to suniye..
she was not ready to hear anything so asad got irritated and grab zoya's hand and kissed her...
zoya never thought that asad can do any thing like that .. Asad alsoshocked with hisbehaviour but today he wanted to confess today whatever his ammi asked him... Asad: I LOVE YOU ZOYA... I REALLY WANTED TO MARRY. YOU.. IEAN EVERY THING WEN I SLIDE THAT RING ON YOUR FINGER.. EVERY TIME I MEAN IT..BUILT. I WASSCARED IF I LOST U..IF I HURT YOU... BUT KNOW I ADDMIT THAT I LOVE YOU...
HE BENT ON HIS KNEES AND ASK HER...
WOULD U LIKE TO CELEBRATE THIS DAY WITH MY CHILDRENS?????
small smile appears on zoya's lips she bent down n kiseedasad lightly and say YES... I WOULD LOVE TOO. N I LOVE YOU TOO MR AKTU AHEMAD KHAN...
with that both hug each other...
i kno its bakwas but i was thinking this from,morning. So i update it...
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HAPPY MOTHERS DAY... MAY GOD KEEP HAPPY YOUR ALLS MOTHER...

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luvushivin1 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
wow...so gud and yaa happy mothers day
HinaMalik91 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Lovely and cute.
Thanks for pm.

And i have also written an os about asya.HERE IS THE LINK.
OS:ARHI MEET ASYA
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Like dolly i would say veryyy cuteee, happy MOTHERs day ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HE BENT ON HIS KNEES AND ASK HER...
WOULD U LIKE TO CELEBRATE THIS DAY WITH MY CHILDRENS?????

This was so so sweet 😊 Really loved the OS 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was sooo cute
and plz dont call it bakwass
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww... I loved it. Asad miyan avi se bache ki soch rahe ho... Naughty boy ;D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This a good outline and would have been a superb story if you had fleshed it out some more and spent sometime with the grammar etc - writing full sentences, adding emotions of how the characters felt etc. It was very creative and I wish you'd sent it to one of the more seasoned writers if you'd have a hard time doing it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow its soo cute just like maa ka pyaar...

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