Bleeding Shield... - Page 4

Originally posted by: majumdar

Sareeta,

(So true Pri, but Gauri seems to have taken the major of the wrath landing up close to death all the time.... But yeah Shiv is being her shield , not bleeding though...)

Sometimes being a shield against emotional abuse/family members require more courage than acting as a shield against physical danger.

Rgds,

Pri

Yeah Pri, agree, but Gauri has taken the emotional wrath as well... for standing by the truth and now SHiv is experiencing the same...

I guess, both the partners are experiencing this and its not jus one of them, although yeah with all the divine intervention, Gauri seems to be getting a bigger share...of the physical damage .. too...

Gotta wait and watch , how the story unfolds though...😊

Originally posted by: TiNa58

Sareeta, beautifully written.. 👏 👏 👏

THank you soooooooooooo much Tina!!! 😳

Originally posted by: rimsibani

wooooooooooooooooowy...u write so welll 👏

Thank you so much Rimsi! So kind of you to say so! 😊

Originally posted by: choc_freak

Cool! Very nice 😛

Thank you soooooooo much!!! 😊

OMG!! sareeta..u r sooo gud at this..all these days i jus admired ur poetry..but now i jus cudn't control my self frm praising u!! u reeely brin tears 2 my eyes.. 😭 😭 😭 ....i guess u shd write a book of poetry on shiv n gauri ...coz u r jus toooo gud 😊

Originally posted by: curry

OMG!! sareeta..u r sooo gud at this..all these days i jus admired ur poetry..but now i jus cudn't control my self frm praising u!! u reeely brin tears 2 my eyes.. 😭 😭 😭 ....i guess u shd write a book of poetry on shiv n gauri ...coz u r jus toooo gud 😊

Thank you soooooooo much!!! That is so sweet and kind of you to say so! Yep I am publishing my book with all the poems , taht I have shared here on the forum as well.. should be out next year! 😊

wow!this is brilliant 👏 👏

too good sareeta... 👏
ur words reduce me to tears.. 😭 😭

Originally posted by: sareeta

Burdened heart,
Dark secret harbored
Of a doomed life...
Damned by divine,
Illfated , jinxed,
He stands..
A hapless witness..
As she defies illfate,
Of the impending doom,
Unaware, she bleeds ,
Bearing the wrath ,
His guardian angel...
His bleeding shield....

-Sareeta

- Based on 29th Nov Episode, Gauri considered being Shiv's guardian angel.

Its really a nice poem... so perfect with the storyline.