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Posted: 19 years ago
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Burdened heart,
Dark secret harbored
Of a doomed life...
Damned by divine,
Illfated , jinxed,
He stands..
A hapless witness..
As she defies illfate,
Of the impending doom,
Unaware, she bleeds ,
Bearing the wrath ,
His guardian angel...
His bleeding shield....

-Sareeta

- Based on 29th Nov Episode, Gauri considered being Shiv's guardian angel.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG sareeta😳...This was very nice😳...You write so well👏...I wanna kiss u..haha😆...Wonderful, KeepUpTheGoodWork honey😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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beautiful...so well written ...brings tears to my eyes!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: sareeta

Burdened heart,
Dark secret harbored
Of a doomed life...
Damned by divine,
Illfated , jinxed,
He stands..
A hapless witness..
As she defies illfate,
Of the impending doom,
Unaware, she bleeds ,
Bearing the wrath ,
His guardian angel...
His bleeding shield....

-Sareeta

- Based on 29th Nov Episode, Gauri considered being Shiv's guardian angel.



Sareeta....Excellent....You know I have no words anymore to write to u...You just leave me speechless...My freinds think I am a veryyyyyy emotional person...which I am..
and reading ur poems transforms me to another super duper emotional world 😃....Its like a medicine when I am feeling low..reading beautiful poetry...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sareeta another brilliant job.. 👏 👏

yeah totally agree with all the lines you have penned down...

gauri is shiv guardian angel..

my appreciation to your writing... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mano786

OMG sareeta😳...This was very nice😳...You write so well👏...I wanna kiss u..haha😆...Wonderful, KeepUpTheGoodWork honey😊

THank you sooooooooo much!! Am deeply humbled! Really, it feels so humbling to know that what I jus write with an intention of jus penning my thoughts , is appreciated and viewed as excellent work! It is indeed humbling !! THank you!!! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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yet agen! nother beautifull 1!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
aww that was soo sweet, keep it up 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: mona05

beautiful...so well written ...brings tears to my eyes!!!

THank you soooooooo much!! It deeply touches me , that the lines I have penned have touched you so much! Its an honor to know and be told so! Thank you!!! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: hamsee

Sareeta....Excellent....You know I have no words anymore to write to u...You just leave me speechless...My freinds think I am a veryyyyyy emotional person...which I am..
and reading ur poems transforms me to another super duper emotional world 😃....Its like a medicine when I am feeling low..reading beautiful poetry...

OMG, such wonderful words , you bless me with each time, what do I say Hamsee, I am humbled, Humbled and remain humbled!! Oh , Bless my soul, transform you to another emotional level, now you;ve bought tears to my eyes... really! THank you,... I jus dont know what else to say... I wish Thank you could say it all...😊

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