❤️❤️~~*Meethi-Vishnu FF* {AJAY--TINA}~~❤️❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello all my friends!! Welcoming you to the Mishu Love garden!!By MISHU I mean the real Vishnu (Played by Ajay Chaudhury) and Meethi(Played by Tina Datta).This is based on the present storyline...completely with Meethi being married off to the fake Visnu who is Akaash and Ichcha's death..Only thing is that I wont be showing Akaash so weirdly positive that they are showing so all Meekash lovers fair warning! This FF is on Meethi-Vishnu..!😃😆😆

Hope you enjoy it! Do let me know!!
HAPPY READING!
I WILL PROTECT YOU...FOREVER

He zoomed the car along the road in full speed... He couldn't face them anymore.Not until he rescued their daughter who was in trouble in a way because of him because of his carelessness.

"I want information on Meethi Veer Singh Bundela RIGHT NOW!!!" Shouted Vishnu Kashyap.

"But Sir" stammered a meek voice on the other side of the phone "We Have started trying as soon as you ordered but we just...c...c.can't"

"Don't say that!!!DONT SAY THAT...Find I don't know from where but I need it today!Where is she? And who has taken her?" Vishnu started expressing his confusion over the phone.

"Yes Sir I will" replied the scared voice,why wouldn't he be scared? It was the first time his Favorite Sir sounded so angry, The calm composed 'Friend' of their's who never raised his voice to anyone was shaking with anger today!he could feel that even through the phone... What had happened suddenly?

Vishnu stopped the car abruptly.Where would he go? He had never been so helpless! Who was that man who framed him?? Hundreds of bubbles of fear seemed to burst in him.Was Meethi alright?

"No!!!"Shouted Vishnu looking upwards "Teacherji!!!I will not let anything happen to your daughter. Not a scratch"

Vishnu closed his eyes...He remembered all that which had happened in these two days.His two days of nightmare

"But I am Mukta Rathore!!!" Vishnu remembered meeting the real Mukta Rathore when he had finally decided to meet Teacherji and Thank her for everything

"That's impossible! I didn't meet you that day!"

"She is my daughter.Mukta Raghuvendra Pratap Rathore.Who are you?" Mr.Rathore did ask him.Just when he was about to answer he saw Teacherji.. Not Teacherji but a picture of her which was garlanded...

"NO NO NO!!! TEACHERJI!!! WHERE IS TEACHERJI??SHE CANT DIE!!! PLEASE WHERE IS SHE??? TEACHERJI!!!!"

"Please calm down and tell me who you are" Mr.Rathore replied kindly

"Where is Teacherji?"Vishnu asked aghast..He didn't want to hear the answer.But how could she leave him?Didnt she promise him that she would always be there for him?To give him the love of a mother whenever he wanted her?

"She is no more.I am sorry"Mr.Rathore replied. Beside him his daughter was crying silently.

"How did this happen?"Tears flowed down Vishnu's face "She cant leave his Vishnu!"

"Vishnu!!!YOU ARE VISHNU?" Mukta's strartled cry seemed to confuse Vishnu What had happened?He doubted something was wrong.

Vishnu again opened his teary eyes and returned to the present'So he had been fooled.That was not Mukta whom he had met in the caf while the real Mukta wanted to meet him only to ask for his help in saving Meethi from a criminal but.. "I failed" whispered Vishnu,a defeated man.

Vishnu again started remembering the events.when he knew all from Mukta and met Mr.Veer Singh Bundela who he had idolized and who was shattered infront of him on hearing that his only daughter was cheated and married by a fraud who claimed to be his Ichcha's student

"I am sorry Mr.Bundela.I tried to meet Mukta many times but fate had other plans.I had even arrived on the day of the wedding but a lady I don't know who had sent me away."Vishnu remembered telling Mr.Bundela.

"I am to blame.I couldn't save my wife,my son and my daughter."Cried and shouted Veer "Meethi!!I couldn't be an ideal father of yours,beta where are you?Come back to your father!MEETHI!!!"

Vishnu couldn't see this anymore..He started running outside.He had to go Now!ACT NOW! He would find Meethi.For his teacherji...He had to

Just as he entered the car Mr.Rathore came and told him "Vishnu,don't blame yourself.We will find Meethi.Together."

"No Mr.Rathore.Its me who will find your daughter and bring her home.I promise you.I promise Mr.Bundela and I promise Teacherji.I will bring her back."

And Vishnu zoomed his car.

Vishnu opened his eyes "Why didn't I meet teacherji that day? And who was that woman who tried avoid me knowing the truth.Didnt see her in Bundela house'From where should I start?"

Vishnu then remembered his teacherji saying him, "Vishnu Beta,Never ever lose hope.Remember the darkest of cave has a light.You just have to find it.I have always told you that you are my son Don't ever cry because you are an orphan.You are not.I am your mother.Whenever you need me,your mother just remember me and all that I have taught you then even if I am not near to you You will feel my presence.You will always be loved by me.You are not alone Beta.Never."

"Teacherji,Today I need you so much.Stay with me.Bless me.I promise you Meethi will come back to her father.I will bring her back from wherever she is."Vishnu said wiping away his tears being encouraged with a new zeal and energy.

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Meethi stared at Him, "No! You are not Akash'you are Vishnu'my love,my husband."

"Ha ha ha!! Laughed Akash "Of course Meethi I am you love,your Husband but Akash is another name of mine which Maiyya has given me lovingly.And they all want you to call me that too and lovingly"Winked Akash

" No! I know you as Vishnu and will call you that! Even Maiyya calls you Vishnu!"Meethi replied stubbornly.

"MEETHI!! Why don't you ever follow what is been told?Maiyya wants me to be called as Akash so what is your problem??"Cried Akash furiously "Listen to her ONCE!!"

"I am sorry Vishnu."Wept Meethi " But I do try to listen to everything that you say.Why are you acting so weirdly lately?When will we go back to Ma Baba?Why are you fussing over on a name? what has happened to you?"

Akash kept quiet.

"Vishnu please Vishnu.I want to meet Ma" Cried Meethi

"We will stay here as long as Maiyya wants.enough talk.Now go to sleep"Saying this Akash went away leaving a crying Meethi on the floor.

"Ma take me back Ma Baba I miss you.Please take me away from here.I don't like it without You.Even Vishnu has become like a stranger.Why is he doing this? Help me God.Help me"

{...TO BE CONTINUED}
HOPE YOU ALL ENJOYED READING!! I SPECIALLY THANK NAVETHA (BEHAPPYEVER) WHO GAVE ME THIS IDEA!!! THANK YOU!!! DO SHARE YOUR VIEWS!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow it's amazing!!! 😃 good job! 👏 i really hope cvs end this meekash track soon and pair meethi with real vishnu...their jodi will definetely be worth watching and i'm sure ppl will love their jodi! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww Ishani 😊 Thank u so much dear 😊
Love u lotzz 😳
Meeshu rockz 🥳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just love the way u mingled Vishnu wit the current story..
Waiting for the next part eagerly..
Really thanks dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome ishani... 👏
loved it... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its awesome👏

loved it alot

waiting for next part

meeshu rocks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg..such an awesome storyline ...i will defo make u part of my creative team... in Colors... Ishani u just rock...diva
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: colorsabhishek

omg..such an awesome storyline ...i will defo make u part of my creative team... in Colors... Ishani u just rock...diva



Wow tats awesome😊.. Ishani deserves it😊👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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even u also..deserve it..behappyforever...nt getting ur name... u told me its...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wait i got it..its navetha..mam...

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