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PART 35


Maan looked at his cell and then at geet who was looking at him for an answer. He finally picked up the call and walked near the door and said, "maa kaisi hai aap". "am fine beta, am still here with your dadima so thought to talk with geet about diwaali. Aaj to Sunday hai maan, aap ghar pe honge, so give it to geet, hme baat karni hai aaj" savitri said her voice quite determined to talk with her bahu now.

"geet se" maan said and wondered how to avoid today. Geet too heard his talks and came near him to talk with savitri, she hadn't talked once after coming to Mumbai and she was guilty about that. She was about to take the phone when heard him saying, "maa wo am out of the house, Diwali ke liye diye aur baki saman lena than na, and geet is at home, so wo baat nhi'" his words left discontinued as he turned to look at geet with tears in her eyes.

She immediately looked away to hide away the tears that slipped off her lids, she was really excited to talk with savitri but then his lie broke her, he didn't want her to talk with her, she understood, but it hurt her really deep.

Maan was pained to see those flowing tears, but he was helpless. His mother meant the world to him, and he could go to any extent to save her from the pain, even if that means to give pain to geet, he will give. If his mother would have been wrong then situation would have been different but now his mother doesn't deserve to live in the lie they had created.

"maan you there, aap sun rhe hai bte" savitri's voice form other side broke his reverie. He concentrated back at call, but his eyes were on geet, who was wiping the tears that were flowing mercilessly. "maan, am really disappointed with you, you know here is so much network problem, the telephone booth works hardly here too and whenever I connect with you, you will always be out and I can't talk with geet. Bte atleast buy her a cell phone so that I could talk with her, ye bhut badi laparvahi hai aapki maan"

"sorry maa" main said and then looked at geet who was about to go out of the room. "maan aapko geet ka khayal rakhna chahiye na" savitri said little strictly this time. Maan saw geet was about to reach out in the hall, and the pain that was so visible on her face crushed his heart. How much he tries to cover the distance between them but something or the other happens and they are back to square one.

Deciding something, he opened the speaker of the phone and continued the call. "maan the city is totally new for her and you stay most of the time out of the house. You should have thoughtatleast this much, agar kabhi jaruret padegi to wo kise bataye gi aap hi bataiye" geet stopped in her track as she heard the strict voice of her mother in law as she chided maan. She couldn't help but feel elated at the concern she showered on geet.

She turned around to look at maan, who stood behind her now with the cell in his left hand and a contended look on his face. "maan geet ki to mehendi bhi nhi utari thi jab aap unhe apne saath le gye, and she is still young, not much used too of the responsibilities that comes after marriage. And now see it's her first deewali after marriage, it's a quite auspicious festival for her and abhi bhi wo apne parivaar ke saath nhi hai"

Tears were filling again in geet's eyes as she realized the motherly love savitri have for her. what would it had been like if she were with her in delhi, celebrating the festivals together, enjoying the time with family and being pampered.

"maan it's geet's first deewali and you know how much arrangements I would have done if we were together, but then your dadima is more important at the moment an di can't leave her here, her condition is atleast stable now after whole two months. So It's your duty to make sure geet enjoys the festival with whole her heart and ha since I can't talk with her, I am explaining the rituals to you and you will tell her ok???"

"Hmm" maan said as he signaled geet to come here and made her sit on the couch while he took his seat next to her. then he forwarded her cell so that she could listen everything and yet not talk with his maa.

Finally after whole ten minutes savitri kept the call wishing both of them a prosperous diwaali. As the call ended, geet hugged maan tightly as she let out her pent up feelings, "thankyou thankyou very much maan for this call. I don't know how to even express myself. Every year I used to help chachi in the festival, doing everything from the rangoli to lighting diyas. This year it was so empty, having no elder to ensure that things are going on ritually, blessing you on the auspicious day and celebrating it with you. But aj apne mujhe maa se baat karne dia, and it is just the maximum I could wish. Thankyou aj I felt I am with her, my family, my own people" she cried on his shoulder, wetting his shirt.

He held her tightly as he let those tears flow down for once and all. "why do you always think you are alone, kya main nhi tumhare saath??" he asked after she turned a little sober.

She looked at him for a moment and there togetherness flooded back, his being with her always yet not accepting it, doing everything without any expectation, his every act was just for her, how some human being can be so much selfless, she wonders sometimes.

He looked at her waiting for her answer but she smiled off and said, "aapke hote hue bhala mujhe kisi ki kya jarurat" but then kept her palm on her mouth as she realized what she said. She herself didn't know when and why those words escaped off her lips, it wasn't what she wanted to say. She immediately ran into her room closing the door behind contemplating what had gone into her, it wasn't supposed to go this way.

Maan sat frozen on the couch as her words still strike his ear drums, did she really said that or was it a dream??? He had thought of anything but those words, no they weren't anywhere his thoughts. He looked at the closed door and closed his eyes, what is happening between them, should he be happy with her acceptance or be scared of future due to her increasing confusions.

Finally it was a deewali day and she was super busy whole day, cleaning and arranging for the puja. He was quite free and relaxed as he watched her changing the bed sheets and covers and curtains, everything were new. She then made some halwa-puri for bhog and then started making rangoli at the doorstep.

He was quite confused with her doing so much, it wasn't needed. They were just two, no one was going to attend the puja except them as whole colony would be doing their own puja's at their homes. "geet all this isn't needed, it's just we two who will be doing the puja" he said as he saw her making a beautiful rangoli on doorstep.

"aap bhul gye maa ne kya kha tha, all rituals needed to be done the way she said and am doing that only, aap jao mujhe pareshan na karo, I have so much more to do" she shooed him off even after his refusal as she again focused on the work in hand.

Whole house was looking as if some big function is to be celebrated there, the colorful rangoli and then the new look was nothing in compared to the way she decorated the temple with marigold flowers and colourful lights. In between sat goddess Lakshmi with lord Ganesh followed by hanuman ji. Few other things were kept too as ordered by savitri, geet had ensured to do as much she can as she didn't wanted to disappoint savitri atleast this time.

Maan wore a kurta over his jeans while he waited for geet to come out. Finally after some minutes she too came wearing a heavy red salwar suit, her hairs left open and few bangles in her left hand. She was wearing minimal makeup, with her eyes applied with kohl and a little lip gloss. Maan was bowled looking at her and remembered the day he had himself purchased that suit for her.

It was after a week of their meet, he had gone to mall with his friend when that suit caught his eye in a shop. He had immediately bought it as he imagined his mishty in that suit then and had given savitri to give it to geet in shagun. But well she hadn't worn that before and now when she finally had, he had no words to express how beautiful she looked now.

Soon they finished the puja and it was time for crackers. They both went downstairs where entire colony was present to burn crackers and have a gala time. All wished one another and geet being the youngest did a tilak to all as she wished them diwali. When she came to maan at the end, something mischievous strike her brain and then she gave a sweet smile to maan.

He wondered what was going in her brain and waited for her to do tilak. She took a pinch of red powder and applied a long tilak on his forhead that reached till his hairs and then applied some on his cheek and ran away.

Maan was shocked for a moment and then her sudden run made him realize her mischief. Sometimes such a kid she is and sometimes so mature, he couldn't understand her real personality at times. Seeing her showing her tongue to him, he too ran behind her and followed her. They both ran inside as she was in front while he was following her. as they reached stairs, she started running on steps, "geet sambhalke" maan said as he saw her running on steps and then ran behind her too, but then as she reached on top stair, her dupatta came under her foot making her stumble, but well he was just behind her to stable her.

She looked at him as he stood beside her, his chest slammed on her back, both were hyperventilating due to the run, his arm was on her waist as he held her close to him. She closed her eyes as she kept back her head on his chest, taking deep breathes while he kept his head on her head supporting himself. Both were lost in the moment wondering why they always land so close in everything they did, even that wasn't meant to be.

She kept her hand on his hand that was on her waist, as she actually thought of one of those romantic poses in the films, this shouldn't be happening, her mind said, while heart was busy feeling that part of her body which heated up due to his strong hold on her.

He looked at her lost and knew the very moment she will realize closeness; she will regret and blame herself or him, which he couldn't take. Thus deciding to divert her mind, he took her dupatta in his hand and wiped off the smeared red powder from his cheek and forehead. She came out of the reverie, when she felt his back away.

She turned around, her breathing still heavy as she looked at him with awkward face, but that awkwardness went away the moment she saw her dupatta in his hand as he gestured on his clean cheek and smirked.

Her mouth turned O shape as she saw him running back in the ground with that smirk on his face. She too went behind him as she felt sorry over the beautiful dupatta mourning over the red spots they have now.

Soon they were burning crackers and geet was damn excited. She immediately joined other teenagers who were burning bombs and rockets. She too lit few of them as she enjoyed the sparkles they created in sky after blasting up there.

Maan stood in corner as he relished the happiness on her face. These are the moments which make him realize the mistake he did unknowingly and is still doing knowingly. Her family married her when she was just a teen with great dreams and small wishes. He didn't knew then and thus wasn't at fault. But now when he knew everything, still he is trying to get close to her, even after knowing when she doesn't even completely know the true meaning of the relation a husband and wife shares.

He was trying to develop those feelings in her which she doesn't even want to feel but is experiencing now because of the effect he is creating on her. but the biggest question is, is it right to do so, to bind her in a relationship that was so different and so unstable.

He was busy in his thoughts when he heard her yelp in pain. he immediately rushed to her and saw a little red skin on her hand. She was shaking her hand painfully as he tried to hold her palm, her eyes filled with tears. "how did this happened" he asked as he took her in his arms, while she sobbed continuously.

He took her back inside to their home as she was still clutching on him. As soon he reached their apartment, he made her sit on couch and took out some ice cubes from the kitchen. He gently applied the cubes on the burnt area while she winced as the coldness intensified the burn. "shh, don't cry, it will be ok" he said as he kept her head on his chest, while his hand was busy in applying cubes.

"chalo tell me how does this happened" he asked as he tried to divert her mind from the pain. "geet bolo mujhe" he again said when she didn't said anything and looked at the red skin only. "wo wo (sob) I was keeping rocket in the bottle, and was making sure it is straight (sob) par pata nhi someone came from back and lit it and my hand was still on rocket, and as it zoomed off, all sparks fell on my hand (sob)' bhut dard ho rha hai aah" she winced as the pain was burning the skin.

"dhyan se karna tha na, par nhi tum bache bas" maan chided her as he took out the first aid box and took out an ointment. "meri kya galti thi isme, I was being carefull, wo peeche se kisine uda diya to what can I do, aap hamesha mujhe hi date rehte ho, jayiye I am not talking to you" she said more irritated due to him scolding and blaming her only.

Maan couldn't help but smile at her but tried to control it as much as he can while he successfully kept back the ointment. He had chided her so that her attention could be diverted and he could apply the ointment on the burnt skin, and well the reaction was as he had expected.

After keeping the ointment, he wiped off her tears and said, "chalo get into your bed, it will be better by tomorrow" "mujhe nhi baat karna aapse, you are bad" she said as she looked again at the burnt area. He shook his head at her nautanki, and picked her up in his arms making her shock. "mujeh utariye aap, please uttaro" she said due to the sudden shock but he heard none and directly kept her on bed.

Then he made her lay properly and covered her with sheets and removed her dubatta. Closing the lights and he came back on the bed and sat near her headrest as he patted her forehead closing her eyes. "now sleep, not a word more" he said as he rethought about his thoughts. "but if this relation is so wrong, then why it's always me who helps her when she is in trouble"

Precap: geet's analyzing of his muscles

(neha really blushing😳)

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Edited by neha512 - 12 years ago
JeevanaP thumbnail
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Awesome diwali...
next one kal milega pls 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update Neha 😳
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Originally posted by: reachsky2011

Awesome diwali...

next one kal milega pls 😃


nhiii itne bade update pe itne chote comments... no never😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
maan doing everything to avoid hiss mom being hurt
he again started analyzing if its correct or not and this might again create distance
i just hope that geet realize her feeling before any drastic change happens in their life which will take maan away from her

continue soon
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nhiii itne bade update pe itne chote comments... no never😡

Im Inactive due to exams 😆
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Originally posted by: reachsky2011

Im Inactive due to exams 😆


haww waah kya bahana dhunda hai jiske aage mai kuch bol bi na saku...

welll umm i am thinking of being inactive due to studies... meet u after 3 yrs😆
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