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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



agar tum phek sakthi ho tho main kyu nahi...

but after my bday waala update am missing maaneet more yaar



wow... u seem to be in a really good mood today... kya hua?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



wow... u seem to be in a really good mood today... kya hua?


maneet's magic... i was getting quite confused with the story these days... but then as i had said that i am going to rewatch all epis had watched 100 epis in 18 days and in last fe epis i got to knoe the future path of the story...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha512


maneet's magic... i was getting quite confused with the story these days... but then as i had said that i am going to rewatch all epis had watched 100 epis in 18 days and in last fe epis i got to knoe the future path of the story...



maaneet truly rocksss

its already 1...update kab milega?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



maaneet truly rocksss

its already 1...update kab milega?


weell wo to tabi milega if u let me write instead of distracting me huh...😆

atleast an hour more
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha512


weell wo to tabi milega if u let me write instead of distracting me huh...😆

atleast an hour more



as u r updating now am not even able to voice my mind and tell u how much i i hate u now...


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Posted: 12 years ago
am feeling so slpeey... i will leave now yaar... will read tom... it wll take more time na?
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Posted: 12 years ago


NOTE

Due to time constraints I won't be able to send pms regularly, so it's a request to you all to bookmark this thread or add it to your watch list and keep a track on updates.

Well you all know I try to update evry second day, so it won't be that much difficult for you all, so please help me and support me.

PART 34

Finally the results were out and well the results were as expected, meera topped the university followed by geet who was behind her just by single percent. Other friends passed too with 70% marks and the main shocker was rohan who too scored 60% with distinction in maths. His friends too passed somehow but rohan scored the most among them.

Thus it was festive mood in whole school. The friends were mostly busy in getting treats for the next few days and prepare themselves for the next semester which is going to be real tough with practically more course than they had in half-yearly exams.

Rohan and geet's friendship too was improving day by day, and which was really a pain in ass for nisha. She didn't like the way rohan would spend all his free time with geet and her friends. He was even ignoring his best buddy's too which they didn't like. Even Vicky and abhi who were his best buddies since childhood just hated geet to the core. Their best friend was changing because of her, the guy who used to take books a week before in hand was actually bunking his football sessions for the group studies he had for geet.

Nisha was burning with the popularity of geet and this hatred was increasing as the days passed. Whenever she would try to talk to rohan, he would talk normally till he would see geet and then he would be all buys and have no time for her.

As the time passed geet too was enjoying rohan's company. He was a fun loving guy and could bring smile on anyone's face. Even due to their friendship, he started spending time with the whole group and they too started accepting him even after his so called i-am-the-best attitude. Mera always hated him, or say would be ready t do anything which would irritate him, and he wasn't different too, he just loves to irritate meera. Yash was the one who would be the escape goat for them, and the one who would be hearing their grumbling after the fight.

Well pari was more than happy, after all he was MR. dreamy of college, but still she would keep mentioning about maan's muscle irritating geet to the core. One thing she didn't understood was what was so special in muscles, comeon half of the guys have them in film industry and even in their school too, many guys were trying to build them, but she still she decided to have a closer look on his muscles to see what was so dreamy in them (neha wondering ab kitna closer look legi ye geet uff, me blushing😳)

Misha well wasn't affected much as he was already her vice-captain and had a nice cordial relationship, now it had changed into a friendship which was even better.

It was November and diwali was on calendar. School was off for a week so that all the students who have came from out of the town could go back to their family and enjoy it to full. Thus all friends were ready with their bags to go to their respective houses to celebrate the festival with their family and relatives.

As always maan was on the gate waiting for geet as she came with her bags and her friends tagged along. The happiness she felt with his glowing face was like a cherry on cake for her. Their phone call night was still fresh in her mind, her restless still is a puzzle for her which her heart wasn't ready to solve, fearing the result it could get.

She went to him and stood beside him, he was on his bike waiting for her. As he saw her, his happiness doubled, after all he was anticipating for this holiday since last few weeks. This time he want to spend with her, living his life's most beautiful days, whose beauty will be enhanced by her presence in their house.

as they all greeted him, he saw some new face too. he looked at geet, and taking his cue she said, "he is rohan, remember I told you about him that night" his heart jumped with the remembrance of that night, probably the night when he felt her with him, so close so near, that even these 8 kilometers distance too didn't seemed material.

Rohan was awed by the personality of the man who stood in front of him. He was simple in his dressing yet was distinct, his aura itself demanding respect and power which he didn't have still see to possess. He was probably a type of person, which people dream to be. He greeted him happily and soon they were off to their home.

It was evening when he returned home back after office and her presence in the house could be felt from the doorstep itself. The house which used to be quiet and didn't contain any symbol of having a person living inside was now buzzing with some loud desi beats, telling she was in there listening some music.

As he rang the bell, he heard the volume of music lowering and her subtle voice "coming" and soon she was on the door standing with her hair tied in a bun, wearing a loose shirt and some three-fourth capree. He was frozen on his spot for a second looking at her, her face having flour spread near the left cheek bone, her one hand was holding the door while other contained spatula, a sign that she was cooking before he came.

He could have kept looking at her whole night if she hadn't clicked her fingers in fornt of his eyes breaking his reverie, "where were you lost" she said as she took his bag and pulled him inside when he didn't moved himself.

"tumme" he said still lost in her beauty. "jii???" she said confused, her loud voice broke his reverie bringing him back to present. "huh!!! Wo umm wo kuch nhi!!! What was that loud voice" he said distracting her. "don't insult that song like that, it was the latest hit item number, Balam mari pichkari" she said pointing her finger to him. "whatever" he said as he twisted his finger with hers, pulling her closer.

She looked at him in shock, as he pulled her closer till her body was planted on his chest, surely his audacity has increased after that night, aur kyu na ho he is also a man, sometimes his own barriers could break too.

"ye aap kya'" she said as he kept his other hand on her waist, stilling her from moving away. She kept her other hand on his chest trying to maintain distance unknown to the fact that her touch on his chest burned him craving for me. It had been two months he had seen her, even after her results they had planned to meet so that's he could give him his treat, but well that khadoos saxena had o send him same time on some control check in other branches which kept him out of the town for two weeks and then all that pending work kept him busy.

"meri treat is still pending" he said whispering in her ears, his nose rubbing her small diamond stud, his breathes warming her earlobe. She didn't know what to feel then, that physical resistance that physical control which she had tried to maintain in past six months didn't even came in her thought at the moment. Her mind had stopped due to the sudden proximity letting her heart to rule for the first time ever.

"aur mujeh wo aaj chahiye" he said as he caressed her cheeks with his long thin fingers. She closed her eyes as she felt the sudden heat on her cheeks, which probably was the blush that reddened her cheek and raised her blood circulation in the body.

He stood still as he saw those reddened cheeks and didn't even knew when he bent down and placed a soft peck on those red cheek. She fisted his shirt near the chest as she felt those lips imprinted on her cheeks and that action of hers made him realized what he did. He immediately removed his hand from her waist while his other hand freed his shirt from her hold, and then moved back.

She opened her eyes as she felt his absence and found herself alone in the room. She ran to her bedroom as she stood in front of the mirror looking at her red left cheek where he pecked. She touched her forefinger slowly to that area which still burnt with his lips feel and caressed the whole area, as she remembered that moment again.

"babaji ye kya ho gya, ye mai kya kar rhi hu, aise kaise behek jati hu mai unke samne. Kyu aj kal kuch samaj nhi ata, kyu ye dimaag unke samne kaam nhi karta??? Mai pehle hi sabke liye ek bojh thi, shayd isiliye sab mujhe chod ke jate rhe, babaji ab mai dubara ye bardasht nhi kar paungii' kyu aap mujhse ye sab kar wate rehte ho jo mujhe aur unhe chot deta hai. Dekha na aapne woh kis tarah chale gye, shayad unhe bhi ye galat laga, phir aapne aisa kyu kiya babaji. Maine kha tha aapse unhe mat batana meri bechaini ke bare me, dekho abhi wo kya sochenge mere bare me' chii babaji, aap kyu hamesha aisa karte rehte ho???? Pehle to aisa nhi tah to ab kya badal gya hai hamare beech, boliye na???"

[babaji what is happening, what am I doing??? Why I lose all sense when he comes in front of me??? Why I don't understand anything these days, why this brain doesn't work in front of him???? I ahd always been a burden for all, that's why every person left me, now I won't be able to take this again'. Why you keep making me do things which t the end gives pain to both of us. You saw na how he went away, maybe he too felt it wrong, then why you did that babaji. I had asked you na to not let him know about my feelings, see what will he think about me now' chii babaji, why you always do this???? Earlier it wasn't like this between us, then what had changed today between us???]

He stood in shower as he placed his head on the wall, cold water flew down his body, as it warmed up remembering her those red cheeks. How could I lose my control again, why I always end up doing those things she hates? Why I always try to go closer to her when she so much hates my touch, her crushing his shirt, was that because she doesn't liked my kiss, was that because she repulsed my closeness, but then why she didn't pushed me away, and that blush, was that really a blush, kya wo bhi whi mehsoos kar rhi thi jo mai kar rha tha.

He hit his hand on the wall, "nhi maan you are thinking too much. She wasn't blushing, it was just a illusion, ha just an illusion. Aur phir ye najdeekia shi hai kya, wo sirf 16 saal ki hai aur mai 26, 10 saal ka fasla hai humme par ye samay bemaina kyu lagta hai hamare rishte ke beech??? Kyu hmari dooriyan bhi hmare darmiyaan ek jod ban rhi hai??? Kyu ye kheechav aata hai hamare darmiyaan jo mujhe sab kuch bhulne pe majboor kar deta hai??? Aur phir kab tak hum aise jiyenge, yuh ek dusre ke beech is khichaav ko jhuklate hue??? Par wo meri jimmedari ahi, aur mai is waqt uska man nhi bhatka sakta, she needs to concentrate on studies instead of all this but then why I forget all the promises I made to myself whenever she is in front of me.

Kya jo aaj hua, wo use galat laga??? kya wo is samay apne kamre me mooh chupa ke roh rhi hai hamesha ki tarah??? Kya ek baar phir se mai jane anjane uske dukh ka karan ban gya hu??? Nhi, mai sab bardasht kar sakta hu par uske ansu mujhe hamesha kamjor bana dete hai, maan tujhe control karna hoga khudko, uske liye, uski khushiyo ke liye, apne parovaar ke liye"

[nhi maan you are thinking too much. She wasn't blushing, it was just a illusion, ha just an illusion. And then this closeness isn't right, she is just sixteen and I am 26, we have 10 years difference between us, but then why sometimes this time difference doesn't stand any meaning in our relation?? Why our distance is creating a bond between us??? Why there is this pull which makes me forget the world around her?? And then till when we will live like this, declining the pull that stands between us??? But she is my responsibility first, and I can't distract her mind at present when she needs to concentrate on studies instead of all this but then why I forget all the promises I made to myself whenever she is in front of me. Does what happen between us today was wrong for her?? Is she crying in her room hiding herself like always?? Have I again become the reason for her tears??? No no I can tolerate anything but her tears always weakens my resolves, maan you have to control yourself for her, for her happiness, for your family's happiness]

He came back after an hour only to find her busy in kitchen. He looked at her closely to see her swollen eyes or some tear trails but there were none, infact she didn't look that much upset she used to in past. Does she didn't mind my closeness now?? This was the question that came firstly in his mind, but then he dismissed it as son it entered.

Whether she minds or not, I am not going to push her again, I will let her understand this relationship giving her as much time she wants, atleast this gives me a hope that one day she would be only mine.

It was sunday next day, and geet was all busy in cleaning the house as diwali was a day away an lots of things needed to be done before that. Maan wasn't home as he had went to purchase some basic things for household and diwali.

Geet tied a white cloth on her head to cover her hairs from the dust that is going to be cleaned now. She wore her Patiala and kurti without dupatta, and then folded her Patiala till it reached her knees. Arranging the ladder near the wall, she stood on it as she dusted off the webs that filled the corners of house.

She was busy dusting and didn't even noticed when maan came and shouted loudly, "geet see am home, check whether all things are ok or not for the puja" geet got misbalanced due to his loud voice and her foot slipped off and was about to fall.

Maan was shocked seeing her outfit when he stepped inside the room, her white exposed legs, and that clinging kurti, without dupatta was just too much for him to see in a day. Her cleavage was slightly visible and since she was stretching her hand to reach the ceiling, her chest would bulge out sometimes a little making him close his eyes to control his breathes.

But then she was unaware of his presence since last 2 minutes and thus he had shouted to gain her attention, but he didn't knew she will slip off due that. He immediately ran to her, trying his best to catch her and he succeeded too holding her in a nick of time.

Geet closed her eyes tightly as she anticipated a bad fall, but yet again her savior was there to catch her on time. Her eyes were squeezed shut, her heart beat still raised due to the fear, as her hands were encircled around his neck tightly pulling him more closer than he already was.

Maan closed his eyes in relief tightly; he was really scared for past few seconds, what could have happened if he hadn't reached on time. God he couldn't even think about that.

After few minutes, he was about to make her stand, but still her legs weren't stable enough to take her up, thus he took her to his bed, laying her on the soft mattress as he sat beside her. They stared at each other for few seconds, both were so scared, thus assuring themselves that its ok and they are fine. But then their eye talks were broken when his cell rang. He looked at the caller ID, it was his mom and then at geet who was asking whose call is this???

Precap: call from home and diwali

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Edited by neha512 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
first of all thanks for making me first... and then again thaks for giving us a lot maaneet... was missing them so much...

nishas jealousy and even rohans other friends hatred towards geet is not at all giving me good vibes... it feels that u r planning something... is it so???

waiting for geet checking on his muscles... it is really sad that she doesnt find them dreamy yet where as all the duniya waale are latoo on it...even rohan is smitten with the aura of maan... hayee !!!

ungli dikhao tho haath thaam letha hai... this is true n the case of maan babu... he just got a small sign that may be geets feelings are changing and see he even kissed her!!!! well i just dont want him to be more hurt...

balam pichkaari ... even am humming it these days... meri aur geet ki pasand milthi julthi hai... haina?😉

geet blushing... u cant even imagine how happy am today... though nothing much i expected from geet initially but her repeltion to maan even slight touch used to sadden me... and am happy that, that phase is over...

dreamy scene... geet falling and maan catching her... loved it...

looking forward for the next...


Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update...
Rohan kuch acha nahi lagta mujhe
Maaneet moments were so sweet...
Thanks for updating..
I look forward to reading more soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
geet is back home with maan for break
rohan seems to mingling well with geet and her friends
Geet, dear, do check out the muscles!😳😆
Maaneet moment, geet blushes ☺️ and maan kisses 😉
now getting ready for diwali!!!!

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