ArMan Valentine special-'5 yrs later' last pt pg10 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: CrazyIshiii

Awww...this was just so awesome!
Nikita * gives a tight hug *...thank you soo much for this wonderful treat !
A very very well written part...absolutely worth the wait.
I loved the way you wrapped up the story...it was " purrfectt ",in Madz style ๐Ÿ˜‰thankyou Ji!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
This is what our arman is...just love them <3
Thanx nikita for posting the 2 videos...ahh...brought back so many memories...2 of my favourite arman videos!
The video where manav confesses his love for archu...i think that is the best and the most romantic love confession that i've ever seen till date...so subtle yet so romantic โค๏ธ
That was a very well-written and an equally well executed scene...the cv's actually gave us many good romantic scenes way back then na...especially just after their 1st marriage...there was so much freshness in those subtle romantic scenes...It is the best confession scene I have ever seen in any show.. absolutely fantastic!
This has to be my favourite part ( for obvious reasons ๐Ÿ˜ณ ).
Simply loved manav's 2nd love confession...he just poured his heart out...awww..my mannu <3
Yeah.. now that he has been with his Archu for 5 years he doesn't shy that much.. sab dil se bol deta hai pata pat!๐Ÿ˜†And the last bit...where he's thinking about the peck and raises his hand...when archu's face glows as she understands...that eyelock between the two...when savita aai notices it and teases archu for a grandaughter were the highlights...wonder if aai's wish got fulfilled and if they had a baby girl in the future ๐Ÿ˜‰That is for you to imagine! ๐Ÿ˜›

*sigh*...i ended up writing an essay yet again!I loved it!
This reminds me...nikita,i always end my posts( the comments on your write -ups ) by writing " eagerly awaiting the next update "...but alas can't write that now Tongue

But koi nahin,pr reloaded hain na...so this time,my concluding line is -
Eagerly awaiting the next update of pr reloaded!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒHope I update it soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: bonnefille

Read all parts...absolutely brilliant!!! The time gap between each part was killing but totally worth it. *flying kiss in mannu style* to you.

Thankyou Ji! *blushes like Archana after a long eyelock*๐Ÿ˜†
Now waiting for you to update PR Reloaded...its been a decade since you last updated. ๐Ÿ˜กI know..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Shweta2111

Excellent update dear...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ƒ I am waiting for your next update, please updated soon as possible...!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thankyou.. there are no more updates though. This was the last part. ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Athena.

Niki,


You are very talented. This was very light-hearted compared to the intensity in your other work, PR Reloaded, and I enjoyed it immensely. Although the names of the characters are the same, they are so different in both the works, and only a talented writer can do this.Actually I tried to keep the basic traits of the characters same, but since it was a completely different, light-hearted situation and the characters had also progressed 5yrs forward, grown and evolved a little in a way that we hadn't really seen in PR, so yes, I think they did end up looking a little different from Archana and Manav that we are used to.

Seriously, well done. Not only are you smart but you are also creative! All that's left is the trait to update regularly ;) hehe.. just a little tongue-in-cheek :P๐Ÿ˜†I know, and I admit I have ignored PR reloaded for really long now, not even answered the comments cos I didn't know what to say about when I update. Its time I take it really seriously now, the FF NEEDS to end this year.

Take care,
Anushka

P.S. I read this story only after you mentioned it in your PM. I was hooked, and lucky for me didn't have to wait for an update! Thanks :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Momrin

Oh its over ๐Ÿ˜”

but its a beautiful ending i must say..๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thankyou! I am glad you liked it. Yes, the story concludes here leaving the rest of 'what happened next' to your imagination. If you want you can read my other works on ArMan.

Originally posted by: ISHAANKPC

nikita this is a fabolous piece of work. well conceptulaized and bought about. straight from the heart.

thanks.

Thanks Megha!

Originally posted by: Afss

Niki di it was a fantastic update. U made my day. Thanx.

Am glad you liked it dear. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Awww nikita what a amazing update it is i loved loved it
This was the real life after 5 yrs of marriage when arman r fully dependent on each other and they cannot live without each other fr a single min as u said they need eachother frm mrng to night
And loved hw manav ws thnking to give a peck on archana's cheek and he give her a hint by kissing his hand hehe so funny but sooo swt and archu face light up and soham to replied by a flying kiss and d lovely part if savita understands then she will tease her abt the d grand daughter ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†
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