THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

@Avi: Probably Kittu is recalling the previous update like Mari 😆

lol ala em ledu le just koncham tired...inko 1 hr aagithe continuous 24hrs paatu lechi una!!! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
liked a lot dear
continue soon
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz


😕 hell tired and bonus stupid epi . im lost in the epi still ,but i guess Maanu was in meeting and he was lost in geet thought's ryt?? did i read correctly??

btw BHB's decided to give updates today itself!! woww that's like a icing on cake!!! for my mood!!!

how is you?? ur health??

Back is hurting dear so am off to get rest...
Stayed up late to type this update...
I had planned another one but then this idea came and I could not stop until it was done...
Yeah BHB's are like that..
Bye for now..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Tell me something. How did my name end up in the thanking note? I hadn't even read the chapter or liked it when you put the note. 😆 I always use the likes from the Prologue since they are the most there..😆 so as to not hurt anyone's feelings...Otherwise Aashu and Deepa make me go and add them...

And as for your note, any suggestion is to keep it the long romance you're planning it to be. I'd love to read the contrasting love stories promised here!

Sabse pehle. Lovely song! I was never really into old songs but the ones you've been giving with these chapters have just made me love them. This one is so madhur. 😊

Thanks! Almost all the Kishore Kumar songs are hubby's kitchen dance songs which I adore when he sings so had to put myself in there..😳
You took me to a dreamland Avi! I was so into the innocent way he pulled her up into his arms, the way he made her react and reach out for him, the way they swirled in each other's embrace that when it ended, I had this big smile on my face. I seriously had the fluttering feeling in my stomach. Embarrassed
Me too! As I wrote it I felt that I wanted to present this first to keep the loyal readers who have supported me so much so far, happy; which explains my back being shot today. I had to find and upload the music and finish typing it.
And when the dream was harshly interrupted, I was brought back into the painful realtor of a you g boy struggling to keep his father's and his grandmother's hardwork alive. There's innocence in him the way he wishes to not let his Dadi suffer, and yet at the same time, there's strong willpower, an active mind and smartness.I have to take the teenage Maan and make him MSK so some of this will come in and Geet will also help in who he becomes

I especially loved his father's both advices that he recalled at very apt times. Offense is indeed the best defence. When you can't find a shield for yourself, counter attack the opponent! The other advise has me wondering about the man himself. He must have been a strong pillar, a man who'll stand by his point of view when he believes he's right. I absolutely admire such men and this is what has come into Maan as well, the strength to stand by what is right.My Dad is my guru and these are his words. It is true that we get values passed on to us by our forefathers their words and their actions and God is great that I am so blessed with him.

And the young boy makes an appearance again, after a boss deals with his employees. All I'm wishing right now is that he gets a chance to materialise his plans. I'm already in love with this Maan! Really want to keep reading about him. Embarrassed
Me too! Hope I can keep this up. I always complain to my hubby that we met, love at first sight and were married in less than a month and we did not get to do these cute things that first love makes you do. I guess the grass is always greener, those who are in a long relationship want to tie the knot fast.😆
I forgot to mention in my comment to the previous chapter. The locket. It has my curiosity peaked and I want to know what story is behind it.

Loving the story Avi! So glad you decided to go on with it! 🤗

This is a true Maan lover speaking here...
Geet ko, you made her wait and when it comes to Maan...😆
Again, there is no way I would have done this without you!🤗 Thanks for being you🤗
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

awesome

liked a lot dear
continue soon
waiting

Sorry IF is not letting me like your post...
I appreciate the comment😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Both of yew updated n em nowhere near 😔
Khair... droopy eyes n aching neck isn't allowing to b here anymore 😔
Will b here tomorrow In Sha Allah =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waise Commenting can wait but reading ... errrmmm not 😆
Edited by Koolsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
man that song so aptly fits maneet right
ahhh so it seems their misunderstandings wont clear so easily
koi nahin that just makes things more interesting
wow so he was day dreaming about dancing with geet on raat kali
and then snaps back to the real world
awww becahre ka toh sapna hi toot gaya yaar
chalo koi baat nahin abhi nahin toh phir kabhi
well maan my man am sure she shall yell at you soon too
loved it how he got them all to respect him
this keeps getting better and better
cheers for pm
and have no issues on dev tara love story here

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Posted: 12 years ago
Avi,
I love this song...I can imagine a midnight dance between Maaneet in the open (around some trees)...maybe even some rain😳
I feel the pull of 2 hearts for each other...shy to say something...both yearning for each other. Reluctant to be the first to say something...but want to say something to each other.
Is there a fear of rejection? Is that why neither is making the 1st move or is it that both are naiive and don't know how to express their feelings??
Oh continue soon...also would like to see some fireworks (how Dev and NT got together)
Great going
Ange
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow maan geet mein khoye hue hai...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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