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sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

wow.!!!

mariyum ka itna fatafat comment.!!!

looks again.!!

oops its toh last update pe. xD

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: mayyo13
Promises are meant to be fulfilled and here I am to comment on the previous chapter. Apologies again!

I so love Geet. The shy, simple girl who'll talk to him in her head every second but when he comes in front of her, no word will escape her. 😳

From what her self-talks have revealed, they're both so shy to talk to each other yet they care for the other... Maan protecting her from those goons, foolproof her to ensure she reached safely, preventing her falls... Sweetness dripping out of this story! ❤️

Geet's insecurities about him having found a girl or about the differences between both of their statuses was so relatable... So natural.

The prologue part appeared here. Though it hasn't turned out the way we all were thinking. And I must say that I like it this way better. It's only Maan's misunderstanding about why the girl he loves was in his brother's arms. 😊

And Geet is so cute! She says she'll make him sit down and confess how much she likes him, talk to him nonstop, expecting nothing in return, yet when he comes in front of her, she runs away to hide under the covers. 'Because you're the boy and you should say first.' 😆

Apologies again. Agle chapter ke liye itna delay nahin hoga. 😳

PS: I love the song!

No apologies Mari...

I know what you are up to these days...😊

Thanks so much for this lovely characterization you gave.

I love her because I think at a certain age quite a few of us are exactly like her.

We question everything but are afraid to ask.

I know she is not the strongest of Geet's but then they are so young and in their own way absolutely naive.

I could not have done this story without you.

You know that I was going to wrap up after the reaction on the Prologue itself but I am glad you talked me out of it...

Am here and doing it my way...

🤗🤗

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: sweetkj
wow.!!!

mariyum ka itna fatafat comment.!!!

looks again.!!

oops its toh last update pe. xD

😆 Mauke pe chauka ... Sweety!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz
hmmm aww poor soul lost in her thoughts!!! geet is sooo cute!!!

lovely song!!! 😊

Kittu, the chapter is about Maan...😲

How tired are you dear?

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

@Avi: Probably Kittu is recalling the previous update like Mari 😆

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893213

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: sweetkj
why not avi.!! ;)

Na na, me toh just complimenting your skills... 😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: Maaneet099
@Avi: Probably Kittu is recalling the previous update like Mari 😆

so confusion Mari ki banayi hui hai...

we should make her write an OS!!!

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sweetkj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: dqno1

so confusion Mari ki banayi hui hai...

we should make her write an OS!!!

😉

neki aur pooch pooch!! 😉

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KittuPratzz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: dqno1

Kittu, the chapter is about Maan...😲

How tired are you dear?

😕 hell tired and bonus stupid epi . im lost in the epi still ,but i guess Maanu was in meeting and he was lost in geet thought's ryt?? did i read correctly??

btw BHB's decided to give updates today itself!! woww that's like a icing on cake!!! for my mood!!!

how is you?? ur health??