THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angeesh

Avi,

I love this song...I can imagine a midnight dance between Maaneet in the open (around some trees)...maybe even some rain😳
I feel the pull of 2 hearts for each other...shy to say something...both yearning for each other. Reluctant to be the first to say something...but want to say something to each other.
Is there a fear of rejection? Is that why neither is making the 1st move or is it that both are naiive and don't know how to express their feelings??
Oh continue soon...also would like to see some fireworks (how Dev and NT got together)
Great going
Ange

They are very young and both are very naive. She is brought up by her Darji alone and he is someone who hung out with his parents and played basketball...
Neither one of them talks much at this point but I am trying to show the teenager becoming MSK...
I am glad you are liking it.
Glad for your support...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

wow maan geet mein khoye hue hai...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

Thank you! Do I call you Soma?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

so confusion Mari ki banayi hui hai...
we should make her write an OS!!!
😉

I'M LOVIN' IT!!! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

lol ala em ledu le just koncham tired...inko 1 hr aagithe continuous 24hrs paatu lechi una!!! 😆

oh enthuku? chaala pani cheyyakandi... meeru tired aypotharu and work koodu thvaraga avvathu... take rest Kittu 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Both love eachother but cant say loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
have to tell you i dont mind having just a bit of romance in it
i'm enjoying their different pov's
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Waise Commenting can wait but reading ... errrmmm not 😆



Enjoy 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

<font color="#6600FF">man that song so aptly fits maneet right
ahhh so it seems their misunderstandings wont clear so easily
koi nahin that just makes things more interesting
wow so he was day dreaming about dancing with geet on raat kali
and then snaps back to the real world
awww becahre ka toh sapna hi toot gaya yaar
chalo koi baat nahin abhi nahin toh phir kabhi
well maan my man am sure she shall yell at you soon too
loved it how he got them all to respect him
this keeps getting better and better
cheers for pm
and have no issues on dev tara love story here
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Thank you Chavvi
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: april12

awesome update

have to tell you i dont mind having just a bit of romance in it
i'm enjoying their different pov's



Thank you. I am glad to hear it
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
loving the way ur giving their POV's😳

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