Last wish- journey of real life (chp 1)

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kashish001

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Posted: 12 years ago

HI freinds, i am kashish here, i am new to this forum actually joined it few days back. i have read quite a lot of ff os and ss posted in this forum and trust me they were really good.few of them just excelled it one of my favorite is ' revenge roulette ' i really appreciate the writer for giving us such a awesome story.

Actually there is a story in my mind, and i wanted to write it . but only if you like it. please read a short prologue down here and tell me whether should i continue or not..

PROLOGUE

"jaan you are my angel. my pari. my miss fix it all. you can do anything in this world.Can't you?"

"No, I can just love you and that is more than enough for me." she said while playing with my hair.

"Why do you love me so much? Am i really worth it?"

"yes Mr. khan, you are the only person worthy of it.I also don't know why i love you.But i really care for you. I love to be with you. I just love the you look at me . I just love everything when you are with me.And the way you proposed to me, I can never forget it in my life."

"jaan you wont leave me ever..right.."

she did not say anything. she just came close to him and gave him a sweet kiss on his neck. she hugged him and rested his face on his chest where she could hear his heart beat taking her name clearly.He smiled and wrapped his hand around her waist and and kissed her forehead then even he relaxed hi chin on her forehead with care and affection.they were lost in this moment by then.

He smiled thinking that "no one could separate them now and she was all his".

He was right in his thought as they were about to get marry very soon , AT LAST!! they were together after fighting a big battle in their life. They thought now nothing can separate them and finally, all their struggle has ended..just like in fairy tale's "HAPPY ENDINGS!"...

but they forgot something that life is no fairy tale and in case of asad-zoya their worst nightmare was still to come!!!

that's it friend this is what i have. if you think the story is good enough to continue than please let me know. I will continue it. otherwise, i will just drop the idea here ...

what ever is your response, do share!

thanks,

kashish

chapter 1 - pg 2

Edited by kashish001 - 12 years ago

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CutiepieHarshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice concept

plz cont soon n pm me

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Tanvi Dandime

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Posted: 12 years ago

amazing concept❤️...awesome update😊😊...continue soon

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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

it was so sweet when asad asked "jaan you wont leave me ever..right.."

i really wish he actually uses this dialogue someday on the show...

Ya but it was a good start better than mine where actually i killed my main lead!!!😆

please continue...

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Please continue! Great attempt and yupp pm me for sure

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Andrea

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Posted: 12 years ago

Its interesting. You should continue 😊

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kashish001

@kashish001

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Posted: 12 years ago

hi friends i am finally writing a story it wont be too long.i can assure you all on this. please dont bash me on grammar error and poor english .i will try to keep you all interested till the end hopefully (fingers crossed) now lets me brief you about my story. here zoya and asad are in love they both knew it but none of them is ready to open up with one's feeling for other. zoya is very upset as her visa is getting expire very soon and her search to find her abu is still incomplete.she is very upset about this but asad tried to comfort her.

chapter 1

she was still upset with whatever had happened. I knew how to make her happy.I had a surprise for her. It was wrapped.

" Are you still upset?" i asked her when we sat in the car

"no, Mr khan." she replied looking at me with swollen eyes.She indeed cried a lot.

zoya will be zoya.her equation was different she lived a life which in accounting term can be said as NPO (non profit organization) where she will distribute all happiness to other but keep pain with her. May be that was a reason i fall in love with her, wait a second ..no i think the reason was her caring nature towards my family..no wait , wait,wait!! (laugh) i..i dont know what made me feel this way for her.All i knew was i was crazily madly genuinly fallen in live with my Ms Musibat!

"Allah miya whats wrong with you Mr. khan! ap mujhe aise kyu ghoor rahe hai?"she pouted even in that condition

and the worst of it she broke my thought chain..WTH zoya was it so necessary to speak now..damn man she always did this to me .And now thus she complaints that y i took so long to express myself."zoya chup rahogi tabhi to hamare bare main sochunga na" i always speak this to myself whenever she interrupt my thought for her..

"kuch nai..ap kuch keh rahi thi?" i asked (was lost in thought dint heard a word she said latter"

"main ..Mr khan main kuch nai keh rai thi! Shayad ap kuch kehne wale the" she looked at me waiting for my reply.

"Hmm...ha..nai..kuch nai..i mean yes ..main apke liye kuch laya hu" I leaned at back sit and took out th wrapped gift and gave it to her.

she smiled at the gift like a small child and jumped of the seat to snatch it from my hand.

"Mr. khan mere liye!" she said excitedly and turned the gift up and down to peep inside the wrapping

"(cough) ap gift khol sakti hai Ms farooki"

her smiled got more wider and she started opening it.

Her smile faded seeing some papers in the gift box. but she thought to give a look at it.

"Its official documents.. what is in it?" she asked me with a question remarked face

"Ap khud he pad lijiye.." i said smiling at her

"ye ..ye ..ye to working viss..vissa hai" she said happily almost jumped up twice before completing her sentence. She got so happy that she got of my car and started dancing on the roading taking away all the attention of the people passing by.

All of sudden i felt more happy relief and better inside just by seeing her happy, but on next moment i felt anger inside me."She is my girl..only i have a right to adore her dance her smile her beauty..and i dint wanted to share with any one.Specially to roadside stranger NO WAYS!!!

I quickly moved myself into action and got down from my car

"Ms farooki ..ye ap kya kr rahi hai.." i reprimand her

She was so happy ..that she hugged me tightly as hard as she could and gave me a kiss on my cheeks. On normal circumstances i would have scolded her but for today everything was Maaf!!

To be honest i got to know that it is such a wonderful feeling when your love kisses you and hugs you with all apnanpan!!

I was very happy after all i made her smile back..it was a victorious moment for me.More than her i was excited because now she will work with me in my office...(look just by imagining it my heart started pounding ..God knows what will happen tomorrow ...(smile)God she is really making me crazy!!!)

Love you Ms farooki,

Asad Ahmed Khan

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