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Posted: 19 years ago
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Like the shadowy mask that hides,

Laying the path , sheathed in malice and deceit...

As she awaits the final surrender....

She fears the undeniable ,

For none can deny the truth , that shall prevail...

Like a ghost of her innerself, the speaks,

In the dark night , comes forth,

The unspoken fear , of what lies ahead...

For unfanthomable , shadowed lies... the Devil's Desire...

-Sareeta

- The Scene at the bridge being a possibility of Devika ji's dream and her fear of what her plan might lead to , or rather backfire...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank you! 😊

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The mastermind herself , who planned it all out in the first place, seems to be the one who finally is facing her fears of what might go wrong in her plans ... for only she knows the links and the secrets so guarded....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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as usual sareeta... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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.....In the dark night , comes forth,

The unspoken fear , of what lies ahead...

For unfanthomable , shadowed lies... the Devil's Desire...

And yet, the darkest hour only precedes the dawn..... discovery is the essence of life's journey.....and never forget, that the Devil was none other than Lucifer, the brightest of the Angels...



The Angel writing on the Devil! And me responding in a serious vein...
Now, there's two things one doesn't get to see everyday!

Armana

Edited by armana - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sareeta well written .. 👏 👏

you penned down this scene very wonderfully..yeah i agree with you that it may be a dream of devika and when the camera focused on their faces there was that fear on her face and her imagination turned in that horrible scene..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: sareeta

The mastermind herself , who planned it all out in the first place, seems to be the one who finally is facing her fears of what might go wrong in her plans ... for only she knows the links and the secrets so guarded....




wow so u think its devika's dream...thats really a possibility..but the fears she has so well put in ur poem...ok now i have finally finished all the adjectives i know...😃
so all i can say is 🤗
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow!! Wonderfully written.. 👏 👏 👏 You always manage to amaze me with such brilliant writing..👏 👏 👏

I have a feeling it's someone's dream..I'm not sure whose dream..But someone's definitely having a bad dream!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank you so much! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushix

as usual sareeta... 👏 👏 👏

Thank you sooooo much Khushi!😊

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