SaMud FF. : Muhabbat Adhoori Rehti hai..Chap3page8

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Muhabbat Adhoori Rehti HAi!
Prologue
He looked desperately into her eyes searching for the life that used to glow in it.. The life .. the glitter that made him live.. He couldnt find it anymore...He roared with frustration clutching her numb body and shaking it.
'Aankhein kholo .. Kumud.. aankhein kholo.. ye ab tamasha nahi hai..'
He kept shaking her but in vain.
Suddenly he saw people coming towards him carrying fire lamps.
The night was cold. He gripped around her body holding her close to his chest.
'koi kuch bhi kahe.. mein tujhe kuch nahi hone doonga Kumud.. Ye mere vaada hai..'
He sat there murmuring the same thing over and over again into her ears .
The mass of people approached him closer. Vidyut Kaka emerged from the crowd and seeing him sitting in the sand holding her like that made him want to cry. But controlling his emotions, he went near him and slowly tried pulling Kumud's body away from his grip.
As Vidyut kaka touched her.. he just pushed him away and roaored in anger
'Aap inko haath nahi laga sakte.. Ye MERI Kumud Sarawthichandra Vyas Hai.. Meri Hai;!! Saraswathichandra ki hai'!


Seeing the glare in his eyes and the determination and love he saw.. Vidyut kaka just limped backwards weeping hard thinking how lucky his daughter was to get Saras but Bhagwan got jealous And Gave Saras this fate!



okay people.. my attempt in starting a New FF.. This plot is not connected to the show.. and its my own. read and LOVe to read ur true opinion... :) tell me if i should continue.. because havent written an FF for a long time! Thanks for taking out ur time! and those who want PM just Hit the LIke Button!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice want to read more 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sh*t! I lost 1st position, I think!

~ Edit ~

Oh yeah! I lost 1st position!
Grrr... 😡 Palak tu ab gayi kaam se!
Btw, Amazing prologue Aaru! 👏
Awwiee!!! Ye meri Kumud Saraswatichandra Vyas hai!
Lovelyyy!!!
Edited by ii..Shilpa..ii - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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shilpa : I messaged u Just befor posting! :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: IAmAaru

shilpa : I messaged u Just befor posting! :(


Yeah! I saw your text but my fate, I checked it after freaking whole 17 minutes!
I know it's my mistake only!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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:* i wll call u next time i am updating! aaj hi hoga! ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Unres kar1 i ned comments.. shoud i continue? :O
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow tht was an awesome prologue
badly waiting for the part1 to kick off 😉
plz pm me wen u update the first part 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awieee..too good!!!
superb...amazing...🤗
update it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A good start to be honest. Just a bit of grammar edits here and there will turn it into a promising read.



This may seem rude, pfft it is rude but anyone can ya check my FF out http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3501828

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