SaMud FF. : Muhabbat Adhoori Rehti hai..Chap3page8 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am soo sorry! I Know its Very late! had exams going on and was really busy with personal shit! Leave all that.. I am back with MY Updates PPL! Read and enjoy! :)And Give me feeedback! I Live cause of that ;)

Chapter 2 : Saras The Man

'Saras Beta.. Tum...' Maasi Maa couldnt find words coming to her mouth .Such big was her happiness and surprise on seeing Saraswathichandra after such a long time!

'Tu...yaha kaise..' Maasi Ma had to stop herself from as saras bend down to touch her feet and seek her blessings.

'Yaha aane ke liye mujhe kisiki permission nahi chahiye na .. Aapne hi kaha tha ye maasi Maa.. Bhool Gaye...'

'Mein kaise Bhool sakti beta..' She added by giving a pat on his face..

'Andar aao Beta.. Itne door se aaye ho.. Dhak gaye hoge..'

He smiled and followed her inside to the hall. Nothing had changed. The place looked just the same. It seemed to him that not even a second had passed from that day that he had to leave this place. His home.The place he always belonged to...

Seeing him lost in a trance Maasi maa Slowly tapped on his shoulder and asked ' Beta...Kya hua...'

He didnt know what came over him .. The sound of his Maasi ma.. The sense of belonging he felt.. or the way in which she called him Beta he just turned and hugged her... And he then realised how much he missed his own mother. HE used to always blame the fate for making him such a heartless person but being in his maasi ma's embrace he felt like a little child who had just came running back to his own mother after being taken away from her.

He slowly broke away from the hug . He could see that her eyes had filled .. he could sense that his own eyes had become wet. He didnt usually break down like this.. and now.. as that moment has passed.. he wanted to avoid all awkward moment and questions that he had to face.. He quickly fidgeted with his bag for a while.. He could sense that maasi maa's eyes were still fixed on him and was observing his each movement with a surprise..

To avoid the embarrassement he quickly asked

'Kakaji kaise hai'?

'Abhi bilkul theek hai.. tumko dekhkar aur bhi dheek ho jayege'

He smiled and followed maasi Ma..As he passed the hallway he heard that sound again... he quickly turned sideways only to catch a pink Dupatta that just flew inside as if the owner of that dupatta least cared about its existence. The Payal sound again drifted away.. but his desire to see its owner increased .. he didnt know why..


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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Kamini! You demand big updates from me when I give you a freaking thousand words essay! Now look at you? What is this? A paragraph? UPDATE with LONG chapters! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Firstly very sry for replying lately on the first chap ...😳
and secondly both the chaps were awesome di 👏 👏
But y such a small update 😭 😭 k fine i can understand i know that ur exams are goin on so dont worry iam not gonna force u now 😳
But once ur exams get over i badly want long long updates di 😈 😳
And loved the moments of Sars and maasi ma it was touching
Now i cant wait for Saras and Kumud's meeting
Di plzz give next update asap na and remember it should be very big huh 😈 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Make a longer update next time ...I wanna read more ...though i ...m not regular with the show but I love this Saras ...:) :) Awesomeee...continuee...and when u update mujhe batanaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Loved the update Aaru ! Want a longer one next time😛 You write really well hun and I'm loving the FF !😳🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haye!
Lovely update...
can't wait for their first meet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Hello! :D
I saw this thread of yours n am reading its prologue rite nw...will edit my cmnt aftr reading the whole thing...res fr nw :)

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He looked desperately into her eyes searching for the life that used to glow in it.. The life
awww😳

The night was cold. He gripped around her body holding her close to his chest.
'koi kuch bhi kahe.. mein tujhe kuch nahi hone doonga Kumud.. Ye mere vaada hai..'
He sat there murmuring the same thing over and over again into her ears .
Saras!! aww!!!!!!!!! Magar kya hua Kumud ko?

'Aap inko haath nahi laga sakte.. Ye MERI Kumud Sarawthichandra Vyas Hai.. Meri Hai;!! Saraswathichandra ki hai'!
Haye!!!!! MERI Kumud Saraswatichandra Vyas!! God...I'm dying to hear Saras say this is the show!!! This line makes me feel so happy!!😳😆


Gonna read the first & second chpt nw :)
Update soon & do PM me! :D
Sending you a buddy request :)
Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res fr cmnt on chpt1

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You know, I guess we both have a similar aadat in giving upds of our stories😆 Cause I too give such chotu upds of my stories😆
The title of the chpt, The paayal that kills! Woah!! Pretty interesting! :D
Nice upd! :D I luvd the way u described the surroundings :)
All ppl gazing at Saras is so obvious😳 He's so handsome😳




Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res fr cmnt on chpt 2 :P

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He didnt know what came over him .. The sound of his Maasi ma.. The sense of belonging he felt.. or the way in which she called him Beta he just turned and hugged her... And he then realised how much he missed his own mother. HE used to always blame the fate for making him such a heartless person but being in his maasi ma's embrace he felt like a little child who had just came running back to his own mother after being taken away from her.
I love this part! :D ^^

He smiled and followed maasi Ma..As he passed the hallway he heard that sound again... he quickly turned sideways only to catch a pink Dupatta that just flew inside as if the owner of that dupatta least cared about its existence. The Payal sound again drifted away.. but his desire to see its owner increased .. he didnt know why..
hmmm😳
Waiting for the nxt upd!
Updd soon!!!! :D
Edited by chand1234 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chand 1234 : WOW! thanks for giving me such feedback! goona update soonish! hopefully big update! <3

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