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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well, I don't know many of you guys here but just to introduce myself on the Balika vadhu forums, I am oliveya but my all friends call me olive😆 and I'm 22 years old.I lived at NewZealand. I loved to watch hollywood ,movie most , but first time I crazy for any indian couple and their is Ansh i loved to watch the BV for AnSh/ .I loved to read the all OS/FF/of Ansh . I've read some of your works and they are amazing. There are so many talented writers on here .so i think i do want to show my writing in here i have wrote a poem about AnSH LOVE I HOPE U LIKE ITS ITS MY FIRST posted

Ever since I met you,

I've had these feelings deep inside,

mainly when you hold me,

and look into my eyes,

you make me feel so young again,

and give me feelings I'd forgot,

you make me feel so happy,

with cupids arrow I've been shot.😳






You are the stars in my night time,
You are the blue sky in my day,
You are the water in my ocean,
You are the light showing me the way,
You are the sunshine in my eyes,
You are the wind blowing through my hair,
You are the beating in my heart, Br>You are my life - you're always there.





Gentle serenity is what you are,
and your love makes me feel
well above par ... calmimg my pain
time and again, serenading my soul
and making me whole.

You are blessed with tranquility,
an angelic star - you bring joy and romance
wherever you are.


You are my description of love
You are my description of friend
You are my description of everything
You are my description of beginning to end.

You have put me on a pedestal
You make me feel ten feet tall
You've always been there for me
You've loved me through it all.

You've stood by me through thick and thin
You've always been patient and kind
Just thought I'd let you know
You're the owner of this heart of mine.

So you ask how long I'll love you
Well this is what I have to say
Past, present, future, always
Forever and a day!


Edited by OliveySOftheart - 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
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i have not words to describe... what i felt now.. after reading this.. in one word just amazing..

and perfect choice of picture..👍🏼

do post more often.. you are awesome... 👏

P.s: me first in your post...
Edited by Don_theEvil - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Olive you are so talented 🤗

this poem is out of world...you wrote with such great maturity & depth 👍🏼

Loved Poem...👏 👏

its magical...lyrical...

makes me ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Olive...

Its Beautiful...!!!..😳❤️

Expect to see more of such poems from you...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Olive so nice beautifully written👏
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow... yar...... Beautiful... amazing...
Marvelous..writing dear...⭐️
Thanx for the Poem nd PM...🤗
Edited by Manshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its beautiful Olive.
Jst perfect for Ansh 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Olive

awesome

loved all ur pics

its really superbbb👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww yaarrr u r truly a poet lol...
if poem were wid sid pic in my books then i would have fallen in lov wid my book ...actually i just hate books!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riasa

wowww yaarrr u r truly a poet lol...
if poem were wid sid pic in my books then i would have fallen in lov wid my book ...actually i just hate books!!!!


riso i 'm happy to know u like like its thnkxx
i 'm soo happy to see u here and many many thnxx a lots to gave me such awesome siggys of siddharth shukla i 'm fall in loved with them 🤗
Edited by OliveySOftheart - 12 years ago

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