AnSh SS:That Special Day (sidyusha!)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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my hands were trembling when i was writing this.This is the first time in ma life that I've written a story and I am pretty nervous about it! so potatoes or tomatoes or eggs are most welcum right now an OS but looking at the feedback i might turn it into a SS ! plz bear the torture here it comes..
my blog = www.likitha17blog.wordpress.com

INDEX

CHAP 1- page 1 CHAP 16-PG 25
CHAP 2-page 2 CHAP 17-PG 31
CHAP 3-page 2 CHAP 18-PG 34
CHAP 4-page 3 CHAP 19-PG 35
CHAP 5-page 5
CHAP 7-page 7
CHAP 8-page 9
CHAP 9-PAGE 10(consummation chapter)
CHAP 10a-PAGE 12
CHAP 10B-PAGE 15
CHAP 11-PAGE 16
CHAP 12-PAGE 17
CHAP 13-PAGE 18(honeymoon or HM chapter)
CHAP 14-PAGE 20
CHAP 15-PAGE 21




"I Love You".😳 Oh how long had he yearned to hear those word from her cherry pink lips.It had been months since Shiv and Anandi got married.


She wan not in love with initially but agreed to get married only to fulfil her mother's dying wish.Well Shiv was crazy about Anandi.😛He was smitten by her the minute he saw her.


After marriage Anandi began discovering her best friend turned hubby.His smile,his well body,his puppy face and his naughty grins soon began to grow on her.Later she realised that she has fallen in love with him and decided to confess.😳😃


Well she finally did but it happened when they accidentally fell into a lake and got completely drenched.


Shiv held Anandi close to him and she muttered those 3 magical words.


He was literally numb.They hugged each other till eternity.


"Anandi we need get out of here otherwise we'll catch a cold and then you'll make me drink that kada😆" he said funnily worried.Anandi just laughed at her innocent hubby😳.


Just then she felt him touching her waist.


Slowlyhis hand moved up her back and then front and then to her face.😲her body was on fire.


His fingers seemed to melt her rather small body.She was shivering mostly because of his touch.He slowly moved his fingers to her lips.He pulled her closer and crashed his lips on hers🥳


He moved them in all directions,frightening her and making her shudder.☺️


She held on his shirt tighter.As the kiss deepened...they both found themselves unable to part but separated to breathe


Shiv moved closer for another one when Anandi said " arey shiv main insaan hoon saas
lena zaroori hai ek minute😆" . Shiv laughed hard looking at her condition.


She
looked so fragile like a glass which would break when slightly disturbed.


He said to himself that he would never let her break.he would keep her safe is his embrace😳 and never let any problem even come near her.😳


Busy in thoughts he didn't even realise when Anandi got out
of water and was no where to be found.He knew she was playing with him.


With a playfulsmile he too got out.Unknown to him Anandi was hiding behind a tree looking ather uber sexy husband get out the water.


He was no where is a blink of a second."kahan chale gaye shiv?"she said and looked here and there to find when suddenly she felt strong arms encircle her tiny waist ,she turned and was surprised to see Shiv there.


kyu madam sirf aap intelligent ho ? app hi mere saath khel khel saakti hon...ab is cheez ka
punishment tho aapko milega" he said in a naughty voice.


He came closer.Before she could say anything he shut her mouth by closing it with his. After a long time they broke the kiss and Anandi hugged him wholeheartedly.Shiv gently caressed her hair and placed a soft kiss
on her head.


"i love you baby" he muttered."I love you too" came the reply.He just strengthened the embrace and they were lost in each other for ages.


After long time the lovebirds had finally reached each other.And their first kiss happened where they first met for the very first time in theirlives.


This was indeed the most special day of their lives...❤️


HEY PLZ COMMENT AND TELL ME IF U LIKED IT OR NOT.I WOULD LOVE SOME SUGGESTIONS CAUSE I'M A VERY BAD WRITER(NO HYPOCRISY I'M HONEST)!! TELL ME IF I HAD TO CONTINUE.



Edited by likithakmh - 12 years ago

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brick_red thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Liked your story. Felt the flow was bit fast. A smaller font size may be easy on the eyes.
Thank you for the writing.
NOTE: I was lil worried to open the OS. Because special day can be anything no?😲..But you surprised me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really nice... please continue😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is ur first time that u have written...and let me congratulate u on having writtten it beautifullly and very fantasticallly,,,,

Though I am not a writer, but am a reader, hence as a reader I would like to suggest u something on this update,,,,
firstly the update was nice, but I felt it was at a stream speed...I mean things happened very quickly here...I mean u could have made a slow pace though not as slow as the CVs do...(this is completely my opinion, no offense to anyone or to the author)...
secondly, the font that u used was actually piercing the eyes, so select a soothing font for the eyes...if u use the big font dont bold it...
Thirdly, small updates are not accepted by Anshians...Anshians are greedy for more frequent and longer updates...😉😉...
Hope u take the first two suggestions seriously and the third one very very very very very seriously...
PS:: B a regular updater...dont bunk ur updates like u did in ur school, college, or office...😉
All D Best buddy...go for it yaaarrr...the plot is superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was very nice😊
Please do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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okay !! u no i turned it into bold and i knew it that it would straining but because its been years since i've posted...can u believe i forgot how to 'unbold' it ! I'll try to make the next chapter better and i will be posting it soon today only!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks everyone for ur comments and suggestions!!! I'll try to make it slow .!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: brick_red

Liked your story. Felt the flow was bit fast. A smaller font size may be easy on the eyes.

Thank you for the writing.
NOTE: I was lil worried to open the OS. Because special day can be anything no?😲..But you surprised me 😊

yeah ! even i felt i was taking it fast..first time no that's y! next update would be better I promise!!THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1😊😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kurup

This is ur first time that u have written...and let me congratulate u on having writtten it beautifullly and very fantasticallly,,,,

Though I am not a writer, but am a reader, hence as a reader I would like to suggest u something on this update,,,,
firstly the update was nice, but I felt it was at a stream speed...I mean things happened very quickly here...I mean u could have made a slow pace though not as slow as the CVs do...(this is completely my opinion, no offense to anyone or to the author)...
secondly, the font that u used was actually piercing the eyes, so select a soothing font for the eyes...if u use the big font dont bold it...
Thirdly, small updates are not accepted by Anshians...Anshians are greedy for more frequent and longer updates...😉😉...
Hope u take the first two suggestions seriously and the third one very very very very very seriously...
PS:: B a regular updater...dont bunk ur updates like u did in ur school, college, or office...😉
All D Best buddy...go for it yaaarrr...the plot is superb

i will remember all three and try it to make long,the font small and the story a bit slow!!!!!!!!! i'll try huh but not sure...😊but seeing ur msg m feeling a little confident! thank you!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the OS...Plsss make it an SS...u write beautully
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay here comes chapter 2.sorry no ansh scenes😆 in this i did it purposely.But next chap is gonna be a spicy one...😉however for now just bear with this.😆

⭐️CHAPTER 2⭐️

They were lying in each other's arms blissfully😳 when they heard Shiv's phone ring😡."ufff!!"😡 Shiv said in an irritated voice.Anandi was irritated too.It was mahi's call."is mahi ke bacche ko chodoonga nahin" said Shiv."phone tho uthaiye Shiv,kuch zaroori baath hogi" Anandi said with her voice filled with concern."hello mahi! Kya hua sab teek hain na?

"nahin bhaiya sanchi phir se gir gayi aur lagtha hain uska pair fracture ho gaya😲! Aap aur bhabhi jaldi ayiye...m sorry for disturbing u bhaiya" said mahi.he knew of anandi surprising Shiv.But looking at saanchi's condition he had to call shiv.

"kya?sanchi gir gayi!phirse? yeh kaise hua? Yeh ladki bhi na..tum tension mat mein aa raha hoon...aur sorry bolne ki zaroorat nahin hain main aur anandi abhi nikhal thein.bye"


"kya hua shiv sab teek hain na?kya hua saanchi ko?"


"wo gir gayi hume jaana hoga anandi"


"kya?humein abhi saanchi ke paas jaana hoga...hum dono ke liye tho saari zindagi aage padi hain.chaliye jaldi chalte hain" Shiv couldn't help but smile and thank god for giving him such an understanding wife.


They sat in the car.The car came to a halt near CH.Shiv and anandi got up and rushed inside to find saanchi wailing and screaming loudly.


"ma mujhe force mat keejiye! main uss gandhe hosp mein nahin jaaongi" saanchi shouted.


"yeh kya keh rahi ho? paagal ho gayi hain yeh ladki.Zidh karna bandh karo aur hosp chalo" Alok said burning with anger.


"papa saanchi ko hospital kyu nehi leke gaye?chaliye jaldi jaayenge warne pair main dard aur badega!" shiv said worried.


"yeh ladki kisi ki sune tab na" CM said.


"main nahin jaoongi uss hosp mein..jab mein gayi unhone mera teek se khayal nahin raka aur dressing bhi nahin ki...uss stupid se hosp mein main nahin jaaongi"saanchi retorted back.


"yeh naatak bandh karo aur chalo" alok said in an angry voice.


Finally anandi went and sat next to her "saanchi ab tum hosp nahin jaaogi tho dard aur badega tab hum jald se Udaipur jaakar waha ke doctor se consult nahin kar paaogi hain na?.Jagdish ko check kar ne dho aur paati baandhne dho.Aur hosp ko uski size ya uski building dekh kar judge nahin karna chahiye.Chote shehron mein bhi bade acche doctor hote hain."👏


"haan saanchi anandi bhabhi sahi keh rahi hain...ek bar dikhakar patti bandhwa lo phir Udaipur mein hum Dr.Sharma ke paas jayenge.ab mana mat karna." Mahi said.

"teek hain par hum jaldi Udaipur jaayenge."


"acche baba ab pehele hosp chale?" ira said.


"ok"


Shiv gestured through his eyes to anandi and thanked her.She just smiled in return.😳They took saanchi to Jagdish and this time he didn't want any tamasha so he was quiet.saanchi was looking at him while he was putting the crepe bandage around her leg.They thanked Jagdish and left ." thank you Dr.Jagdish" saanchi said and smiled."welcum." jagdish said a little taken aback.😆


A week passed and the packing was done.they were to leave for Udaipur today.Saanchi's leg was a little better.All these days due to saanchi's leg and all the packing hungama anandi and shiv didn't get any time to spend with each other.They didn't yet consummate their marriage.But there were occasional and very very intentional touches and kisses😳 when there was no one around.But even that was rare with a small house filled with so many people😭.In the night they just slept tired hugging each other tightly.😳.They were waiting to get to Udaipur where a new beginning was awaiting them.😛


I know the saanchi thing became too much but in next chap i am gonna toss her to her hostel😆 so that our ansh get a lot of time together in Udaipur.😉

Edited by likithakmh - 12 years ago

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