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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
consummation in jungle is little too much. make it in udaipur but there shud b lot of romance and closeness in jungle.
waiting eagerly for the next romantic part😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
yeah definitely i'll try to make it as romantic as possible!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i have tried it to make it as romantic as i can ...i'm hoping u would like it...! i'm actually nervous about the reaction to this chapter! ENJOY!

⭐️CHAPTER 5⭐️

"i've got an idea" said shiv.

"what idea?" asked anandi curiously.

"jab bhi main aur mere dost camping ke liye aathe the...paas k eek gaun se khana aur paani ka ithezaam karte the..shayad waha se koyi madhadh mill jaye?" he said

"haan yeh sahi hoga ...tho der kis baath ki chaliye na shiv!" she said.

"haan par yaha se bahut door hein...tum shayad chal nahi paaogi.." he said

"meri fikar mat kijiye main chaloongi ...aur jab aap mere saath hain tho mujhe kis baath ka dar hain? " she said with love filled in her eyes.

Shiv just smiled brightly.And extended his hand.Anandi help it tightly and then they began walking😳.There were a lot of rocks in the way and anandi tripped often but with Shiv being next to her what would ever happen to her? He held her waist lightly while walking looking at her condition.He pulled her closer .She held onto to his large supportive hands and continued walking.

It was a very long.It had been 1 hr since they were walking.

"aur kitna door hain shiv?" anandi asked tired

"pata nahin raastha sahi hain par ...wo gaun nazar nahin aa raha..shaayad hum galat raaste per chal rahe thein" he said disheartened.

"shiv waha dekhiye ek chotta sa ghar jaisa lag raha hain" she said looking around.

"chaliye waha chalte hain"

"haan"

They reached that place but were surprised to see no one over there.It looked abandoned.Suddenlyy shiv heard a thud and saw that anandi had collapsed!

"anandi!!! Anandi!! Utoo anandi aakein kholo!" he shouted concerned to hell and with tears almost flowing.

He quickly picked her up and went inside.He laid her on a 'sort of a bed kind of thing' and he found his hand stained with blood.

Man he was scared to death.He immediately turned her around and found that because she fell so hard ..blood was oozing out of her back.He had to remove the blouse in order to treat that would.He was a bit hesitant but ananadi was what that mattered the most.

He slowly and nervously unhooked her buttons... exposing her smooth back which gave shiv a hard time to control.he looked around for water and found a pot and checked it." Thank god isme paani hain"he said.

He slowly poured the water on her back and took his handkerchief and began to wipe it clean.

Because of the water anandi woke up and was surprised to see herself in this position.

"shiv.." she said faintly

"anandi? Anandi? Tum teek ho? Tumne tho mujhe dara hi diya...wo tumhare back pe gaav hain isiliye...uh...blouse ...uh..kholna pada" he said nervously.

"tho iss baath ko dar-dar ke kyun keh rahe hain..? main aapki hun shiv aapka mujh pe poora haq hain" she said shyly.

He slowly rubbed the wound.Anandi was out of her mind.His soft touch was invoking the caged urges in her.She shivered and wailed when he pressed a bit hard.

"sorry" he said worriedly

"its okay" she said

"bohot dard kar raha hain shiv" she cried.

"kya? Main kuch karta hoon.." he replied clueless.

He slowly moved forward towards her back and blew cool air from the space between his lips.Anandi shivered..her heart was about to burst.Shiv too had the same feeling.Being close to her was killing him.Her smell and the deadly fumes her body let out was pulling him close to her.

He leaned forward near the wound and let the wound taste his lips.He planted a soft kiss on the wound.Anandi tightened her fists in response.She could feel his breath on her bare back.And the stubble pricking her back made it even worse.

"ab shayad dard kam hogaya" he said in a husky voice and laid his muscular body next to her.Their faces were centimetres apart.They could feel the tension building up.

With no time to waste he moved closer and captured those lips.He began tasting her upper lip and slowly bit the lower one and then soothed it again.His tongue was exploring every inch of her mouth.Anandi too kissed back with same intensity and foce..He slowly moved his hand on her back and slithered his hand on her back like a snake.

Anandi was on top of him now.His touch gave her goosebumps.As the night grew their passion and love for each other grew heaps.He didn't realise when anandi slept off on him..'go she must have been really tired' he thought.He just looked at her innocent face and smiled.He placed a kiss on her forehead and whispered "i love you anandi" he covered her back with his hands and held her in tight embrace so that she doesnt feel cold.

So they slept blissfully in each others' arms till the sun rose the next morning...


so how it??? plz like and comment!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by likithakmh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: likithakmh

i have tried it to make it as romantic as i can ...i'm hoping u would like it...! i'm actually nervous about the reaction to this chapter! ENJOY!

CHAPTER 5

"i've got an idea" said shiv.

"what idea?" asked anandi curiously.

"jab bhi main aur mere dost camping ke liye aathe the...paas k eek gaun se khana aur paani ka ithezaam karte the..shayad waha se koyi madhadh mill jaye?" he said

"haan yeh sahi hoga ...tho der kis baath ki chaliye na shiv!" she said.

"haan par yaha se bahut door hein...tum shayad chal nahi paaogi.." he said

"meri fikar mat kijiye main chaloongi ...aur jab aap mere saath hain tho mujhe kis baath ka dar hain? " she said with love filled in her eyes.

Shiv just smiled brightly.And extended his hand.Anandi help it tightly and then they began walking😳.There were a lot of rocks in the way and anandi tripped often but with Shiv being next to her what would ever happen to her? He held her waist lightly while walking looking at her condition.He pulled her closer .She held onto to his large supportive hands and continued walking.

It was a very long.It had been 1 hr since they were walking.

"aur kitna door hain shiv?" anandi asked tired

"pata nahin raastha sahi hain par ...wo gaun nazar nahin aa raha..shaayad hum galat raaste per chal rahe thein" he said disheartened.

"shiv waha dekhiye ek chotta sa ghar jaisa lag raha hain" she said looking around.

"chaliye waha chalte hain"

"haan"

They reached that place but were surprised to see no one over there.It looked abandoned.Suddenlyy shiv heard a thud and saw that anandi had collapsed!

"anandi!!! Anandi!! Utoo anandi aakein kholo!" he shouted concerned to hell and with tears almost flowing.

He quickly picked her up and went inside.He laid her on a 'sort of a bed kind of thing' and he found his hand stained with blood.

Man he was scared to death.He immediately turned her around and found that because she fell so hard ..blood was oozing out of her back.He had to remove the blouse in order to treat that would.He was a bit hesitant but ananadi was what that mattered the most.

He slowly and nervously unhooked her buttons... exposing her smooth back which gave shiv a hard time to control.he looked around for water and found a pot and checked it." Thank god isme paani hain"he said.

He slowly poured the water on her back and took his handkerchief and began to wipe it clean.

Because of the water anandi woke up and was surprised to see herself in this position.

"shiv.." she said faintly

"anandi? Anandi? Tum teek ho? Tumne tho mujhe dara hi diya...wo tumhare back pe gaav hain isiliye...uh...blouse ...uh..kholna pada" he said nervously.

"tho iss baath ko dar-dar ke kyun keh rahe hain..? main aapki hun shiv aapka mujh pe poora haq hain" she said shyly.

He slowly rubbed the wound.Anandi was out of her mind.His soft touch was invoking the caged urges in her.She shivered and wailed when he pressed a bit hard.

"sorry" he said worriedly

"its okay" she said

"bohot dard kar raha hain shiv" she cried.

"kya? Main kuch karta hoon.." he replied clueless.

He slowly moved forward towards her back and blew cool air from the space between his lips.Anandi shivered..her heart was about to burst.Shiv too had the same feeling.Being close to her was killing him.Her smell and the deadly fumes her body let out was pulling him close to her.

He leaned forward near the wound and let the wound taste his lips.He planted a soft kiss on the wound.Anandi tightened her fists in response.She could feel his breath on her bare back.And the stubble pricking her back made it even worse.

"ab shayad dard kam hogaya" he said in a husky voice and laid his muscular body next to her.Their faces were centimetres apart.They could feel the tension building up.

With no time to waste he moved closer and captured those lips.He began tasting her upper lip and slowly bit the lower one and then soothed it again.His tongue was exploring every inch of her mouth.Anandi too kissed back with same intensity and foce..He slowly moved his hand on her back and slithered his hand on her back like a snake.

Anandi was on top of him now.His touch gave her goosebumps.As the night grew their passion and love for each other grew heaps.He didn't realise when anandi slept off on him..'go she must have been really tired' he thought.He just looked at her innocent face and smiled.He placed a kiss on her forehead and whispered "i love you anandi" he covered her back with his hands and held her in tight embrace so that she doesnt feel cold.

So they slept blissfully in each others' arms till the sun rose the next morning...


so how it??? plz like and comment!!!!!!!!!!

OMG OMG OMG GREAT GREAT GREAT.👏👏👏
BU SMALL ONE😭
DIL MANGE MORE
I AM FALLING IN LOVE WITH ANANDI 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
its really nice but very short...
expecting a long update soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Wowww...Fabulous update dear...Loved every bit of all the 5 chapters...
The last chapter was very sweeettt...Perfect husband...Consummation is not the only thng that a wife expects or a husband expects...Its alll about caring and trusting...
Fab job yaaar..U r rocking it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
This was a very nice anshilicious update.
Very very good. Great update.😊
Shiv is a very caring husband.
Thoroughly enjoyed it😊
Edited by ananthesh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
next update maybe tomorrow dad's coming home after a trip ...so today we all are spending time with ma dad.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

wow wow wow superb...ds ws a superb update

nd yday's mahaepisode ws also superb...it ws like mahaepi for me.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
thank you!😛
yesterday's epi was soo cute!😳

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