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Posted: 12 years ago
What a clever and interesting twist to the bitter past that is Arnav's life. I totally did not expect that. Completely blind-sided! Very well done! Loved the fresh perspective!
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OS 2: Finding Khushi

Part 12

Section 2





"Nani, we have to do something.", said Anjali, a worried look on her face.

"Haan, Anjali Bitiyaa! Chotey is very interested in her. He couldn't take his eyes off her all evening at the sagai!", replied Nani with a slight smile.

"Couldn't take hijj aiijj (eyes) aff (off) whom, Sasuumma? Me?", Mami asked.

Nani snorted. "Nobody can take his eyes off you, Manorama, when you are dressed up, but now I was talking of Khussi Bitiyaa!"

Mami frowned. "Yeh kaisen jaadu he? Magic, magic! Dono gaayab for so long? Hum dhoondath rehe, but couldn't get even a kulue (clue)!!!"

"What were you dhoonding, Masi?", came NK's cheerful voice.

"Err'oo kaa he, NK Bitwaa, hamre earring kho gaya. I was searching phor it.", Mami found an excuse.

Nani quickly jumped in to save the day. "Did you like the sagai, NK Bitwaa?"

"It was fantabulous, Naniji! And Akash was so shy!! More than Payalji!!" All laughed. "And Khushiji is so beautiful!"

Nani, Mami, & Anjali looked at each other.

Nani said quickly, "She is going to get engaged soon, NK Bitwaa. You better look elsewhere!"

"Aur naahin to kaa, Saasumma! My Kidney-returned bhanja! Looking at a dehati, kangal ladki!!!", Mami tried to dissuade NK from rocking their boatwaa.

"Kangal? What is wrong with Khushiji's bangles (kangan), Maasi?"

"Ee lio!" Manorama hit her head with her hand while Nani & Anjali hid their smiles.



"De-hati? Why should Khushiji give me an elephant?", NK scratched his head.

"Hello Hi Bye Bye!", Mami said faintly. Nani & Anjali burst out laughing.

"NK Bhai, Hari Prakashji has a new bag of chips for you. It is in the kitchen.", Anjali said.

"Really, Di? You are so sweet!" NK ambled to the kitchen.


As soon as he was out of hearing, Anjali said, "Chotey was looking at her, but she was trying to avoid him. Why?"

Nani paled. "I hope Chotey did not hurt her with his sarcastic tongue and his anger."

"Saasumma, she knows all about Lavanya Kasyap! Maybe that is why she is avoiding hamre Arnav Bitwaa!", Mami suggested.

Anjali said sadly, "Which girl will want to marry a boy who invites his girl friend to live in his house, declares his intention to marry her, and then changes his mind?"

"Don't be sad, Anjali Bitiyaa! Your Mami ijj here. We will have to chalao a chakar during the sangeet!"

Nani & Anjali nodded. "Time is running out, Manorama. We have just the sangeet, mehendi, haldi, & the shaadi left!"

"Let ujj (us) plan our forward movement, Saasumma!", declared Mami, and all 3 ladies put their heads together to devise a plan.





A while later, Anjali peeped into Arnav's garden. As usual, he was digging in some pot in a dark corner, totally lost in his thoughts.

She sneaked in, followed by Mami, & Nani. They occupied the chairs arranged around his laptop table, and sat back to discuss Khushi's future.

"She is so beautiful!", Anjali said loudly. Nani & Mami nodded.

Arnav looked up from his pot, curious.



"So sanskari!", Nani exclaimed.

"And sanki!", added Mami, lifting her feet on to the chair.

The ladies laughed. Arnav's hands stilled.

"I think, Nani, that soon she will be getting many proposals. Who will not want a wife like her?", Anjali remarked.

"Haan, Anjali Bitiyaa!", Nani sighed. "If she gets married to someone in Lucknow, we won't even get to see her once a year!"

"Saasumaa! Bhy borry when you have such a hatta katta bai (boy) in your haujj (house)?", Mami asked. "You goes ahead and propose, Saasumma! Let me see who dares to say 'No' to you!"

Arnav frowned. What the hell was brewing? He moved closer to them. Were they talking of Khushi?

Anjali pretended to see Arnav just then.

"Chotey! You are here! We didn't see you!", she said.

Nani & Mami nodded.

"But it is good that you are here, Chotey! We want to discuss something serious with you.", Nani said.

"With me?", Arnav asked. "About what?"

"About Khussi Bitiyaa!", Nani said.

All 3 ladies peered at his face. He tried to keep his face expressionless with great difficulty.

"What about her?", he asked, his voice husky.

"She is such a good girl. And we all love her. And now, after Akash's wedding, she is going to be our relation. So we were thinking that some boy from our family should marry her. Otherwise she will marry someone else and go to Lucknow.", Nani explained.

Arnav paled. Khushi would leave him and go away? If she agreed to marry someone else, he would lose her forever. No.. No' He had to keep her here, with him'.. whatever it took'..

"Lots of ladies were ghooring at her during the sagai, Arnav Bitwaa!", Mami added.

Anjali nodded. "Three ladies asked me who she was!"

Arnav ground his teeth. How dare the women look at her as a prospective daughter-in-law? She was his. Only his...

"So we were thinking, why should we give such a good girl to some other boy when we have her perfect match in our own house?", Nani said.



Arnav looked at her, tongue-tied.

"So what do you think, Chotey?", Anjali asked.

Arnav could feel his heart beat loudly in his chest, almost shouting her name aloud.

He took a deep breath, feeling as though he were standing at the edge of a cliff, and said, "If this is what you all wish'."

Nani, Mami, & Anjali looked at each other, unable to believe their ears'..

"Chotey!", Anjali could not control the tears filling her eyes. "You are sure?"

Arnav nodded, shy but not wanting them to know that he was shy.

Anjali got up and limped to him to hug him.




"Chotey, think about this properly. If you change your mind like you did with Ms. Kasyap'.", Nani warned him, her eyes serious.

"I am sure, Nani.", he said, his voice low but sure.

"Arnav Bitwa, bhen you decided not to marry Lavanya Kasyap, she went away with her bori bistar to London. She did not have a phamily to come and catch your throat. But Khushi'.", Mami warned him. "That too, with Akash Bitwaa and Payal's marriage'"

Arnav nodded. "I won't change my mind."

"If you change your mindwaa, let your Mami know early. I will make NK Bitwa marry her.", Mami said.

Nani & Anjali nodded. They warned Arnav, "He likes her very much."

Arnav clenched his fists. He had to exercise all his self-control to keep silent.

After a pregnant pause, he said, "What should we do now?"

"Take your proposal to the Guptas without delay.", said Nani.

"Or somebody else will push you to the sidewaa and win the race!", Mami warned.

Anjali hesitated. "We can take your proposal to the Guptas, Chotey. But they may not agree'."

Arnav looked at her with hurt eyes.
"Khushiji knows about Lavanyaji staying here''", Anjali whispered. Mami & Nani nodded.

"She has seen your anger and heard your abuses.", Nani did not mince words.

"She may not believes that you will marry her. After all, Lavanya Kasyap went to London with empty hands' after learning Maa ka dal & Papa ka dal'.. and drejjing (dressing) like a behenji phor you!", Mami reminded him.

Arnav looked down at his hands. His fingers were clenched, locked together.

"Remember, Chotey. Sitting by the pool, I had asked you if you were sure about bringing Lavanyaji home. If you had taken the decision with your heart '..?", Anjali reminded him. "Then, if you had let your heart win over your head for a moment, we wouldn't be in such a position today!"



Arnav swallowed to get rid of the bitter taste in his mouth.

"Khussi Bitiyaa has a big heart. Maybe she will forgive and forget. Let us try.", Nani said.

Mami, Anjali, & Arnav nodded.



Part 12:Section 1:78721237 Part 13:Section 1: 78870676

Edited by rulama - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Smita,😊

Here is my interpretation to Section 2 of Part 12.


The Three Investigators, Anjali, Nani and Mami, who had found that Arnav was interested in Khushi during the Sagai were huddled together to prepare their next step.

Anjali who was worried told her Nani that they needed to do put things into action. Nani with a slight smile told her that Chotey was very interested in Khushi Bitiya and his eyes were throughout following her wherever she went.

Mami who had her mind elsewhere heard the last sentence and asked her mother-in-law, whom he was not able to remove his eyes off? Was it her? Hearing this, Nani nipped her and said that nobody would be able to miss her when dressed up, but they were talking of Khushi Bitiya. Manorama who was known for her hawk eyes, had been puzzled by the disappearing act, of Khushi and Arnav from the kitchen during the Sagai. With her brows scrunched together, she asked what sort of magic was that. Both were missing for quite a long time and she had searched for them and still was clueless about where they were!

Just then NK who strolled in asked her what she was searching. Manorama who was taken aback by this sudden intrusion fumbled, but recovered quickly to retort that she was searching for her lost earring! Nani diverted his attention by asking how did he like Sagai.

NK's reply that it was awesome and Akash was more bashful than Payal had everybody in splits. But when he started to praise Khushi as extremely beautiful, the three ladies looked at each other. Nani told him that she was already asked for and would be getting engaged soon and he better look elsewhere. Manorama too joined her mother-in-law in dissuading him and said that thats it! How can her Sydney born nephew even think about looking at the rustic, small town girl who is not even well off? What Nani and Mami were telling NK was to keep away from Khushi and not to cast his eyes upon her. They didn't want him to rock their boat and mess up their well laid out plan knowing Arnav's inclination towards Khushi.

NK who was not able to take these subtle hints and with his poor Hindi knowledge asked Manorama Kangal? What was wrong with Khushiji's bangles? Mistaking kangal to kangan. Manorama who was trying to shoo away NK hit her head with her hand at his stupidity. Nani and Anjali hid a smile. NK who was still puzzled by what his Maasi had said and was trying to decipher while scratching his head wondered what she meant by De-hati? To their chagrin, he asked why should Khushi give him an elephant. Manorama found it frustrating that she had to explain each and every word to him, but the rest found it hilarious and burst out in laughter. To put him off the scent, Anjali told NK that HP had kept a new pack of wafers just for him in the kitchen. NK was glad. Thanking Di for her kind gesture he left to collect it.

As soon as NK was out of earshot, Anjali told the other two that Chotey was looking at Khushi throughout the function but she was avoiding him. She wondered as to what might have been the reason? Nani became whey-faced, thinking about Arnav's anger. She voiced out to others and said that hope she was not at the end of Chotey's lashing tongue and anger. Mami too who was worried told them maybe knowing all about Lavanya she was avoiding him. Hearing this Anjali told them sadly, which girl would like to marry a boy who invites his girl-friend to live with him, declares his intention to marry and then changes his mind.

Seeing her woebegone face Mami asked her not to be sad as she will rectify things during the Sangeet, and the rest agreed. Nani felt that they were running out of time as they had only sangeet, mehendi, haldi, and shaadi left to set things to their satisfaction. Mami in a mood to get things done immediately told her platoon of two that they better plan their forward movement soon and set forth. All the three ladies put their heads together to come up with a fool proof plan.

A little later, Anjali peeped into Arnav's garden. As usual, he was pottering around his plants, engrossed in deep thoughts oblivious to his surroundings. She furtively sneaked in followed by the rest. Occupying the garden chairs around his table they sat back to chat about Khushi. Anjali declared loudly that she was beautiful. Nani and Mami bobbed their head in concurrence making Arnav curious and look at them. Nani exclaimed that she was such a cultured girl! Mami putting her feet up told that she was a bit zany too making the rest bubble with laughter. Arnav who was all ears while working had his hands stilled. He heard his Di tell his Nani that soon she would be getting proposals. Who would not want her for a life partner? Nani agreed with her and sighed. She said that if she gets married to someone in Lucknow, they won't even be able to see her even once a year. Mami who was waiting for this cue, asked them what was the need to worry when they had a good sturdy boy of marriageable age amidst them? She told her to go ahead and take the proposal to her house and she, Manorama will take care of the person who'll say no to the suggestion. Hearing their conversation Arnav frowned and moving closer to them wondered whether they were talking of Khushi.

Anjali pretending to see Arnav just then expressed her surprise and told him so. Nani and Mami too bobbed their head in agreement. Nani told him that it was good that he was there as they wanted to discuss certain things with him. Arnav was surprised to hear them say so and asked about what were they wanting to discuss with him. Nani came straight to the point and said that it was about Khushi Bitiya. All the three were watching carefully at his reaction but he was careful enough to school it to keep expressionless. What about her that they wanted to talk he asked in a husky inflection in his voice. Nani told him that she was a good girl and all of them love her. With Akash's wedding she would become related. So they were thinking that a boy from their family should marry her before somebody else snares her up and she might go far away from them maybe Lucknow. Hearing what might happen Arnav felt ghastly. Just the thought of Khushi leaving him, agreeing to marry somebody else and him losing her forever made him gloomy. He had to keep her with him and for that he was ready to do whatever was needed. Mami who was observing him spiced it up by saying that lots of ladies were watching Khushi keenly during Sagai. Anjali with a nod she said that three ladies had asked about her. Arnav who was basically down hearted with the thought, that Khushi might leave him got angered and thought how dare those women think of her as a prospective daughter-in-law when she belonged to him and only him. Cutting into his thoughts, Nani told him that they were thinking why to let go such a good girl to some other boy when they had a good match in their own house itself. Arnav was rendered inarticulate and was able to just look at her. Anjali asked him what he thought about it. He could feel the rapid beat of his heart and he realized that it was beating just for Khushi. Taking a deep breath, feeling the same exhilaration as at the whiffle of the wind while standing at the edge of a cliff, he said that if they all wished to be so... and left the remaining unsaid! Nani, Anjali and Mami looked at each other astounded. Making their Chotey agree to their proposal had become extremely easy and moreover he was giving them all the rights to do as per their wishes. They just couldn't believe what they had heard. When Anjali with tears pooling her eyes asked him whether he was sure, Arnav nodded his head self consciously not wanting to reveal how shy he was feeling to admit it. Overcome by happiness Anjali limped over to his side and hugged him.

Nani warned him to think over this matter carefully as she didn't want a repeat of Lavanya episode. When he spoke that he was sure this time, though it was in a low voice it was emphatic.

Mami too warned him that when he decided not to marry Lavanya, she went away quietly with all her bags and baggage to London. She did not have a family to question him. But in case of Khushi it would be different. If he renegades on his promise later, they will not only have to contend with her family but they will have Akash and Payal's marriage to consider too and it will be like being between hammer and anvil. Arnav assured them that he would not change his mind. But Mami persisted and told him that if he changes his mind to let her know as quickly as possible as she will take the proposal of NK instead of Arnav. Anjali and Nani agreed and told him that NK likes her a lot. Arnav kept silent trying not to vent out the rage that formed within him at the mention of NK liking Khushi and the change in the proposal. He clenched his fist and summoning all the reserves in him controlled himself. After cooling a bit he asked what the next move was. Nani said that they would have to take his proposal to the Guptas without delay. Mami warned that if delayed somebody else might beat him to it. Anjali hesitated to say but taking courage she told him that they could take his proposal but there is always the chance that it might not be accepted. Hearing this he was hurt. When he looked at her with woeful eyes, she whispered that Khushiji knows about Lavanyaji staying here. Nani and Mami agreed with what she was saying and Nani continued to administer truth point blank, that Khushi had seen his anger and been the target of his abuses. Mami taking up from where Nani left off told him that Khushi may not really believe that you would marry her. After all she had seen herself how Lavanya had returned to London even after trying her best to fit into the family giving up a lot of things that she was used to, learning to cook desi cuisine and dressing in the traditional way. Arnav had his fist clenched tight ruing all the things he had done which would spoil his chances of marrying Khushi, the joy of his life now.

Looking at his turmoil, Anjali reminded him that sitting by the pool she had asked him if he was sure about his decision to bring Lavanya home as his live-in companion. She told him that if only he had listened to his heart before taking the decision, if only he had let his heart rule over his mind then they could have avoided the present situation. Arnav was being given a bitter pill of his own making. He swallowed the hard lump that had suddenly lodged in his throat and it left a bitter taste in him. Soothing him, Nani told him that Khushi Bitiya possessed a heart of gold and was a very warm person. Maybe she'll find in her heart to forgive and forget. Let us at least give it a best shot. Mami, Anjali and Arnav bobbed their head in agreement.

This update is about vis a vis TRUTH.

It is about facing the truth.

"Three things can not hide for long: the Moon, the Sun and the Truth"

~ Hermann Hesse

The Three Investigators, Nani, Mami and Anjali find out that Arnav and Khushi had met privately escaping Mami's hawk eye.

They face the truth that things are not what the two try to project.

They come to know that NK too finds Khushi alluring that put them in a tizzy, knowing that if he succeeds all their plan would go down the drain. They are made to face the truth of the need to speed up things.

They also came to know during Sagai that Khushi was evading Arnav while he was following her all the time. They are made to face the truth that it might not be an easy task to ask for Khushi's hand in marriage.

They are made to face the truth of repercussions of Arnav breaking the word to marry Lavanya. This they know has given rise to certain trust issues.

"The best way to find out if you can trust somebody is to trust them"

~ Ernest Hemingway

By sneakily taking the topic of Khushi, The Trio are made to face the truth of Arnav liking Khushi much to their delight. They had thought it to be an uphill task.

When The Trio suggest marriage they are made to face the truth of Arnav agreeing to marry her without any reservation. Arnav who was against the institution of marriage is ready to take the plunge after the bitter truth initiation and a ray of hope given on his past by Khushi earlier.

"Sometimes it takes a good fall to really know where you stand"

~Hayley Williams

When he was asked whether he was conducive to the proposal to be taken to the Gupta house for Khushi in his name he came to face with the truth that his heart beats only for Khushi. She was his life and breath.

"You never know how much you really believe anything until its truth or falsehood becomes a matter of life and death to you"

~ C.S. Lewis

When he was made aware that there were many who wanted Khushi in their house he came to face with the truth that she was the one and the only one meant for him. He couldn't bear the thought of her with anyone else other than him.

"When you are sorrowful look again in your heart, and you shall see that in truth you are weeping for that which has been your delight"

~ Kahlil Gibran

He is made aware by The Trio that he may have to face the truth of rejection, a may be repercussion of his past deeds.

"It is difficult, when faced with a situation you cannot control, to admit you can do nothing"

~ Lemony Snicket, Horseradish: Bitter Truths You Can't Avoid

He is also made to face the truth that with one wrong step by him, along with him his brother, Akash too would have to bear the brunt.

He is made to face the truth that Khushi is nowhere similar to Lavanya. Though she comes from a middle class family, the bond and values they share are quite strong.

His sister makes him face the truth that despite her misgivings he had gone ahead and brought into the house Lavanya as his live-in companion.

"Prediction is very difficult, especially about the future"

~ Niels Bohr

If he had only listened to his heart rather than his mind he would not have put himself and the rest in such a position where nothing was certain. That was a bitter truth he has to face.

"I have learned now that while those who speak about one's miseries usually hurt, those who keep silence hurt more"

~ C.S. Lewis

He is made to face the truth that it is Khushi Kumari Gupta who holds the key to the Happiness that Arnav Singh Raizada craves to have. It is only she who can make or break him. She, the girl who came from middle class with no social standing among the elite was the Kingmaker.

"The truth does not change according to our ability to stomach it"

~Flannery O'Connor

Finally he is made to face the truth by his Nani that Khushi Bitiya is the one with a Golden Heart, who has the capacity to forgive and forget, who knows only to give Happiness to others and that is the Hope that they need to cling on to.

"Sometimes things become possible if we want them bad enough"

~ T.S. Eliot

It is a vis a vis TRUTH.

That's it from me. Hope you enjoy it.

Edited by rulama - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sayali_d23


hahahhaha yess for the time being... you are saved... well some times Kalakar bahot jada uchala ya volcano ki tarah fata toh i do write stories tooo...☺️




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Posted: 12 years ago
that was a fabulous update.half the battle is won the other half is remaining .lets see how he and his family will convince her for the marriage proposal.i can already imagine buaji fainting after hearing laad governor's proposal for her sanka devi.love u for giving us so fantastic update
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awww I love NK and Mami encounter... miss them so muchhh😭

so unlike on the show Anjali and Nani directly ask Arnav babuaa about Khushi and they are ready to take the proposal to Guptas... I m so happy to read that...😊

Now what our Sanka Devi gona reply???? already waiting for the next part...😉😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous update...

So happy that Arnav has finally realized his feelings for khushi...

Way to go Raizada women...
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⭐️ Khushi would say yes😉
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Superb part.
Nani mami and anjali are the best match maker. Now that arnav has agreed waiting to see what khushi has to say to this proposal.
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a rather unexpected turn. But when did things ever gone the normal way with Ms KKG?

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