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Part 1
Viren and Jeevika are last year students in college.
Jeevika
{6:00AM} Sunlight shines through the window on a very beautiful girl {Jeevika}. Jeevika makes a frown when sunlight hits her face but soon it was replaced by a smile. She wakes up and sits on her bed.She gets up, brushes her teeth and takes bath. Jeevika is getting ready when her dadi calls her from the kitchen "Jeevika breakfast is ready, hurry up." Within few minutes Jeevika is in the kitchen. Jeevika hugs her dadi. "How do I look dadi." Jeevika is wearing an Orange Indian dress.

"Kisi ki nazar na laga" said dadi. "Dadi, when I have your blessing buri nazar won't dare to come near me" said Jeevika. Both laugh. "Finish your breakfast and go to college, You are already late" said dadi. Jeevika finishes her breakfast and goes out. Manvi {Jeevika's best friend} is waiting for her outside.

"Perfect timeing" said Manvi "I just got here." They hug each other and goes to college.

Viren

{6:30}
A handsome man {Viren} is sleeping, when Virat {Viren's brother} said
"Get up Viren."


"Go away" said Viren annoyed. "Dude you better get up before mom comes, she already came like 1000 times" said Virat. Their mom enters his room. "Can't believe it, you are still sleeping, everyone gets up early except my son, always sleeping, Get up NOW" yelled their mom. Viren sat up "I am up, happy now" said Viren. "You have 30 minutes to get ready and eat your breakfast" said his mom. "WHAT!!! Only 30 minutes" said Viren rushing to the bathroom "why didn't you wake me up early." "Look who is talking, I came to wake you up so many times, hurry up I will get the breakfast ready" said his mom "Lets go Virat ---- What do you want to eat" asked his mom
. " I want to eat aloo paratha" said Virat.

"Great I made aloo paratha today" said Viren's mom. Viren comes downstairs and touches his mom's feet. "How do I look mom" asked Viren.

"My son is the most good looking man in the world" said his mom. "You are absolutely right" said Viren. Viren and Virat eats breakfast the and goes to college.
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Part 2

"Why does Manvi have to leave me alone to go meet Virat" wined Jeevika.{Manvi and Virat are dating each other} Jeevika walked past some boys, "Hey, look" said one of the boys and pointed toward Jeevika. They start to follow her. "Hey sexy" said one of them and pulled Jeevika's dupatta. "Please, leave me alone" said Jeevika. "Why should we" said one of the boys. Just then the boy that held Jeevika's dupatta fell on the ground. Jeevika's eyes popped out and looked up and saw Viren standing there very angry. "I think when you were a kid your parents didn't know how to raise you, maybe in your youth I will help them out" said Viren. the boy got up and said "who are you, and what is your relationship with this girl." "Who ever I am just remember never ever try to hit on Jeevika, DO YOU UNDERSTAND THAT!!!!" yelled Viren. The boys ran away Viren took Jeevika's hand and pulled her in a room and pinned her to the wall "Can't you take care of yourself, beware of where you are going, what if something happened today" yelled Viren "answer me DAMMIT!!!." "Why do you care so much? asked Jeevika. "Because..." Viren suddenly stopped and realized what he was about to say. Viren looked angrily at Jeevika and walked out of the room. Jeevika held her wrist that were red because Viren held them too tight. Bell rings. Jeevika goes to class, when she enters class she see that Virat is sitting by Manvi and all of the other desks were taken expect the one by Viren. Jeevika had no option but to sit by him. Viren is sitting angry with Jeevika but is happy that she is sitting by him. The teacher walks him and tells them to take their drawing books out. Jeevika is nervous because Viren has a huge impact on her just sitting there, she shivers when ever Viren moves, Viren notices it and trys to remain relaxed. Everyone takes there drawing book out. The teacher walks up to Viren and Jeevika and asks them to began model for todays drawing. "WHAT!!!" both shouted together. "I am not asking, I am telling you so lets go" said teacher. Viren and Jeevika goes to the front of the class and stand like 5 feet away from each other, the teacher comes and tells them to stand close to each other. They just move an inch closer. Teacher shakes his head and positions them Jeevika is the front and Viren behind her touching her hair. "Perfect" said teacher.
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Part 3

Viren and Jeevika were standing in front of the class. "Are you ok" asked Viren. Jeevika just nods her head. Viren was sensing that Jeevika is uncomfortable, but he loves standing so close to her. "You can talk to each other while standing there" said teacher. They still stand quietly. Jeevika finally talks "How did you know I was in trouble this morning?" asked Jeevika. "I mean you were not there and then all of the sudden you appear." Viren remains silent and after few minutes he answer "I just knew you were in trouble." "How should I tell you that my heart told me you in trouble" Viren thought in his head "I Love You Jeevika" Viren thought in his head. Jeevika suddenly looked up as if she heard what Viren just said. "Did you say something." "Aaa No" answered Viren. The bell rings and everyone goes out of class But the teacher asked Viren and Jeevika to stay after class. "I want to just say thank you to both of you for today, I asked you to become the models because you look so beautiful as a couple" Viren looks at Jeevika while Jeevika is looking down. "Thank you once again" said teacher. "Welcome sir" both said and leaves the class. In the evening Jeevika is in her room and she receives a message on the phone from Manvi "Look cute together."
A smile comes to Jeevika face when she sees the picture of her and Viren.
AFTER FEW YEARS
Virat and Manvi are getting married and everyone is happy.
Jeevika--
Viren--
Manvi & Virat--
Some lady is talking to Manvi's mom and Jeevika's dadi "Who is going to marry a girl who doesn't have her parents {pointing toward Jeevika} Her parents died the minute she was born" said the lady. Jeevika began crying. "Mrs. Chopra You don't have to worry we will find someone for our Jeevika" said dadi. But Mrs. Chopra was not stoping she just kept saying stuff about Jeevika. Viren heard this and yelled "ENOUGH" "Who the hell are you to say anything to Jeevika, before you go out and point fingers at others please for once look at your own daughter." "Jeevika is way way better than your daughter." "What kind of relationship do you have with this girl that you can't hear anything against her?" questioned Mrs. Chopra. Viren goes to his mother and whispers "Ma I am getting married today." Viren walks back to Mrs. Chopra "I will tell you what relationship I have with Jeevika." Viren walks up to Jeevika and grabs her hand and takes her to the mandap and goes around the fire 7 time {7 phere} and then fills her maang and puts a mangalsutra around Jeevika's neck. Everyone is shocked.
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Part 4

Viren takes Jeevika's hand and walks toward his mom. They touch her feet. Jeevika is still shocked. Viren's mom walks up to Jeevika's dadi and "I hope you don't mind what my son did today but I accept Jeevika as my daughter in law." "I just want Jeevika to be happy and I hope your family will keep her happy" said dadi. "We sure will keep her happy" said VIren's mom. Virat and Manvi also get married. They go to vadhera's house. VIren and Jeevika is VIren's room. "I am sorry Jeevika, I should have asked you before." Jeevika slaps Viren across the face. "You ruined my life" shouted Jeevika "marriage is every girls dream and you took that dream from me. How could you?"
AFTER FEW MONTHS
Viren and Jeevika act like a married couple in front of everyone but they do everything separately, they barely talk to each other and sleep separate. Jeevika has started to fall for Viren, but Viren doesn't even talk to her, so Jeevika decides to talk her life {sucide}. Jeevika leaves a note for Viren. {I am sorry but I am giving my life to you} Jeevika is standing on top a building. Viren comes running Jeevika STOP. Jeevika turns around and sees Viren. Virenji what are you doing here? Jeevika come down now? NO!!! "Why should I virenji? What do I mean to you?" Questioned Jeevika. "Jeevika comes down now" said VIren. "If you want me to come you have to answer my question" said Jeevika. "Just come down" said Viren. " No" yelled Jeevika. "Ok, what is your question" asked Viren. "Why did you marry me that day? Why couldn't you hear anything against me? WHY? WHY? Virenji" asked Jeevika. Viren getting mad and yelled "Because I LOVE YOU DAMMIT." Jeevika gets down and runs toward Viren and hugs him tightly "why couldn't you say this before" said Jeevika "I love you too Viren ji. They kiss each other
The End

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