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JyothiK thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: MonaLovesMaan

Awesme update
aww maan met aishu n he almost forgot hs past n gud to to c rano helping maan
hope geet ko jaldi sach pata chal jaye and iam crying frm nw on thnkng on maan's dialogue after sam's bday..
Cnt sn darlng
sowwie for short cmnt
u knw y


hey kiddooo 😃 thank you for ur comment dear.
hmm maan 😭😭
hey its ok studies first 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: lg001

nice update...
maan meeting aishu


Thank you dear 😊
yeah maan meeting aishu
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: trishadcute

Awesome update ...

continue soon ...


Thank you dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Rano-Maan's bonding & scenes wer so emotional.Bcz of rano Maan got closer 2 Aishu.How'll geet react wen she cums 2 no d truth?Waiting 4 Sam's b'day party.Hoping 4 maaneet meeting


Thank you jas for your comment.
Next update will be sam's bday
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Part 33



One side sam and rano are busy in planning sam's birthday party so that maan and geet can come close.

Aunty, I am not able to understand what should I do now? I invited geet but will maan come? Asked sam nervously to rano who rolled her eyes as this is the nth time sam asking the same question.

Sam, we will plan something. First we should make them face each other, then we can do something told rano patting her cheek.

Done aunty I will inform maan too about party as well as adi and pinky too so that they can be a helping hand told sam.

Yes that's a good idea and still one week is left, some idea will strike till then told rano smiling at her. So her second plan is also success, now geet will face maan and vice versa.

It was Monday morning, aishu is in no mood to go to school. She is still on the bed rubbing her eyes and cutely pouting at her mama who is staring at her.

What happened? Today my aishu is so lazy? Asked geet tying her messy hair which is falling on her face.

Mumma, I don't want to go to school today told aishu making puppy face to melt her mumma.

Acha? Why? Asked geet.

Don't know mumma, please mumma requested aishu. Geet is melting from one side, as aishu never ask that she will not go to school.

But what about your homework and all? Asked geet.

Mumma, I will ask rohan told aishu excitedly. Geet's face became dull with the name of rohan but she cant tell aishu not to talk with him. And children don't have anything to do with all the matters. So geet agreed aishu to stay at home only for today. Aishu nodded happily, geet went to her room to get ready for office as she had to attend the clients today for the presentation.

Geet went to her office, rano and aishu are at home. Aishu is practicing her dance with the help of sam as geet is not there at home. Maan is busy in hospital so he didn't come to meet aishu. Later geet came back in the afternoon as the meeting got over and her aishu is also at home, so she decided to spend sometime with aishu and take her out for shopping.

Geet took aishu for lunch, after that she took her for shopping. Aishu is all excited to send the time with her mumma, after coming to delhi she saw geet is always serious and even shouted on her for dancing. Today she took her for lunch outside.

Mumma I want icecream asked aishu pointing towards icecream corner.

Geet smiled and took her to parlour, she made aishu sit on the chair and she went to order icecream. But before she order anything, icecream is on their table making geet confused and aishu excited.

Excuse me I didn't order anything told geet looking at that man confused. That man turned back and looked at geet smiling. Geet is shocked to see its maan who brought icecream for them. Though aishu saw maan but didn't react as her mumma will get angry if she come to know she is learning dance. Maan winked at aishu without geet's knowledge. Aishu smiled widely at him.

Aishu come we should go now told geet, but aishu made a baby face and showed her icecream is not finished yet. Geet sighed in helplessness. Maan looked at geet lovingly moving away from them, geet didn't look at him for once this made him sad but composed himself and looking at them till they left ice cream parlour. Aishu is running here and there and geet is following her.

Aishu was about to fall on the ground when geet caught her immediately. Maan saw her falling and ran towards them but stopped seeing aishu in geet's arms securely. Maan is looking at them longingly, geet sensed maan near her and turned aside, their eyes met. She can see his longing for her and love for aishu. Geet averted her gaze immediately and went to dresses mall for aishu.

Aishu is making geet's life hell by not liking any dress.

Aishu, what ever I am showing you are not liking anything. Tell me what you wany? Asked geet placing her hands on hips.

Aishu's eyes caught a white color frock and she liked instantly.

Mumma called aishu and pointed towards that dress. Geet smiled and asked the sales girl to pack that dress. Geet selected few more dresses and went to pay the bill. By the time she reached bill counter maan already paid their bill.

Ma'am your bill is already paid, here is your purchase told that man and gave their shopping bag. Geet looked at maan who is standing outside the shop and flashing his smile. Geet is getting angry with every passing second. Geet took the baggage and left from there hurriedly with aishu.

Geet went to parking lot and drove back to home. When geet reached home she sighed. They rested for some time. Aishu got up in the evening and saw her nani is making her fav pakodas.

Nani pakoda exclaimed aishu excitedly. Rano smiled at her and filled plate with pakodas and gave to aishu. Aishu is having pakodas happily.

Later pari took aishu to her dance class, unknown to them even geet is also following them. when pari with aishu entered into maan's house geet stood there speechless. Even her maa lied to her, this is the reason she never entertained in coming to delhi again but this job of hers made her come to delhi.

Geet barged into maan's house angrily and the scene which she saw in front of her made her froze in her tracks. Maan and aishu are dancing, a smile playing on their lips. Maan took aishu in his arms and kissed her forehead.

My aishu is dancing very well, so ready for competition asked maan.

Aishu nodded excitedly but her face became sad suddenly making geet and maan frown. Geet want to reach her daughter and take her in his arms.

Friend, I am tensed. What if I loose in the competition? Asked aishu sadly.

You will never lose aishu, because its your father who is with you thought geet, but next second her face hardened and scolded herself for thinking like that.

No dear, don't think like that. If you win you will be happy and if you lose also you should be happy because you will get to learn and understand more and after that you will make sure that you will not commit that mistake again. Don't think of winning and losing at the start. Just concentrate on you dance, that's it told maan smiling and kissed her forehead. Aishu too smiled at him and kissed his cheek.

Geet walked towards them and took aishu from maan. with the sudden entry of geet both maan and pari are shocked and aishu is scared thinking her mother will shout at her.

Pari take aishu with you and sit in the car told geet not looking at them.

Pari obeyed geet and took aishu with her. aishu looked at maan sadly making his heart bleed.

I didn't expect this from you maan told geet coldly. Maan turned his face away and didn't talk anything.

You are trying to separate mother-daughter? Asked geet in dis-belief as she never expected maan to do such thing.

Maan looked at geet shocked.

You are thinking like this geet? asked maan not able to bear her accusation.

Don't act maan, what were you doing all the time meeting my daughter behind my back. And what a tragedy my maa and sister are against me and supporting you told geet.

Why will I try to separate you both geet when I want you and aishu in my life again told maan.

Bas maan I have already told you aishu is my daughter and she will be mine forever warned geet and left from there leaving a heart broken maan. Maan collapsed on the ground and his face shows only pain. He is trying to convince geet but she is not at all ready to listen.

Pari who forgot her mobile there listened geet's accusations.

No di, enough is enough I cant see you both like this. You have to know the truth, the truth of what mamaji did thought pari and left from there. Geet, aishu and pari reached home. Geet is still angry but didn't show it on aishu as she is a kid and don't know anything. She though to confrot rano later about this matter.

Maan walked towards his gym and doing his work out angry on himself for not gaining geet's trust.

Kuch bhi hojaye geet, I will get back my wife and my child. I am ready to bear anything thought maan.

Next day morning, it was aishu's dance competition. Geet is not ready to come but seeing aishu's face she cant deny her. They all got ready and went to school. Performance have started one by one and its turn of aishu. When aishu started with her dance, in her each and every move she can see muskaan. The same dance which muskaan did for maan to surprise him.

Still you didn't forget this maan? why maan why you are making it difficult for me. I hate this helplessness. I don't deserve your love maan, I really don't. please don't force me to come to you maan thought geet. when aishu's dance completed there was a huge round of applause. Suddenly geet turned back as she is feeling instant gaze on her. She saw maan averted his gaze when she turned back and is clapping smiling at aishu.

Precap: Maan: You should have told aishu that her father is DEAD geet.

Rano slaps Geet



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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
Nice update.Geet was so angry wth maan during d ice cream scene.but she controlled her anger n went home 2 blast.but seeing maan-aishu 2gether there she was shocked.she fought with maan again.i hate it.but seeing aishu' dance n knowing that maan remembers muskaan's surprie dance 4 him she feel guilty.i hop thi wil mak geet melt & unite with maan.cant wait 4 d next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
I got time today and lastest chapter this is awesome all are is lively love it... As always u made cs a reality
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Likr button not working but upfate was awzomr
Angry on geet its too much
If she lost her daughter even maan too
Y cant she understand dis
Pathetic
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
humein toh lagta hai abb geet ko sach jaana chahiye...bahut hogaya...unnecessarily maan is suffering without his any fault...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
I don't deserve your love maan,

why did geet say this..


does she know the truth


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