MG FF: Do i deserve ur love

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Hii here is your Jyothi (Jyothikrish). I am back 😊

Ok many of you are asking to post DO I DESERVE UR LOVE in IF again i am posting all the parts here. Hope you enjoy reading it 😊





Prologue


A fresh morning, a new ray of hope, all the people r busy doing their works, children r getting ready to go to school, some people getting ready to go to office. Some people r reading news paper having their morning tea. At the same time a man came out of his house all ready to go for work. He wore black t-shirt with black jeans. He wore his helmet n sat on his bike n took his ID card. (his face is not shown yet only back). He started the bike n acclerated. He is going to hospital (as I told u he is a volunteer in a hospital). He loves children a lot. So daily he gives chocolates n sweets to the children in the hospital. He is on the way to the suddenly his phone rang. He stopped the bike n picked the phone.
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At the same time in other location where the shoot is going on for a bike advertisement. A girl is busy in doing her makeup. She wore a black colour dress which is above her knees slightly exposing her thighs. She is already late for the shoot n now wasting time.
(this is her dress)

The partner of this in girl in this advertisement lost his patience n shouted on her
hey what the hell? How much time will u take more?
The just one glare of that girl made him shut his mouch.
That guy thought she is damn sexy.
After sometime atlast she completed doing her makeup n came for shoot. That sat in front seat n that girl sat in the back. She hugged him from back on the bike. He is in heaven being so close with her. She is looking hot n sexy in that position n the photos r clicking n the shoot is going on. After the shoot got over she got down of the bike n the director told
hey sam.
Hi sir
u r awesome the shoot went very well.
But sam said with attitude I know that I am awesome. From next time I dont want him as a partner. He is disgusting. Ok?
The director with no other option ok.
She smirked n went from there n waiting for someone.

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maan picked the phone
Hello..
Maan sir this is naina from hospital.
Bolo naina.
Sir there is a major accident in ******* area. We already send the ambulance but this is very serious. Plz go to the spot immediately.
His face became serious listening to this n told Ya sure naina I will.
Ok sir.
He cut the call n turned the bike. He is going in full speed. Within 10 min he reached the accident spot n there is full crowd there n police r also there. He taken his helmet out n He took his glasses out then his face is shown.

His Dark chocolate colour eyes, M-shaped lips, perfect body, 6 feet height n killing looks. He is going near the car which is met with accident. But one of the police stopped him
excuse me sir, no one is allowed.
But then maan immediately showed his ID card to the police.
Sorry sir plz go.
Maan just nodded. He went near the car the whole area is full of blood. He immediately took the person out from the car n did necessary first aid. Then after the ambulance came n they shifted the person into the ambulance. After sometime they reached the hospital n took that person to OT.
Maan decided to imform to his family. He immediately took his mobile but dont know whom to call. He dialled one of the number from recently dialled numbers.
Tring' tring' tring'
A girl picked the phone n told
Hello'


precap: who is that girl???? 😕


So How is the Prologue. Hope you like it 😊

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Index


Part 1-6


part 7-14


part 15-18


part 19-25


part 26-30


part 31


part 32


part 33

part 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1


maan goes to the accident spot n takes him to the hospital. He thought of informing his family about the accident. So he took that person's mobile n dialled the recently dialled number. A girl picked the phone.

Hello, bhai where r u? I am waiting for u from half an hour. Mera shoot bhi katam ho chuka hain. U told u will pick me up. Then what happened? R u coming or not.

Here maan is trying to speak but she is not giving chance to speak.

Hello miss atlast spoke maan.

Hello, who is it? This is my brother's mobile na?

Yes it is. I just want to inform u miss…

sameera.

Miss sameera dont get panic just listen carefully. Told maan seriously.

Sam got tensed n asked what happened?

Ummm.. wo.. ur brother met with an accident. We admitted in the hospital operation is going on now. He is safe no need to worry.

Sam got tensed hearing this.

Accident? Bro thik tho hain na? By the way which hospital I will come.

********* foundation near ****** area. Miss sameera dont worry ur brother will be fine.

Ok sir I am coming now her voice is chocked.

Ok miss I am maan. U can call me once u reach hospital.

Ok sir sure.

She sut the call. She is very tensed n worried for her brother. Even though she is arrogant n rude but when it comes to family she is a normal girl. His brother is only family for her.

Immediately she took the cab. There r so many thoughts running in her mind. She is praying continously that her brother should be safe. After 1 hour drive she reached hospital. Immediately she called maan

hello sir I reached hospital. Can u tell me where my brother is?

Come to the reception they will tell u the way to OT.

Ok thanku.

She cut the call n went near reception.

Hello, where is OT?

Go to 1st floor n then right.

Thanku.

Here maan is near OT waiting for sameera. She came there n asked

maan…

aap sameera?

Ya I am. How is my brother? Nothing serious na? She is crying bitterly.

Miss. Sameera calm down operation is going on. So no need to worry. Aap baitiye.

Sam sat on the bench n crying bitterly.

Just then doctors came out of OT. Sam rushed to doc n asked him

doctor how is my brother? Kya hua usko? He is safe rite? Aap kuch bolte kyun nahi. Shouted sam.

Look miss plz calm down. Ur brother is safe. But he had a major head injury n he lost lot of blood. But now he is out of danger.

Sam is relieved to listen this.

Can I see him?

Umm.. not now miss. In 1 hour we will shift him to ICU. He should be under observation for 1 week. As it is a head injury we cant take risk. When we shift him to ICU u can see him. But should not disturd him. Ok?

Ok doctor. Thanku very much doctor.

Its our duty miss. Thank maan he bought the blood from blood bank with in time. Saying so doctor left from there.

Sam turned towards maan n told

thanku very much sir. Aapne mera bhai ka nahi balki u saved my life.

Its ok miss. Sameera. U can wait in the waiting hall we will inform u when we shift ur brother to ICU.

Ok maan.. sorry sir.

Its ok miss u can call me maan. Waise what is ur brothers name?

Arjun oberoi.

Ok thanku, u can go now I will call u later miss.

She smiled n left from there.

Maan collected all the reports from the doctor n gave them to sam. After some time arjun shifted to ICU.

Miss sameera u can see ur brother now informed maan.

Thanku so much maan told sam excitely.

She went to icu n saw his brother who is unconcious. His head n right hand is bandaged. His face is so pale n there is a oxygen mask. She couldnt control seeing her brother in that condition. She held his other hand

yeh kya hogaya bhai. Aapne mere baare mein nahi socha? I something happened to u then what would me my condition. U r only person in my life. Plz bhai never leave me alone Icant live n she broke down completely.

Just then nurse came there n put her hand on sam's shoulder n told

dekhiye aapka bhai ko kuch nahi hua. He is fine now. We r here to take care of him. So u dont worry.

Sam smiled with teary eyes n nodded.

Meanwhile, outside ICU:

maan's mobile rang he saw the caller ID a smile formed on his lips

Hello champ. How r u?

I am fine uncle told a 5 years old rohan. He is son of adi.

What made u to call me?

Uncle u forgot rite? Said rohan in a sad voice.

Just then maan remembered that today is rohan's birthday.

Oh I am so sorry champ. Wish u happy birthday.

Umm thanku. But u have to come to party in the evening. If u wont come I wont talk to u.

oh.. itna gussa. No champ I will come.

Ok uncle bye. I have invite my friends.

Maan smiled n told bye champ.

Rohan, son of adi. As maan n adi r best friends rohan is very close to maan. As maan love kids he will pamper rohan to the core. If rohan wont get his toys from adi or pinky he will tell maan. By next day that toy will be in roahn's hand. Many times adi tries to protest him but maan tells 'chota bacha hain. Let him enjoy. Bade hoke tera jaisa nahi hona chahiye na'. So now adi n pinky doesnt protest as they know its waste of their time. Anyhow maan doesnt listen.

Just then pinky came there n called him

maan bhai.

Maan turned back n saw pinky smiling at him.

Hi pinky, when u came?

Just now bhai.

Waise what r u doing here? Tumari tabiyat tho thik hain na? Asked maan worried.

oh.. I am fine I just came here to give u lunch.

Arey pinky itne durr kyun ayi ho. I would have had my lunch in canteen na.

Canteen mein. Na baba na when I am here why will u eat here n theresaid pinky pouting her lips.

Maan hugged pinky n told thanku pinky.

Bhai ab yeh thanku whanku choiye aur khana khayiye.

Maan n pinky went to maan's cabin. Pinky served the food in the plate n maan ate.

Waise bhai rohan ka phone aya na?

Ha yaar abi phone kiya usne, main tho bhool gaya tha.

Ha adi ko pata hain ki aap bhool jaoge. Isiliye adi ne rohan ko kaha aapko phone karne ke liye.

Tho adi ne muje phasaya. Saale khud phone nahi kar sakte the. Jab shaam ko milungi na tab batathi hu.

Pinky smiled at him n prayed to god

(st): babaji man bhai hamesha aise hasna chahiye.

Bhai aapne tho rohan ko bigad diya.

Chodo na pinky. Chota bacha hain. How much I pamper him but he is a very good boy never crosses his limits n he is just 5 pinky. Tum bhi adi ki tarah baat kar rahi ho.

No one can change u both bhai. They both smiled

Just then pinky noticed the blood marks on his shirt.

Bhai aapke shirt pe yeh khoon.

Oh yeh.. morning ek accident hua tha tho..

pinky understoood n asked how is that person now?

Ya he is fine now.

Pinky smiled n told ok bhai ab main chalti hu, eveng ke liye tayari karni hain.

Ok fine pinky I will early today. Have to meet my champ.

Ok bye bhai.

How u came should I drop u?

No bhai I will go.

Ok bye.

Pinky left from there. Maan smiled at her sister's care. Eventhough she is not his own sister but they both share a wonderful bro-sis bonding. He is very lucky to have adi n pinky in his life. They all r like family n with rohan their happiness has doubled.

There is a knoeck on the door.

Yes come in told maan.

Sam entered his cabin n wished him.

Hello maan.

Hello miss.sameera. Did u meet ur brother?

Yes maan I met him still he is unconsious said sam in low voice.

Dont worry miss.sameera he will be fine soon.

She smiled at him n told u can call me sameera or sam maan.

Maan just nodded.

Can I ask u something maan?

Ya sure.

Here in this hospital the nurses n doctors r very friendly. Like the way they take care of patients. N I see many poor people here I mean who cannot afford for such a big hospitals for treatment.

Yes sameera this is a foundation, here we wont take any fees for treatment. We all r volunteers here. We r here to help all types of people we dont care whether they r rich or poor. No one will pay a single rupee for treatment.

Sammera is very much impressed by this foundation.

Sir when I am free can I also come n join here?

Ya sure sameera u can.

Thanku maan.

After that they both had a friendly talk n after sometime sam left from there.

Precap: rohan's birthday party.

Adi meet sam n trio's friendship.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 2


sameera comes to hospital when maan called her n told about the accident of his brother. Her brother arjun is out of danger n the operation is success. But due to head injury he has to stay in the hospital for 10 days. Later maan n sam had a friendly talk. Sam was very much impressed by the foundation. She too decided to serve people here whenever she is free.

Later in the evening maan completed his work n left from there. While going back home maan stopped near the mall n went to toys section. He saw many toys there n confused what to buy. He had a look of whole toys section but didnt know what to buy for his champ rohan. Suddenly he remembered that rohan likes remote cars.

Maan (st): ha that will be cool. He loves remote cars if he dont like also no problem I will bring him here tomorrow. He will buy what he wants. But this matter should not leak to adi or else he will eat my brain.

He bought the gift for rohan n went to his house. Again no one is there he is a lonely person. He got ready. He is in black n black looking extremely hot, dashing n handsome. His first 3 buttons r open exposing his well toned chest. Even though he is in normal suit but looking hot. Suddenly his eyes fell on a photograph. He was just staring at that pic with no emotion in his eyes n face too. They r just blank, if anyone try to read those eyes no one can predict what's happening.

Maan(st): I am so sorry. I know what I did is wrong n there is no forgiveness for it but just once I want to meet u. ofcourse I know that it never happens. In my life I never hurted anyone but why god is playing such a cruel game with me. I dont know whether u love e or hate me but…

his mobile rang. He picked the phone

hello.

Maan, adi here.

Ha bolo adi.

R u alright?Adi by listening his voice came to know what he is thinking. But maan just smiled at his friend's concern n answered

ha yaar I am fine. I am coming now to meet my champ.

Ha ha y will u come to meet ur friend?

Oh god adi stop it yaar. I am coming bye.

Bye.

They cut the call n adi thought maan why all things r happening to u only. I want to tell u one important matter but dont know how u will react. But I know maan tumare hasi ke peeche kitne dard hain. I have to talk to u I cant hide it from u. u have to know. Pata nahi what will happen after listening to this.

Papa… called rohan.

Adi came out of his thoughts n smiled at his son who came running to him wearing his birthday dress n looking like a prince. Adi took him into his arms n asked

so ready for the party.

Rohan excitedly yes papa I am ready. My friends will be coming soon.

Acha? Thats great. By the way where is ur mama.

Mama is preparing something in the kitchen.

Oh ok. Lets go.

They both went to kitchen n saw pinky preparing something to rohan.

Mama what r u doing?

Pinky saw him n told

preparing ur fav paneer pizza.

Wow, mom thanku very much.

Adi wanted to tease her so asked

waise pinky r u preparing the dish or busy in eating ur stuff.

Pinky made a angry face n asked

what do u mean adi?

Suddenly maan came there n slapped his friend lightly n told

oyy nautanki stop teasing my sister.

Ha agaya tera bhai.

Ha yes he is my brother. Waise u r jealous rite? That now no one is there to support u.

pinky n maan giggled while adi made baby face to rohan but he didnt care n jumped on maan.

maan uncle…

maan took rohan in his arms

HAPPY BIRTHDAY CHAMP. N kissed his forehead.

Rohan smiled n told thanku uncle.

Maan gives the gift which he bought for him.

Yeh lo tumare liye champ.

Rohan took it n opened. He is very happy to see his favorite toy. He jumped in his arms.

Wow..uncle thanku… he kissed on his cheek.

Maan smiled at rohan seeing him all excited.

Chalo party start karte hain waise no one is on my side said adi making baby sad face.

They all didnt care n headed towards hall. Rohan friends started coming.

Rohan cut the cake while all others sung birthday song for him.

First he fed the cake to adi-pinky then to maan.

They all fed rohan too. Then for sometime rohan enjoyed with his friends playing games with them, chatting etc etc.

all his friends left after sometime.

Rohan came to maan n sat on his lap.

So, champ did u enjoy?

Yes uncle very much.

Chalo chalo dinner karte hain told pinky.

Ok mama. Uncle chalo.

They all went to dining area. Adi n maan sat side by side n rohan on his big chair to meet the height of the dining table.

They all happily had dinner talking with each other, cracking jokes,teasing each other.

Rohan had his fav pizza prepared by pinky.

They all completed their dinner.

Mama movie dekhte hain.

Rohan its already late u should sleep now.

Mama plzzz… he made a puppy face.

With no other option pinky told ok.

They all r watching some movie. Rohan sat on maan's lap n watching movie.

After some time he fell asleep.

Maan took him to his room n made him sleep on the bed. Maan kissed his forehead n left from there.

Adi I will leave now. Its already late.

Maan muje tumse kuch baat karni hain.

Ha bolo.

Yaha par nahi mere room me chalo. Pinky tum bhi ao told adi seriously.

They both sensed something serious n just nodded.

Thik hain chalo told maan.

They all headed to adi's room. They all settled on the bed comfortably.

Ab batao kya hain asked maan.

THEIR CONVERSATION.

(sorry friends I camt reveal what they talked but u will come to know about I later)

after their conversation maan dont know whether to be happy or sad. His face is expressionless but pain is visible in his eyes.

Bhai…called pinky.

But maan didnt listen anything. He just sat there numb dont know what to do.

Adi kya tum sahi keh rahe ho? Asked pinky.

Adi just nodded his head.

Pinky went n sat beside maan.

Bhai plz look at me.

Maan looked at her.

Bhai iss baar sab kuch thik hi hoga. Plz u dont worry.

Maan hugged pinky n told

kyun pinky kya galti ki main. Mere saath hi aisa kyun ho raha hain?

Bhai aap shant ho jayiye.

Maan broke the hug n got up.

Main ghar jaa raha hu.

Par bhai…

good night pinky. I am fine dont worry.

Saying so maan left from there. He didnt take his bike. He was just walking on the road like a lifeless person. Dont know where to go. After listening to adi one side he very happy. But at the same time he is tensed. This is the second time in his life he was tensed, scared.

Tears rolled down his cheeks. Dont know whether god is happy or sad seeing his condition but it started raining heavily. Maan sat on his knees in the middle of the park. He didnt feel like going home. Didnt care about the surroundings. He was lost in his own world. He is getting wet in the rain, tears continously rolling down his cheek.

Here adi n pinky r tensed they tried calling maan but he is picking the phone n on top of that its raining.

Its my mistake I should not leave him alone said adi.

Adi aap shant ho jayiye. Bhai will be fine assured pinky but she is also scared.

She is continously praying to babaji that maan bhai should be safe.

How can I pinky. Uska bike bhi yaha par hain aur phone bhi nahi lag raha hain. Maan tho thik hoga na.

Pinky kept her hand on his shoulders. Adi saw tears in her eyes n hugged her.

I am sorry pinky. I shouldnt have told to maan but now we have to do something. I cant see him suffer any longer.

Dont worry adi jo hua so hua we cant change that. But now I will talk said pinky with determination in her voice.

Adi chalo we will go to maan bhai's house. Shayad bhai reached home.

Ha pinky chalo.

Pinky took sleeping rohan in her arma n headed to maan's house.

Its early morning 5'o clock. Rain stopped by that time, Maan got up from there his face is pale, he started walking towards his house but lost in his thoughts.

When he went to his house he was shocked to see adi n pinky with rohan in pinky's arms who is sleeping pacing here n there.

Adi saw him n relieved.

Adi held his collar n shouted r u out of ur mind? How many times we called u. when u left from there we were so tensed.

Maan lowered his head n uttered in a low voice I am sorry.

Even adi didnt tell anything further n left his collar. He know maan's state.

Chalo andar chalte hain. U r all wet.

Maan silently opened the door, they all went inside. Pinky put rohan on the couch. She went to kitchen to prepare coffee for maan. Maan freshened n came to the hall.

Pinky gave coffee to maan n adi.

Bhai yeh aapne kya kiya, we were so tensed for u.

muje ghar aane ka mann nahi tha pinky. Aap dono ko itni pareshan hone ki kya zaroorat thi aapko pata hain na that I dont go anywhere. Aur itni tandh me rohan ko.

Shut up maan kya lagta hain tumko ki hum tumare baare main care na kare. U r my best friend damn.

Rohan slightly opened his eyes by loud voices.

Mama…sounded rohan sleepily.

Kuch nahi beta tum so jao told pinky rubbing his back.

Ok ok I am sorry. Calm down n u both go to rest room n take rest. I will preparebreakfast for all of us told maan dont want to argue further.

They simply nodded their head.

In london:

It is 9 am in the morning. A woman in her 50's preparing breakfast for her grand daughter n murmuring something.

Yeh ladki bhi na. She wont get up early n my daughter will come n scold me that I am pampering her. Par iss shaitan ke baare mein usko kya pata uski mama ke saamne she will behave as if she is very innocent n dont know anything. Who will believe that 5 years old child will play pranks on me. Ufff aishu beta get up.

No reply from her.

That lady will go to her bedroom n opens the door. To her surprise the room is empty. She searched the whole room but she didnt find her grand daughter anywhere.

Uff yeh ladki kaha gayi.

She was about to go out suddenly the door got closed.😲😲

Precap: oops what will happen to that lady ???? 😲

adi meets sam n trio's friendship.


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Chapter 3



In london:

It is 9 am in the morning. A woman in her 50's preparing breakfast for her grand daughter n murmuring something.

Yeh ladki bhi na. She wont get up early n my daughter will come n scold me that I am pampering her. Par iss shaitan ke baare mein usko kya pata uski mama ke saamne she will behave as if she is very innocent n dont know anything. Who will believe that 5 years old child will play pranks on me. Ufff aishu beta get up.

No reply from her.

That lady will go to her bedroom n opens the door. To her surprise the room is empty. She searched the whole room but she didnt find her grand daughter anywhere.

Uff yeh ladki kaha gayi.

She was about to go out suddenly the door got closed.😲😲 The old lady is trying to open the door but no use.

Aishu beta I know its u. open the door beta.

No dadi came a sweet voice of a little girl.

Beta see ur mama will come now told dadi.

Dadi still one hour is thele fol mama to come. Aapne muje kal laat (raat) ichecleam nahi diya. I am going to eat now.

Beta nahi u will catch cold told dadi.

Sholly dadi I will open door after eating ichecleam.

Here dadi is shouting but baby didnt care, she went to kitchen n took her icecream from the fridge n started eating it. While eating she messed up her dress n face with full of icecream. Finally she completed eating n opened the door. Dadi came out n saw her grand daughters condition.

Aishu yeh kya kar diya tumne asked dadi.

Aishu made innocent face n asked maine kya kiya dadi.

Dont make those faces shaitan ban gayi ho tum.

Aishu pouted n told I am not shaitan.

Ha ha I know. Chalo jaldi ready ho jav. Tumari mama aajayegi.

Dadi muje neend aarahi hain. I got up at early morning 8:30. plz daadi let me sleep told aishu in her babyish voice.

Here daadi is melting seeing her cute face. But afraid of her daughter.

Nahi beta u have to get ready. Remember ur mom told u that she will take u out today.

Aishu kept her finger on her chin n thinking. Dadi smiled at her cute antics.

Ok dadi i will get ready.

Thats like my baby. Chalo.

They both went to washroom dadi placed her in bath tub which is filled with warm water. But aishu is aishu she started playing with water n throwing it on dadi.

Beta aisa nahi karte said dadi.

Dadi let us play in water.

Aishu chup chap nahalo, warna main main tumari mama ko bol deti hu blackmailed dadi.

Aishu pouted but soon she heard a voice from back what if I play with u?

Aishu turned back n smiled widely n shouted

CHACHIII

pari beta tum kab ayi ho?asked dadi.

Abi ayi hu maa told pari.

How was ur tour ?

Super maa bohot enjoy ki humne told pari excitedly.

Chachi come on fast shouted aishu.

Coming darling told pari.

They both started playing in water. Making a whole mess. Washroom is filled with water.

I dont know beta when ur mama will come na bohot daantegi. That time I wont help u both said dadi n left from there.

But they both didnt care. Suddenly the door bell rang. Dadi went n opened the door. She is happy to see her daughter.

Beta come. U look tired asked dadi.

Ha maa bohot kaam tha. Waise pari aagayi aur aishu kaha hain.

wo.. wo.. dono so raha hain.

Maa dont lie wait I will go n check.

Nahi beta tum aaram karo.

Maaa

dadi sighed not able to convince her daughter.

She went to aishu's room n saw no one there she heard someone laughing from the washroom. She went there n shocked to see their haalat.

Whats going on shouted that lady.

Pari n aishu turned back n saw her n shouted

geeet diii shouted pari.

Mamaaa shouted aishu.

Oh god yeh kya kar rahe ho tum dono asked geet angrily.

But they didnt care n came out of the bathtub. Pari hugged geet tight n aishu hugged her legs.

Ahh di missed u sooo much told pari.

Mama shouted aishu.

Geet smiled at their antics. They broke the hug n geet told missed u too gudiya.

Geet took aishu in her arms n asked what is my littile devil doing.

Aishu smiled cheekily n replied having bath mama.

Geet rised her eyebrows n asked acha?

Now because of pari n aishu geet is also wet. Geet made aishu to complete her bath n both got ready. Pari went to her room n got ready.

They all settled in the dining area n waiting for breakfast.

All 3 shouted (geet, pari n aishu)ranooo jaldiii.

Ufff chup coming shouted dadi.

They all had breakfast. Suddenly geet spoke

ma we r going to india.

Rano is shocked to hear this but happy. Pari is also very happy that they r going to india.

By y beta asked rano.

Mera transfer hua maa delhi told geet grinting her teeth.

Pari n rano decided not to speak anything about it further. They simply nodded their heads.

But aishu excitedly mama r we going to india.

Geet smiled at her little daughter n told ha beta we r going. Come on pack ur things.

Aishu excitedly shouted yayyy. I will pack now only. She left from there.

Geet told to her mom n pari seriouly maa pack ur things fast we r leaving tomorrow only. N one thing after going to delhi dont try to meet them. I dont want my daughter to suffer as me. I think u understand. She left from there.

pari(st): di I am very sorry this time. I want u n aishu to be happy. I wont miss this golden oppurtunity. Main jiju se baat karti hu. U should know what happened at that time. He is responsible n he loves u very much. I will make sure that u live happily. Its my promise.

Rano(st): kya karu main is ladki ke saath. Muje kuch samaj mein nahi aaraha hain. Babaji meri bachi ki raksha karna. Usko apni khushi wapas dijiye. Main aur kuch nahi chahiye. Aishu should live with her mama n papa too. I know a child needs her father. He is important part of her life. But geet ne… n she had tears in her eyes.

Pari noticed n kept her hand on rano's shoulder n told

dont worry maa ab sab kuch thik ho jayega. Di ko jiju ke paas jaana hi padega. She misunderstood jiju. She should know the truth its hightime now.

Rano nodded her head.

Chalo pari we will pack nahi tho wo hitler phir se chillayegi.

Pari giggled at her comment. They both went to their respective rooms n started packing.

In delhi:

maan prepared breakfast for all. Rohan got up n saw that he is in maan's house.

Mama when we came here asked rohan sleepy.

When we slept we came here beta told pinky.

Why mama?

Umm.. maan uncle is not well told pinky.

What?? what happened asked rohan n got up.

Uncle uncle called rohan at the same time maan is coming from kitchen. He kept the bowl on the table n took rohan in his arms.

Good morning champ.

Uncle what happened to u? Mama told u r not well.

Maan looked at pinky n then rohan nothing champ I am ok now.

Ok uncle but u have to rest today n take med.. med…

medicines completed maan.

Ha that only told rohan.

Anything else champ asked maan smiling.

Nothing uncle.

As it is sunday pinky n rohan stayed at home. Whereas adi n maan went for foundation. Rohan was not allowing maan to go to office (hospital) but somehow maan managed him that he is fine.

Maan n adi entered hospital. Eventhough adi is a software engineer whenever he is free comes to the foundation n takecare of people there.

Maan went to children's ward n wished all the children.

Hello children. How r u??

A small girl came infront of him n told

maan u r late today pouted that child.

Maan smiled at her cute pouting face n lifted her in his arms n spoke

sorry sweety. From tomorrow I will come on time. Plzz.

Immediately that girl kissed his cheek n told ok maan.

Maan gave chocolates to all the children n listened to their cute talks. How innocent they are. But all r here for some problem. Some are cured n some children should go under surgery. But doctors r trying their best to save every children. Many children r from poor family. All the parents of those children thanked the foundation people for taking care of the children.

When maan is talking to the children sameera came there.

Hi maan wished sam.

Hi sameera. How is your brother now?

He is fine maan. What r u doing here?

Umm nothing talking with children told maan.

Sam is surprised by his nature.

Maan uncle who is she?

oh… baby her name is sameera. Say hi to her.

Hii aunty told children.

Hi babies told sam n she too started talking with them.

After some adi came n called maan.

Maan…

maan turned back n saw adi.

Ok children see u tomorrow. Bye.

Bye maan uncle, bye aunty.

Maan n sam went with adi.

Adi this is sameera n sameera this is di my best buddy.

Hi sameera.

Hi adi.

They chit chatted for sometime. She felt comfortable with maan n adi. They became good friends n talked comfortably. Adi left from there. Maan n sam went to maan's cabin.

Maan can I ask u something?

Yeah.. ask sameera.

Hmm who all r there in ur family.

Maan looked at her n told no one sameera. I am alone.

oh… I am sorry maan.

Its ok sam.

Sam felt bad for him at the same time she started liking him. After that day maan, adi n sam met frequently. They became good friends. But adi observed one thing was sam is interested in maan. N he didnt like that. He wanted to talk to sam about that matter, because it is still starting before she realises her feelings towards maan he has to tell about maan to her.

Adi (st): sam I know that u r interested in maan. U should know about maan. Yes it will be rite. Iske liye muje pinky se baat karni hain. Sam ke baare mein maan ko pata na chale tho hi acha hain.

Precap: geet in delhi.

Rohan n aishu in same school n same class.

Sam at adi-pinky house.


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Chapter 4

After that day maan, adi n sam met frequently. They became good friends. But adi observed one thing was sam is interested in maan. N he didnt like that. He wanted to talk to sam about that matter, because it is still starting before she realises her feelings towards maan he has to tell about maan to her.

Adi (st): sam I know that u r interested in maan. U should know about maan. Yes it will be rite. Iske liye muje pinky se baat karni hain. Sam ke baare mein maan ko pata na chale tho hi acha hain.

In london:

maa sab kuch packing ho gaya na asked geet.

Ha geet sab kuch hogaya. Par geet delhi main hum..

dont worry maa company has given a flat. We can stay there told geet.

Oh ok fine told rano.

Mamaa, nanii I am ready came aishu shouting.

Geet took her in her arms n asked acha my devil is ready?

Yes mama. When we r going? Asked aishu.

In an hour darling told geet.

Yayyy shouted aishu excitedly.

Maa where is pari asked geet.

I am here di told pari coming out of her room.

All ready? Asked geet.

Yes di told pari.

Ok I will make few calls and come told geet n went out.

Chachi in india again I have to join new school n new friends na? Asked aishu.

Yes dear. U will go to the school which myself n ur mama studied. That is the best school told pari.

Really chachi but I dont know anyone there na ? Pouted aishu.

So what we can make friends easily. So no problem told pari.

Yes chachi told aishu excitedly.

After sometime geet came n told chalo guys its getting late.

They all took their luggage n headed to the airport. They all reached airport n completed all the formalities n boarded the flight. All of them setelled. Geet sat near window seat n aishu sat beside her. Rano n pari sat in other seat. Geet is looking put of the window n lost in her thoughts.

Geet is thinking that she can lead her life in delhi as she is in london. But who knows what is going to happen in her life. These many years god is silent but not now. He is going to play with their lives again. Whether it is for good or bad no one knows. But after going to delhi all their lives re going to change. Now the actual game starts in the lives of geet, aishu n '…

no one can change destiny. Eventhough geet told to her maa n sister that they should not meet anyone in delhi. Is that going to happen? Will geet succeed in her life? Will she be happy again? Will aishu meet her father? Why did aishu never ask about her father? Does that little girl knows anything about her mama n father?

These all questions r going to be answered by geet? Yes she will answer she has to. Geet again went to her past days which r the most happiest moments in her life n most worst moments too.

In delhi:

adi is pacing in his room restlessly. Just then pinky entered the room n saw adi.

Adi what happened?

Pinky mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hain.

Bolo adi.

wo.. darasal sameera hain na. Jiski bhai ki accident hui hain.

Ha I know what happened to her?

Nothing she is fine. But but..

what happened adi?

I think she loves maan.

WHAT? Shouted pinky.

Ha pinky mujhe aisa hi lag raha hain.

Nahi aisa nahi ho sakta. Adi she is coming back. (pinky st) That day u told to maan bhai only half thing but he dont know the whole matter adi who baat aapko bhi nahi pata.muje maaf kijiye yeh baat aap dono se chupane ke liye.

Ha pinky u r right. Hum sam ko sab kuch batana hi padega, yeh usko zindagi ka sawaal hain.

Ha adi hum uss ladki ko sach batana hain. She cannot love maan bhai because…

nahi pinky ab kuch nahi kaho. Main next week sam ko ghar bulata hu.

Ji adi main aapke saath hu. Mujhe aisa lag raha hain ki kuch tho hone wala hain.

Dont worry pinky sab kuch thik hojayega.

Adi hugged pinky. N they slept.

In maan's house:

maan is thinking about adi's words which he told on rohan's birthday.

Their conversation on rohan's birthday party:

maan mujhe tumse kuch baat karna hain told adi.

Ha bolo adi told maan.

Yaha nahi mere room mein chalte hain. Pinky tum bhi ao told adi seriously.

They 3 went to adi's room n settled themselves.

Bolo kya baat hain asked maan.

Maan wo.. wo.. stammered adi.

Adi bolo kya baat hain asked maan seriously.

Adi sighed n told geet delhi wapas aa rahi hain.

Thats it the whole world stopped hearing what adi told. Pinky is shocked n happy to hear this. But maan's condition is worst. He shocked, happy, fear in his eyes, pain in his eyes n guilt. These many emotions r killing him inside.

Adi kya aap sach keh rahe ho? Asked pinky.

Ha pinky main sach keh raha hu told adi.

Par aapko kaise pata? Asked pinky.

Dont u remember pinky main n geet r working in the same software company. After what happened that day she left somewhere without telling anyone told adi.

Ha I know told pinky.

Today boss called me n told that some new candidates will join for the project as this is more important for this company. He gave me the list of all candidates. When I was checking those files I saw geet's profile. When I enquired about it then I came to know that these many years geet worked in london branch completed adi.

London wo.. akeli asked pinky n tears rolled her cheeks.

Suddenly adi n pinky noticed maan who sat there motionless. Only the words which told by adi r ringing in his ears. 'geet delhi wapas aa rahi hain.'

Tears formed in maan's eyes. He dont know how to feel. Happy that his geet is coming back or sad that ever she will meet him n understand him n forgive him for his mistake no no for his sin. He closed his eyes in pain.

Maan bhai aap thik ho? Asked pinky.

??????? no response.

Maan bhai plzz look at me. (next part u all know. If not refer chapter 2)

end of their conversation.

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Maan : geet tum wapas aa rahi ho. I am very happy for that but ever in ur will u forgive me. Do u love me as before. Mera iss akele zindagi mein tum ek rooshni(light) bankar ayi ho. Par khud mere haatoon se sab khud bigad diya tha. I am sorry geet. Even I am also suffering now. Tum mujhe chodke chali gayi ho aur hamari…

He closed his eyes painfully n tears rolled down his cheek.

Maan : I am sorry geet I am sorry plzz wapas aajao. I cant leave without u. plzz wapas aajao.

Maan lost in his thoughts thinking about his past. How his life changed when geet entered into his life. N how again his life changed when the same geet left fron his life.

Kya yeh zindagi ka khel hain? Why this pain in life? Cant the life be smooth and happy? Why destiny loves to play games? When they are happy in their lives then why this sad n pain? What we should learn from this game? Kehte hain jo kuch bhi hota hain ache ke liye hi hota hain. Kya yeh sach hain? Yeh baat tho kisi ko bhi nahi pata.

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Geet, pari, rano n aishu reached delhi. They all went to their flat which is accomodated by company. It is a 3 bed room flat with a beautiful garden. They liked the new house. But one thing they dont know that even adi-pinky r staying in the same house.

Its been 1 week they came to delhi n settled. Today geet started going to office. She joined aishu in school where rohan is studying. One day geet dropped aishu in the school n she went to office.

In school:

Aishu entered the class n saw all new faces n whole class is full. Only one place is there that is beside rohan. Aishu went n sat there quitely. Rohan saw her n smiled.

Hii.. wished rohan.

Hii.. told aishu.

My name is rohan.

My name is aishwarya.

Then the teacher came n started the class. As it is first day of school n some of the portion is completed aishu didnt understand anything. Rohan saw that n asked

what happened?

I didnt understand anything. I missed some classes na told aishu with sad face.

Rohan thought for some time n told do one thing. Evening come to my house I will teach u.

aishu smiled n asked really? U will tell me everything?

Ya I will tell. N u can meet my mama. She is very sweet u know.

But I dont know ur house na asked aishu.

Acha.. u come with me n then my mama will tell the address to ur mama told rohan.

Aishu smiled at rohan. Then in the evening rohan n aishu went to rohan's apartment.

I will also stay in this apartment only told aishu.

Really? Then we can play daily told rohan.

Yayyy shouted aishu excitedly. Just then she saw pari going somewhere.

Chachi shouted aishu.

Pari turned back n saw aishu.

Chachi I an going to rohan's house to write notes. I will come after some time told aishu.

Ok darling. Hello rohan told pari.

Hello aunty.

Where do u stay? Asked pari.

4th floor aunty.

Ok beta u both go now.

They both left from there n went to rohan's house. They went inside.

Mama shouted rohan.

Pinky came there n saw rohan n other girl.

Rohan beta come aur aap beta asked pinky seeing aishu.

Mama she is my new friend aishwarya said rohan.

Hello beta.

Hello aunty wished aishu.

Pinky felt some strange feeling seeing aishu but shrugged it off n bought snacks for them.

Its almost 8 n pari noticed aishu didnt come yet. So she decided to go to rohan's house. At the same time sam came to adi's house as he invited her for dinner.

Sam rang the bell, pinky opened the door n saw sam.

Aap? Asked pinky.

Hii I am sameera.

Oh hi come in told pinky.

Pinky closed the door n started talking with sameera.

Thanks for coming sameera.

No problem. Mujhe bhi mann kar raha tha aapse milne ke liye.

Just then again door bell rang.

Mama I will open the door said rohan.

Rohan opened the door n saw pari.

Hii aunty.

Hii beta wo aishu abi takh nahi ayi.

Kaun hain rohan asked pinky.

Aishu ki chachi mama.

Come in aunty told rohan.

Pari came in. pinky saw pari n shocked to see her here.

Pariii whispered pinky.

Pari too saw pinky n was shocked. She couldnt believe her eyes she is seeing her after long 5 years. Pari ran to pinky n hugged her tight.

Pinky di. How r u?

I am fine pari. Tum yaha? Then she remembered what adi told.

Ha main aishu ke liye ayi thi told pari.

Aishu??

just then aishu came there n saw pari n shouted chachi..

pinky is shocked that aishu is calling her as chachi. Iska matlab?

Omg.. gasped pinky. N turned to pari.

Pari, aishu??

ha di.

Matlab aishu maan bhai ki beti hain. Tears rolled down her cheeks.

But there 3 shocked faces shouted WHAT???

precap: one is sam who is shocked. Then who r others??

past: maan-geet 1st meet.


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#6
Chapter 5

pinky is shocked that aishu is calling her as chachi. Iska matlab?

Omg.. gasped pinky. N turned to pari.

Pari, aishu??

ha di.

Matlab aishu maan bhai ki beti hain. Tears rolled down her cheeks.

But there 3 shocked faces shouted WHAT???

pari n pinky turned back n saw shocked maan, adi n sam.

Maan immediately ran to pinky n askedpinky yeh tum kya keh rahi ho?

wo.. wo.. bhai fumbled pinky.

Jiju called pari emotionally.

Maan turned back n saw pari.

Pari hugged maan n asked how r u jiju?

Pari how r u?? n wo.. ge.. geet..

pari broke the hug n told we r fine jiju just fine.

Maan understood n asked pari yeh.. ye.. looking towards aishu.

She is your daughter jiju told pari.

Plzz forgive me bhai. When geet left from here she was pregnant.yeh baat main aap sab se chupana pada. i am so sorry bhai.

Maan's happiness have no bounds. His daughter, his life again came back. he looked at his daughter lovingly but aishu is just smiling at him because she dont know who is maan.

maan(st): my daughter, oh she is my daughter. this is the happiest day in my life. she is looking same as geet, same eyes, the same smile. Aishu i am your father dear. How painful it is when a child dont know about her father.

When maan was about to take aishu in his arms but stopped in his tracks when he heard a voice.

DONT U DARE TO TOUCH HER MR. KHURANA shouted geet from the entrance.

Pinky sensed that something is going to happen. So she told to sam.

Sam pls take aishu n rohan inside.

Sam didnt understand anything just nodded n took them inside.

Maan turned back n saw geet, his geet after long 6 years. The same anger when he met her first time and even today.

Geet… whispered maan.

NO shouted geet.

Geet plzz once listen to me requested maan.

I said no mr. khurana told geet.

Pari what are u doing here? I told you before coming here dont u dare to meet them. But u I didnt expect this from u shouted geet angrily.

Di once listen told pari.

Where is aishu?

Geet… called pinky.

Geet raised her hand to stop.

WHERE IS AISHU?

She is inside told pinky.

Geet itni badi baat tum mujhe nahi kaha asked maan painfully.

Why should I tell u? Retorted geet.

I am her father geet told maan painfully.

Geet smiled a bitter smile. Father, hmm do u know the meaning of father.

Who knows better than me geet told maan.

NO U R NOT A FATHER. U R A MURDERER. YES U R A MURDERER shouted geet on top of her lungs.

Geet shouted maan painfully.

Kyun? Did I tell anything wrong asked geet bitterly.

I am also suffering geet. Kitna dard tumko hain mujhe bhi hain. How can u think like that geet told maan, tears rolled down his cheeks.

Geet held his collar n asked dard? Tumko pata bhi hain dard kya hota hain?

Main bhi insaan hu geet told maan.

Tum ek maa ke dard ko nahi samjhogi. How can u understand afterall u r an or… geet closed her eyes without completing her sentence.

Bolo geet kyun ruk gayi. Yes I am an orphan completed maan.

Shut up geet, shut up bhai. How can u say that, main hoon iska behen. He is not alone. Dare u talk like that geet told pinky seriously.

No pinky dont stop her today told maan.

Nahi bhai we know how much u suffrered.

Kyun pinky? Tere dost ka dard tumko dikai nahi diya? Asked geet painfully.

Aisa nahi hain geet, jo dard tumko hain bhai ko bhi hain, dont u know how much he loves u n…

ek aur baat nahi pinky. Mujhe kuch nahi sunna. Aishu kaha hain asked geet.

Geet ek baar mujhe aishu ko, meri beti ko dekhne do. Plzz geet begged maan.

She is my daughter only mine told geet angrily.

Geet aisa kehne se pehle y dont u KILL me told maan painfully.

Geet closed her eyes not able to bear all this. Immediately she composed herself n went inside n took sleeping aishu in her arms. She just glared at pari n left from there.

When she was about to go out adi spoke geet jo kuch bhi karna hain karo. Ek beti ko apni pita se koi nahi alag nahi kar sakta. Its destiny's decision for her to meet his father. U cant stop it.

No I wont let that happen. Iss baar aisa nahi hoga saying so she left from there.

Pari too silently left from there.

Maan just stood there lifeless not believing what happened just few minutes back. He has a daughter n her name is aishu. N he dont know that. What a fate he dont know about his own daughter. Suddenly he remembered what geet told ' U R A MURDERER' ringing in his ears. Tears rolling down his cheek continously.

Maan: kya galti ki maine. Why this is happeneing to me. I know that geet is angry on me but how can she say like that. Am I a murderer? Do I dont have pain of losing someone. Main bhi ek pita hu. I dont have any family in my childhood, I know the value of family n relations. Mujhe bhi dard hain pinky. I am dying each n every second being away from her. Par no one is there to understand me. All are leaving me why? Pehle meri bachi, phir geet ab aishu bhi. Kyun pinky kyun?

Maan: I pray each n every day to get my geet back. When I saw her I was so happy. I know that she will be angry on me. But I dont know that wo.. mujse itna nafrat karti hain ki wo meri bachi ke baare mein nahi kaha. Kyun pinky tum bhi apne bhai se mafrat karti ho. Hain na? Isiliye tum bhi mujse iske baare mein nahi kaha. Ab muje pata chala sab log mujse nafrat karte hain. All of u hate me. But I cant hate u all. Aaplog mujse kitne bhi nafrat karo but still I love u.

pinky: nahi bhai aisa nahi hain, mujhe maaf kijiye bhai. I didnt do it intensionally. Plzz bhai plzz n she is crying bitterly. She thought that something is going to happen but she didnt expect that thing will go wrong.

Maan: nahi pinky main kaun hu tumko maaf karne ke liye. As geet told I am an orphan. Main akela hu koi bhi nahi hain iss duniya mein mere liye. Because of me u guys suffered a lot. I am so sorry for that.

Adi: yeh tum kaise baatein kar rahe ho maain. Calm down, geet ne gusse mein kuch bol diya.

Maan smiled bitterly n told jab insaan gusse mein ho then that time they will tell truth unknowingly. What geet told is right. I dont deserve anyone's love n I am a murderer.

Saying so maan left from there like a lifeless body. No emotions in his face just blank like a plain sheet. He dont know where he is going, tears rolling down his cheeks. His whole world stopped, reminding his past memories. Thinking about his geet, his muskaan. How happy they were then why this pain? What he did? What geet did? Why they are suffering? When it is destiny's game then why she is blaming him. How can he will bear that pain. Will this never ends? Dont know? All these things r in the hand of above guy who is enjoying all this. This pain should end but how? Lets wait n watch. Koi na koi raasta tho milega. Every problem has a solution.

Back to pinky-adi residence:

adi yeh kya hogaya asked pinky who is crying bitterly seeing her brothers state.

Pinky u take care I will go behind maan. Pata nahi kaise haalat mein hoga wo.

Thik hain adi.

Adi left from there.

Geet's house:

geet came angrily into th house with sleeping aishu in her arms. Rano saw her angry n asked

what happened geet?

Geet didnt talk anything n went to her room and made aishu sleep. She came out after sometime n saw pari saying what happened there to rano. Rano got angry n shouted on geet

geet r u mad. Tumko pata bhi hain tum kya kar rahi ho. Tum maan se aise kaise baat kar sakti ho. He is ur husband dont forget that.

Maa mujhe iske baare mein kuch bhi nahi baat karna n left from there.

Tumari koi galti nahi geet, galti tho sirf hamari hain. Hey babaji aap hi kuch kijiye plz babaji let geet n maan live happily.

Pinky's room:

Pinky went to her room n saw sam patting rohan's back who is sleeping peacefully.

Sam called pinky.

Sam looked at her not understanding anythng.

What is all this pinky? That girl aishu is maan's daughter. How come maan dont know?

Thats fate sam. We cant do anything.

Pinky mujhe batao kya hua.

Kya tum sunna chati ho?

Ha pinky plz tell me.

Just wait.

Pinky went to her cupboard n took one pic n gave it to sam.

Sam saw smiling maan n that girl who shouted on maan (geet) n a small girl in maan's arms.

This is maan bhai's family. Geet, maan's wife n their loving daughter muskaan.

Muskaan? Where is she now?

Pinky gave a sad smile to sam n told destiny played a creul game with them sam.

Past starts.

Precap: past…

maan n geet first meet.


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Chapter 6



Ha pinky plz tell me.

Just wait.

Pinky went to her cupboard n took one pic n gave it to sam.

Sam saw smiling maan n that girl who shouted on maan (geet) n a small girl in maan's arms.

This is maan bhai's family. Geet, maan's wife n their loving daughter muskaan.

Muskaan? Where is she now?

Pinky gave a sad smile to sam n told destiny played a creul game with them sam.

What r u saying pinky. Dont talk in riddles.

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13 years back:

There is a huge crowd in the auditorium. All the people r shouting n screaming with joy because their favorite's dance show is going to be held in few minutes. Every 6 months a dance group will perform in different places. Their main aim is to entertain people. All the people will be waiting for this show.

This dance group will collect money by their perfomance n 50% they will give for charities. They are very famous in delhi. Even they do shows in other cities even. They give charity shows.

Suddenly the anchor of the show shouted

Hello delhi, welcome all.

HELLOOOshouted all the people.

How r u guys????

COOLLL… WAITITNG… shoued people.

Ok chill guys the show will start in 5 min told anchor.

Wowww shouted people n clapping their hands, waiting for the show.

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On the other hand pinky is getting ready to go somewhere.

Omg.. its already late she will kill me for sure. Babaji meri madad karna.

Her mobile rang. She saw the caller ID n gulped her saliva n nervously said

he.. hello.

This is the limit pinky. I was waiting for you from past half an hour n u…

sorry yaar I forgot about our meeting. I am so sorry. Plz plz just 15 min more.

Ok come fast n hanged the phone.

Thanku babaji.

Pinky left to meet her friend near shopping mall. When she entered shopping mall she has to face her super duper angry friend.

Geet called pinky from back.

Geet turned back n gave her an angry look.

I am sorry told pinky holding her ears.

Geet just smiled a little seeing her friend's antics n told chalo.

Pinky hugged geet n told thanku yaar.

Pinky now fast. Oh god how much will u shop yaar.

Geet today u too have to shop because u r coming for tomorrow's party with me.

No ways I am not coming. U know na I wont like parties.

Plz geet, its adi's friend party yaar. Plz geet plz.

Ok ok fine I will come.

They both shopped for sometime. Both bought anarkali suits geet red colour n pinky sky blue colour.

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So guys the count down begins. 1

1 shouted all.

2…

2 shouted all.

3

3..shouted all with huge round of applouse.

A group of girls came on to the dias n a rocking music started.


They all are dancing very gracefully. All the people were enjoying the show n the steps were ultimate. By their perfomance we can see how hard they practiced for the show. All the girls are in their mini skirts n shining red colour top. But they are looking decent.

Suddenly the music stopped.

All the girls who are performing there shouted

WELCOME TO MAAN SINGH KHURANA.

Then maan entered looking extremely hot in his black n black attire. His hair is gelled n 1st 3 buttons of his shirt are opened exposing his well toned chest.

Then again music started. Now maan started dancing with the girls. His each move is breath taking for all the girls. They are drooling over him n shouting maan maan maan.

His moments are so graceful that all the girls are on lala land. They are imagining themselves dancing with maan.




Maan's dance is completed n maan took the mike

Hello guys. How r u??

FINEEE

wow.. thats cool. How is the show.

Fabulousss…

thanku very much guys. There is an announcement. Our dance school has completed 3 years by today. So there is a party tomorrow in **********. so all are invited.

Wowww… thanku..

ok guys. See u tomorrow. Good night. Shubh ratri.

Atlast the show ended n all the girls ran to maan for autograph. Maan signed for all of them n smiled at them. Omg.. his killing smile. Some girls are about to faint seeing his smile.

Maan singh khurana he is a famous dancer. He will be doing shows (like srk in dil tho pagal hain). He is an orphan, he studied architecture with scholarship but not interested in that field so started a dance school. He has more than 100 students in his school. Adi is his best friend from childhood. Adi n geet are working in same software company. They both are good friends. But maan n geet never met.

Initially he started dance school with only 5 students in a small room but now it became huge with more than 100 students. He is rich, cool n friendly. He is down to earth. All are very friendly with maan. His helping nature makes him famous. He is the one who believes in destiny. His cant see any one sad, he wants all the people around him to be happy. Pinky is not free type she is reserved but when she met maan first, he made her so comfortable with brotherly warmth.

Maan has 3 best friends in his life adi, raj n dev. Adi n dev are very good in nature n loves maan to the core. Dev is from a poor family. Maan helped dev in his studies, adi is from a middle class family, raj is also from a middle class family but he is very greedy towards money. He started a small business n expecting huge profit in the initial stages itself. He finds easy ways to earn money but maan, dev n adi dont know his intentions.

But maan trusts all people around him. He believes what others say is true. He will think about the consequences after but not before helping them. Girls die to spend with him but he never took advantage of anyone. He respects women. He knows the value of family as he dont want any family. But he is never sad about it, because he never thinks he is alone, he thinks all are his people.

After the show ended, maan n the girl who danced with man came out n saw his friend adi n dev waiting for him.

Hey guys.

Hi maan, hi anju Asusual the show is awesome.

Thanku adi. Waise where is pinky.

Hmm she is busy today with her friend. She will come for tomorrows party. These girls are impossible.

Oyy kabardar meri behen ko kuch kaha.

Lo dekho dev, friend ko bhul gaya.

Kya yaar maan, bechara adi. Aur ha adi dobara hamari behen ko kuch bolne se pehle soch lena yaha do do bhai hain.

God man, tum bhi. Anju atleast u support me yaar.

Sorry adi, I am not free now, my boy friend is waiting for me. Engagement ke liye shopping karni hain. Bye.

They all laughed n had a group hug for the success of the show. They broke the hug n anju bid good bye to them. some of the students approached him.

Hello maan sir.

Hello guys.

Congrats for the success of the show.

Thanku n congrats to u too. Its our group work.

They all smiled at him n told ok sir bye.

Hey tomorrow party. Dont forget.

Ya sure sir. Bye.

Bye.

Chalo guys we will also leave. Its already late.

Meanwhile pinky dropped geet at her house n came to meet adi, maan n dev at the show.

Hello guys told pinky.

All the 3 smiled at pinky.

Adi hugged her n pinky too reciprocated the hug.

Ho gaya shopping?

Ha hogaya. Main tho bhul gayi thi ki shopping jaana hain aur late hogayi. Aur geet mujhpe gussa ho gayi.

Very good, phir usse manane mein bohot time lagi hogi.

Oh hello main usko bachpan se jaanti hu. I know how to manofy her.

Adi rolled his eyes, maan n dev smiled at adi.

Sorry bhai show time ko nahi aa payi.

Its ok pinky, u r coming tomorrow right?

Ofcourse bhai. I will n geet bhi aarahi hain.

Ok fine, tum dono bohot bolte ho uss geet ke baare mein. I wanna meet her.

Hmm ok bhai, dinner ke liye chalte hain.

Ya ok chalo.

All the 4 left from there. As all are tired they went to restaurant. They all ordered their food n enjoying, talking with each other.

Pinky dont have any brothers, maan n dev pampers her to the core.

They all enjoyed their food pulling each others leg. Maan n pinky punjabi khana, adi n dev chinese.

After dinner they had ice cream n left from there.

Pinky bid good bye to all adi went to drop her. Maan n dev went to their respective houses n relaxed.

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Next day morning:

maan got up n freshened. He read the news paper n about his show n the party. He wont like all this publicity but media people wont leave him. He sighed n went to the party hall to see the decorations, food arrangements n drinks.

By the evening all the things are ready. But maan is really excited for the party. He never felt like this before.

Maan (st): what is happeneing to me. Why I am so excited. This is not the first party? Then why? Dont know I think something is going to happen. Kuch acha hi hone wala hain. God what are ur plans now. Hmm ok ok I will wait.

He came out his thoughts when his cell rang.

Hello adi bolo.

Maan, sab kuch ready ho gaya na. Main abi office se nikal raha hu.

Ha yaar sab kuch ho gaya. Tu tension mat le.

Ok I will be there in 1 hour.

Ok fine main bhi ready hoke ata hu.

Ok see u. bye.

Bye.

Maan went to his home to get ready. He wore his black suit, rolex watch n blask shoes. He gelled his hair n looking extremely dashing.

On the other side, geet is also getting ready for the party. Even she dont like to attend parties but she is also excited for the party. She called pinky more than 10 times to confirm the timing of the party. Pinky found it weird but shrugged it off.

Geet wore her new red suit with matching ear rings n bangles. He applied her kajal n small bindi n she wore her heels. She looked herself in the mirror again n again unlike her.

Am I looking good?? (st) geet tu jhalli ho gayi ho. Stop it n go. Pinky will be waiting for u at the party hall. She bid good bye to her mom n pari n ;eft from there.

Geet beta jaldi aajana. Thik hain.

Ok maa. I will come early. Bye.

Bye di enjoy the party.

Geet smiled n told bye n left from there.

Geet took the cab n headed towards the party hall.

Maan too got ready n started in his car. There is smile on both maan n geet's face. They both are excited as if god is giving ishara that today they are going to meet someone special in their life. Itna ajeeb hain na zindagi, how can we recognize that he is special n she is special. Hum kaise jaante hain ki he/she is perfect for us. Its all the game of destiny. Kya pehli mulaakat mein hi pata chal jaata hain? Pata nahi.

Now lets see how maan n geet will meet n what is there in their destiny. Lets see their first meeting. Will it be casual meet or any thing is going to happen. How their life changes. How they meet again. Where this simple sa mulaakat leads to.? Why n how they love each other. Why she hates him so much. Par ups n downs is life. Lets see how n where their lives lead to?

Precap: maan n geet meet. 😃 😊

Oops geet angry.😡


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 7

Both maan n geet reached party. Maan parked his car n went inside. Geet came out of the cab n saw pinky coming towards her. Geet smiled at her.

Hey geet. U r looking awesome.

Thanks.

Andar chale.

Ha chalo.

Geet n pinky made their way inside. Adi came to them n wished

hii geet.

Hi adi.

Thanks for coming to the party.

Geet just smiled n they 3 chatted for sometime. Just then dev n raj entered the party.

Hey dev, raj called adi.

Hey buddy wished dev.

Hello dev bhai wished pinky n introduced geet to them.

This is my best friend geet. Geet he is dev n raj.

Hii told geet.

Hii geet. Nice to meet u wished dev.

Same here.

But raj is least interested. He is just seeing here n there to find any rich girl n spend time with them. Just then raj heard a laugh. He turned that way n saw a beautiful girl wearing knee lenth dress with heels. Raj saw her with lusted eyes. He made an excuse n went near her.

Now that girl is sitting alone near bar n sipping her drink.

Hii beautiful wished raj.

Hii wished that girl.

I am raj extended his hand.

I am soni shook her hand.

They both chatted for sometime. Suddenly raj told

hey I will get a drink for u.

ya sure.

But instead of soft drink he bought visky.

Here is your drink.

Thanku.

She drank it even though she felt the taste different but she strugged it off n completed her drink. Her head started spinning. Raj observed that n went close to her n asked

r u alright?

yy.. yyeessshhh told soni n was about to fall, raj held her by her waist n took her to one of the hotel room. Now she is unconsious.

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here maan made his way to the stage n took the mike n announced

hello ladies n gentlemen, a hearty welcome to u all. Thanku very much for coming to the party. Today we r celebrating the 3rd anniversary of our dance school. It is successful because of u all. N congratulations for all of them for making the yesterday's show successful. So friends enjoy the party. Once again thanku for coming.

With that maan came down from dias n talking with the guests. All r congratulating him for his success. Today is the happiest day in his life, his dream come true. From childhood he is very much interested in dance n wated to open a dance school. Today his dream became true not only that it completed 3 years.

When a person have strong determination to do any thing, how many hard ships he face but atlast he will be successful same in the case of maan. He struggled very hard to complete his studies. He joined a small company as an architect with a little salary. He just worked for 6 months n resigned. With that money he started a dance school. Now it became very very huge n famous.

Here geet n pinky r chatting with each other. When they heard maan talking on the dias geet is lost in him. She thought he is looking handsome n hot. Omg.. the black colour it suited him as if it was designed for him only. Geet is drooling over him for the first time in her life she is checking out someone. Suddenly she came out of her trance by the sound of loud applouse.

Geet (st): geet what r u doing?? u r drolling over him. Thoda sharam karo. U r seeing him for the 1st time n drooling. This is not u. concentrate on the party not him. Uff geet what happened to u. why u r behaving like a crazy. Chided geet herself.

Oyee geet where u r lost asked pinky.

Geet came out of her thoughts n told nothing pinky.

Geet n pinky r talking, maan, adi n dev r busy in their own world.

Maan ek baat batao asked dev.

Kya hain poocho told maan.

Arey yaar now u r happy n settled, then tum shaadi kyun nahi? Asked dev.

Ha maan, dev shai keh raha hain told adi.

Hmmm main iske baare mein socha hi nahi yaar. Aur muje meri type ki ladki nahi mili.

Ohh ab tumara type kya hain? Asked dev.

Hmm nothing much mere baare mein tho aap logon ko pata hain. Mujhe aisi ladki chahiye who will controls me, loves me n take care of me. Main tho uss ladki ko itna pyaar karoonga ki usko kisi ki kami mehsoos nahi hone doonga. Jab main shaadi karoonga tab se she will be my family, my life n my every thing. If she have any responsibilities about her parents then she can do anything for them. Infact they will my parents right? Her parents will be my parents too. I will shower all my love to them. Uss ladki ko thoda gussa bhi hona chahiye kyun ki mujhe samjhana thoda mushkil hain na.

Maan ek baat bolu asked adi.

Batao na.

Who ever marry u, she will be very lucky to have u. yes maan, I am proud of u n hugged him.

Thanku adi. Main sirf uss ladki ko iss duniya ka saara pyaar aur khushi dena chata hu.

Par wo ladki hain kaha asked dev.

Pata nahi shayad yahi kahi hogi.

Matlab?

Arey yaar what is there in out destiny who knows. May be that girl who is wearing the red colour suit will be my wife in future. Who knows told maan casually.

But to his luck the girl in that red suit listened this n turned back glaring angrily at him.

Maan saw that girl n lost in her beauty. She is looking not less than angel in that red suit, that colour suited her very well. With minimum makeup also she is looking beautiful, anyone can fall her. Maan was just staring at her without blinking. But when he saw her eyes there is something, like she is hiding something from this world. As if she is wearing some mask. But just by seeing her eyes only he understood that this is not her real self. He too felt strange that how can he decide anything like that by just seeing her eyes. But he is feeling something strange n thought this girl is something different. Suddenly he came out of his trance when she spoke

Hello Mr. called that girl.

All 3 adi, maan n dev turned to her.

Hi geet. Meet my friend maan. Maan she is geet.

Hello told maan casually.

What did u tell before? Asked geet angrily.

What did I tell asked maan confusingly.

Wo red suit wali ladki..

oh ya that, I told may the girl in red suit may be my wife in the future.

There r so many girls in this party. Why u pointed me only.

Its nothing like that miss. Jab main kuch bol raha tha tho I just said it casually.

I dont care n u dont have right u hurt others feelings.

Look madam I was just…

before he tell anything geet cut him n told

See Mr. maan u r very respectable person in the society. So we wont expect such type of behaviour.

U r taking me wrong.

Behave urself. Give respect n take respect. Good bye.

Geet turned back n left from there. Maan is just staring at her as if she is some alien n his mouth wide open.

Adi n dev burst out into laughter seeing maan like that.

Yaar main tho mazak kar raha tha. She took it all seriously.

Hmmm she is like that only maan. Jyada baat nahi karti aur har waqt gusse mein rehti hain told adi.

But yaar itni choti si baat told dev.

Pata nahi mujhe,office main bhi she will be like that only told adi.

She is strange told maan. (st) but she is something different.

Destiny made her like that came a voice from back.

All 3 turned back n saw pinky.

Plzz dont take her wrong. I listened all. Uski taraf se main maafi maang thi hu told pinky.

Hey pinky its ok. We r just shocked to see her reaction told maan.

Thanks bhai. Aapko nahi pata geet ke baare mein she is not that geet I know from childhood. She changed a lot now told pinky getting all emotional.

Adi hugged her n rubbing her back to calm down.

Shh pinky calm down.

Pinky broke the hug n smiled at them. Even though maan want to know about geet but seeing pinky;s condition he decided not to ask her anything now.

Maan (st): I want to apolozise her. Eventhough I did nothing but she is hurted because of me. I dont know I think we will meet again, muje aisa hi lag raha hain. I saw something in ur eyes n tab hi muje pata chala ki u r not the one who u r now. U r hiding urself for some reason. We will meet again geet. At that time I wont leave u forever. I never experienced the feeling of love. But I think I fell in love with u that too without knowing anything. Shayad isi ko love at first site kehte hain. Hmmm thats really cool. I think I am excited from morning to meet u. well aaj tho acha hua.

Bhai called pinky.

Huh!! ha pinky.

Aap thik tho ho na.

Maan smiled n told ha pinky I am fine. Had dinner?

Ha bhai. U guys have dinner. I will serve u.

Ok chalo. Ummm… pinky wo… wo.. ur friend is fine na.

Ha bhai dont worry she is fine. Usko gussa ata hain tho pata nahi kya bolti hain.

Did she had dinner??

Yes bhai.

Maan sighed in relief. Bhai come.

They all went to nearby table n enjoyed their dinner.

Now the hall became empty n after some chatting they took leave n bid good night n left for their respective houses.

Maan went home n changed in his tracks n lied on his bed. He is thinking about geet no no red suit wali ladki.

Maan: yeh muje kya ho raha hain. Abi abi tho main usse mili aur thik se baat bhi nahi hui. But I am just thinking about that girl. Her big eyes wow they r just awesome n her cheeks which are red due to anger. Even in that gussa she is looking soo cute. Man u lost it just sleep now.

Maan slept peacefully thinking about geet.

Here geet came to her house n went to her room n changed.

She is lost in maan.

Geet: I think I behaved rudely with him. But what he did is also wrong. There r soo many girls there, then why he pointed only me. Geet chodo yeh sab n so ja. Waise tum ladkon ke baare mein kab se sochne lagi. Party main bhi tum usko ghoor ghoor ke dekh rahi thi. Babaji ka shukriys unhone tumko nahi dekha, agar dekha tho kya sochega. Geet so jao.

Geet tried to sleep but sleep us very far from her. She is just tossing here n there on her bed thinking about maan. Atlast after very long time she slept.

Next day morning:

maan got up n freshened n went to dance school. He is very relaxed today. Finally he is free for some days. Some of his students are practicing dance on the dance floor. He is just seeing how they are dancing n any corrections have to be made.

In geet's house geet got ready n going for office. Suddenly pari called her

dii..

ha pari bolo.. told geet reading some file.

Dii next week hamare college mein annual day function hain. I want to but new dress.

Ok u go. Take my card.

Dii I want even u to come for shopping told pari making puppy face.

No pari I am busy today.

Plz plz plz di..

hmmm thik hain I will come half day. We will go then.

Pari hugged geet n thanku di.

Ok bye.. bye maa.

Bye beta.

Geet left for her office. Adi n geet entered office at the same time.

Hi geet.

Hii adi.

Adi dont know what to talk further they both went inside silently.

Geet got busy with her work. She saw the time is 1.

oh no muje pari ke saath shpping jaana hain. I will take permission n go.

Geet took permission n left from there. Geet called pari.

Hello di.

Hello pari I will be in 20 min near ******** shopping mall.

Ok di I am coming.

Wow to her luck the dance school of maan is beside that shopping mall. Here is maan is in his cabin, standing near window sipping his black coffee.

At the same time geet came to the shopping mall n waiting for pari. Suddenly maan's eye caught geet.

Precap: will they meet??? 😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Chapter 8



Geet took permission n left from there. Geet called pari.

"Hello di"

"Hello pari I will be in 20 min near ******** shopping mall".

"Ok di I am coming".

Wow to her luck the dance school of maan is beside that shopping mall. Here is maan is in his cabin, standing near window sipping his black coffee.

At the same time geet came o the shopping mall n waiting for pari. Suddenly maan's eye caught geet.

Maan (st): "oh man, this girl I should apologise her for yesterday. I think she is waiting for someone. Kahi boyfriend ki chakkar tho nahi hain na. Nahi nahi she seems to be a nice girl. Maan stop it what r u thinking. Just go n tell sorry n come thats it".

Maan came down n crossed the road to go near the shopping mall. Just then pari came there.

"Hii di.. sorry sorry late ho gayi main"

"Its ok jaldi chalo"

"Ok di chalo"

When they were about to enter shopping mall maan called geet.

"Hello miss"

They both turned back n saw maan. Pari's eyes popped out seeing maan no no the great dancer maan singh khurana there. But geet made annoyed face seeing him.

"Omg.. MSK.. dancer u here??" gasped pari.

"Pari chup kar n shut ur mouth".

"Kya di he is calling us. HE IS CALLING US.. omg omg omg I cant believe".

Maan went near them n smiled.

"Hello sir, I am big fan of u n ur dance is awesome. I saw ur program yesterday in TV telecast its just awesome. I am a big fan of u sir" pari went on n on.

"Thanku miss"

"pari sir"

"nice name"

"thanku sir"

maan smiled n looked at geet n told

"hello miss. Geet I am very sorry for yesterday. I really didnt mean to hurt u. I am really sorry"

"its ok Mr. maan" told geet.

"see u r not laughing that means u r still angry on me" told maan.

"nothing like that I am not angry" told geet.

"that means u didnt felt bad for what I told yesterday" asked maan supressing his laugh.

Geet gave him a angry glare.

"sir why u r saying sorry to di. Do u know her before itself" asked pari.

"Wo kya hain na pari darasal kal main aapki di ko party main mile the aur waha… " when maan was about to tell further, geet cut him n told

"pari I think we r getting late. Chalo we will go for shopping"

"wait di he is saying something let me listen" told pari.

"pari.. "

"arey geetji its ok. U go n do shopping I will tell ur sister what happened yesterday. Pariji ur sister thought that main usse pyaar karta hu aur usse shaadi karna chatha hu" told maan.

"KYA?? " shouted pari.

"ha pariji main tho sirf mazaak kar raha tha" told maan eyeing towards geet.

"di aapne gussa kar diya. U should be lucky" told pari.

Geet dont want to embrass herself more n told to maan.

"suniye maanji main aapse gusse main nahi hu. Main wo baat kal hi bhool gayi thi. Samjhe aap? Ab hume jaana hain. We r getting late".

"ok geetji nice meeting u. ha as u told that u r not angry on me so u r coming for coffee to my dance school after ur shopping. Ok?? pariji aap bhi ayiye" told maan.

"ji nahi maanji muje bohot kaam hain" told geet.

"oh come on di. Sir u dont worry we will come. Wow I am so excited" told pari.


"pariji no need to call me sir, u can call me bhai. Geetji aap muje maan bula sakte ho, if u dont have any problem" told maan n winked at her.

Geet widened her eyes seeing his winking at her. Pari felt overwhelmed with his affection.

"thanku sir.. oops bhai" told pari.

Maan smiled at them n told "will be waiting for u" n left from there.

"wow di how cool he is.. " told pari.

"pari tumko coffee ke liye ha kehne ki kya zaroorat thi" asked geet.

"oh di.. see bhai asked for the first time n how can we say no to him. N moreover he is apologised u" told pari.

"iska yeh matlab nahi hain ki hum coffee ke liye jaana hain" told geet.

"oh plzz di, I just want see his dance school. Plz plz plz plz plz plz di" requested pari making baby face.

"thik hain. First we will go for shopping" told geet n they both left from there.


Geet (st): " hey babaji iss pari ne muje kaha phasa diya. Ab uss maan ke saath coffee. Oh no.. dekha babaji aapne jaate waqt kya kiya.. muje muje chi chi chi babaji". She looked up n made a baby face.

Pari saw her n smiled.

Pari (st): "i cant believe this, di is smiling seeing him n started her complaints to babaji. Wow I am so happy. I am seeing my old di back after so many years. He is the reason for all this. Maan bhai aaj aap hi ki wajah se I am seeing my old di. Babaji my di should be always happy n smiling. Hmm waise we r going for coffee. Let them be alone why me. Ha this is best idea".

Immediately pari msged someone to call her after 30 min. they both went inside n started shopping. Pari selected a baby pink colour knee length dress n matching jewellery for that.

"di mera shopping ho gaya. Chalo hum chalte hain" told pari.

"chalo" told geet.

"i will call taxi" told geet.

"di I think u forgot we should go for coffee" told pari.

Geet (st): "iss pari ko sab kuch yaad kyun hain. Why dont she have short term memory loss only for today".

"thik hain chalo" geet told annoyed.

Pari is laughing inwardedly.

Then pari's mobile rang n she picked the phone.

"Hello.. ok I am coming. Bye".

"di I am sorry my friend coming home. U go there I will go home" told pari.

"par pari he called both of us" told geet.

"di its ok. Main kabhi aaongi. Agar hum dono nahi gaye thhe will feel bad. So u go" told pari.

Geet smiled irritatingly n went to his dance school.

When maan left from there n came back to his cabin, he was very excited. He dont know but he thought this girl is something interesting. N her eyes which are attracting him towards her. He dont know why hw invited her for coffee.

Maan (st): "why did I do? I went there to tell her sorry then why did I invite her for coffee. Oh god again she gets angry. No no her sister is also with her so no problem. Wow man but really she is really looking cute in that salwar suit, green colour suits her a lot. Ufff maan stop it u r going crazy, but kuch tho hain iss ladki mein aaj tak main kisi ladki ke saath aisa nahi kiya. But yesterday relly she is looking awesome in that red, when she is angry her nose became red n her pink lips ufff.. par aaj kal ki ladki they all enjoy n will go for outing with their friends. But she is not like that n her eyes speak volumes. She is like a closed book dont want to open to anyone. Dekhte hain aaj ki mulaakat mein kya hoga".

Thinking about her he started preparing coffee.

After 10 min geet came there, she is feeling nervous for the first time as if she is going to attend some exam. When she entered the dance school, she was mesmerised by its beauty. It is a big hall n there is a huge stage in the middle of the floor. There are different photos on the walls. Some of their perfomance photos, children photos where they performed for the charity cause, but she observed onething that there is no pic of maan with his family. She felt strange. She just stood there like a statue looking at the hall lost. Suddenly a girl came to her n asked

"excuse me".

"Huh!! yes".

"Aap??"

"oh hi I am geet came here to meet maan".

"Oh ok go upstairs. There he will be in his cabin"

"Ok thanku" said geet n left from there.

Geet went upstairs n knocked his cabin door.

"Yes come in" told maan.

Slowly geet opened the door n entered his cabin. Maan saw her n stood up n wished her.

"Hello miss. Geet come"

"Hii" told geet nervously.

Maan saw here n there but didnt find pari," ur sister pari?? "

"ohh she met her friend so they both.." told geet.

"Oh ok no problem"

Both of them fell silent dont know what to talk. After a long silence maan decided to speak.

"Coffee??" asked maan.

"Ya sure" told geet.

Maan served the coffee in two cups n gave one to her.

"Thanku" smiled geet.

"Waise what u do??" asked maan to start the convo.

"I am a software engineer, working for a company" told geet.

"Oh wow thats nice" told maan.

"Thanku. Must say ur dance school is very nice".

"Thanku geet. By the way u r from??" asked maan.

"I am from hoshiyarpur. I spend my childhood there only, due to studies I came to delhi n after dad' s death we didnt go there" told geet.

When she told about her childhood her voice was so chirpy but when she told about her dad's death her voice became so sad as if she has no life. Maan felt bad seeing her sad n to lighten the situation

"waise geet aapko bohot gussa ata hain" told maan.

By this time completed their coffee. Geet told

"ha kabhi kabhi gussa rehna hi acha lagta hain. Agar iss duniya mein rehna hain tho aisa hi acha hain. If we r weak people try to play with us, that I dont like. N I dont want my family to suffer more" told geet thinking something.

Maan is just staring at her n thinking how depth her words are.

Maan (st): "people play with us ka matlab kya hain. Does anything happen to her that she changed like this".

Maan want to change this awkward situation n asked.

"By the way from when u n pinky are friends?"

Geet came out of her trance n told "from childhood" said geet smiling.

Geet checked her watch n told "its getting late maan, I should leave now. Nice talking to u. bye.."

"same here. Bye" told maan.

Geet went down n left from there in a cab.

Geet (st): "what I was talking with him, main kabhi bhi kisi se mere dukh dard ke baare mein nahi kaha, pinky se bhi nahi. Then why him, why I am opening up with him in the first meeting. No geet becareful, they will take advantage of u. so be careful".

Geet closed her eyes n the image of smiling maan came infront of her. She opened her eyes n looked here n there in frustration. After sometime she reached home n went in.

"Geet go n fresh up. I will prepare tea for u" told her mom.

"Nahi maa ujhe kuch nahi chahiye" told geet.

"Beta aapki tabiyat tho thik hain na" asked rano.

"Ha maa thoda sar dard ho raha hain. Mujhe thodi der akeli rehna chathi hu" told geet.

Rano understood that she might be missing her father.

Geet went to her room n closed her door n sat on the floor crying bitterly.

Geet: "kyun dad, kyun chale gaye aap humko chodke. I miss u dad, main itna bhi strong nahi hu ki main apne dard ko andar chupadu. U r my best friend agar mujhe kuch bhi problem ho tho main aapke paas ati thi ab main kiske paas jao. Maa ko pata bhi nhi hain ki uska bhai hi aapko dhoka diya main maa ko kaise batao ki uski bhai ne aapki maut ka kaaran hain. Par maine aapse wada kiya ki main maa se kuch nahi bataongi, par jab wo iss ghar mein ata hain tho muje bohot gussa ata hain. He will get punishment for what he did. Yes he will get I will make sure par uss din tho maa ko pata chalega uske liye I am sorry dad".

Thinking about his dad she dossed off on the floor itself.
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Geet: "kyun dad, kyun chale gaye aap humko chodke. I miss u dad, main itna bhi strong nahi hu ki main apne dard ko andar chupadu. U r my best friend agar mujhe kuch bhi problem ho tho main aapke paas ati thi ab main kiske paas jao. Maa ko pata bhi nhi hain ki uska bhai hi aapko dhoka diya main maa ko kaise batao ki uski bhai ne aapki maut ka kaaran hain. Par maine aapse wada kiya ki main maa se kuch nahi bataongi, par jab wo iss ghar mein ata hain tho muje bohot gussa ata hain. He will get punishment for what he did. Yes he will get I will make sure par uss din tho maa ko pata chalega uske liye I am sorry dad".

Thinking about his dad she dossed off on the floor itself.

After sometime geet's mom rano knocked geet's room door. But she is not at all opening. Rano got worried n started calling her.

Geet beta open the door.

No response.

Here rano panicked. She called pari.

Pari.. pari..

ha maa coming.

Pari came there n saw her mom worried n asked what happened maa.

See geet is not opening the door. I am calling her for long time.

Maa she might be sleeping.

Nahi she was so disturbed when she came from shopping mall.

pari(st): kya hua hoga. Kahi unn dono phir se jagda tho nahi kiya na.

Geet di geet di open the door called pari.

Geet opened her eyes listening to the noises coming from outside. She got up n opened the door.

They both are relieved seeing her fine.

Kya hua geet, tumari tabiyat tho thik hain na asked rano.

Ha maa I am fine bas thoda sa sar dard ho raha hain told geet.

Acha thoda khana khalo sab kuch thik ho jayega told rano.

Nahi maa mujhe khane ka mann nahi hain told geet.

Thoda khalo beta told rano.

Nahi maa plzz.

Thik hain I will bring milk for u told rano n left from there.

Di what happened asked pari.

Kuch nahi pari told geet n sat down on the bed.

Di dont try to lie. Bolo kya hua asked pari again.

Geet hugged pari n told aaj dad ka bohot yaad aaraha hain.

Di plz calm down, dekho agar maa ne aapko aisa dekhi tho wo bohot udas hogi.

Geet broke the hug n nodded. To lighten the situation pari asked

so di how was the meet with maan bhai.

Acha hi tha.

Phir se jagda tho nahi kiya na.

Nahi usse baat karne se mujhe dad ki yaad ati hain. He is same like dad. Same patience aur tho aur maan ne kaha ki mujhe bohot gussa ata hain. Dad bhi yahi kehte the na smiled geet.

For the first time after their dad's death geet's smile reached her eyes. Pari is so happy seeing her happy.

Pari (st): babaji ab mujhe pata chala ki maan bhai is perfect for geet. Uske baare mein bolte hi uski chere par hasi aagayi.

Wow di thats great. Muje pehle se hi pata hain he is so sweet.

Ha really wo bohot acha hain. Maine hi pehle meeting mein usko daantha. I am feeling very bad for that.

Arey di ek baar bhai ko phone karke sorry boliye. Sab kuch thik ho jayega.

Ha yeh idea tho acha hain. I will do the same.

Pari smiled at her n left from there.

Arey mujhe tho maan ka number nahi pata na thought geet.

Ha I will ask pinky.

Juat then rano came there with a glass of milk.

Geet drink it told rano.

Nahi maa plzz.

Nahi u have to drink. Thats it.

Hmmm told geet n took the milk from her n drank it in one go n made a yucky face.

Geet tum thik tho ho na asked rano.

Ha maa I am fine. U dont worry told geet.

Rano sensed the chirpyness in her voice n smiled at her n left from there.

Geet called pinky.

Hello pinky.

Ha geet bolo.

Muje tumse kuch poochna hain.

Poocho na.

Muje maan ka number chahiye.

Pinky is shocked to listen this. Kya tumko bhai ka number chahiye par kyun??

main tumko baad main batati hu pehle muje number do na.

Hmm thik hain 9*********.

thanku pinky. Bye..

arey geet suno told pinky but its too late geet already cut the call.

Yeh ladki bhi na bilkul pagal hain thought pinky n continued her work.

Here geet is thinking to call him or not. She dialled his number many times but cut the call immediately.

Huh!! geet ek sorry tho bolna hain, chalo call him n say sorry n cut the call. Thats it its so simple. Tum bina wajah pareshan ho rahi ho.

Finally finally geet dialled maan's number. On the other side maan is preparing his dinner. When he heard his phone ringing he came out n picked the phone.

Hello..

hello maan asked geet.

Maan recognised her voice n was surprised why did she call him but acted ji aap kaun??

main maan, geet.

Oh geet sorry I dont know its u.

its ok maan.

There is silence on both the sided n again geet spoke wo actually wo.. wo..

Geet aapko jo kehna boliye. Dont be tensed.

Actually maan main aapko sorry kehne ke liye phone kiya. I am sorry for that day maan. I mean I behaved rudely with you.

No no geet its ok. Maine hi kuch aisa kaha aur aapko gussa aagaya. Aapki jagah mein koi aur hota tho waise hi react karenge. So dont be sorry.

Thanku maan I am so relieved.

Ohh.. aap yeh kehne ke liye phone kiya. Aap bhi na geet. Waise aapka dinner ho gaya.

Nahi maan I am not hungry.

U didnt had dinner. It is not good for health geet.

Maa gave me milk. U know its so yucky.

Acha kiya aapki maa ne.

hmm aap bhi maa ke saath. Waise aapna dinner hogaya?

Nahi I am preparing dinner.

Ohh thats cool. Aapko cooking ata hain.

Ji ha I know, dont tell me that u dont know cooking.

Geet made a baby face n told I dont know cooking.

Geet dont lie ok.

Maan I am not lying really I dont know. Sachi promise.

Oh ok fine n starting laughing loud.

Why u r laughing asked geet angrily.

Nahi nahi actually I am imagining when u r cooking for first time then what will be the condition of the kitchen, every where dal n flour on ur face and..

bas bas aise kaise ho sakte hain, I know how to prepare coffee, tea n magii too.

OMG.. u know how to prepare those items, great geet, great.

Aap mera mazaak uda rahe ho. Ok bye.

Arey arey geet I am sorry na. Wait wait one minute.

Kya hua ?

I will go to kitchen n talk.

Oh ok.. waise what r u preparing.

Roti n palak paneer.

Wow.. my favorite.

Oh really. Nice.

They both talked for long time. Maan completed his cooking n even completed his dinner but the call didnt end.

After sometime maan heard her regular breathing n smiled at himself.

She slept. Waise yeh itna bhi gusse wali nahi hain jo bahar se dikhti hain. Good night geet told maan but didnt cut the call.

He too slept with a smile on his face. Next morning maan got up at 6'o clock n smiled feeling very relaxed.

Maan: man this is one of the best night in my life. This girl I am falling over n over again with her antics. 1st I thought she is gussa types n next day she was something different. She has some pain inside but trying to be normal. To overcome that pain she became like this. May be she is a closed book for others but for me she is a open book, I can read her eyes easily. Upto now I talked with so many girls but I never felt before like this. There is some unknown bond between us. Jab main kal geet se baat ki tab muje laga how bubbly n innocent she is? Par aisa kya hua ki she acting. Strange but I have to know. This is the first I am showing interest on some girl but she is special. She stole my heart in the first meeting itself.

Just he noticed that his mobile is still on.

Oops what if she listened to me, man u r so dead today.

He took his mobile n heard her even breathing. A smile crept on his lips n said a perfect start.

Just then geet got up n stretched her hands n shouted from her room maa coffee.

Maan smiled hearing her sleepy voice n told good morning geet.

Geet looked here n there but no one is there.

Geet here on the phone told maan as if he is watching her.

Maan aap?? oh I slept while talking with u na. Good morning maan.

Geet u told u know how to prepare coffee then why u r asking ur maa.

Haa how can I do so many works I have to get ready for office na.

Ohhh ok ok.. u get ready, we will talk later. Bye.

Bye maan.

Geet cut the call n smiled.

Omg.. I am on call for whole night. Ufff tum pagal ho gayi ho geet.

Geet got up n took shower n got ready. She went downstairs smiling.

Rano saw her n felt very happy seeing her daughter smiling.

Kya hua geet tum itne khush ho asked rano.

Geet hugged her from back n told nothing maa bas aise hi.

Acha ?? hamesha aise haste rehna. Kisi ka nasar na lage.

Maa mera coffee.

Ha baba I am preparing.

Maa I want to learn cooking told geet.

Rano was shocked to listen this kya?? tum aur cooking?? hey babaji aaj kya hogaya meri beti ko. Geet tumari tabiyat tho theek hain na.

Very funny maa. I want to learn thats it told geet stubbornly.

Thik hain thik hain.

Maa not now ab muje office jaana hain. Sham ko.

Muje pata hain, tum aur cooking are two opposite poles.

Aisa kuch bhi nahi hain. I will prepare u see.

Thik hain hum bhi dekhte hain.

Waise hamari maha rani kaha hain.

Ufff wo bi tak so rahi hain.

Ye ladki bhi na told geet n went to wake up pari.

Pari pari get up.

No response.

Pari utho.

Pari strried a little n told sone do na di.

Oye college nahi jaana hain kya??

bus 5 min di.

Only 5 min. ok??

ok di bye. U go office.

Geet left from there smilingly. Rano n geet had breakfast n geet left to office bidding good bye to her maa.

Rano is very happy seeing her bubbly n smiling geet back.

Rano: hey babaji, meri bachi hamesha khush rahe. Uski papa ki death ke baad pehli baar aaj wo has rahi hain. Who ever might be the reason. They should be happy. Bas geet ki shaadi ho jaye, wo apni family ke saath khush rahe.

Just then pari came there n told maa do u wanna know who is the reason for this?

Ha beta kaun?

Nahi nahi if I tell u then mazaa nahi ayega. U have to meet him.

Kab??

maa u r too much just wait.

Hmmm ok.. told rano.

With this pari got ready for the college n left. The whole day was so peaceful for both geet, pari, maa n maan. Here maan is thinking about geet n geet is thinking about maan.


Precap: maan imagining geet everywhere… 😆😆

maan n geet meet again. 😊

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