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Posted: 19 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: himali_kokate

Tujhe mein base hum...
Tere dil ki awaaaz bankar..
Aur tu hame hi..
Unsuna kardein...

i loved these lines especially..... 👏 👏 👏

Aww, glad you did!! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
#12

Thank you so much! 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
mindblowing 😆
ab tho aisa he lagtha hai....shiv jaisa bada moorakh is brahmaand mein nahin hai...ek baar galthi ke.....teek hai..baar baar galthiyan karthe rahoge tho tumhara kya hoga..shivaaaaaaaaa 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
i thought this cud be nice too 👏

I aM Lost in Translation now 😆 😕 .. english plxxx .. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: vivaviva

mindblowing 😆
ab tho aisa he lagtha hai....shiv jaisa bada moorakh is brahmaand mein nahin hai...ek baar galthi ke.....teek hai..baar baar galthiyan karthe rahoge tho tumhara kya hoga..shivaaaaaaaaa 😆 😆

Viva ji tere Shiv ko kya hoga re! I pity him...Gauri neh usko pagal kar dega!😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
#16

😆😆

phewwwwwwwwwwwww! so very true..

👏 👏 👏

lady, you know how to play with words, and you r actually pretty good at it.. 😳

Edited by simplyvivacious - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: sareeta

Aye, Maanush,
Dil diya ek tujhe..
Mehsoos karne liye...
Ehsaason ko samajhen ke liye...
Samajhna to door,
Chala tu unhe mitaane..

Rishte banaye..
Nibhaane ke liye...
Aur tu chala...
Unhe mitaane ke liye...

Saathi diya,
Saath chalne ke liye...
Saath nibhaane ke liye..
Aur tu chale , akele...aage
Use peeche chod ke...

Tujhe mein base hum...
Tere dil ki awaaaz bankar..
Aur tu hame hi..
Unsuna kardein...

Mashtishq diya tujhe...
Sochne ke liye..
Par istemaal karetu...
Gande ghinaune ...
Plans banane ke liye

Bhatkak gaya hai tu...
Aye moorakh....
Nasamjhi mein...
Banata jaaye plans tu....

Jaal bichaaye tu..
Aur usme phasta jaaye tu..

Tu bhi kya jaane...
Kisse panga le raha hai tu...
Zor ka Jhatka,
Dheere se kaise lage...
Ab jaanega tu...

Tu plans banaata ja...
Bigaadenge unhe hum...
Jaale bichaata ja...
Phasaayenge tujhe hum...

Aise hi na chodenge
Tujhe hum,
Pyaar ki dariya mein..
Dubo dubo ke...
Maarenge tujhe hum...

Aakhir, is brahmaand ke..
Shristikarta hai hum...
Is Rangmanch si duniya..
Ke Sootradhaar hai Hum...

-Sareeta

- Bhagwaaan ji ki awaaz, shiv ke liye...😆

Kaash kisi din aapke awaaz shiv ko sunayi deti... 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
xcllnt👏
hpefully shiv wil listen 2 bhagwan 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
sareeta ji ur posts are too good... ur kavithas are too good... it reminds me of Late. Saratchandra Chattopadhyay who used to write realistic poems like u do.. simpleness emanates from each word and work of urs... the way u portray each and every character is just amazing.. i must confess that i am running short of words to praise u...
😊

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