Tu Banaye, Hum Bigaade...

Aye, Maanush,
Dil diya ek tujhe..
Mehsoos karne liye...
Ehsaason ko samajhen ke liye...
Samajhna to door,
Chala tu unhe mitaane..

Rishte banaye..
Nibhaane ke liye...
Aur tu chala...
Unhe mitaane ke liye...

Saathi diya,
Saath chalne ke liye...
Saath nibhaane ke liye..
Aur tu chale , akele...aage
Use peeche chod ke...

Tujhe mein base hum...
Tere dil ki awaaaz bankar..
Aur tu hame hi..
Unsuna kardein...

Mashtishq diya tujhe...
Sochne ke liye..
Par istemaal karetu...
Gande ghinaune ...
Plans banane ke liye

Bhatkak gaya hai tu...
Aye moorakh....
Nasamjhi mein...
Banata jaaye plans tu....

Jaal bichaaye tu..
Aur usme phasta jaaye tu..

Tu bhi kya jaane...
Kisse panga le raha hai tu...
Zor ka Jhatka,
Dheere se kaise lage...
Ab jaanega tu...

Tu plans banaata ja...
Bigaadenge unhe hum...
Jaale bichaata ja...
Phasaayenge tujhe hum...

Aise hi na chodenge
Tujhe hum,
Pyaar ki dariya mein..
Dubo dubo ke...
Maarenge tujhe hum...

Aakhir, is brahmaand ke..
Shristikarta hai hum...
Is Rangmanch si duniya..
Ke Sootradhaar hai Hum...

-Sareeta

- Bhagwaaan ji ki awaaz, shiv ke liye...😆

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too good👏 👏 and it goes perfect for shiv

Sareeta...I bow to u today 😊 Excellent !!!!!
A very simple thought of live and let live happily in peace and in harmony...put in wonderful words...chalo with these happy thoughts after reading ur poem..me will go to bed..good nite 👏

Wow, really nice, u r awesome with your words, yeah Shivji thoda sunaye ji.

sareeta marvellous,fantastic,excellent,perfecto..i can go on.. 👏 👏

bhagwan bhi ab sochne laga ki isse murak ka kya karein..

love your thoughts about wat bhagwan sochraha hein shiv ke liye..

love this bit.."bhathak gaya tu aye moorakh na samjhi mein banata jaaye plans tu.'.yeah shiv is a stupid fool and he will not know wat had hit him when his plan will backfire and devika and gauri are there to look after that..

this one i had a good laugh and thanks to you sareeta..
"aise hina chodenge tujhe hum pyaar ki dariya mein dubo dubo ke marenge tujhe hum"..that was too good.. 👏 👏

i think hum sab tayeyar hein usse pyar ke dariya mein dubonein ke liye..kuch din aur devdas zaroor banega gauri ke pyar mein... 😆

just love wat you penned down about shiv.. 😃

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

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too good👏 👏 and it goes perfect for shiv

Aww, thank you so much!!! 😊

Originally posted by: hamsee

Sareeta...I bow to u today 😊 Excellent !!!!!
A very simple thought of live and let live happily in peace and in harmony...put in wonderful words...chalo with these happy thoughts after reading ur poem..me will go to bed..good nite 👏

Awww, Hamsee, what do I say.... Thank you so much yaar!! Main aur kya kahoon , samajh nahin aa raha, you have blessed with your kind words! I bow down , deeply humbled!! 😊

Originally posted by: queenkumar

Wow, really nice, u r awesome with your words, yeah Shivji thoda sunaye ji.

Awww, thank you so much Di! 😳

Originally posted by: 3 angels

sareeta marvellous,fantastic,excellent,perfecto..i can go on.. 👏 👏

bhagwan bhi ab sochne laga ki isse murak ka kya karein..

love your thoughts about wat bhagwan sochraha hein shiv ke liye..

love this bit.."bhathak gaya tu aye moorakh na samjhi mein banata jaaye plans tu.'.yeah shiv is a stupid fool and he will not know wat had hit him when his plan will backfire and devika and gauri are there to look after that..

this one i had a good laugh and thanks to you sareeta..
"aise hina chodenge tujhe hum pyaar ki dariya mein dubo dubo ke marenge tujhe hum"..that was too good.. 👏 👏

i think hum sab tayeyar hein usse pyar ke dariya mein dubonein ke liye..kuch din aur devdas zaroor banega gauri ke pyar mein... 😆

just love wat you penned down about shiv.. 😃

Oh Khyaatee, you leave me speechless.. ab main kya boloon... aapko itna pasand aaya, mujhe bahut khushi hui... I jus penned these yday night while takinga 10 min break... and aaj subah post kiya....

Bas lines aise dimaag mein aa gaye.. never expected ki logon ko itna pasand aayega!!

Thanks soooo much yaar for the kind words! It feels so wondedrful to be part of this forum and meet such wonderful ppl and share thoughts too!😊

Tujhe mein base hum...
Tere dil ki awaaaz bankar..
Aur tu hame hi..
Unsuna kardein...

i loved these lines especially..... 👏 👏 👏