||AsadZoya FF||Right Kinda Wrong-Ch5 pg13 31/3/13

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi guys I'm writing a FF on Asad Zoya, the title is from one of my favourite songs😳 there's some wonderful writers in this forum and I don't think I'll be as good as them but I hope you guys like it :D I wrote it about a week ago but posting it now :P

Zoya took a deep breath and got out the car, after a whole year she was back. Back to show him she was the total opposite of what he thought of her, he didn't understand that his words cut her deeply why would he understand? he has no heart. She reached to the door ringing the doorbell and waited, the door opened slowly looking up she stopped in her tracks it was him.

Asad heard a knock at the door, "Asad beta could you get that please my hands aren't free at the moment" Asad sighed and went over to the door, suddenly he felt something as if something was tightening inside him he hadn't felt like this since he last saw her.. He opened the door and froze, she was there. She looked up and their eyes locked, he examined her face she still looked the same beautiful Zoya as always.. but she had lost that spark in her eyes and the usual smiley face been replaced with a blank face, he gulped and thought " I am to blame for her state"

Zoya looked into his eyes, and she felt a stinging pain and she remembered his cutting words "Why did you enter our lives, you have brought us nothing but pain" she remembered his expressions when saying this, it was full of hatred. Her pain suddenly turned into anger. "Hello Zoya" he murmured, just on cue Phupphi came down the stairs and gasped "Zoya!?" Zoya stepped in and glared at Mr Khan as she walked past him and went over to Phupphi who hugged her tightly, "Oh my god Zoya, after so long!! Where did you go? Why did you leave me?" Pupphi's eyes brimmed with tears, "Phupphi I..I'm" a tear escaped from her eye it felt so good seeing Phupphi after a year. She turned around to look at Mr Khan and noticed that he looked at her Intently. She turned her back to Mr Khan and faced Phupphi beaming. "I'm back Phupphi"

That's Chapter 1 done :) I know I know very bad😆 do leave your likes and comments and sorry if I've made any mistakes.



Index:
Chapter 1: page 1
Chapter 2: page 3
Chapter 3: page 6
Chapter 4: page 10
Chapter 5: page 13
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ye zulm hai, such a small post...😡
i want to know more soon, so you need to update soon n make it a longer one.
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I liked it ...post more soon
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Wow its just amazing..do pm me
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update soon!!! and plzz pm me ~puppy dog face~ 😆
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really really nice plzz update soon!!!
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well done please pm me when you update!!1
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Thank you guys :) once I get more readers I will update :)
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What the hell 😡
As soon as it was getting good you stop.
please tell me you will continue this it is very interesting and please pm me when you do update.
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I love it!!! Someone should teach Asad a lesson!!! He broke Zoya's heart!! :( Well good thing she came back and this time she'll be able to really make him squirm for his words. Please PM me for next chapter!! :)

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