||AsadZoya FF||Right Kinda Wrong-Ch5 pg13 31/3/13

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scarletgirl

@scarletgirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

hey loved it...i like this zoya v much i think whn she ignores more Asad will realise how much he misses her...gr8 work do update soon

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kandygrover

@kandygrover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Loved the update. My bday is coming and i have bern dropping hints on my whole family for a mk watch.

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Soumya

@Ceon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Lvly1. Do updt sn nd PM me if ew cn

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Inquisitive_mind

@HmmBrazen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Well so sorry for not commenting for earlier part as you see my ASSESSMENTS🤢 are going to start from 16 and go on till 25 am afraid i will be irregular for giving comments.

Now coming to your FF its really fab. wow Zoya behaving rude towards Asad that's what i wanna see in the serial for her 2 stand up to him at least once. So am gonna applaud you for that👏.

As you have narrated that Zoya is a secretary why don't you introduce her handsome, dynamic & powerful boss who considers her a friend and confidante. It will be good to see a super jealous Asad.

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Faatimah

@starsanjana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

best part was the last paragraph!!!!

Zoya took off the burgundy coloured sari and tried on the dark red one, standing in front of the mirror she examined it, it definitely looked much better on her than the other one let me get Najma's opinion on it, she opened the cubicle door she couldn't see Najma or Phupphi anywhere, "Najma where ar.." She stopped in her tracks, right in front of her was Mr Khan, who was literally was staring at her, Zoya looked down and blushed furiously, "uh sorry Mr Khan I didn't think you would be here" "no its ok, I was um just going." He walked off to the exit. She heard Najma behind her and turned to her "Zoya you look lovely in this sari Mashallah, it really suits you buy it!" "Thanks Najma" she smiled and went back into the changing rooms. She shut the door and looked in the mirror putting her hand on her chest she thought to herself woah what's happening to me why is my heart beating so fast she broke of her thoughts and changed back, she bought the sari and the women left the store."

amazing...would love to read the next part