||AsadZoya FF||Right Kinda Wrong-Ch5 pg13 31/3/13 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

A hanger. A cliff hanger😳🥺

You need to update this soon. An as for this chapter. I loved it to the core.

Please update soon and please PM me when you do *puppy face*😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing start. great work. do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A very different and intresting start...waiting for the next part update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz continue yar i just loved it.nd pm me😉 plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continue fasttt. And hah, little long please or i'll craiii xD
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you guysss :D will update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello guys :D back with a update and its abit longer😆 hope you guys like it, idk if it makes sense at all😆

Phupphi and Zoya sat on the sofa talking while Asad sat opposite doing his work, but he coud not concentrate on his work at all.." Zoya I'm extremely happy your back, so tell me what did you get up to for a whole year" Zoya smiled "Well for a whole year I had been working full time as a personal secretary, it was a really good pay and I got a lot of experience from it" Phupphi looked her amusingly " Wow you worked.. I thought you said you wouldn't ever work" Zoya looked over at Asad who was already looking her way " I wanted to show certain people that I am serious about life and it isn't all about fun for me and that I'm not a good for nothing" Asad looked down with a guilty look on his face, Phupphi smiled at her " I think your perfect the way your are beta working or not." Zoya beamed at her "Phupphi you can put a smile on my face always"


Asad listened to their conversation, he couldn't believe his ears Zoya saying all this.. She almost sounded like him he closed his eyes, trying to block out the events of the previous year he was extremely regretful for whatever he said he didn't mean it. Ammi and Zoya made some more general conversation then Ammi asked her, "so what brought you back to bhopal?" Zoya once again looked at him but this time more bitterly " well I came back to sort out unfinished business" Asad thought "unfinished business? Surely this couldn't be about what happened last year.. "Phupphi when does Najma finish college?" "She finishes in about a hour, we can catch up while we wait for her to come" Asad saw Zoya grimace " Actually Phupphi I have a appointment.. There's some apartments near by that are on rent I'm going to take a look at them." Ammi looked horrified "what?! No way are you going to be staying anywhere else! What's wrong with this house?" "No Phupphi its not that, I just wanted to give you guys some space without any trouble" Phuphi looked shocked "Oh Zoya beta you know that your no trouble at all" " But Phupphi.." A gorgeous smell wafted through the air "Oh no I forgot I had put something in the oven let me check beta, you stay right here" Asad looked over to Zoya and took a deep breath " Look Zoya there's no need for you to stay in a apartment you can st.." Zoya got up.

Zoya felt so much anger inside her, " just listen to him, speaking this nicely just doesn't look good on him" she stood up, Asad also got up she glared at him and hissed "Oh really Mr Khan, that's not what you were trying to imply the last time we spoke, I mean YOU spoke to me" Asad looked shocked and was about to say something but Zoya sat back on the sofa totally ignoring him, she felt proud of herself "way to go Zoya give the jerk a taste of his own medicine" a small smile came across her lips. Phupphi returned and sat next to Zoya, "Look Zoya I don't want no If's or But's I want you hear in front of my eyes your staying here its final" Zoya sighed and thought to herself " I knew this was a bad idea, I should have just rented a apartment out then go to visit her, well if she's insisting so much.." "Ok Phupphi but only on one condition", Phupphi looked confused "what condition??" "Phupphi I will pay rent monthly" Phupphi's face looked beyond appalled, Asad cut in " What no way Zoya you don't need to pay rent" Zoya looked at him " I don't have to Mr Khan but I want to" " Zoya don't make things difficult, I will not take rent from you" "No Phupphi you definetly won't since this is Mr Khan's house I'll be paying him monthly" Asad and Phupphi frowned, " Zoya you are beyond impossible please go get your stuff together" Zoya gave a smile and headed to the door and then her car and opened the boot grabbing her suitcases she heard someone behind her and turned around her banging straight into Mr Khan.

"Asad go help her please" Ammi said heading back into the kitchen, he headed out to the driveway quietly and went over to Zoya she turned around and walked straight into him, they were so close to each other he almost felt her breath on his neck she slowly looked up and their eyes met and he could have sworn he felt his heart melt, her hair was flying all over her face and he had the strongest urge to touch it just once, he lifted his hand up but then he stopped himself "Asad What the heck are you doing stop yourself, stay away from her." He took a step back and coughed "Ammi had asked me to help take your things in" reaching for her suitcase, Zoya shot her hand out and grabbed it herself walking off she turned around " I'm very capable of doing my own work I don't need your help at all" Asad felt as if someone had given him a tight slap across the face and felt himself getting angry " how the hell can she treat and talk to me like that, its not done" he walked into the house after her, face looking furious.

Precap: Asad Najma Ammi and Zoya out shopping for Najma's birthday. Asad gets lost into the womens section at the mall 😆

that's it for now, No PM's this time round but if you want PM's in the future send me a request :) do leave ur likes/comments :D

Edited by -ScarletRose- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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updated above😳 I think i might just send PM's now😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful indeed! Please update soon.

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