ASYA OS- Always Together

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG..!! i cant believe i m actually writing this. the most unromantic girl is writing a love story...this may be the worst u must hv read but please read it...and bear it..
ignore mistakes..i m not good at writing

so here it it..:-
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ALWAYS TOGETHER - OS
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Asad ahmed khan - hard like a stone from outside with a caring heart inside. possessive for family , agressive to the enemies. He one different and strange man.



Zoya farooqui'S pov -


Hey i m zoya , i live in the house of the most strange but the hottest man on this planet...he is tooo sexy..jahapanah six pack..

i... o noo...did i just said that..!!! no...he is very rude , i hate him ...yes i do hate him , he always hurt me and then again come to me and shows the concern and then again leave me alone...:( y Mr. khan.

but yes i still cant stay away from him ...he always stays with me and protect me when i m in a problem. till he is there no one can hurt me...so what if others cant..!! he hurt me a lot...and i hate him for that...!

NO ONE'S POV-

NAJMA and zoya were best friends , no matter how much asad want his little sister to stay away from miss. newyork .
ASAD dont understand sometimes , why do Najma and Ammi loves this messy girl so much. he dont like her at all.

BUT then coz of them asad have to try and resist her presence around himself and in his house too...!
but cant she behave like a guest...anyways..., asad want to get busy in his work.

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Few weeks later

It was after the whole akram thing that asad was feeling gulty about thinking wrong about zoya and because of him zoya was so hurt and injured , not only thr bruises on her body but heart too...
he promised himself then to take full care of her and would get her back to normal , no matter what he have to do ..!

It was late in the night he heard the noise from zoya's room which was just adjecent to his.
he always use to keep on checking weather she is fine or not.
he ran to her room and saw zoya fell on the floor and she was murmering something in half unconcious stage,
it ripped his heart apart,
he again felt the guilt of his sin , yes..!! he thought coz of him only she is in pain.
he ran and lifted her in his arms and then put her on the bed.

In that process she woke up. he put his palm on her cheeks and ask her if she is fine ...
she was having tears in her eyes..her eyes were blood red from the pain and fear of what akram could have done to her .
she was scared ..
"asad...ahhh..." she said in pain...
asad hold her hands tightly to support her and let the pain go away from her ..
she still didnt reacted..she was scared..the bruises were deep..not on body but on her heart...
"hold me close asad...i want to forget him ...his touch on my body...its disgusting...please.."

ASAD'S pov.

I was angry...i felt like killling that creapy bast**d akram...how dare he..!!! he touch my Zoya...how could he..!!
i would not leave him. he have to pay back..

NOone's pov.

asad broght zoya close and hugged her tightly...holding close to himself..claming her...protecting her from that man's thoughts...
he broke the hug after like ages ad looked directly into her eyes...

then they were lost...
yes they realised ...there was something more then hatred...togetherness...the way the supported each other..!
zoya came out from numbness and the tears started flowing from her eyes...!!

"mr. khan...**sobs**.."
asad put finger on her lips and then he came closer to her cheeks...he sucked the tears on her cheeks away and placed a soft kiss there...

zoya blushed for the first time...and she knew...they didnt hated each other...

it was a new start..!!

start of Asad and Zoya..

yes...opposites do attract..!!...they proved it...!

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how was it...?😕
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Edited by --Kriti-- - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it..asya together always..is it ur first os?do keep writing..
Edited by TRULYNANDINI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haaiyee Haaiyee Haaiyee!!

How romantic. 😳
Muaahh!! Soo cutoo!! 😳

Likhtii jaaoo Kriti, sooo nicoo!! 😳 👏 👏
Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 12 years ago
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That was super cute Kriti di! :) I so wanted such a scene after the 'Akram' track in the show!
Thanks for fulfilling ny unsaid wish! :) :P
Just loved how Asad made her feel better
Over all, it was superb! :)
Keep writing! :D
Edited by sweetypie_16 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww so romantic os😃
it was awesome kriti ,u should write more like this...
beautifully written
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res😛
unres...
Omg..kritzz amazingg...i can actuallly imagine asad caring soo much..man tooo cute..!! Do write more..! [<:D>]
Edited by nits_viratholic - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wowww...!!! I cant believe u all loved it ...
U thought it would be a disaster
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kitna cute n so romantic❤️ totally loved it kriti👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's sho cuteee, continue writing :)
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Originally posted by: TRULYNANDINI

Loved it..asya together always..is it ur first os?do keep writing..



yes its my first...
i would try..i just be busy with work 😭

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