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vanilla.ice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Amazing OS elena (sorry for the late comment)
Iv never seen ZGH but it seems reslly interesting
I loved the imagery you created, it was just beauitful
And the whole OS just flowed really well
If i was to choose between ATM and ZGH i wouldnt know which one to choose as i like them both, so honestly i wouldnt mind reading either one of them:)
Thanx for the pm

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Shabana0786

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Very Interesting & Different Concept!..

Is there a Continuation??..

Thanks For the Pm..

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Geminimanna

@Geminimanna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Hi Elenor,

Wow beautiful as always. You surely know how to play with words.I am a muslim so I like the adaptation of Manvi and Viraat's characters as Mannal and Virat Akhter.

Your stories always remind me of one of my favorite writers " Farhat Ishtiaq". Both of you have certain similarities of your writing style as well as characters portrayal.

I am also a fan of ZGH. 😆

As for Mahnoor I like her dilemma of comparing two important men of her life , one who is suppose to love and support her unconditionally and the other one who claims to do so. She is judging the other one by the deeds of the first one. Very natural for a daughter who is despised by her own father.

Sorry for a long comment but whenever you continue any of your work plz do PM me.I shall be more than obliged.

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Eleanor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Geminimanna
Hi Elenor,
Wow beautiful as always. You surely know how to play with words.I am a muslim so I like the adaptation of Manvi and Viraat's characters as Mannal and Virat Akhter.
Your stories always remind me of one of my favorite writers " Farhat Ishtiaq". Both of you have certain similarities of your writing style as well as characters portrayal.
I am also a fan of ZGH. 😆
As for Mahnoor I like her dilemma of comparing two important men of her life , one who is suppose to love and support her unconditionally and the other one who claims to do so. She is judging the other one by the deeds of the first one. Very natural for a daughter who is despised by her own father.
Sorry for a long comment but whenever you continue any of your work plz do PM me.I shall be more than obliged.

Thank you for your wonderful words and for analysing the character. Yes, this story will show how she deals with a disappointed past and a hopeful future. No worries, long comments are appreciated 😃

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Eleanor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

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avika

@avika26

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

sorry kaan pakdke sorry for unresing the post so late..
yaar wat to say...it was just phenomenal...u blew me away with dis update...
i read it thrice till now and still feeling like to read it once more...
it was so magical feeling like watching it alive...
one doubt as per foundation it seems that virman didn't have good start??/
so i am understanding manal point of view...
but confused in virat pov , i mean he was playboy???
den wat made him fall for her...??
feeling like to watch serial but unlucky me can't...
but hopes are high from this ff...
and i know u will disappoint me...
continue soon...
thanksd for pm...😊😛😉

Edited by avika26 - 12 years ago