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misaki

@misaki

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

as always.. enjoyed readin it!...😊!...

loved the way you brought out a girls fear ..her insecurity.. the way she questions herself.. how she could ever be so lucky?.. the struggle between her heart and her brain!..the heart craves .. yearns for Mohabbat!.. to feel "his" love!.. yet when he offers it to her.. her brain refuses to believe that she could be so fortunate!..

its really sad that she cant bring herself to believe that a girl could get everything that they ever prayed for.. hoped for!..

when she finally ...wants to accept the truth..the sight in front of her... her DAD..the same man who married.. who vowed to ALWAYS love her MOM!.. sitting there.. with "another" or "the other" woman.. her reality (wat she sees to be real).. sets in!.. and "the struggle" continues...

loved it elena!.. so much!..

so real.. and so v.true!... its amazin hw u alws to say way more than u actually say.. through ur writng!..👏

thank you fro the pm😊

abt the other story.. its upto you wtr or not u wanna do a new story..i alws enjoy readin ur evry work.. but im dying to read the other updates.. TTOML and venice!.. hope i can read them soon.. 😊

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Superb OS again!!
Love ur writing, it's always a pleasure to read ur work!!
Ur just an amazing writer!!!
Love the way u developed the characters!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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Niki

@luvzindagi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Hey Elena, 😊
Good to read your work after so long...
Its a really nice OS...⭐️ and if you are palnning to continue this I would love to read more
It will interesting to know Maanvi's reluctance towards love and how Viraat's love change it...
And what was that about bet or friendship? I didn't get it clearly...😳
Thanks for the PM
And please continue this if you can😊

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

I am speechless seriously ur too gud n i wud actually want u to continue it quickly plz thanx a lot for the pm i really luv the name too mahnoor - i dnt kno y bt its really nice 😊

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Geminimanna

@Geminimanna

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Hi,
What a fantastic OS. You are a superb writer and the way you described Manvi's feelings is outstanding.
Thanx for such a heart touching piece of fiction.

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avika

@avika26

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ElenaElenor

<font color="#660000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hey, ZGH features on Humtv- since I live in the UK and don't have Humtv as I live away in Uni- I catch up on it on youtube. Here is the link to the title song of ZGH:</font>
<font color="#660000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GKuPcwtDY6M</font>

thanks 4 info. .
U r continuing dis?

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SongsOf_Silence

@SongsOf_Silence

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ElenaElenor

Thank you for your comment Hiba. Yes, I know- no one can take their place. Zaroon -sigh- They have a role of their own- I was hoping to adapt this to a more 'Virman' version if I continue it. Ah if only Pakistani dramas had a little boldness to show us some scenes like this but not complaining- love their dramas and storylines... I can just add my imagination in some of the scenes (; I don't have any stories on Zaroon and Kashaf- only write for Virman. Hope that IF starts ZGH forum some day.

Yeahh I think adapting these two to a more VirMan version would help alot... Give them more of a VirMan touch in the way they talk and think about each other.. VirMan have their own style that way.. And yeah btw going by some of the dialogues.. you're making these two as a Muslim couple and not Hindu? And Maanvi's name is actually Manaal?

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avika

@avika26

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

I was busy so not read humsafar last chap can u give me link?
Pls wanna read it

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ndp102

@ndp102

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

I haven't seen the serial this OS is suppose to be based off of but I must say the OS was fantastic!!! I really do hope you make a SS out of it!! Also just out of curiosity, I noticed all your work is based on VirMan but it seems like you do watch other shows other than EHMMBH...what was it about VirMan that inspired you to write fiction on them? You don't have to answer if you don't want to lol...I was just wondering 😊

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nikki1211

@nikki1211

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

thanks for the pm...firstly let me start with an apology...my exams are on and was really busy...hence caught up to my pms really late as well...wat can i say abt mahnoor...ahhh...it was an utter treat to read...loved loved every bit of it...the characterisation , the imagery , flow of words ...it was all awesome...you are brilliantly talented...hats off...

also i love the name mahnoor...it has a beautiful ring to it...i think i hav mentioned this to you before bt i love the way you create virat nd maanvi...they never seem other worldly...such is your talent that you always manage to make your characters real...i havnt watched ZGH...bt the premise does seem to be very interesting...hope you continue this...beautiful beautiful work...😊

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