My First FF: Tararumpum Part 27 Page 72 - Page 41

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Posted: 12 years ago
MAAN TOH FULL ROMENTIC MOOD ME APNI MISHTY KO HASIL KAR HE LEGA... N PRECAP ME WHAT MAAN IS UPTO WITH NEXT LUV FUNDA...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 25 sach mein tune hi likha hain na mishu?????????? 😕
no no ... aisa na soch yeh kuch jayada HOT ho gaya 😛 main tho iss liye puch rahi thi bcz tere characteristics k sath aisa updts jata nahi hain na 😆
chalo... end mein dream sequence bana diya 😒 babaji yeh ladki itna ulti dimagh wali kyun hain 😡 not talking abt GEET... main tho writer ki baat kar rahi thi 🤪
chalo finally a 👍🏼 & lots of 👏 from me for u 😳 kya kare... dosti kiya hain... upar se updt mere name pe dedicated hain... unn sabke khatir de hi diya 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 26...
tere ff ka MAAN bilkul teri jaisa... naughty aur badmash 😆 and I love him so much for this 😉
aur yeh GEET ki drooling... hayyee no one can escape MSK's charm ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
aaj bhi kiss nahi hua 😔 lekin jitna bhi hua I like it ahhaannn 😛
aur MAAN ne jo bhi kaha GEET se... uff agar woh aise meethi meethi baatein karega na... tho GEET ka dil garden garden hone mein jayada time nahi lagega 🤪
chal jaldi se nxt updt dena... me WAITING 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
hawww yh geet kitna jhoot bolti hain very bad 😭 bolti hain dadima jo apki pasand wohi meri dadima maan ko itna pyaar krti hain aur yh geet huh jhooti lo ji dev n meera ki wedding may jo dresses n jewellary geet pehendi wo b khurana's dege aise to bechara bht jaldi kangal hojaeyge iski aur dadima ki choice ek hain then ise MAAN q nhi pasand hain ❓ is mistery ko jaldi solve kro ji kia mayne sahi read kia hain geet Jealouse horhi hain n she said mera maan kuch hazam nhi hua 😆 control wo b MAAN ko samne dekh k na na impossible 😉 haan agar lock agar ab thek b hone wala hoga m sure maan thek nhi hone dega NAUGHTY MAAN 😉 haan yh geet bilkil alag hain ek hi piece hain yh is puri duniya may jo itne ache lardke k sath aisa krti hain see he is so nice n understanding magar yh iidot ufff
AWESOMEEE UPDATEEE HAYEEE INNE MAST MOMENTS THE MAANEET K BEACH MUAHHH JALDI DENA NEXT UPDATE AUR HAN GEET KO ZIADA GUDGUDI KRVANA N TOKEN B KAMAL KA HONA CHAHIYH LIKE MAAN 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan not only loves her but understands her as well...

lovely...
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally finally finally
me here 😆
welcome after like ageses seems like am here 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohkiz cuming to the update
hehehe
lovely loved the way Maan becoming naughty or shall i say Geet becoming daring
LoLz Maan k kamre main sneak in wo bhi chori chori
waah bhai waah
kya himatt hai
aoww loved Maan's touchy touchy words and his love for Geet
and than also the precap
haielaaa!!!!!!!!
aisa kya ho ra hai 😳
zaraaa taaka jhaaki kar k aaye 😆
update soon now baby 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Part 27

At 9:00 pm Handa Haveli Geet was sleeping peacefully at her room. He came near her and blew air at her face. A smile crept on her face. He caresses her face side. She hold his hand and use as pillow. He huskily whisper "Geet Jaan its morning. Open ur eyes. Look what a splendid beautiful morning. "

Geet: Mmm Plss MAAN let me sleep.

A Smile crept on Maan face and he kissed her forehead, "Hey Sleeping beauty wake up warna Mujhy uthana atta hay.

Geet: smile without open eyes " pls don't just 5 minutes more".

Maan: Tum ais nahee manogi and he start tickling ..

Geet: pls maan nhee pls.. chordoo mujh bohaat gudgudi ho rhee hay pls Maan.. stop it.. plsss MAAN.. her shout open her eyes.

She look around in confusion and checked herself.. Geet tu jhalli hogayee hay .. Maan mery room mein kaisy a shakta hay. Sapna thaa.. chaddooo.. her self talk.

At 7:00 pm

Geet was humming her song while taking bath when her eyes catch MAAN behind, staring her with smile on face and hands on his chest. Her eyes popped up to see MAAN with her.
"TUM MERY WASHROOM MEIN KYA KR RHEY HOO"

Maan smile and wink' she abrubtly turn ,but there was no one. She was alone.

Geet again wash her face. BABA G aj lagta hay kuch zaida hee neendh mein hoon.

Pinky shout from room. "Geet kisk sath baat kar rhee hay..jaldi kar.. dair ho rahee hay.. Madam teri engagement aj hay kal nahee"

Geet: haan baba arahee hoon..

Pinky: tery chakkar mein m getting late..

Geet: Oyyee pinky ki bacchi its myy engagement not urs. So chup beth..

Pinky: (giggle) I know but Rohan and his family are also invited so u know I have to look sexy for Rohan and Sundhar Bahu for my in-laws. Afterall image ka sawal hay meri jaan.

Geet: ufff.. Kya krun is Motti kaa..

Pinky: (laugh) kuch na kar baas jaldi sy baher ajjaa.

Geet was changing her cloths and try to tie her dori but failed.. "Haye BABA G kya maseebat ha.. ye bandh kun nahee ho raha.." She peeped from door. Pinky yar ye dori bandh kardey. Kabsy m trying.. liken ye bandh hee nahee ho rhe.,

A hand hold her dori. The fingers slightly caressed her back. Geet recognized his touch which send shivers in spine. He put his mouth on hook of her shirt , his breath fall on her back and lips touch sensually on white creamy skin ..Geet shocked at his act and turn quickly.

Pinky: Kya kar rhee hay Geet.. m tying naa.. tu aisy kun daar gai..

Geet: nahee woo

Pinky: daar maat ye hook thora kharab hogaya.. m just adjusting. Isi leye teeth use keyee. Ar tu aisy daar rhee hay jaisy MAAN JIju agaye..

Geet: Shutup mottiii kaam kar'

Pinky: kyaaa mujhy mottii bola.. ja nahee kartiii.

Geet: (laugh) acha chal stop dis drama' kuch nahee bolti.. tu jaldi kar.

Pinky: kar to rhee hoo.. tu seedhi khari reh.

After sometime when Geet and pinky was getting ready, light went off

Geet: Aye Loo.. Gadhay Ullu dey phattay. Is waqt hee light urani thi. ab mein jewellary kaisy pehnongi..

Pinky: tu ruk mein candle ley kr atti hoon.

Geet tried to find her jewellary from dressing table. She tried to catch other pair of her ear rings coz moonlight has glowed room to some extend dat she has mior vision of her accessories on table. Maan came behind with lighter in his hand. Geet saw his reflection in mirror. She first surprised and den blabber " Agae tum phrsy pereshaan karney.. Liken ab nahee hongi. EK to pata nahee subha sy mera screw dheela kardya.. har taraf nazar arahy ho. Aur ab fr.. Pinky bechari ko bhi apk chakkar mein dant parh gayee.. ap jao yahan sy.. mujhy tyaar bhi hona ha"

During her whole complaining Maan move closer ,lost in her angelic beauty as she is looking more den a princess Maan's Princesses s in bridal avtar. Geet was blabbering continuously and didn't notice that this time its not illusion its real MAAN coz he want to saw his Mishti first as bride.

Maan took ear rings from her hand , he remove her hairs behind ears and put ear rings in her ears not after kissing dem one by one.

Geet mouth shut and she was confused and shy between her illusion and reality. He then put her necklace around her neck , removing her hairs and kissed her neck.

He then hold his shoulder and move his hands towards his chest. Her back touch his chest and she felt butterflies in her stomach. Maan turned her and sat on his knees. He put waist band around her white soft cotton waist and kissed her belly button. Geet hold his shoulder tight to control her mouns and started breath heavily. Maan stood, hold her duppatta and cover her head with it. There eyes meet. His breath fall on her face as they are few inches apart. Geet closed her eyes Maan start moving backwards slowly with smile and disappear, just then light came so as pinky.

Pinky: geet Geeet' kya huaa ??? she jerked her.

Geet: woo Maan'.. Pinky yyahan MAAN aye thy??

Pinky: Madam pechly half hr sy m here with u .. tujhy yaar kr rhee hon ar light atty hee tujhy MAAN jiju nazar aney lagey..

Geet: but pinky wo yahan thy.. I feel'.she realize and became quite.

Pinky: ohhoo someone is very desperate 'hmmm

Geet: confusingly look around and then her self in mirror.

Pinky: geet tu bohaat achi lag rhee hay bas kardey kitna taar hogi.. jaldi kar Maan Jiju and unki family had reached and Aunti is asking for u. Its show tym baby.

Geet move with friends out of her room , thinking in mind DID I really feel or it was just m illusion but I can feel his lips and fingers.. how could it possible.. but Pinky aye to Maan nahee thy.. liken'BABA G ye mujhy kya ho raha hay.. Kun ye ajeeb sa ehsaas ho raha hay.

Pinky:whisper.. Geet kya boli ja rhee hay..samney dekh Maan Jiju kaisy tujhy dekh rhey hein. Ajto unki chutti hojaye gi..

Geet raised her gaze and saw Maan standing calmly with her family and without blinking his eyes he was staring her. As there eyes meet, he naughtingly wink which confused her more.

Music start

Kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai'
jaage jaage koi sota hai'
bin chaahe dil khota hai
kahin aisa na ho jaye'

Geet residing down from stairs ,lost in thoughts.

Kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai'
jaage jaage koi sota hai'
bin chaahe dil khota hai
kahin aisa na ho jaye'

she reached near Daadi, who kissed her forehead "Bohaat Pyari lag rhee hain" she touched her feet. Daadi "Ary kya kar rhee hein' Betiyan Galay lagti hein" Geet smile and hug her.

kab armaan machlenge
kisko hai ye pata
kab mausam badlenge
kisko hai ye pata

she then touch Yash feet ..and then she hugged Annie and Meera.. "Bhabhi waow ur looking fab.. Annie hugged.

pyaar ho jata hai kaise
jaane na jaane na
jaane na jaane na dil tera
aa ha..

Ranu aunti put kala tika and hugged her. Geet while hugging look towards Maan again who was seeing her smilingly and gestured as "Beautiful"

nazar se nazar mile aa ha
nazar se nazar mile
to dekhengi aankhein sapna
jo yun koi saath chale'aa ha
jo yun koi saath chale
to lagne lagega apna aa ha

Maan eyed her as "what happen". She nodded as "No" . Maan smile and got buzy with rohan. Geet stare her in lost.

Meera, annie and dev start talking with Geet. They made her sit and start teasing her. Geet shy and give steal galances to his prince who was looking killer in sherwani with his first two buttons open and smile on his face raising her heart beats.

She remembered their room close moments, their kiss and all dose naughty moments in his room.

baat jo badhegi
baat baat mein
khwaab hi khwaab
honge har raat mein
hoga jab pyaar tujhe
hoga na karaar tujhe
tu ye soch le'

She opened her eyes and look around. All were busy in their world, laughing, and singing, dancing and teasing. She lifted her gaze towards MAAN who was staring her . There eyes meet and they lost each other ,forgetting surroundings.

kab armaan machlenge
kisko hai ye pataa
kab mausam badlenge
kisko hai ye pataa
pyaar ho jata hai kaise
jaane na jaane na
jaane na jaane na dil tera

Maan came closer and put his hand forward. Geet hold him in response and he took her towards the center. They start dance with the rhythm which is song of their hearts and soul and both are drowned in their own magical world where no one is dere to disturb them.

aayega vo paas ki
jo door hai
maan ja ki

hona ye zaroor hai
vo dil to deewana hai
kab ka havana hai
tu ye soch le

kab mausam badalenge

kisko hai ye pataa
pyaar ho jata hai kaise

jaane na jaane na
jaane na jaane na dil tera


He hold her waist and pull her more closer. Geet hold his shoulder without breaking eye contact.

Nazar se nazar mile
to dekhengi aankhein sapna
jo yun koi saath chale' aa ha
jo yun koi saath chale
to lagne lagega apna

Pinky: Geet Geet' Kya hogaya tujhy.. tabyaat theek hay...

Geet open her eyes and found herself between her family members who were worriedly seeing her.

Annie: Bas bohaat hogaya.. Kun Maan Bhai ko pereshaan kar rhey hein.. Daadi ab ring pehna bhee doo. Dekho how much desperate they are.. Ap log badh mein baatein krleina..

she pushed Maan towards Geet which collide ..All start laughing.

Maan whisper: Geet tum theek ho na.. with smirk

Geet: (glare)

Engagement ceremony start and Geet put ring on Maan finger and so as Maan put ring on Geet finger with kissed on her hand..

All hooted' ooo..

Yash: badmash kahin kaa..

Dev hold his father ..DAD. aj janey doo..plsss

All greeted each other and hug.

Meera: ajto Geet half officially MAAN ki hoyee.. Meri Devrani and she hugged her.

Annie: ahem ahem meri do bhabhiyaan apny pyaar ky chakkar mein is akeli nandh ko maat bhol jana.. All laugh and trio hugged.

''''''''''.
Precap: Possessive Geet 😆 and Naughty MAAN😉
Edited by MyInfatuationz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan is affecting geet so much...poor geet is still trying to understand whether it was a dream or not..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...
Even i m confused was dat dream or real..???

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