MG-SS-Tuhi mera...pt 8/9 pg 11-31/5 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww it's such a cute love story...
loved it
plz continue soon
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part 4
nice part...
so this is how their relationship started...
cont soon dear...
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WHAT A LOVELY UPDATE
LOVED THEIR FIRST MEETING AND THE WAY SHE MADE FRIENDS WITH HIM
SHE CAME AS A BREATH OF FRESH AIR IN HIS LIFE AND BECAME HIS SONG
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Part 5

hi guys...here is another update

hope u enjoy

aur haan...plzzz comment and like

I smiled remembering her hawa hawai song. Even now I had that video of her dance in my mobile...she made me know everything about that song later...man she loves that song very much. I once again looked at her sleeping form and closed my eyes to let the sleep take over me.

Geet's monologue

I heard some sounds...very far but yet very near...where am i? oh wait..just now I remember...I am on train to Amritsar na...with pari...with...maan...maan yes...maan my love..my life...a smile instantly formed on my lips and I heard his voice.

"good morning misti...had a gud sleep?" he asked.

I slowly opened my eyes and looked at him. he smiled at me and I smiled back. He came forward and kissed my forehead. I smiled again as I said "how much time did I sleep?"

"love, the journey is only for 6 and half hours so how much time do u think u slept?" he chuckled.

"6 hours?" I guessed and he chuckled yet again.

"tell me maan" I glared at him angrily.

"3 hours...half the time u guessed" he said. But I did felt as if I slept for ages. I dint get this gud sleep yesterday night. May be because of maan being beside me I slept good. I smiled thinking of that.

"how much time left?" I asked him.

"half an hour...I think u shld get freshen up" maan smiled and I smiled back at him.

"now stop giving me that dazzling smile or else I will eat u right now and even u cant stop me..i give a damn if ur frnd or my bro see us like this" maan smiled naughtily. But this did touch a chord in me. I jerked up into a sitting position while he leaned onto the other berth and chuckled lightly.

I glared at him a bit faking anger but his smile dint let me fake...its hard acting while looking at his lovely smile. I looked away and smiled but I know he saw my smile. I looked down to see whether anyone are there and found yash still sleeping and pari and dev are not there anywhere here. He caught my sight and said "pari left to fresh while dev got down to bring a water bottle"

I nodded and got down. I sat at my window and pulled the bag from under the berth and started taking out my toiletries. He sat beside me and instantly hugged me from back as I was lightly bending to the other side trying to pull out my bag of toiletries from my luggage bag. I was startled at first by his sudden hug but I know he wanted that I turned to him and hugged him and I can feel some nervousness or rather tension in his hug...but MSK and nervous that doesn't suit and I said it out to lighten his mood. I came outta his hug and said "hmmm so nervous haan? MSK aur nervous!!!! Doesn't that word exists in ur dictionary?"

He smiled a little but not a dazzling one...something is amiss "there are many word which are not in my dictionary but later u added few words to my dictionary"

"like?" I grinned.

"love" he grinned back.

"and?" I said naughtily.

"desire" he gave me back the same naughtiness.

I blushed instantly and turned back to get my bag. I felt him move away from me and sit at the far end and I confused but next moment I heard pari's voice "geet u woke up?"

"yeah pari...I m going to go fresh up a bit before we get down the train" I said an pari nodded. I walked from there with a give glace to maan. He is not looking at me but I m sure he is aware of my every move.

After few minutes I walked back to our seats and now I found yash took awake and fresh. He sat beside pari who sat at my window seat while maan sat in his window place. Dev was still missing.I definitely dont want to sit beside yash so I settled beside maan a bit away from him but still feeling him close is enough for me to be at peace. Yash turned and gave me a smile while I smiled back a little and asked pari "where is ur friend dev?"

"he is at the door..i dunno what is taking him so much time there. may be upset stomach" yash laughed at his own joke but I dint feel like laughing...poor dev if what yash is true I think he needs some medication. I turned to look at maan who assured me with his eyes and I m at peace again. After few minutes dev came and sat beside me and I smiled at him while he smiled back.

"are u fine?" I asked with concern...well why wont I have concern he is my would be devar.

"I m good geet" dev smiled.

"geet u need to ask is ur stomach fine dev..not are u fine" pari giggled. I paid no heed to her but dev looked at us both confused.

"ah never mind yash joked that ur stomach is upset" I shrugged of.

"no I m fine" dev said calmly and I nodded and turned my attention back to my phone.

Finally the train came to a halt at Amritsar station and we all got down with our luggage.

"we are going to the same venue na I think we shld take cab together" pari said.

"no need of cab bro arranged for a car we can go in it...can they bro?" dev looked at maan.

Maan just nodded and started walking forwards and we all literally tried to keep pace with him. this is what makes me angry everytime...he is tall I know it. He doesn't need to prove it by taking long long step and I cant walk with same pace how many times I told him...arghhh...everytime we walk together this happens and he only walks in my pace when I say that to him...

And today I had damn this luggage with me...I cant walk quick...now I am so so soo fuming... so I stopped.

Others walked a few bits ahead and saw me not following them and all stopped except for maan

"what happen geet?" dev asked me. Now my dear I mean 'dear' maan stopped and turned back well he is really a two feet away from us now I guess.

"I cant walk in that speed" I said.

I saw him coming back to us with a known look and I looked away from him and saw dev.

"whats the problem?" he asked looking at dev.

"bro,she is..." dev started to say but my rude...utterly rude and fuming voice stopped his.

" YOU...'you' are the problem Mr.Maan Singh Khurana...cant u walk a bit slow? I know u r tall u don't need to prove that..cant u take small steps? U r walking as if u r in a race" I said rudely.

Everyone looked at me as if I m some alien out of mars and I looked at them confused while maan is trying really hard to stop his smile may be chuckle and I gave him a glare.

"what?" I said to all.

"nothing" dev said.

"lets go" I heard maan saying calmly and turning again now taking small steps he walked before us.

Yash and pari walked behind me while I walked beside dev and behind maan.

"what? Why did u see me as if I ran from mars" I asked dev.

"nothing" dev said again.

"dev!! Can u please elaborate" I sais sarcastically.

" I never...no no actually no one ever saw any one raising their voice against bro let along showing anger" he said matter of factly.

Oh this...I know this...but that record is kept till geet handa entered maan singh khurana's life...now it was long back broken...

"oh" I chuckled.

" and MK said nothing in return... Did u see that dude" yash said surprised.

"its her luck" dev said and there that ends.

Well its not my luck...its my love and yeah he is at fault now so he dint have right to say anything to me...he knows that I cant walk quick so he has to walk slow na.

As we made our way outta station we saw a car waiting for us.

"we all wont fit in one car" I sighed as yash and dev sat in the back seat while I pari and maan stood infront of it.

"I think we shld take a cab" I said looking at pari.

"no need of that" maan said as he went and sat in the driver's seat...wait is he driving? Then defo the passenger seat is mine...I giggled inwardly.

I held the door knob to the front seat when pari whispered in my ears "geet plz dear let me sit na...u know na I wont get another chance like this to sit beside my dreaaamyyy"

I looked at her shocked I definitely dint like this but she dint give me a chance as maan pressed the horn pari quickly opened the door and sat in. maan glared at me once and I gave him a 'i-m-helpless' gaze and sat beside dev.

As maan started to drive he adjusted the mirror such that I was able to see him through mirror and he can defo see me.

I smiled a bit looking at him in the mirror but he is literally fuming...i looked to his side and saw pari literally drooling over him with her eyes so dreamy...god wat is she made of!!! Drolling over him so openly.

"pari" I said trying to bring her back but she dint even budge a little...ahh this girl.

"pariii" I said again. Maan looked at me from mirror and I looke back at him...did I see a smirk there??? I thought he is angry on me for sitting back.

"PARI" I said a bit loud and shook her sholders from beside.

"haan...haan geet" pari jerked and answered. Dev and yash laughed loudly and she blushed...blushed!!!!!! omg this girl...she shld feel embarssed na why is she blushing.. as if she got caught looking at her bf... Ufff...am I burning???? I looked back at maan and I saw the same smirk on his face...

I remembered the sentence pari said yesterday and his smirk...i shld be angry on him na... what did pari say??? haan... He is dreamy na...and his smirk...what do he think of himself haan? That girls will die for him? Like He is the most eligible bachelor of india...and girls die for his one loook haan!!!! Wait and watch maan u r so dead...

I glared at him and his expression changed.

End of geet's monlogue.

precap:

now maan's monologue

and a bit of maaneet luv story in past

Edited by teju2292 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
it is tuugh to resist d charm of MSK
poor pari
now Geet is jealous
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update

geet jealous

waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 5
awesome part dear...
lovely...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part..
maaneet part nice
geet getting angry on maan 4 walking fast n pari drooling maan..
geet is h..lol..she only let her sit next 2 him..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very cute ! maan geet relationship hidden from their friends...still , maan coming along with geet to talk to her parents... pari drooling over maan and yash over geet .loved the way geet shouted on maan to walk slow and how dev and yash were surprised...waiting for more...

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