MG-SS-Tuhi mera...pt 8/9 pg 11-31/5 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi dear...read all the parts! Superb SS! Update soon n do pm! Thanks
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hey frnds...sorry for being this late...held up with project work and then my sis's marriage took my whole time...must say the marrige went so good and i m happy as my di is happy...

now one more thing to say...this song i mentioned in this update...i just read parineeta and i m surprised to see the same song i choosed about a month back in my update in that ff but trust me this song i worte about a month back and is not a copy from that ff so plz dont mind...and i m NOT copying...this is my own story and seriously i tried to change the song but i dint like to change coz that song suited so perfectly for the situation...so plz enjoy...

Part 6

I remembered the sentence pari said yesterday and his smirk….i shld be angry on him na… what did pari say haan??? He is dreamy na…and his smirk….what do he think of himself haan? That girls will die for him? Like He is the most eligible bachelor of india…and girls die for his one loook haan!!!! Wait and watch maan u r so dead…

I glared at him and his expression changed.

End of geet's monlogue.

Maan's monologue.

As I saw into the mirror to look at geet she gave me a 'u-r-so-dead' glare and I gulped my saliva. Now what on earth did I do? Its she who gave pari the allowance to sit in the front seat and she who let the irritating girl pari to drool over me so openly. So I should be angry on her but here reverse is happening….geet ki babaji only u can save me from my sherni. I gulped again. Now this irritating girl beside me is blushing….wait…oh…blushing… is this the reason why geet gave me a glare. May be yes. This pari is dead.

I glared at pari who is already drooling over me and she instantly looked away scared. And I saw geet throught mirror who is still in same mood her eyes splitting fire. Oh is this what jelous means? I so liked it…geet feeling jealous…but the thing I m scared of is her sherni mode…I so had experience with it……..

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"geet why don't u come to party. I will be bored without u" i said as I wore my chocolate brown shirt which she presented me on her b'day…well its her b'day but she gave me gift and I cant even say no.

"no maan u know na I m not interested in bussiness parties more over u r saying its in some disco….i still say u too don't go..i don't like this discos" came her voice from my mobile which I kept on loudspeaker and placed it on my dressing table.

"geet look darling I have to go..i told u na they are imp clients…and more over if u say about the place…u know na its not my decision….its Miss.Kapoor's choice….aur haan from when did u start 'not' liking disco…until what I know about u u love disco and loud music and dance" I smiled naugtily.

"oh..oh…i….i. mean….i…oh…whatever maan…i told so.. tho told so" geet said.

I know she doesn't want me to go alone to disco but she too not agreeing to come with me….now what can I do in it?

"what geet? I told u its imp na" I said softly.

"hmm ok go but keep me updated every minute" she said.

"should I call u every minute without speaking to bussiness associates" I said smiling.

"no I dint mean that….ok ok message me for every……" she said but I cut her.

" one hour" I said.

"WHAT!!!! ONE HOUR!!!! No way maan call me for every half an hour" she said.

"geeet" I said as I picked up my phone and connected the bluetooth to my ear.

"ok ok. Call me when u r free" she said.

"hmm" I said but still we both dint hang the call neither did we speak.

I walked to my car and hoped in to the driver seat.

"will u be on call for the whole party?" I asked.

"no if u don't want me to" she said slowly.

"what if I want" I asked and she chirped on the other side.

I started my car and drove to the fire disco and we are talking the whole time. As the entered the hall I met many of my assosiates and she remained silent listing to my every word. But the main thing is yet to come which will make me regret my actions. But I dunno that time.

Miss.kapoor came to me and asked me for a dance. At first I rejected her but she is like glue not leaving me. Mean while I dunno how but geet's call got disconnected. I tried to take my cell out and call her back but Ms.Kapoor held my hand and literally dragged me to the dance floor. Having no other opion left and me being dance and music lover I started to dance with her.

At first I tried to maintain the dance as slow and not so touchy touchy but Ms.Kapoor is literally falling all over me. I tried to push her away slightly but I cant forcefully push her off me as It wont look good and more over she is my client. I should behave decent. The song changed to a hot number I dunno when and she started a really hot dance. I started to move out of the dance floor when she literally hugged me with her arms encircling around my neck and my arms are on her shoulder trying to push her.

And this is how geet saw me on the dance floor. I looked at geet who is looking at me splitting fire and I gulped my saliva looking at her. I dunno how geet is here but I m sure she came to surprise me and got surprised instead.

As geet walked away I quickly pushed away the girl and ran behind geet calling her. But she is nowhere to be seen. I walked aroung the disc in search of her but found her no where and that is when i saw a spot light fall on the dance floor and I stood rooted to my spot as I saw HER on the floor with a mike in her hand and looking in my eyes directly.

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I still hear your voice when you sleep next to me

I still feel your touch in my dreams

Forgive me my weakness, but I don't know why

Without you it's hard to survive

She sang looking into my eyes and I am amazed actually blown by her voice…she is creating magic around me with her voice. She is spelling every word looking in my eyes saying that she mean every word and her every word is for me and only me. My eyes twinkled with happiness as she sang but soon many girls and boys joined her on the dance floor dancing as the music took a heavy beat and she threw the mike to her side and started to swing her hip according to the beat.

'Cause everytime we touch, I get this feeling

And everytime we kiss, I swear I could fly

Can't you feel my heart beat fast?

I want this to last

I need you by my side
'Cause everytime we touch, I feel the static

And everytime we kiss, I reach for the sky

Can't you hear my heart beat so?

I can't let you go

I want you in my life

She moved and groved according to the beat even with people around her the spot light stayed on her and her eyes stayed on me. She danced so sensously and I swear every boys look is on her and trust me I dint like it man. As I burned in jealosy she smirked at me and moved around the danced floor. She got down and walked towards me dancing and all are cheering her. As she came near me suddenly she stopped dancing and stood there looking at me with all the love. And then again she sang….

Your arms are my castle, your heart is my sky

They wipe away tears that I cry

The good and the bad times, we've been through them al

lYou make me rise when I fall

I looked at her forgetting the whole world around me. I stepped to her raising my arms to hold her to hug her to hide her in my warmth when she suddenly pushed me and stepped back dancing swinging to the music. When I felt startled and angry and jealous ofcourse. But I m not less I pulled her towards me holding her waist and she dint protest this time and walked to me and kept her arms around my neck and pulled me towards her possesively and again started to swing for the music singing the lyrics….

'Cause everytime we touch, I get this feeling

And everytime we kiss I swear I could fly

Can't you feel my heart beat fast?

I want this to last

I need you by my side
'Cause everytime we touch, I feel the static

And everytime we kiss, I reach for the sky

Can't you hear my heart beat so?

I can't let you goI want you in my life
'Cause everytime we touch, I get this feeling

And everytime we kiss, I swear I could fly

Can't you feel my heart beat fast?

I want this to last

I need you by my side


She danced and danced till she is out of breath and I let her enjoy smiling at her this side. As the song stopped she left me saying she need some drink and I let her go.

As she left to the counter I slowly follwed her but stood at a distance when I saw Ms.Kapoor walking towards her.

" so u Miss what so ever….must say u danced well" she said.

Geet smiled at her " thanks and I m gee…" she started to say her name but she was rudley cut by ms.kapoor.

"whatever girl…I don't like to know the names of bar girls" she said rudley.

Geet narrowed her eyes and my blood bolied. I started to walk to them when geet's answer stunned me "oh I dunno that u hate ur proffession this much"

I chuckled at geet's reply. This girl is really so courageous and brave and knows how to deal peolple….hmm perfect for Maan Singh Khurana.

"how dare u say that" she fumed when geet smiled lightly and shrugged saying " oh girl get a grip"

"I m not surprised with ur behaviour…..why wont u behave like this…u little bar girl got a chance to dance with THE Maan Singh Khurana after all" she smirked.

"ya right…..getting chance to dance with MSK is hard and u got one right…that is why u utilized it to the whole and threw urself on him" geet said and I again chuckled.

"you girl mind ur words" ms.kapoor fumed.

"by the way u don't know me right….let me introduce myself….i m geet MSK's gf" geet said proudly and I right there wanted to kiss geet for that words but I cant right. But I can do what I can…ek hug to banta hai yaar… I stepped towards them when ms.kapoor again spoke "big dreams haan? Which will never come true" she smirked.

"did u get ur drink darling" I said as I hugged geet from behind placing my chin on her sholder. I know geet is smirking. I acted as I dint see ms.kapoor but I very well know her jaw would be touching the ground now. I chuckled inwardly.

I looked at ms.kapoor and said " oh Ms.kapoor…sorry I dint see u"

I came out of the hug and held geet by her waist as I spoke again " gud u r here…meet my geet .. love of my life" I said looking with love into geet's eyes.

Ms.kapoor walked away and I pulled geet into a hug.

"hope u r not angry on me now" I said as we sat in the car riding back.

" I would be if u dint have come and hugged me from behind" she smiled and I smiled back.

"I love u geet" I said looking into her eyes and she gave me a dazzling smile as she said…." I lve u a lot maan"

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End of Maan's monologue

Geet's monologue

I glared at him and he looked at him with not-my-fault look and gave me a pleading look…oh that look…I m on edge of melting….geet get a grip girl…he is damn cute with that look I really wanted to kiss him right here….oh geet…what are u thinking girl….ufff…babajiii

I saw him smile at me and I know he came to know that I melted….how easily he understands me….i m so lucky to have him….thank u babaji

I turned my face away but a smile formed on my lips. I looked back at him and saw that he turned back to road ignoring the drooling pari and I looked at him admiringly.

I know my maan…he is like one woman man…and the only woman in his life is me and only me….lucky u geet. I chuckled at my own words.

The car came to a halt infront of a huge building with dobriyal's imprinted on the name plate
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow Party scene was fulltoo mast
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was so lovely update..
loved geet's payback a lot..
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Awesome update

party scene was lovely

miss kapoor face was worth watchibg

i luv u for writing this beautiful ff and my maaneet too
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i just read it in one go...and
realy realy its an awsm,...one of the best ss..i ever read...👏👏
im egerly waiting for next part...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum update! Well written! update soon n do pm! thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 6
awesome part...
the FB was too funny...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GREAT UPDATE
THE GREAT MAAN SINGH KHURANA IS SCARED OF HIS SHERNI
AND SHE SHOWED THAT MS KAPOOR
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Part 7

I know I m stupid idot cheater…I left u all hanging with this ff for months and I m also layak for receiving egg and tomatoes and chappals….but I cant describe u ppl my situation but when time comes I will surely write wat all happened in my life in these months….how my life took a 360 degrees angle and I am chocked with things around me. Even now I had final sem exams but I did make u ppl wait a lot so not anymore….i dnt disagree that I m reading other ff on these IF but my mind is blank due to some emotional disturbances and I was unable to pen down anything….but now I m really squeezing my brain to remember what story I planned and I am trying… if u find anything not good plz don't mind and say it out…I would love to correct….

So here goes….

I turned my face away but a smile formed on my lips. I looked back at him and saw that he turned back to road ignoring the drooling pari and I looked at him admiringly.

I know my maan…he is like one woman man…and the only woman in his life is me and only me….lucky u geet. I chuckled at my own words.

The car came to a halt infront of a huge building with dobriyal's imprinted on the name plate and we all got down….its piya's house and the beside house they took for the groom's family as abhay's family lives at delhi and they came to Amritsar as piya's family live at Amritsar and its piya's wish that they get married at Amritsar and after marriage she demanded to visit the golden temple and take babaji's blessings.

So as per piya's wish abhay's family came down to Amritsar and the marriage is going to happen here.

As I got down and turned back pari is still staring sorry sorry ogling at my maan and yash at me…ufff…dev waved at me and I waved back at the both and looked at maan who gave me a slight smile which can be seen by me ofcourse and a nod and I nodded back at him. I can see the love in his eyes as usual…then I pulled pari along with me and walked in.

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"geet girl if u would come another minute late then I would have filed a missing case on u" piya shouted on geet as geet came and hugged her from beside.

Sitting before the mirror in her royal blue suit with a heavy work and ready to go down for her sangeet piya is waiting for her cousin cum best buddy geet to show her face.

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"I cant believe u skipped my haldi and mehandi " piya said angrily to geet.

Geet sat beside her and side hugged her "u look amazing u know….pari jaise lag rahi ho..kisi ki nazar na lage" geet said.

"geet yaar I am speaking something else" piya said jerking her outta hug.

"yaar piya u know na ho hard its to get a leave in my office and this time I m applying for 4 days continuosly so this happens yaar" geet tried to explain piya and piya cooled down a bit saying "whatever"

"so suna hai bhai came with u and he too is staying for 4 days here" piya asked and geet blused.

"arey ho kya raha hai yah ape? Even I m ur friend piya hug see me too" pari who just came inside the room pouted and came near piya.

"oh nautanki tub hi abhi aayi…kal kya hua?" piya said to her.

"take the same reason whatever geet said yaar" pari giggled and sat on the bed while geet came and sat beside her and piya turned to them still sitting on the stool at the mirror.

"u nai badlogi nautanki" piya said and all laughed loud.

"waise how is my bhai? Is he safe?" geet asked piya.

"khudh hi poochlo" piya said.

Then Mrs. Dobriyal came and asked them to come down for sangeet and all agreed. Piya gave her make up a last touch up and turned to look at geet.

Geet is wearing a white long anarkali suit with matching white high heel and jhumkas and looking like an angle made for just maan and maan.

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" poor my bro" piya giggled and geet understood what she is saying and blushed while pari looked at them confused. Pari is wearing a golden yellow anarkali.

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***

Its been 10 mins….10 long mins that Mrs. Dobriyal said they are coming down then where are they why are they not coming yet? I think I should call geet or piya and ask where they are.

"maan dude cill na they will come soon…I shld be impatient to see my bride and her unlike all u are impatient… I doubt whose marriage is this" abhay chuckled at maan while maan gave him his famous MSK look.

"don't give me that looks they don't work on me..i've got used to them" abhay said and left maan to take a drink and join yash and dev who are chatting at a bit distance.

As maan also decided to move to take drink his heart started to beat fast and he knows his misty is here. Instanltly he looked up and saw the three beauties descending the staris giggling among themselves with other ladies around them. But on what his eyes got stuck is on his misty who is looking ravishing in his fav color white suit.

He opened his mouth to say something but even before a word came out he heard "wow…beautiful"

He looked at the source and found yash, dev and abhay looking at the three girls with their mouth wide open and the words came from yash. His blood boiled as he knows yash said those words to his geet. Anger is evident in his eyes. Maan moved towards them when yash again spoke looking at the three ladies who are speaking to some other women there.

"I never know that this pari girl can look this beautiful man…did she descend from heaven or what?" yash said and dev chuckled.

"I m not gonna leave this chance" yash said and store towards pari while maan sighed in relief.

***

Its been 5 mins now that she came down stairs but did find her man anywhere. She is still searching with her eyes when her eyes landed on the person she is searching for looking at her intently with love filled eyes standing at a corner in the hall with abhay and sipping a drink. She smiled at him and he returned the smile.

Soon the piya's cousins came and dragged piya to the one of the round cots arranged there and made her sit and pulled geet with them to get abhay.

Geet as piys's cousin ran towards maan and abhay who are already looking at them and as they reached they pulled abhay along with them who held maan's hand and dragged him too with him. As abhay reached piya he left maan hand and they made him sit beside piya.

Abhay looked at piya nd piya looked back in his eyes and they got lost while maan tried to make his way back when geet pulled him beside abhay and made him sit and winked at him. She sat beside piya and looked at maan. Now maan and geet are lost in their eye lock.

Precap

Sangeet….what happens…

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