MG-SS-Tuhi mera...pt 8/9 pg 11-31/5 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved tyha update
So their love is going to bloom.
witing for that moment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 9

Kyun kit um hi ho …………Ab tum hi ho……..Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi mera dard bhi……….Meri aashiqui ab tum hi hooo…"

Geet looked at maan and maan looked at geet…staring at each other they forgot where they are and a nudge from piya made geet to avert her gaze jerking back to the world before anyone caught them and maan smiled turning away his gaze as well from his geet.

The clap sound made them realize where they are and maan got up from the place as one of the girls took away the guitar from him.

As maan stopped abhay's mother came to him.

"maan I dunno that u sing this well….forget about how good I don't even know that u sing…boy u have the talent in u" haseena raichand patted maan's back as he smiled at her nodding in thank u.

"ya hassena is right maan….u r really an awesome singer" chand raichand said walking to them.

As maan said "thanks uncle"

"shock is a very small word before what I m experiencing now" came a voice from behind and all turned to find a surprised savitri devi looking at maan with wide eyes.

"dadima" maan said a bit irritated..uff she is starting another drama…nautanki.

"what maan? I seriously say…r u really my grand son maan? Or did u kidnap him and came to his place? Tell me who u r?" dadi said while chand and haseena chuckled.

"dadiii" maan said seriously.

" did any replacement took place?" dadi asked again and this time another sweet giggle joined the already chuckling group and they turned to see a girl giggling hearing them.

Geet who is talking to piya sitting with her on the cot heard maan saying 'dadima' and turned her concentration to them. And when she heard dadi's words she is unable to stop giggling and every one turned to her and she stopped instantly saying "sorry"

"aap kaun beta?" dadi asked

"ji wo mein…" geet started to say but before her haseena spoke.

"ma ji who geet hai….piya ki best friend and cousin" haseena said calling geet to stand beside her. Geet walked to haseena and stood beside her.

Geet bent and touched dadi's feet saying 'namaste dadi" and dadi immediately took her into embrace.

"hey I m not an oldie that u r touching my feet" dadi chuckled and geet smiled at her while maan rolled his eyes.

Maan tried to go from there to meet geet's parents but dadi stopped him with her words.

"kaha jaraheho maan babu?" dadi said and both dadi and geet giggled.

"kya dadi" maan said turning to her.

"waise for whom did u sing the song?" dadi asked and instantly geet became uncomfortable.

Maan looked at geet who is looking every where except him and a smile formed on his lips seeing her nervousness.

"I m asking u only maan" dadi probed at him

geet spoke before maan could say any thing "excuse me dadi ..i should go I have some work"

with that said geet left from there and maan's eyes followed her until she walked off from the hall. Dadi saw him looking at geet and found something fishy but before she could ask him someone called her and she left from there leaving maan to sigh in relief.

……………………………………………………………………

"maan this is not the time to speak to my parents…let the shaadi complete we can speak after" geet said.

"but geet…" maan tried to say but geet nodded no.

"no maan….see urself every one are here and many relatives and friends of abhay's and piya's family are present here…so we shld not make any scene here…plz understand" geet said.

"I understand geet…I will wait until the marriage is over….ok?" maan smiled.

"hmm" geet smiled back.

Maan hugged geet….they are in piya and geet's room…present piya went to meet abhay secretly while maan came to meet his jaan.

Geet quickly came out of the hug "maan go from here before anyone see"

She tried to push him to the door when maan turned to her and held her by shoulders looking in to her eyes….geet got lost in his eyes while maan spoke again.

"geet…u came to my life as a bliss and made me smile, laugh, and taught me how to enjoy my life and u became my life…and now I cant live without u geet….i will make u mine forever….i love u geet….i wont let u go away from me….not even if u want….i love u" maan spoke with eyes full of love and geet eyes reflected his.

Geet placed her palm on his cheek and caressed his cheek while coming close to his lips still looking at his eyes not letting the eye contact lose and she placed her lips on his lips and pecked him lightly first then another time and again…she started placing butterfly kisses on his lips while maan stood there enjoying her with his eyes closed. She took his lower lips into her lips and maan moaned… she deepened the kiss pushing her tongue into his mouth and maan let her take the control…but it became too much for him when she bit his tongue and he held her neck and pulled her closed deepening the kiss and taking the control… they kissed kissed and kissed until a voice cleared their throat from behind and both left each other in a jerk.

Geet looked behind maan scaringly and sighed in relief as she found piya giggling. Geet looked at her angrily while maan turned back and saw piya and smiled.

"what? Why are u looking like that? Ohhh….got angry for disturbing ur sweet moment?" piya giggled again.

Geet puffed angrily and maan chuckled. She looked at maan fuming and he gve her an 'what-did-i-do" look.

"go away maan" geet pushed him out while maan chuckled and left the girls….

Precap:

Maan talk to geet's parents….will they accept…or say no? what about dadima?

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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Nice part
DAdi found fishy
Precap interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
NOW DADI HAS ALSO JOINED THEM TO TROUBLE MAANEET
WILL HER PARENTS AGREE
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
lovely part

dadi is as usually awesome

piya caught them kissing😳

waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
geet's parents will say yes... n dadima too...

wonderful updates...

loved dem very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
finally u r back...

i was searching for this story..

thanks for the update...

please update soon...

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