MG-SS-Tuhi mera...pt 8/9 pg 11-31/5

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hey frns me teju here
i m here with another ss...i know i m still keeping my other works in pending but i was unable to stop myself from penning it down so plz read it and comment...plz press like button...dont discourage me guys plzzz..
this is just a bit like prologues dearies...and i will give u all the parts daily one after the other as i already wrote the story till half and haan this wont last long parts...just 5 to 6 parts hardly...
plz give me ur views...plzzz



Tu hi mera'

A girl in her 20's sat on a bench on the platform of Mumbai hugging her bag tight to her and lost in deep thoughts waiting for her train to Amritsar. People running around her dnt make any difference to her neither the announcements of different trains caught her attention. She wore no expression on her beautiful flawless face not giving any clue to her observers of whats going on in her mind.

As the Amritsar train came to a halt before her she let all the passengers board the train and as finally the doorway became empty she stood and walked to the compartment door. She looked back at once now with an expression of waiting for someone. May be she dint find the person she is searching for, she sighed and boarded the train. She waited at the door till the train moved and then went in with a sad expression to her seat.

As she sat in her seat at the window she opened her clutch and took out her phone and dialed a number.

"where r u?" the girl asked worriedly.

"sorry geet I cant come" came the voice from the other side.

"what do u mean u cant come? How can u do this to me?" geet shocked.

"no plz dear understand na'I cant'" said the other person again.

"I cant believe u ditched me" geet said as tears flowed out of her pretty eyes.

"no not like that geet" the other tried to say.

"plz'plz don't speak another word. Thanks to me for trusting u" geet said through tears and cut the call.

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Index

part 1-page 1
part 2-page 2
part 3-page 4
part 4-page 5
part 5-page 7
part 6-page 8
part 7-page 9
part 8-page 11
part 9-page 11
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Grt starting
but who is the observer and who is the person by whom geet is ditched curious to know that
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one more thing plz post the thread link in which u posted aii ur ff links on ff discusion thread or pm to maaneetmaahi
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Part 2

"oh stop over reacting girl" came the same voice again but now not from her mobile. Geet instantly looked up and saw a girl in pink shirt and blue jeans standing at the ending of her opposite berth.

"oh god pari….u almost killed me….i thought u ditched me" geet cried in happiness.

Pari came and sat beside geet "how can I dear….u r so precious to me"

Geet smiled at pari " I know"

" so all set for the ride?" pari asked mischeviously.

"pari its not a joke….do u know how I m feeling right now" geet sighed.

"I don't think u told me that. So how will I know" pari joked.

"pari I m serious" geet looked at her seriously and turned her face back to the window watching the trees moving back as the train ran fast.

Pari kept her hand on geet's shoulder and geet turned to her. a tear escaped from her eyes and fell on pari's hand.

"geet plz don't cry" pari instantly said and wiped her tear.

"pari I dint even see his photo" geet said sadly.

"are u crying because u dint see his photo????" pari asked keeping a confused face.

"PARIII" geet glared at her and next second both giggled.

"geet u r crying as if u r going home to get married" pari said.

"this is no different" geet said.

"no geet…this is different…u r just going to see a guy. Even u will have ur opinion and u can also say if u like him or not" pari said.

"I doubt" geet sighed.

"don't say like that geet. Ur parents love u a lot…they wont do anything against u" pari said.

"that's the problem pari. They love me a lot that's is y they want to give me a wonderful life in their sense. But they don't want my opinion on their "wonderful life". They think I don't know what I want and they think I cant judge people. So even if I say then a no they don't take it…they say I dunno what is good for me….for god sake pari am I a kid? I m 24 pari….24…completed by MSC and working in an MNC for past 1 year. " geet cribbed.

"I understand geet" pari said sadly.

"no pari u don't…do u know how it feels whenever u open ur mail box u will find a mail from ur dad with a groom's pic, asking me to tell the opinion..and if I say I dint liked him then do u know what they say to me? They say i dint see him clearly then comes the words like I m not a heroine to get some hero in my life…they say I m not beautiful…not intelligent and what not I heard from them…they even said I m fat…FAT pari!!!!" geet said angrily.

"geet u r not fat" pari said stressing each word. Geet looked at pari.

" geet look u r really beautiful…if not then how on earth u did got these may proposals from almost all the boys in our college and then at work now…more over u r intelligent… u completed the project last week remember…it came out awesome…how did u forget the praises u got from everyone in office…u never said ur achievements to ur parents girl" pari said.

Geet kept quite and pari let the silence flow between them. Its like 1 hour now that geet dint say anything.

So finally pari broke the silence "waise do u know who is occupying the opposite seat?" pari asked geet.

"how on earth will I know?" geet said not focusing on her question.

"by looking at the chart outside" pari said.

"I dint look then" geet said least interested in the topic.

"ohh ya I know that u will not see…but I saw that" pari chukled.

"now why r u chuckling?" geet asked.

"coz…in another 10 mins 3 guys will board the train and occupy the seats opposite to us." Pari said.

"huh to?" geet asked.

"arey geet boys means fun and we will have some company. They are of our age group" pari said.

"men mean danger pari…we cant trust strangers" geet said.

" oh geet who said they are strangers? Do u remember my friend dev?" pari asked.

"who dev?" geet asked confused.

"u once met him geet. He is my school mate and we met him 2 years back in one of the college fests" pari said.

"oh yeah…dev that guy with spects" geet said remembering.

"hmm…so its dev and his friends are coming" pari said.

"how do u know its dev?" geet asked.

"arey geet its simple. I saw his full name on chart and I instantly called him to know whether its he or not and tadan its him" pari smiled.

"hmm its good atleast we wont be travelling with complete strangers" geet said.

"I m going up..i m so sleepy" geet said and stood up to climb the upper berth.

"arey geet u wanna leave me alone and sleep this is not done geet" pari pouted.

Geet sighed and said " ok fine atleast let me go and use washroom….i'll be back in few minutes" geet said as she walked away.

Pari looked out of window and saw the train slowing down. She smiled and sat there waiting for her friend and his friends to come.

Geet walked to the compartment door which is not on the side of platform and stood there looking out. after few minutes may be 2 mins later the train again started to move but geet still stood there. the train passed the station and again the green trees and rocks came into view. Geet breath in the fresh air and leaned onto the door closing her eyes. she remembered her convo with her mother last night on phone.

"mom if its not piya's marriage I would have canceled my plan to attend marriage by now. She is not only my cousin but also my best buddy. That's why I m attending even after ur stupid proposal" geet fumed in anger.

"and from marriage I m directly going back to mumbai…I m not gonna come home and meet another guy…what do u think of me haan? I cant meet anyone mom…this is 10th guy I m meeting and nothing moved forward. I cant meet another one mom. I m fed up…cant u think how it feels for me" geet shouted at last.

"geet u r right but I dunno how and why those matches canceled…may be they r not fit for u..but today I m happy losing those all matches…this one which came now is perfect for u.. their family is so nice beta. Also they liked u very much. U cant afford to lose this match geet…by the way they are so rich too" rano said to her.

"rich!!! Mom did u think about this match becoz they are rich?" geet fumed.

"geet before saying the word rich I also said they are good natured and liked u…dint i? then y r u taking the only word rich? Don't u know we don't care about money?" rano asked a bit hurt.

"sorry mom but still y don't u understand" geet calmed a bit and tried to say.

"no geet u understand me. Once plz check ur mail…I sent his pic. He is so handsome. U will surely like him and I also sent the details see them too. If u want me to say his details ok I will only tell u.." rano said.

"NO….i mean…I will see the mail" geet sighed.

"good beta. Plz come with us to home after the marriage. We will go together to patiyala ok" rano said happily.

"ok" geet sighed with no option and cut the call.

A lone tear escaped from her eye and slipped down her cheek which is followed by another tear but this tear dint cross her cheek. Before that a hand came and wiped the tear off her face. Geet instantly looked up and saw the person infront of her. she hugged them tightly letting the tears flow freely.

"maan" geet cried hugging him tightly.

Edited by teju2292 - 12 years ago
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wow lovely very interesting dear..i love it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NICE START
GEET HAS BEEN DITCHED BY HER LOVER
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Lovely update...
so pari was the one.. u scared us..
she noes maan?
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part 2
nice part...
poor Geet...
why is that happening to her?
cont soon dear...
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Part 3

thanks frns for ur likes and comments...plz read this too and comment...

"maan" geet cried hugging him tightly.

"geet plz don't cry..u know na I cant see ur tears" maan said as he brought her out of his embrace and wiped her tears.

"maan mom…mom……maan I don't want to go home maan..plz do something" geet sobbed hiccupping.

"geet don't worry geet. This time also we will do something to make then run away like ur other matches" maan chuckled.

"this doesn't seems that easy maan" geet said looking at him now controlling her tears.

"geet do u trust me?" maan asked.

"khud se bhi jaada maan" geet smiled.

"then don't worry. I wont let u go away from me…I m the devil u know" maan chuckled making geet chuckle too.

Geet gasped as realization dawned upon her "maan how come u r here?"

"geet how come I leave u alone to face something which is bothering u… aur haan this time I m coming with u to meet ur parents" maan smiled.

"meet my parents?" geet asked confused.

"haan. To meet ur parents to ask ur hand" maan smiled lovingly. Geet stared into his eyes ever so lovingly. And there goes their maahiii eye lock.

"so u r not coming for abhay and piya" geet faked surprise.

"ofcourse even for them. How can I miss my best buddy marry her girl" maan smiled. And geet returned his smile…happy now as he is coming for the marriage. But thinking about her parents…even they will be at piya's marriage why wont be they afterall piya is her cousin.

"now wash ur face and comeback to ur seat… I will go and wait there….aur haan I came with dev and yash…u know them but still they dunno u" maan chuckled…" thanks to ur secrecy my bro and friends even dint know u as their would be bhabhi"

"maan I told u na…I want to let the world know I m urs only when mom and dad accept u and ur family accept me" geet said.

"ya ya but that doesn't mean that u have to keep it as a secret even from ur friends…even pari know nothing" maan said.

"maan piya and abhay knows everything. They are our best buddies and also arman know about us….u know na he is my best buddy and ur best buddy madhu also know this" geet sighed.

"omg a long list right" maan chuckled as geet hit him on his chest.

"now go back to ur seat before ur so called bhai and friend come in search of u" geet smiled.

"and ur so called friend pari comes for u…..waise bhi yash is not my friend he is dev's friend" maan smiled.

Maan hugged geet once again and kissed her forehead before he walked back to his seat. Geet smiled at his gesture knowing him well. She looked back at the rocks and grass for somemore time and walked back to her seat.

As she came to her seat she saw maan sitting at the opposite window of her's with yash beside him and dev beside pari who are engrossed in chatting with each other while maan is looking out of window and yash literally checking her out. geet felt a bit weird by yash's gaze but not uncomfortable. She slowly moved to her window and sat there looking out.

After few minutes pari called her and introduced her to them.

"geet this is dev..u remember him na" pari said as dev extended his hand to geet. Geet smiled at him as she though 'would be devar' and shook his hand. Dev smiled back at her pleasantly.

"aur yeh yash…dev's friend" pari said pointing to yash.

"hi geet" yash gave her a cheeky smile as he extended his hand.

"hi" geet said as she shook his hand. To her luck he dint press her hand or hold on to it for long time. Its just simple warm handshake. May be he is not bad…how can he be bad…if he is bad maan wont allow him any where near geet.

" u r so beautiful geet" yash said as he took back his hand.

"wooo another fan geet" pari said in her ear as geet glared at her.

She looked at maan who is looking at other side but she is sure she saw a smirk on his face…dust danav kahi ka..huh.

"aur yeh?" geet asked deliberately. But what she saw made her eyes pop out. pari is literally drooling over maan with her eyes all dreamy and her words even shook geet to the core.

"dreamy" pari said dreaaamily. ;)

"WHAT!!!! PARI" geet shouted making pari come out of her dreaaamily land.

"oh..sorry.." pari mumbled

"don't u know him geet? He is THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA….MD of Khurana Constructions…….my dreamy" pari said slowly in geet ears.

Geet instantly turned to maan who is smirking still looking out of window. She is sure he heard what pari said. And his smirk is making her fume…now he is dead for sure.

"oh really!!!! What made THE maan singh khurana to travel in the train?" geet said out loud sarcastically. She is literally fuming man…god save our maan now.

'as if u don't know' maan thought but dint dare to speak out. he knows she is fuming…but what did he do if girls think him as dreamy.

"he is my bro geet…actually I forced him to come with us on train" dev answered her.

"forced!!!" geet smirked " u shouldn't have forced dev…look how he is sitting there as if lost the world" geet said it intentionally.

"oh leave about him geet…he is always like that…serious" yash said and instantly got a glare from maan.

"ohhh so angry young man types haan?" geet chuckled.

"ya u can say that" yash chuckled with her.

"don't u have another topic than discussing about me?" maan glared at yash and then dev. He dint dare to look at geet as he know the consequences.

"sorry bro" dev said.

"so dev where are u going to?" geet asked changing the topic.

"Amritsar geet" dev answered.

"what u r also going to Amritsar…u know what dev even we r going to Amritsar" pari giggled.

"I thought u were lost in drooling over the great MSK" geet smirked.

"geet plz don't make it difficult. What if he walks out of here and sit somewhere else…plz geet let me enjoy watching him…u know I cant see him this close again" pari said slowly in geet's ears making geet's eyes go wide.

Pari chuckled seeing this but continued with her drooling session.

" so where r u going in amritsar?"yash asked for which pari answered "to our friend's marriage"

"which friend pari? Do I know her?" dev asked.

"I don't think u know dev…its geet's cousin piya" pari said.

"are u by any chance speaking about piya dobriyal?" yash asked instantly.

"yes…how do u know?" pari asked.

"we don't know piya but we know abhay…the groom" yash said while pari looked at them confused.

"raichand's are our family friends pari" dev explained.

"oh" pari understood.

"wow that means we are all going to the same marriage…that'll be so fun"pari squealed in excitement.

For another 1 hour yash pari and dev spoke to each other and yash tried to speak to geet but geet dint let him. she plugged in her ear phones and took out a novel. She glanced maan now and then who glanced back at her assuring her with eyes.

"I will go and sleep now…I m tired" geet said as she stood up to make her way to upper berth.

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