MG-SS-Tuhi mera...pt 8/9 pg 11-31/5 - Page 2

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Nice maan and geet love eachother
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fab update
maaneet love each other 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
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Lovely update..
i wonder who s the groom for geet!!!
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LOVED ALL THE SECRECY BETWEEN THEM
NOBODY KNOWS THAT THEY ARE IN LOVE
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wow lovely update.. so my maaneet in love , with each other.. te way yash drooling on geet and pari drooling on my maan, oh god wen they cum to know abt my maaneet ki love wat they will do?..te way my maaneet eyelock chupke chupke was lovely..now geet will sleep in upper berth and my maan too i opposite to her, romance in train..i love te update
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waiting for the next part 😊
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part 3
awesome part...
wow interesting...
cont soon dear...
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Part 4

sorry frnds for being late...actually held up with project work...so here i m giving u a longgg update...

"I will go and sleep now…I m tired" geet said as she stood up to make her way to upper berth.

" even I wanna sleep…I m so sleepy " pari said getting up.

"ok then lets arrange the berths" yash said as he took got up.

Geet slowly made her way to the upper most berth and made herself comfortable.

"bro…do u want to still read?" dev asked maan who is lost in his blackberry…..omg...work…..even here?

"no dev…I will occupy the upper berth" maan said as he made his way to the upper berth.

Finally the arrangement is done like maan and geet occupied the upper most berths opposite to each other while yash occupied the middle berth to maan's side and dev the lowerberth at same side and pari opposite to dev in the lower berth.

Yash stared at geet for few more minutes while geet acted asleep and finally he sighed and slept. Same is the case with pari. Leaving maan and geet alone to stare at eachother all went to their sleep.

Geet's monologue

After few minutes…I know everyone would be asleep by now, so I slowly opened my eyes to look at my dream man..maan….but as I looked at him I found him already staring at me with his intense eyes. I blushed instantly unable to take his intensity and he smiled looking at me. I wanted to watch him…stare at him all the night but I dunno y my eyes are dropping… I don't want to sleep… no I cant sleep but sadly I know I m tired…today is a long day…

I tried again…tried hard to keep my eyes open but my eyes are not listening to me. Just then I heard him…his musical voice "geet u don't need to keep ur eyes wide…go to sleep love.. u don't want to look with dark circles under ur eyes in marriage" he chuckled.

I let my eyes drop completely when I felt him kiss my forehead and I smiled with my eyes closed.

Maan's monologue

I leaned back on to my breath as she fell into peaceful sleep. With my hands folded behind my head I laid on the upper berth looking at her…my girl….my love..geet. she is exactly same may be now even more beautiful than the first time I saw her….exactly 2 years 5 months and 14 days before….

"sir u need to attend to the charity show held by the shanti orphanage tonight as a guest sir. We promised them we will attend and more over khurana's are major trustees for the orphanage" adi my assistant spoke as we walked along the office to my cabin. I entered my cabin and he followed me.

"time?" I asked sitting in my chair.

"6.30 sir" he said.

"hmm…I'll be there" I said as he nodded and left.

I m a man of few words and maintained my stern before people I know and don't know….may be only my mom and my dadi saw my soft side…even my brother dev doesn't know my smile. well its not like I wont smile and I wont enjoy my life…but to be true I dunno how to enjoy my life…how to live my life. My dad passed away when I was 15 and I saw my mom and dadi struggle to bring up me and dev along with maintaining the business. The time was bad and business was in loss but still mom managed to keep up. We shifted back to a small flat leaving back our mansion. But not these all made me stern and serious…its my mother's pain which I saw everyday for us made me decide to concentrate on my studies and become serious towards life…my only aim that time is to help mom…becoming serious in life I eventually lost my fun side. After my graduation I joined KC. While working itself I did my MBA. Due to my hardwork…or u can say by working day n night I reached this position making KC the top in construction business and I was awarded the best young business man of the year award…ha ha I got this award every year….but I never realized what I lost until I met her…my song of my life…my geet.

I made my way to the hall where the show is taking place….all the seats were already filled as I entered in my own style…u can call it MSK style and made my way to the guest chair followed by the managers of the orphanage, organizers of the show, few volunteers and my body guards…

"sir plz be comfortable…if u need anything our volunteers are here u can ask them" the organizer smiled and left as I nodded.

I looked at the volunteers they are wearing same color blazers with a logo of the orphanage. The show started and the lights got dimmed. Few children came forward onto the stage and sang a prayer which is followed by few dances and a magic show. I m really getting bored now. Well I don't say the children's dances are not good..they are I liked it…then came few young boys and girls…looks like college students and they danced…hmm thas definitely not my type..then the magic show….magic show!!!!…omg I m not a kid to enjoy a magic show…for god sake I m 25…as the magic show ended I sighed but the lights dimmed again and I saw a spot light fall on a girl on stage who's back is towards me….oh no not another dance.

The music started..uhhh…I never heard this song before…what kinda music is this…ewww… the girl is surrounded by many boys and every one are in crazy wear yaar….huh!!!

Hawa hawaii

Awi wiwi wiwi wiwi

Hawa hawaii

Awi wiwi wiwi wi

The boys sang the the girl reacted shaking her hands as if moving a Chinese fan making some really really weird sounds….

Chee ho ho honolulu lu lu lu lu, honolulu
Hing bekei Hong Kong, King Kong
I seenoosi, yusiloosi, hassi tosi, lassi pissi
Mombaasa, ping pong
Oye oye oye oye oye oye

Omg now I m sure this is some Chinese song……..just then the girl turned…….oh but….wait….hey who is that girl I wanna shout out…..man she is really……wait maan what are u saying…..but its true she is really beautiful as if she came down from heaven….angel……even in that stupid attire of her's she managed to win my compliement….hmm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gIS_g2Jwtjo

hey plz imagine geet here instead of our beauty queen sridevi….

(Aka chiki laaki chiki chiki laaki chu
Aka chiki laaki chiki chiki laaki chiki chu) – 2

She ran to one boy and made different funny expressions while another boys came to her and pulled her and she did the same with him while few others surrounded her….well I dunno y but I dint like this bit…..

Main khwaabon ki shehzaadi, main hoon har dil pe chhaayi
Ho, main khwaabon ki shehzaadi, main hoon har dil pe chhaayi
Baadal hai meri zulfein, bijli meri angdaai
Bijli giraane main hoon aayi, ho bijli giraane main hoon aayi
Kehte hain mujhko hawa hawaii

(Hawa hawaii) - 2

The girl twirled and danced according to the lyrics….roaming the whole stage contacting with all the boys on the stage…..must say man she is not only beautiful is also dancing well…

Bijli giraane main hoon aayi, ho bijli giraane main hoon aayi
Kehte hain mujhko hawa hawaii

(Hawa hawaii) - 2

Her expressions are wow….they are apt to the lyrics. Along with the naughtiness….yes..her eyes are showing the naughtiness fun and the beauty….they held me captive…wow those eyes…..how can anyone express so well by just their eyes……

Samjhe kya ho naadaanon, mujhko bholi na jaano
Main hoon saanpon ki rani, kaanta maange na paani
Saagar se moti chheenoon, deepak se jyoti chheenoon
Patthar se aag laga loon, seene se raat chura loon
Haan, chura loon, chura loon, haan chura loon
Jinon jo tumne baat chhupaayi, o jaano jo tumne baat chhupaayi
Kehte hain mujhko hawa hawaii

(Hawa hawaii) - 2

Then the next second she came up in another dress…..wow this time white and yeah pretty descent than before….but how did she change so quickly!!!! She danced with every boy on the floor twirling and twisting according to the music with her naughtiness still intact……must say she is really enjoying her dance…forgetting the world…doing all the masti and well she is like a kid but grown up kid….is this the same character of her's in real? I wonder….but hope this is the same…..y am I even wanting to know that?...maan get a grip man.

Bijli giraane main hoon aayi
Kehte hain mujhko hawa hawaii
(Aka chiki laaki chiki chiki laaki chu
Raaka chiki laaki chiki chiki laaki chiki chu) – 2

Bijli giraane main hoon aayi, ho bijli giraane main hoon aayi
Kehte hain mujhko hawa hawaii

(Hawa hawaii) - 2

Wow now she is showing her another shade….her…. what do we call…haan proudness due to her beauty…..its like she is saying hey guys beware I m beautiful and also sherni….ouuu I like it…..but still the naughtiness is there in her eyes….omg really yaar how can a girl show these many expressions in her eyes!!!!!!!!! the song came to an end but not her fun and naughtiness….she finally bowed down smiling at all and I dunno how and y I m smiling…..i saw her looking at me its just a few seconds but she caught my eye and nodded her head with a warm and charming smile… as if a thank u for my smile….oh god I was bowled by that smile.

She walked off to the back stage and I m still looking at the spot where she disappeared. The show continued but nothing held my interest…another 2 to 3 dances took place but unknown to me my eyes are searching for her….

As I was thirsty I called a near by volunteer and asked for water. He left and after few minutes what I saw surprised me….there she stood in a pair of jeans and blue top wearing the same blazer as other volunteers and holding a glass of water.

"sir ur water" she spoke softly.

Wow her voice its more sweet than I expected.

"thanks" I said as I took the glass from her. unlike everyother girl she dint stand there drooling over me rather she smiled and left to the guy who I asked water before. Huh I so hope she really drool over me…..oh shut up maan…

Then I saw her speaking with the guy so animatedly making cute cute faces….thank god I think she is the same as she portrayed herself on the stage… she moved to other girl and then other and then other is she speaking to all the volunteers and she is also speaking to the guests there. her smile her eyes…mainly her expressions and the cute faces she is making are drawing me towards her…..

Just then my phone rang and I went out into the garden away from the noise to attend my call. Its dadi on the line.

"haan dadi"

"I m at charity show"

"no dadi I will be late u ppl eat ur dinner and sleep…say nakul to leave the food for me on the table and leave"

"I cant dadi….still there are lot more performances"

"I wish I can come"

"no its not boring…children are good…but…."

"ok ok I will try"

"bye goodn8 and haan have ur medicines"

I cut the call and turned back and found her there looking at me smiling. Is she following me? Well she doesn't look that type.

"hey if u wanna go home u can no one is stopping u" she said.

"no one can stop me" I said in attitude.

"attitude haan? Nice but keep that away from me coz I have loads" she said in the same attitude as mine.

Woooh this girl has guts to show her attitude to me…THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA…

"excuse me!!!" I said shocked.

"u r excused" she smiled her dazzling smile.

"what!!" I said confused.

"oh y r u so boring!!!" she said lazily.

"do u know who u r speaking with?" I asked.

"ofcourse….u r one of our guests….MSK…..so" she shrugged her shoulders as if nothing.

"so!!!" I repeated.

"so…does that make any different….u r even a human like everyother…except the fact that u r rich….but that doesn't change anything….does that?" she said ever so casually and I was surprised.

"no" I heard me saying…what!!!! Did I say that?

She smiled her cute smile and extended her hand "hi…I m geet..geet handa…nice to meet u mr.khurana"

I shook her hand but I dint like her calling me mr.khurana..i dunno y so I said "its maan….u can call me maan….nice to meet u geet"

"hmm thanks for giving me the 'allowance' to call u maan…..heard that u wont allow anyone to call u maan…its always mr.khurana or mk or the great msk" she smiled.

"nothing like that" I said.

"is that so?" she asked.

I looked back at the hall from where the songs are playing and she looked at my direction.

"can u come to a walk with me?" she asked.

I was shocked…is she asking that in real? I looked at her confused.

"sorry I though u dint like to go back to show" she sighed slyly.

"lets go" I said as I found myself extending my hand to her….hey how on earth did I extend my hand!!! She looked at me and then my hand. I pulled back my hand and said "sorry"

She just nodded and started to walk. I walked beside her. we left the hall and entered the road….thank god its night or else the whole media would be here now making a big news MSK on a walk with a stranger girl.

"thank god it's night or else the whole media would be here now making a big news MSK on a walk with a stranger girl…" she said suddenly and I looked at her shocked. Can she read minds?

And I asked the same out…"can u read minds?" how stupidly I m behaving

"no" she looked at me confused.

"oh u r thinking the same" she said realizing what I meant.

I just nodded.

"wont u speak anything? I m the one speaking from the time we met and u spoke nothing…not even a full sentence" she complained cutely and I just can stop my chuckle.

"u know what maan…ur smile is so nice" she complimented.

"thanks" I said.

"just thanks?" she said.

"what else do u want?" I asked now a bit confused.

"another one of ur dazzling smiles" she smiled…this is what I call a dazzling smile..not mine.

But I smiled at her and she smiled back more.

'how can u accept an unknown girl's proposal for a walk" she said.

"u r not unknown" I said.

"really!!!...what do u know about me apart from my name" she challenged.

"ur eyes….ur expressions…and ur smile" I dunno why I said that but this made her smile with a little red in her cheeks.

"and if I want I can know everything about u in few hours" I said.

"ya I know…after all u r the great MSK" she said.

"so u like the great MSK!!" I hope she say no…I hope she say I like maan not msk….but y am I even hoping that?

"some what yes and some what no" she sighed.

"now whats that?" I asked suspicious.

"man I like ur name…" she chirped…"MSK…M S K……like in films….MAAN SINGH KHURANA…" she said rather dramatic way which made me smile.

We walked and walked mostly she spoke and even made me speak…she said she is doing her msc first yr and how come her parents live in patiyala and how she came to delhi for graduation and everything from her pet dog to her best friend piya….and she made me say about my dadi my mom and I just said my dad passed away when she gave me a sorry but I shrugged it off saying it ok and then my work…she complained that one shldn't work like that..they become a machine and also called me a machine but I dint mind that. Our walk stopped when she said she is tired and she cant walk back. I called my car and offered her to drop home but she rejected saying she left her scooty at the hall but I managed her getting into my car giving the reasons of late night and she finally accepted when I sent my driver back to get her scooty to her house and I drove her to her house. In the way itself she fell asleep and I thought to pick her in my arms but hey just today u met her man….i woke her up and she said a sweet sorry for falling asleep while I just smiled and she walked to her house giving me an enchanting smile and taking back my smile wishing me goodn8.

I smiled remembering her hawa hawai song. Even know I had that video of her dance in my mobile…she made me know everything about that song later…man she loves that song very much. I once again looked at her sleeping form and closed my eyes to let the sleep take over me.

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Beautiful
awesome
no words to describe

such a lovely update 👏
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kahin maa hi toh nehi hai woh ladka jiske liye geet k mummy-papa geet ko bole hai...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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