Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144 - Page 91

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Posted: 12 years ago
poor khushi is torn between two...
looking forward for the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am good at this, res for comment.
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I really like your Akash and Payal, they are what a couple of today will be. I so hope Payal says yes to Akash (Romantic proposal in the offing and I am so looking forward to it)
Khushi is such a girl and I don't mean this in a negative way. She felt a spark with Arnav that was missing with NKay. I feel for her, this is a classic battle between the heart and mind, no prizes for guessing what I want to win here. I am impressed with her ability to handle her life. Good she called Nkay to sort the matter out and pace their relationship well, that was needed. Nkay too will have to fall in step with her in this matter.
Arnav is adorable in this update, don't know if the others will view it the way I do, but he was just adorable. He knows himself well and thinks he would be a awful father, given his views on life and relationships in general. I am liking this guy a lot not, was unclear about him in the past, now I am with the man, all the way. I also like the fact, he does not use women, he is with those who are with him willingly and that does not make him bad or character dheela, he is just being honest.
Edited by Kalyaani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I like how Khushi is handling everything, very mature inspite of her inexperience.

I am not the biggest fan of NKay, he is too nice, saccharine and a tad bit boring that way. Arnav on the other hand - I like this guy because of his crystal clear thinking - he knows what he wants, what he can do and what he cannot. His break up with Lavanya was very adult, and now this Ameen - a man who manages to maintain a friendship with his ex-es, one has to give him some credit. But the whole onion-chopping-Arnav was such a domestic picture, absolutely adorable.

I like this Anjali, she is not all gooey and warm about her Chhote - she is ASR's sister. His equal. Good, would love to see more of her.

And I cannot wait for Aakash's proposal, looks very promising and I'm keeping my fingers crossed!
Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res šŸ˜›

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Hi NB!

This is a fabulous update! šŸ‘

For the first time since this FF started Khushi has behaved in a level headed manner. She is still confused and does not understand everything. But she is treating everyone around her with dignity and understanding. She is trying to deal with all this like an adult. Very nice.

She thought of her friend Payal before herself which is sweet. And Khushi tried her best to be happy for her friend despite everything she was going through. She found it in her to make friends with Akash too for the sake of her friend.

She clarified and patched up things with NK too. Really liked that part. She apologized to him and at the same time voiced her concerns about his overbearing attitude. I hope NKay gets the message and does not make a fool of himself. I like the poor guy. 😃

i liked the way she dealt with Arnav and recognized the fact that Arnav and her are not exactly made for each other. If she has to continue with Arnav obviously a smart person like her will weigh pros and cons before taking any decisions or making mistakes I suppose.

Arnav - still a disaster, sorry do not like him very much. He is too stuck up. For a guy who professes to prefer staying alone he needs female company way too often.

Cannot wait to see what happens next...

Edited by glassdoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Phew, updated. Now I can finally read other FFs.
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Posted: 12 years ago


Res!

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Loved several things here, Khushi's apology to NK being one of them.
I liked the proposal scenario , how romantic !

And phew, Ameen is Arnav's ex.

Totally understand why Khushi would feel overwhelmed, this is all too much for her to handle..maybe she should confide in Payal.

Nice addition of Anjali's kids here .
So Arnav is obstinate in his refusal to even consider marriage ..

And how can I forget Malayka! LOL, Chutki is Di's chosen one!šŸ˜†

Nicely written, NB.

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago
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I had missed chapter 9, just caught up on both. Beautiful updates Basanti! You totally did justice to Diwali. I love Khushi's outfit, the way it was described made me think of the beautiful lehenga she wore on Payal's wedding, and well, her first wedding to Arnav. Sorry if this bothers you, but was that the inspiration? Cos that was easily one of the most gorgeous dresses she wore. And you had a diya scene, him helping her walk, her tripping, him catching her- all the magic of Diwali '11 relived. Thank you for that. I'm kind of glad things sorted out with NK, cos Arnav's a bit complicated for Khushi, she and NK share the same mindset,etc. Besides, this is her first relationship, so she doesn't deserve the grief. And NK is a shameless flirt, as much as I love him. Wait, did Arnav just tell Anjali off? And he called her Anjali? The mind boggles :P Dear Anjali, he just got out of a relationship, why would you think he wants to see prospective brides, no matter how well-suited they are? Ah, she brings in the big guns, aka Naniji!! Looking forward to the next update!
P.S. This is my 300th post :)
Edited by SS88 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love the way the story is progressing...khushi's confusion...the way she broke down and akash handled her ...it was nice to see their bond...and Arnav he has always been hiding his feelings...he is still doing so...lets see how much he hides...Awesome updatešŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Can understand the confusion in Khushi's mind regarding her feelings for both Arnav and NKay ...
one is just trying to hide his feelings for her and one wants to take their friendship forward ...

Loved the way Aakash handled Kushi with so much tenderness and care ... at least Khushi has two great friends who she can depend upon ...

Anjali's efforts to see her brother married and becoming a father are all in vain as Arnav seems to have sworn to remain a happy bachelor forever šŸ˜† ...
Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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