Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144

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Thanushiya

@ThanuAditya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#881

Awesome update ! Nw Khushi started to feel sumthin for Arnav ! Cool !

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Frida

@Frida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#882

Nice update!

Loved the whole diwali description as it brought back the good old memories.

I always feel sorry for NK. This poor character deserves a happy ending with Khushi in atleast 1 story :)

Pls update soon!

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saba

@ASR6262

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Posted: 12 years ago

#883

Awesome update very interesting story
continue soon please and thank u for pm me

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#884

Originally posted by: meera30
Res

In the matters of love and very often the other L-word that goes with it, one is always exaggerated in his or her reactions. The tussle too great for rational / sane thinking

Can I blame any one of these people? I don't know. I would be giving them very different pieces of advise if I were any of their friends.

NKay is adorable but sadly human nature tends to overlook the person who gives without asking. And this I know from personal experience in various fields of life. The unattainable, the one that generates curiosity, the one that makes you jittery and unsure, is always greener.

Till you grow and be wiser - usually post facto and after a lot of pain

Great chapter, K. And not just because it beautifully recreates the magic of Diwali.

There are two types of stories I like - ones that make you think and ones that make you feel. This one has my mind always in overdrive. I love it!

Coming from a writer like you, this means a lot to me. Thanks.

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boreddamsel

@boreddamsel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#885

Ok.. that definitely described the amazing Diwali scene.. it was brilliant, sweets.. why would you think you didn't do a good job..

I loved it.. so Khushi clearly is attracted to Arnav and not to NK. Of course! 😳

though my fave line was this :

"I need some alcohol pronto and a woman soon" 😆

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#886

It definitely brought back the good old memories from the Diwali scene...where the ringing of the phone was the interruption in the serial here we had NK ..

I actually feel bad for NK..I know Khushi has not given any wrong ideas but still he has his hopes on her ...Khushi is overwhelmed with all the attraction that she is getting but hopefully she tries to clear her feelings with NK...

She is attracted to Arnav and vice versa..

Edited by meera06 - 12 years ago

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@debby_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#887

the story is getting weaved in such a beautiful way...Fantastic part...i really loved how their feelings are getting tangled...loved it :)

Edited by debby_11 - 12 years ago

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quicksand

@quicksand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#888

The whole update reminded the Diwali episode thanks for the same...😊
Arnav is trying hard to stay away form khushi ...poor man...
enjoyed the update...continue soon

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#889

very nicely written..recaptured the diwali magic but in your own way..i wish NK had not interrupted though😃...
these relationships are getting more and more complicated..if she likes NK for what he is, she is extremely attracted to Arnav...she also reacts to NKs touch. quite normal but very complicated..

well written