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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Hi again *laughs*

I know I'm late here too but I'm going to stand by the saying 'Better late than never' 😛

Okay first kostin to you is

Where is part three?

I can't see it and I really want to know what Payal is going to say to Arnav and why they are in the hospital in the present day. I'm glad that she finally has seen Akash as a spineless punk though. It's time to take matters into her own hands.

Loved how you described everything and especially Dadi's intentions.

I'm waiting for Part three!!! =D

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lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

I think I saw a part three somewhere? Hmm. Ah! O yes! I saw it in the second part where you promised the third part :P

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Priya

@ArhiDeewani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Loved it!! Waiting for part 3!! Loved Payal in this xx

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

You really got the essence in the first part with dadi. I really like this payal. She's got her spine. Now am curious who exactly is the girl in the first part. I thought it was khushi, but could it be someone else.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Ouch! That was tough.. maybe no less than what Raizada deserves but poor Khushi...

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

oh.. that was beautiful... strong kushi... loved it... thank you

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667300

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Ack, so hard-hitting but I've always thought Arnav's act first think later attitude would have some serious consequences that he couldn't undo with a sorry and this is one of them :(