OS::ArHi:: Unforgivable [Complete]

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@Nmyra

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Title: Unforgivable

Author: Nmyra

COMPLETE

Lead Pairing: Arnav/Khushi

Additional Characters: Anjali/Payal/Dadiji

Rating: PG 13

Total word length: 1500 +

Chapters: 3

Status: Complete

Summary: Standing feet away from the Mandap they were to be married at - Khushi prays as the man she loves endures a test of faith. A tale of what happens when faith battle cynicism. A tale of tragedy and truth. And how sometimes you can be simply - too late.

Forum-Link: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3208626

Edited by Nmyra - 12 years ago

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh dear.

Something is wrong with her Amma or Babuji na...thats the only reason she wouldnt forgive Arnav because when it comes to her own self, there isnt one wrong that he could do which she wouldnt overlook because of the unadulterated pool of love she has for him. Sigh.

I really really really wish Arnav, in the show and here, doesnt give two hoots about his Dadi and her *insert expletive* but realizes that a. Khushi is not at fault here AT ALL and b. he loves her and she has done him the grace of falling in love with him...hope he respects the bond they have forged...

Great writing, Nymra. This sentence was amazing -

"She wondered absently, which of them would be more surprised to discover that there was."

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

I loved the start. I am glad I came across this OS on the current situation and that also written by you. I am eagerly waiting for the second part :)

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb start... If he leaves Khushi at the altar still I am sure she will forgive him after hearing the reason and will feel sorry for him as well but I hope it's not gonna be like that in your os.

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nimra21

@nimra21

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved the start. For once, I hope Arnav chooses Khushi. She deserves it. Won't be able to tolerate the show if it goes down the other path. Continue soon. :)