OS::ArHi:: Unforgivable [Complete] - Page 5

wud luv an akash payal confrobtation in the show 2

is she actually f**king advertising Kingfisher here?! its cus of idiots like them, woman suffer because of the thing men do in the world. yea yea i know its an OS, but still it doesn't change the fact things like this happen, and people like buddhi chamdi actually exist in real life :/ this is not fair. i hope she dies a painful death from the effects of malaria, jaundice, typhoid, cancer, asthma and every thing. the woman makes me sick. I wish her husband cheated on her. gaah! and you know wat's worse, that after everything HER son did, she doesn't even try thinking about her daughter in law, who lost much more den her son, for his doings. its only about her SON's unhappiness and what he won't be able to do anymore. its rather pitiful

awesome loved payal she amazing

Loved your take on current track...Payal is taking a stand - that was a surprise!

Great that Payal has decided to fight for her sister...

Great updates Nymra ! :D
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loved it immesely.. emotional, yet loved the way you captured and cut the scenes, giving it a '3 hours' repetition mode. if you get what I mean.
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poor Khush and Arnav, really felt for them. esp. Khush.. she made me cry.
really awaiting for the third part.
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doing an amazing job ! love your fic. pieces.

Love you payal...cant wait to c what she's up to...

"And for once when Payal Gupta Raizada, turned around she didn't see her much adored husband. She saw a man, who didn't have the backbone to wipe away his wife's tears, she saw a boy still hiding behind his mother's achaal, she saw him, for what he really was. And then without a single word, she walked away."

Go Payal! Khushi's POV in the first part broke my heart. She was the unfailing optimist. Always forgiving and forgetting. For her to be so numb and not forgive her Arnavji? Something huge must've happened! Suffice to say Dadi does not figure in the list of my most favourite people. Vindictive old bitch!