OS::ArHi:: Unforgivable [Complete]

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moonlight99

@moonlight99

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

I loved it! I can feel Khushi's pain. And I love Payal with a backbone. That seems so nice. I wish her husband had one but unfortunately he is not.

Thanks for the pm!

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

wow! awesome one!! i love it when ppl write about payal's feelings too!!
her character is one of the least bit used

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

ooh i bookmarked this on my phone the moment i saw it..but now only got a peaceful moment to hunt it down!!

it is amazing!! the pain is tangible...truly heartbreaking!!

And i love this Payal!! cz this is the Payal i always wanted her to be!! do update soon!:-)

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Ugh I hate Dadi so much, she needs a tight slap across her face and a big dose of reality before she starts pointing fingers at others!

Love how Payal finally saw Akash as the boy hiding behind his mother's achaal!!

Thanks a much for the pm!!

Eagerly waiting for the next part!!

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...Pwincess...

@...Pwincess...

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Brilliantly written! I can't wait to read the next part.

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Thanks for the PM. Love Payal. Poor Khushi.

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Mira

@kyunki_iloveu

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

amazinggg..
i am glad payal walked away
and dadi..
ughh just want to strangle her..
someone needs to tell her that it takes TWO to tango...
cant wait to read the last part
:)

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

u had portrayed every individuals thoughts so wonderfully

can't wait for next update

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blck234

@blck234

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Wow! Khushi's emotions portrayed amazingly! Thank God nothing like this happened in the show:) I am dying to know who is in the hospital:( Pls update soon! Thank you for the pm!