MAANEET SS HEAVEN IN HELL THREAD-1 - Page 21

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H2 - 11




Suddenly, there was a gun shot


THUDDD


DADI : MAANNN


GEET : GURUU


ANI : BHAIII


Shankar dada aimed at Maan thinking he is Guru, but Guru saw tat and came in middle, Te bullet pierced his heart , Guru fall on Maan , Maan holds him




Maan shouts : Guru Guru,


Dadi started to cry : beta

Anni to rush to Guru , : Bhai


Geet stood numb, , Guru smiles at her and closes his eye


Maan : Guru open ur eyes Guru dare u close ur eyes, Guru


They rush him to hospital, doctors were checking him, outside Maan pacing here and there, Dadi sitting in te chair and Anni consoling her,Father was sitting in te chair and praying .


Geet stood near one of te pillar to hold its support and looking at te door, were Guru have taken in,




Adi came , : Maan sir one minute

Maan node his head and went with him,

Police : Mr.Khurana, im sorry

Maan : I don't want ur sorry, were is he

Police : in custody

Maan : hmmm I want him

Police : but

Maan shot a angry glare, Police took him were Shankar dada have been kept.



As soon as Maan enter into te room, he started to hit Shankar

Shankar : so u didt die

Maan : how dare u shot at my Guru, I wont leave u, he started to beat him,




Shankar laughing : so I aim at u , but Guru came in middle, so tis time I didt miss him, he died


Maan seeing him, his angry raised to his veins and started to beat him, hit on his stomach, Shankar was spilting te blood,

Maan didt became calm, te way Guru fell on him, came in front of him, he took te gun from te police who is standing nearby, and shot Shankar straight in his head, DOOM.


Police were shock to see tis

Police : Sir

Maan eyed Adi and went from there

Adi to police : clear tis and meet me 2mor

Police : but sir

Adi : do wat I say, and he too went off

HOSPITAL,


Dr's were trying they best to save Guru,

Outside , Geet still looking at te door


Maan came : Anni did dr said anything

Anni who was crying came and hugged Maan : no Bhai

At tat time , Drs came out

Maan rush to them and yelling at Dr : wat happen Dr

Dr was scared little bit to see Maan

Maan : I ask wat happen,

Dr : Mr. Khurana be calm, we are trying, but te bullet pierced his heart , through his aterial wall, we cant stop te internal bleeding.

Maan : wat u mean u cant stop

Dr bend his head : we cant save him, he want to see u all

Maan raise his hand to hold Dr ki neck but Dadi stops him,

Dadi : Maan cum we will meet him



Dadi and Anni rush to ICU, Dadi was shocked to see Guru lying and struggling for his last breath





Dadi : Guru

Guru smiles at her : Dadi

Guru : Father

Father : my son, he kiss him on his forehead

Anni too hugs him

Guru : anni baby

Anni : bhai pls don't leave me, I cant stay without u pls bhai


Guru caress her hair : Anni ur strong girl pls control urself saying tis he look at te entrance of te door were Maan stood






Guru : Maan

Maan came and holds his hand,




Guru kiss his hand : Maan

Maan : shh don't talk who said u to cum in between

Guru : then wat I will do, now I will close my eyes with peace thinking I saved my Bhai , I saved him

Maan : but I will be in hell thinking tat I didt save u

Guru : no Maan tat was aim for me

Maan : so

Guru : Maan u r still baby, my old Maan

Maan : don't

Guru : Dadi were is Geet

Dadi turn to see Geet is no were

Guru : Dadi I want to see Geet


Guru whisper something to Dadi , Dadi went out to see Geet, she was so shock to see Geet who was sitting holding te pillar and staing te door of ICU


Dadi went to her and hugged : Geet Geet

Geet turn to see her

Dadi : Guru wants to meet u

Geet , hearing Guru , she rush to room




Guru smile at her , Geet went and hugged him, she is crying holding his hand




Guru : Anni I want to speak to them

Anni went out


Guru holds Geet and Maan hand , and bring together , Maan stiffened


Guru : pls Maan

Maan : no Guru no dare u think tat


Still then Geet hugging Guru and didt see wat is going on , she is still feeling Guru


Guru : pls Maan for me, my last wish

Before he completes Maan closes his mouth

Maan : I cant do tis pls Guru don't punish me


Guru : no Maan im not punishing u, im asking , Geet don't have anyone in tis world rather than me and ANNI , u know how she took care of Our Anni, I had Anni , but she , she will became again a orphan Maan . she will go were she came from. She has so much dreams , but I didt fulfill anything pls Maan, I don't have too much time, I want to see u and Geet ki wedding pls Maan fulfill my last wish


Maan : Guruu

Guru : pls Maan seeing ur wedding I will go to our mumma papa with happiness

Maan stares at him


Guru brought Geet and Maan hands together and kissed


Guru : Geet Geet look at me

Geet raised her head and saw Guru ,

Guru : Geet u will do wat I say

Geet nodes her head like a baby

Guru took Geet ki hand and kept in his head

Guru : then promise me

Geet promise Guru on his head

Guru : then marry Maan

Geet glared at him and slapped him

Maan shot angry glare to Geet

Guru smiles at her: now too u wont stop slapping me, thanku god i escaped from ur beatings,

Geet stares at him

Guru : pls Geet , for me, my last wish, u wont do tis for me u promised me


Geet closes his mouth and nodes her head : no Guru pls no




Guru holds both they hands and took near his heart : pls and his breathing started to get increase

Maan shouted : dr dr drrr

Geet stood numb seeing Guru

Dr checking his pulse and trying to bring his pulse to normal

Maan and Geet came out

Dadi : pls Maan For our Guru

Dr came out : Mr. Khurana he is sinking

Maan : no Dadi arrange


Dadi wipe her tears, Father and te whole orphanage kids came to see him, kids went to Guru KI room


Guru : hai Friends

Kids : Guru Bhai and started to cry

Guru : oh no u all my strong friends , chi chi u should not cry


Father : yes kids , u know naa ur Guru Bhai don't like wen u all crying naa, so wipe ur tears


Maan came to Guru ki room, carry him in his arms and took him out , made him to sit in wheel chair


Dadi arrange a small mandap in te hospital, Guru was so happy thinking his two most precious people of his life going to be together


Guru : Maan cum here

Maan : wat Guru


Guru took his chain from his neck which name as M' and give it to Maan ( wen they separate before 20 years, Maan and Guru changed they chains, Maan chain in Guru ki neck and Guru ki chain in Maan's neck)


Guru : wear tis to Geet and make her urs

Maan took te chain, Guru kiss on Maan's head

Maan holds Geet ki hand, Geet was shocked , she don't wat is going on




Geet was still in her wedding gown and Maan in suit , Maan holds her hand and took te 7 pheres around te agni and tie te chain around her neck and kept te sindoor on her head, Father was reading te bible, and blessing them.


Then Father gave te marriage papers, Maan signed and Anni took Geet's hand and signed it.

Geet was shocked and staring te chain

Guru was smiling all te time seeing them, he was looking at them


Maan took Geet and went to near Guru and touch his shoulder, Guru fell on Maan hand , were Geet hand too were there. Both Maan and Geet holding Guru


Maaneet : GURUUU


EVERYONE : GURUUU


Te whole hospital surrounds by every one cries.


Maan stood there , he didt cry , but lots of valcanos is bursting inside him




Dadi and anni hugs Guru and crying , Geet didt cry didt show any of her emotions, just staring Guru ki smiling face, holding his hand

Father was crying : my son

Adi too crying

Dadi : Guru Guru

Maan : Adi arrange everything to take Guru to delhi

Father was shocked to hear tis

But Dadi know who is Maan

Father : but beta we will do his last rituals in church

Maan : no Father I want to take him to delhi, to his home,

Dadi : Father we will take Guru , and we want to do his last rituals in his parents place

Father understand they feelings and nodes his head

Maan took Guru to delhi and made arrangement for everyone

DELHI ,


Maan took Guru in helicopter with Adi and Father

Dadi , Anni , Geet came in another flight

Maan took Guru to KM,


Dadi : Guru see ur home, Guru after so many years u came to ur home but like tis, I thought to bring u as a new bride but not like tis she started to cry


Father hugs Anni , and consoling her, in tis one stood seeing Guru without blinking


Geet stood holding Guru ki hand and seeing him, like her last view


Medias were surrounded , all they relatives came.


Maan ki chachaji : IM sorry Maji,

He touch Maan ki shoulder , but Maan snaps him

Chachaji : I know Maan u are sad but control urself and start te rituals

Father too came : haa Maan beta we will start te rituals


They were arranging and took Guru ki body for funeral. Geet didt leave Guru hand, Maan took her hand and took Guru .

they took him to te place were they parent's funeral was taken place. Maan seeing Guru's smiling face , atlast he kept te agni on Guru ki body .




Maan did all te rituals and left with giving a last look to Guru's burning body, still his smiling still fresh in his heart




KM,


Dadi holds Geet , but she is struggling to go with Guru



Dadi : Geet beta pls control urself

Geet : Dadi my Guru

Dadi : pls beta , he left us, he wont cum

Geet : no he cant do tis to me

Geet snap Dadi ki hand and run outside ,

Dadi : Geet beta

Anni : Geet


Father , Dadi , Anni rush following Geet, Geet was running on te road , and searching Guru.



Maan who was returning was shocked as everyone running out, he stop te car and rush behind them to see Geet running on te road.

Geet : Guru Guru

Geet sat on her knees and started to cry






Dadi holds her and shaking her : Geet beta pls control urself. Our Guru left us our Guru left


Geet : no Dadi he cant leave me like tis, he cant . he said he will be with me forever, no, she started to cry screaming her lungs

Father sat beside her and side hugs her

Father : Geet don't cry Geet , if our Guru see u like tis, he will not be in peace . he wants every one to be happy

Father didt get any response from Geet, and saw who was fainted In his arms

Father : Geet Geet

Dadi too saw : Geet beta

Dadi : Maan pls hold her

Maan took Geet in her arms and carried her to KM




Maan made Geet to lye on te bed , Dadi called Dr,

Dr came and checked her

Dr : now to worry Mrs. Khurana , she is in stress make her calm

Dadi : ok dr we will see her


Anni sat beside her and caressing her hair. Father too sat beside her


Maan went to his room, and stand under te shower , and cooling his heart which is burning. Even burning te whole world , too he cant cool his heart.


Maan went to Gym to reduce his frustration, he was punching te punching bag, he showing his all insecure, his angry, his pain everything, he is kicking te bag which tore into pieces and te sand falls down.







Maan : why why Guru why u left me like our maa , papa, why every one leaving me wen i need them most, why. no Guru i wont leave any one , anyone who destroyed our family, i wont leave any one, saying tis he breaking te ice.. his hands is bleeding,




He sat on his knees. and crying, panting heavily. now he want to burn te whole world,



Maan : no i wont leave any one, no and he lyed they , slept due to so much of exausted

PRECAP : GEET ? 😭

NEXT PART- 12, pg 43

Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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HAPPY PONGAL AND MAKAR SANKRANTI TO ALL MY MAANEETIANS
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Posted: 12 years ago
painful n emotional update

Guru died

geet is in shocked to see Guru 😭

Guru last wish to see Maan n Geet both to marry each other

Dadi make all the arrangement for the wedding in the hospital itself in order to fulfilled his grandson last wish

Geet is so much stress out n not in a sense to know tht she had married Maan

Maan is in pain seeing one by one his loved one leaving him alone




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Posted: 12 years ago
very emotional nd painful.😭..guru left all nd specially is aser maan nd geet ke upper jaida hay.guru ne maan nd geet ko ek kar dia.❤️..lekin kya maan aur geet ye ristha apna nayengay.🤔...maan is mentally frusted .poor geet...hope maan help her to recovery from this.wating 4 next yar😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heart Wrenching update Nalini...
Nw waitng fr next..
Update Soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read in one go
Loved the updates nd thid part so emotional
I cried reading the update
Seriously guru died
Its heart breKing
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yeh kya ho gaya...abhi abhi toh mile the...aur guru ko bula liya babaji...galat hai yeh...nehi hona chahiye tha yeh...abb kya hoga maan aur geet ka...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
nooo guru is no more
and both geet and maan are broken with his death
why did this have to happen
ab aage kya
geet ka kya hoga
she was gonna marry guru and ended up marrying maan as it was his last wish
why guru did you leave them behind
maan just found you and geet what will she do without you
damn that shankar he ruined everything
well he is dead but he took guru with him too
so sad this whole update was
guess this was to happen but hoped it wouldnt happen
but before going he made sure that he got geet married to maan as she has no one except him and anni in this world
oh dear how shall geet react now
it cant be good her condition
and lets not forget maan

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
most emotional update
now how maan and geet r going to come out of this painful moment

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