MAANEET SS HEAVEN IN HELL THREAD-1 - Page 43

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it nice that maan did like this,
hope soon geet realizes her love

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow wow nyccc update😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
read it in a go
awesome updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
loved it...mana filled geet maang again...hope she understand maan n their relationship...
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Posted: 12 years ago
this is an awesome ss!
you know in other writtings they sometimes have maan or geet have a past fiance or lover but somehow it is always weird for me to accept those people. but in this ss gurmeet is geet's past fiance and i actually had no trouble accepting him!!! (i guess it is because it is GC 😳).
anyways...
the story is progressing nicely!
maan has realized and accepted his feelings for geet and now it is time for geet to accept this relation...

my favorite scene till current update is the scene where geet slaps maan thinking him to be guru and guru is laughing!
and
laughing guru...


Edited by april12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab yaar...but i miss my maaneet yaar...😭seeing dis pics i still cnt forget dem and love dem too yaar...they r so gud in dis pics yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsum update 😊 hope dat geet would accept maan soon want 2 see maaneet happy 2gether 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 18
nice part...
he claimed her in front of everyone...
poor Geet...
and unconsciously she has accepted Maan her husband...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago












H2 - 19





Geet was lying on Dadi ki lap, soon Geet got up with a jerk, hearing Anni ki scream

Anni : wat is tis ah, u both are together enjoying leaving me alone, tis too bad

Geet and Dadi look at her , node they head seeing her nautanki

Anni : give me some space me too want to sleep with u both

Geet move little and Anni settled herself and hugs Geet and cuddle to her, Dadi caress both of them, and all slept


MORNING,


All settled for breakfast te morning, Maan sat in te head chair, Dadi made Geet to sit in next to Maan, Geet avoid Maan ki gaze, Anni was talking and Geet just listening, and playing with her food,




Dadi : Geet wat happen, why u not eating r u fine

Geet : no Dadi I fine, im having and she started to have her food


Geet was still restless feeling Maan ki gaze on her , te way he is staring at her like he will burn her with his looks, Maan smirks

Maan : Geet pass me juice

Geet didt respond, but tilting here head down, staring at food

Dadi sense Geet is lost some were : Geet Geet

Geet came back to sense : ah ahn Dadi

Dadi : wat happen beta u r not fine, why u not eating and see Maan is asking to pass juice


Geet then pass te juice to him, Maan hold te glass with Geet ki finger , Geet is wriggling to take her hand from , te glass but my maan didt leave




Dadi : wat happen Maan

Maan then left her finger and started to have his juice

Geet murmer : DUST DHANAV , wat he think of himself

Maan can sense she is cursing him, Geet was looking up wen she saw Maan is looking at her and at once tilt her head down


Geet started to eat her food, but it struck in her throat, wen she felt some one holding her hand under te table, she bend down and saw, shocked to see MAAN holding her hand , and caressing . Geet saw Maan who pretending nothing happen but eating his pasta . Geet cleared her throat





Here Maan was enjoying teasing Geet

Maan (st) : tis is te start Geet

Anni : Geet wat happen have some water

Geet : ah hmm


Geet sip te water , but chocked it wen Maan started to cares her feet with his feet, Geet eyes poped out



Geet : why he is doing like tis, oh babaji

Geet saw Maan , but he avoid her and talking to dadi, Geet was wriggling to free her hand, but Maan holds it tight, so she started to have her food in her right hand, crusing him, Maan look at Geet and smirk

Anni : im leaving for col

Geet thought tis will be escape from Maan , but before she say something

Maan : no Anni I will drop Geet , I have meeting on her way to school

Anni : ok bhai, bye

Dadi too went to her room,

Geet : Maanji

Maan : hmm Geet

Geet was struggling how to talk with him

Maan : wat happen Geet u want some thing

Geet : ah , wo me

Maan was enjoying her nervousness, he want to play little more, his hold on her hand became more tight



Maan : hmm Geet im waiting

Geet : pls leave my hand Maanji

Maan : why

Geet still wriggling : pls

Geet was feeling restless with his touch, he felt some thing, Maan saw some restless In her eyes, and left her hand

Geet run away at once he left her hand

Maan : I will be waiting in te car cum soon

Geet run to her room holding her heart


Geet : wat happen to him, why he is doing tis to me, pls babaji, wat is happening to me, wen he touch I felt some thing , I have to maintain distance from him, how can now I have to go with him in same car, wat he will do, I cant avoid too, driver will be there




Dadi came : Geet wat u doing,. Maan is waiting for u, r u ready

Geet : hmm Dadi, bye dadi

Dadi : bye beta

Geet went out , and shock to see Maan is sitting in te driver seat, Geet open te back seat to sit,



Maan : Geet im not ur driver , so u sit in te front, if u deny I wont start te car until u sit in front seat

Geet have no other go and sat in front next to Maan




Maan start te car , te drive was so silent, Maan was glancing at her bnow and then, but Geet avoid him, and looking outside te window. Geet ki duppatta was on tee gar, Maan saw it and hold it in his hand. Geet didt notice it.




Maan took te duppata , smell it hold near his heart , he felt he is holding Geet in his arms, still he holding it and driving


They reached Geet ki school. Geet try to get down, but she jerk back to her seat, then she saw Maan holding her duppata , Maan pretend not to see her




Geet : Maanji

Maan : ah Geet bye

Geet : no

Maan : wat happen Geet close te door and leave , im also getting late

Geet : Maanji me wo



Maan : Geet wat happen to u, from morning u stammering , do have any problem, we will go to dr

Geet : no no I mean , my dupatta

Maan look at her duppata : wat happen to ur dupatta, it very nice, its suits u

Geet tap her head with her hand, Maan was enjoying her nervousness

Maan : wat happen Geet u having headache, u want to go to home

Geet : no no

Maan : then wat is te problem

Geet : my dupatta , u holding my dupatta , and she pulled it from him

Maan : oh tis one, u can ask tat naa, he left her dupatta





Geet : hmm thanku and turn to leave

Maan : geet

Geet turn

Maan smile at her : bye have a nice day

Geet run inside without saying anything

Maan : tis is te start Geet I will make u accept my love, he started his car


Te whole day Geet cant concentrate on her work, so she decide to take off and go to home



She reached at 2 , dadi saw Geet

Dadi : hare beta u came so soon

Geet : hmm I feeling tired so came soon

Dadi : wat happen to u both,

Geet : both

Dadi : Maan too came home soon, and said he is tired

Geet is shocked (st) : oh god now wat I will do, pls babaji save me from tat dust dhanav




Nakul came with coffee

Dadi : nakul gave te tray to Geet she will take coffee to Maan, u bring tea for Geet

Nakul : ok maaji

Geet : Dadi

Dadi : wat happen Geet take coffee for Maan, then take rest I will send tea for u

Geet : hmm ok Dadi


Geet : oh god from morning he is not leaving me, now wat he will do, we both are alone, I cant return back also without giving coffee to him, Dadi will ask me te reason, wat I will say, Geet be strong, if he do something, u pay him back, be strong, don't fall for his trap, she was chanting it and open te door with shaking hands




Geet open and saw he was not in his room, but his study was opened, she went inside and saw he was sitting in chair and resting his head and closing his eyes






Geet cleared her throat , Maan open his eyes and saw her

Maan : hmm GEET

Geet : ur coffee

Maan : hmm place it on te table and while going close te door and go

Geet was shocked : hmm and she turn and once again she saw Maan and went out




Geet (st): wat happen to him, from morning he is teasing but now he didt look at me , is he is not well, or some thing bothering him, Geet why u thinking too much, u only thought he should not cum near u , now he stop disturbing u, but u thinking abt him, but why he didt talk or do something,



Geet went to her room, and lyed on her bed and started to think abt Maan



Here Maan in his room


Maan came to know from his Bg tat Geet came out soon from her school, before her eh reached and waiting for her, wen she came to his room, he know and close his eyes and pretends to sleep, Maan notice te shock in Geet ki eyes wen he said keep te coffee on te table





Maan (st) : Geet now u will start thinking abt me, now slowly I will get place in heart,

Geet thinking and thinking she doze off, she wake up wen NAkul came to cal her for dinner

Geet : oh god I slept for so long, she got freshen up and went down

Dadi : Geet now u ok,

Geet : yes Dadi,

Geet saw Maan ki place it was empty

Geet (st) : were is he, why he didt cum for diner, is he really not well, can I ask Dadi , no how can I ask, oh god I will soon became mad

Dadi sense her restless and smirk (st) : so Geet started to miss Maan

Dadi : Geet beta have ur dinner, nowadays wat happen to u, u not in sense




Geet : nothing Dadi little bit work pressure, exams are nearing , so

Dadi : hmm wase Maan also busy nowadays, see he came home early to take rest but he got a call and went to office, didt have his dinner too , don't know wen he will cum also

Geet : hmm and started to have her food


They finish they dinner and watching tv sitting in te living room


Anni : ok Geet me going to sleep , gdngt dadi and Geet

Geet and Dadi : gdngt

Dadi : ok Geet u too go and rest

Geet : no Dadi I will watch tv for some time, I slept in te evening naa, so not getting sleep

Dadi : ok beta

Geet was watching te tv, but she decide to wait for Maan to cum

Geet : I will wait fro him, don't know he had hi dinner or not, he is not well naa, then why he went to his office, he wont listen to anyone, he think he is god, DUST DANAV

Maan : Stop it Geet how much u cruse me





Maan who came and saw Geet sitting In te couch and crusing him,

Geet was shock to see Maan and felt embrassed , for caught red handed




Maan : hmm say Geet how much u curse

Geet : then wat why u went to office wen u are not well, u have to take rest naa, then , u wont listen to anyone, u r god to urself, if

Before she speaks, Maan shut her by keeping his finger on her lips

Maan : CHUP BIKUL CHUP






GEET saw his eyes, and both lost in they looks

Maan : why Geet why u worrying abt me hmm





Geet : no Dadi is worried abt u, she is old naa, so

Maan : so

Geet : I will get ur dinner , u cum, she run to te kitchen to avoid him


Maan smiles and went to his room to freshen up



Te dinner was silent, Geet was serving him and wen ever her hand touch him, Geet felt goosebumps, but Maan pretend not to notice her, he want to give her space to think .



Maan : did u have ur dinner Geet

Geet : hmmm


After finishing te dinner , Maan went to his room, Geet too


Next morning , Dadi was sitting in te hall, Geet came


Dadi : Geet beta can u get my medicines it is in my room

Geet : ok Dadi,

Geet went to get medicines, wen she was going to kitchen to get water, suddenly some one pull her and pinned to te wall


Geet was shocked : MAANJI


















PRECAP: NAUGHTY MAAN AND PARTY

Next part- 20, PG 89


Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago

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