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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Really Yaar,these truth and dare games give sm real nasty results.And Geet's pain is truly evident from her call to Maan or to his voice mail box.

Each and every word how hurt she is.

Late but gr8 update.



Definitely agree with you, Sampa. As for the late update, I know yaar but holidays and exams got in the way.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Comment/gibberish updated 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sheesh ji, you will have to give me a few moments to get over your comment. Really, I have no idea what to say so I will just sit here and grin like a fool 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated my comment on the previous page. 😊
Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh, Geet :(

Half of the time she can't stand Maan, and half of the time she wants nothing more than the man himself.

Where is Mr K by the way? Why isn't he answering her calls? Why do they blank each other so much?! *sobs into tissues*

... anddd it finally strikes me as to why it's called Gehraiyan. Thou art a clever lady, Zarin.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: glassdoor


Yes me first ! res 😆

EDIT ~~

May be Shiku and me need to make asses of ourselves more often on your thread. For you have outdone yourself this time. I bow down to you mademoiselle. Aapke jalwe ke saamne hamaara tho kuch bhi nahi hai.

Sheesh ji, yours and Bhootni's insured, pimpled and jalwa-fied asses are always welcome on this thread to do as you please. Aap hi ka ghar hai 😆


This update was stunning. I cannot begin to describe how stunning it is.

The comments I've gotten on this thread are spoiling me! Really, I've gotten so greedy! (Keep them coming! 😆). (Thank you. I read the comment over and over just to make my head even bigger 😃).

The last time I played 'truth and dare' was...hmm..let me think...never. And this is the precise reason. It always goes wrong I feel.

Haven't played truth or dare in a long time but I was always that troublemaker who instigated it 😈 Would never play truth or shot, though. Now, that's way too risky. Or shot or dare, for that matter...

The entire mood setting was superb. I felt like I was inside a cluedo game and I am the killer with the wrench.

The wedding ring part was 👏. Oh so true. The moment she heard that clang she lost it, didn't she? Sometimes small things trigger people to extremes.

Definitely. I find this especially to be the case with people who, as you've said, are very private people. When you don't share anything with anyone and everything builds up, you get to a point where the smallest thing will set off the most combustive reactions. Such as the button on the bus or the wedding ring here.

The game was a disaster waiting to happen. One can so picture Geet looking at the newly weds almost mocking at them. She has turned so cynical about life. It is heartbreaking. 😭. How is she ever going to come back from this place Zarin ji, HOW ?

Or rather, will she return from this place?

Geet is such a private person seems like. Does not share her frustrations with probably many. May be her deepest fears have not even been shared with Heer.

Ah. I won't say much about this one except that I don't know whether people really do share their deepest fears with others. I don't, I'll admit to that. I genuinely want to know whether others do.

It is all so complicated and depicted so wonderfully.

She did leave him a letter. And she knows he has not read it. He has not read it. It is so I don't know prosaic almost? Like her last pitch to save her marriage? That even though she felt cynical about the letter, she was hopeful for one last time. One last chance she was going to give him. Is this the point of no return for her?

Or am I just being too melodramatic. May be I am but I cannot help myself.

Not too melodramatic at all! Shika and I used to talk about how this thread was like a Sach Ka Saamna. It made you blurt out the strangest things. I sometimes read over some of the things I say here and can't believe how dramatic it sounds.

That last dialogue from lappy guy was epic. 'Game over I think'. How apt.

Lappy guy built his own legend before he spoke two words. There's no stopping him 😆

Zarin ji, how can you be this good. It is just so awesome. 🤗 Thank you, thank you, thank you 😊

P.S. I was going to hit the like button and I had. But then I took a step back. I don't want it to be game over. 😭


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I don't know what to comment here, Z. I'm seriously short on words after reading this terrific update! Hats off to you for putting it together! 👏

Sometimes the tiniest of things can trigger you off. They can make you do something which you wouldn't have otherwise done. They make you apprehensive, they make you superstitious, they make you angry, they make you sad. So many feelings from just a single thing. Like the button breaking episode earlier which made her think the way she did, the ring clinking also brought forward her otherwise suppressed side... The line 'routines become forgotten' is deeper than it's shown here, isn't it? Perhaps that's what happened with Maan and Geet. Their life, their differences, their arguments became routine. And routines become forgotten. Maybe this is the reason that they say 'change is the spice of life'. By tweaking with routines at intervals, we can probably avoid a lot more!

Geet's pain is so evident in the way she laughed at 'forever'. Her mocking the word told a tale of forgotten promises to and from Maan at a time when they were probably just like Seth and Raina: deeply in love and enjoying the togetherness..!

I feel even sadder now for Geet after her call to Maan. Even in that state of being drunk, she can't let go of her sorrows and she can't suppress her love. That is why she left a letter for him in a place that she knows he won't check until late and that is why she called herself 'his Geet'!


This chapter is one of those which leave a pinch in your heart thinking 'why is reality so far from dreams?' Again Zarin, hats off to you for writing it to perfection! 👏

Oh I forgot! Your exams are done? I hope they went well! Thanks for the PM. 😊



And the QoC proves why she owns the title once again. The bolded part...nothing but the truth there. As I said to Sheesh, the smallest things usually set off the people who keep things suppressed. And the part about 'routines'...I just write it, you guys bring the meaning. 😊

It makes me a little sad that the Seths and Rainas usually turn into Maans and Geets. I've seen it happen myself; you don't notice these things until you see them at the beginning and then much later after the transformation. It's scary. So if a little variety with the routine can at least stop some of it from happening, I'm all for it.

'Why is reality so far from dreams?' I feel kind of awful for setting off that thought but in all ugly honesty, I thrive on pain and writing about pain. Zarin the Dream Crusher 😆

Yup, they're done. I am freee 😃 First one was harder than I thought it would be but last one was much better than I could have hoped for. Thank you, Maiyya Mai!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex

Oh, Geet :(


Half of the time she can't stand Maan, and half of the time she wants nothing more than the man himself.

Where is Mr K by the way? Why isn't he answering her calls? Why do they blank each other so much?! *sobs into tissues*

... anddd it finally strikes me as to why it's called Gehraiyan. Thou art a clever lady, Zarin.



That's love, baby 🤔

Haha, thank you, Foz, but it's more of an illusion than anything else 😆 Why do you think I named it 'Gehraiyan'? I think I know but there is another reason that will come much later.

By the way, whenever I think of the title 'Protect the Boss', all I see is Maan sitting all suavely at his desk and Geet stood in front of him protectively in full armour, ready to Jhansi ki Rani everybody's ass 😆
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I was scratching my head and editing my comment for half an hour now. I don't know what to say, frankly. It is like after watching Titanic sink, asking your opinion about it. I mean somethings are just felt, aren't they, when you are supposed to say something, you go blank.
This update is one such thing for me.
Yet I would try to put my jumbled thoughts here, else I can't sleep peacefully.
Forever. Frankly that word scares the shit out of me. We be so casual in using the word but really can you be with a person and feel the same thing forever?
Maybe not. And Geet is a living and breathing example.
The phone conversation had me read it with bated breath. I never realized when my posture turned stiff, and at the end of her conversation, I could picture the silent room, with all its occupants stunned to silence.
So, she left a letter, knowing that he wouldn't look it until it's night. Is this a sign to say that by the time he finds out, it will already be late?
The game over part made me angry, and I suddenly felt as if he acted as an intruder. I don't know why, but it just...hurt.
Frankly I hate it if I am disturbed when I am crying. Rofl. Koi toh kaam theek tarike se karne do yaaroon.😆
Hence I got pissed off at the Lappy guy.
The update left me speechless and I might add when I come back to senses. Till then try to figure out my fabricated and fragmented speech.
PS: Of all beautiful names of the world, you find Abhi to name him? Really? Ah, you broke my heart. He better have a tail to his Abhi, else I am giving him up.
Edit:
Forgot to mention,

You're Maan Singh Khurana! And Mr Maan Singh Khurana...well, he never listens to his Geet, does he?"


they say a drunk (wo)man never lies. They say truths come up in drunken state and so it lifted my spirits when I read her mentioning "his" Geet. Ya ya I behave like a die hard romantic soul occasionally.😆
Edited by TheBrat - 12 years ago
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First of all "Shashtaang Dandwat pranam" to you Zarin...!!!I This chapter was beyond "perfection",beyond "awesomeness",beyond"excellence",beyond "brilliance",beyond "every adjective that my heart and brain are screaming but my fingers are not able to type because of my poor vocab"...😕...You yourself had set a "standard" for your writing in previous chapters and with this chapter you have gone beyond your own standard...Kudos...👏👏👏.. I think till the end of "Gehraiyan",I won't think myself worthy enough to comment on your work..!!!!


Since I came across "Geharaiyan",I have always wondered,"what went "Wrong" between Maneet???" but after reading this chapter,I want to scream out loud,"Why this "wrong" happened with maaneet??"...Why????"..It was a painful chapter..When geet was yelling in her cell phone,Her words were so simple yet impactful that It felt like she was holding Maan from his collars and saying all that at his face...{I wish she had done this...}
!!She was seeking the solace in "alcohol" to forget everything for once when she accepted to play the game..She knew very well she was not going to tell any truth..she actually wanted to get drunk...but it made her blurt out everything she was hiding in herself for a long time..Would she feel light after this night???or It would increase her pain more???
She called him "Maanav" once...,why???Am i missing smething????😕
She threw her phone..I hope she would be able to fix it later,when alcohol would have left her system...If it would not get fixed soon,chances of maan finding geet seems more bleak to me...!!!!
Waiting for maan to hear this special voicemail...😃or check his drawer...
ps-Hope your exams went well...😊


Edited by palindrome - 12 years ago

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