ArHi SS: Spark: Chapter 12 UPDATED

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Hi Guys!! This is my new SS that I am starting. This SS is based on a book 'Spark'. I can't think of any name so I thought of the 'Spark'. Simple yet it explains and make you think a lot of things. The story is totally mine but I am copying the family relations from the book and the way people dress. 😃


Character Sketch

All the characters of this SS are very similar from the book. I made their family relations like it is in the book. I made Arnav and Khushi character same as in the book but the way story goes is mine. Again I am saying the character from the books are very similar in my story.

Raizadas

Anjali Raizada
Older sister of Arnav, NK, Akash. She is the head of the house. Their parents are dead and they live all together. Anjali controls Earth. She is more powerful than her brothers. She had to start taking over things when she was 18. She had to take over a lot of responsibilities.
You will know more about her in the story.

Akash Raizada
He's twin of Arnav. They both were born at the same time but they are totally different from each other. Akash is a senior in Lee High School too. Akash is like a guide of Arnav. Akash could always make Arnav cool his anger. They hang out together a lot. He can control wind. He is currently dating Payal and they both like each other a lot.
You will know more about him in the story.

Arnav Raizada
Arnav is one of the popular guys in school like his brothers. They are known by Raizadas in school. He has a twin brother. Arnav weakness is Math. He is a senior in Lee High School. He is in Varsity basketball team and every girl drools over him and his brothers. His secret is that he could control the fire.
You will find more about him in the story.

NK Raizada
NK is the youngest brother in the school. He is a junior in Lee High School. He is currently dating Lavanya right now and they both like each other too. NK could control water. He could make rain and could control water perfectly.
You will know more about him in the story.

Guptas

Khushi Gupta
Khushi is our cute, little naive girl. She is the nerd and her dressing style is different. She is a sophomore in Lee High School. She wears turtle neck shirt and jeans and boots to school. She has a Math class with Arnav but Arnav never noticed her and she doesn't care about it.
You will find more about her in the story.

Rahul Gupta
Rahul is younger brother of Khushi. He can't hear at all. He speaks only if it is necessary. He doesn't have that much friends wither. He talks to Khushi in sign language.

Sashi Gupta
One of the top attorney of the country. Pretty famous. I think he is not that important but you will know about him in the story.

Other Characters

Payal Mehta
Normal girl. She dates Akash. Not much role of her but she will sure help Arnav in something. Her secret is that she is the fifth one who give more powers to Raizadas. If Raizadas always need help on something she will always be there.

Lavanya Kashyap
She is dating NK. She knows about NK secret and she thinks that they are awesome. She likes NK for who he is but not because he has powers. Arnav doesn't like her that much.

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Prologue

Arnav was sitting alone in the dark working with fire. Fire was only his best friend that helped him think but he always needed fire to work with it. He never had the ability to make fire by his own. He could feel the electricity around him but he needed to make fire himself but not use anything else to make the fire. He was playing with fire when he heard a knock on the door.

"Come in" said Arnav.

"Arnav are you ready for school?" NK asked peeking his head through the door. In response Arnav just grabbed his bag pack and walked out of the room with NK following him behind.

"I want you to behave in school Arnav" said Anjali when she saw Arnav walking out of the door.

"I can't guarantee about it" Arnav said walking out of the house while rolling his eyes. This was everyday thing. Anjali would always tell him to stay out of trouble and he was tired with bullshit.

"I am serious Arnav" Her voice turning from soft to stern.

"I am serious too" and saying that Arnav walk out from the house. "Great! the day started with a foul mood. Wonder what is left" Arnav thought.

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Tell me what do you think about the characters and the story. Should I continue. I am not copying anything from the book except that characters are very similar from the book. Tell me should I write more.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey!
Just came across this like a few moments ago šŸ˜†.
Read the character sketch and prologue and I find this interesting at a first glance.
I'd love to read more soon 😊
Please do continue!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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R

Un-R

Another SS??

Promising Title...
More Fireworks Ahead,,

Arnav sounds like dipped in Arrogance completely...:D

Anyway...what about your Ateet Ke Kuch Raaz???
When are We getting an update??


Is this story some Supernatural thriller thing because I can clearly see every character is controlling something natural...
Edited by morning_star - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: morning_star

R

Un-R

Another SS??

Promising Title...
More Fireworks Ahead,,

Arnav sounds like dipped in Arrogance completely...:D

Anyway...what about your Ateet Ke Kuch Raaz???
When are We getting an update??


Is this story some Supernatural thriller thing because I can clearly see every character is controlling something natural...



I will update Ateet Ke Kuch Raaz tomorrow. I got busy with finals than I got obsessed with the book so I was a little busy lately. I would say it is more romance and drama. Supernatural would be there but not that much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I couldn't stop my self from writing chapter 1. I keep having so many good ideas in my mind and I thought that why don't I just write it and get done with it. This update is more about Arnav day at school and yes Khushi is in their too.😃

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Chapter 1

Arnav was driving SUV, that was the only car they owned, with Akash sitting right next to him and NK at the back.

"Are we picking Payal from her house?" asked Arnav in which Akash nodded and then went straight to Payal house. When they got there Arnav saw Payal dressed up in blue skinny jeans with some Indian style kurti and her hair in a high pony tail and she was wearing shoes.She always look beautiful to Arnav. Arnav knew their family was Indian but being born in U.S was a different thing. His parents always dressed and acted like an American so they always stayed like one. They knew some stuff about their culture from Payal but not that much. Paya was fully American from outside and inside but she knew a little about her culture that her parents told her.

Payal got in the car and they drove when Arnav stopped at the stop sign.

"Arnav we have to pick Lavanya, so turn right." Payal said in which NK grinned and Arnav groaned.

NK glared at him but Arnav just rolled his eyes. They got to Lavanya's and they saw her waiting for them. Arnav was very confused as to how could NK like a piece of trash. She didn't know how to dress at all. Her 'PINK' Victoria Secret pajama was not looking good with black shirt. Her hair was tied in a messy bun and she was wearing slippers. She looked like a hobo who just woke up from a street. Lavnaya got in the car and kicked on Arnav seat "drive" Lavanya said. "if you did that again I swear I will..." "will what?" Lavanya said with challenging eyes. "Nothing, I will just burn you to death that's it" Arnav said making Lavanya shut up but he got a hard punch from NK on his arm "Shut the f**k up Arnav" NK said in an stern tone. Arnav just ignored him and drove to school "Maybe this day won't go that bad" Arnav thought.

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English, Science, and History were class that Arnav didn't cared about it at all. He knew he would pass all those classes easily and his day was going pretty good until 5th period came. The class he hated the most 'MATH'. To him Math sounded like an ancient jail where they used to keep all the prisoners in there and tortured them by giving Math problems.

Arnav got to the class and stepped inside before the tardy bell rang. As he entered the class he saw his Math teacher Mr. Haber standing at the door and greeting students.Mr. Haber greeted him with a nod. Arnav always hated him. Mr. Haber always was rude to him and he also called him dumb, not intentionally but the way he hold sarcasm in his voice while talking to him made Arnav loose his patients but he always tried his best to control his anger or his anger would not bring good turn out to him,teacher, and the school.

Arnav settled himself in a chair and just start thinking about his stuff instead of focusing in the class but his thought were interrupted when he heard Mr. Haber talk. "class we will take a pop quiz today keep your pencils ready. No Pens. We have scantrons." "SHIT"Arnav thought. Kids groaned aloud.
"but you don't give us pop quiz Mr." a kid said from the corner of the class.
"Well yeah but now I do. "Mr.Haber said. "at least you could have told us so we could have studied" another kid said. "It won't count against you so please stop making a fuss about it" Mr. Haber said getting annoyed with the kids.

Shit. Shit. Shit. Damn you Haber. Couldn't he have told us before so I could have made cheat notes." Arnav thought. He bent down to his right side of the seat to get a pencil but he found only pens. "Great" Arnav thought and groaned. He thought to ask from a teacher but of course he knew that his teacher would give him a nasty remark which will make him angry. He turned around to his left to see a nerd. He sighed and said "Hey you girl, with four eyes. Do you have a pencil?" but she didn't replied him back. "What the f**k!!" Arnav thought. "Are you deaf? I need a pencil" Arnav said doing sign language to mock her and in response she sighed and she pointed the pencil toward him. He took it and by the time he got to the 8th problem the time was up and he was sure that he did a pretty f**ked up job on the test.

"OK class switch your papers with your partners"Mr.Haber said and Arnav switched paper with the nerd girl. First thing Arnav checked was the girl name. "Khushi Gupta.Indian huh? But she doesn't look like one." Arnav than looked at Khushi. "He saw the golden hair tied in a perfect braid. She was wearing a purple turtle neck shirt with a jeans and boots. Her skin white and pail like a American but Arnav knew that he looked like American too. His brownish hair that gave a hint of golden when sun touched his hair. His skin color white and he dressed up like a total American too." He thought.

Arnav checked all the answers and he saw that Khushi got a 100 on a test. He turned to his left to give her paper back and he saw Khushi correcting problems for him. The teacher came and she gave his and her paper. "What did you do?" Arnav asked. "You got a 70 on the test" Khushi said her cheeks pink. "Is she blushing?" Arnav thought and he was about to ask her that when the bell rang and Khushi got up from her chair and got out from the class but Arnav was in Varisty basketball team and he knew how to catch up on a person and he caught up to Khushi. He blocked Khushi way. Her back at the locker and Arnav hands on both side of her head blocking her way to escape.

"Why did you changed the answers?"

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My school name is Lee High School.
Mr. Haber is my English teacher. He is an awesome teacher but couldn't think of any teacher name so I picked his name. No he is not mean at all.
Scantrons are like the paper with the questions numbers and the option of test choices. It is where you color the alphabet to tell that is your answer. It is graded by computer.
I made Arnav and Khushi look like American people because I wanted them too. I think they are perfect.
Hope you have fun while reading.
Abdul😃
Edited by AbdulloveIPKKND - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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..Res...
Why did You write Chapter 1 So soon...You just put up the prologue..today!!

Are You running away???šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Phew finally read your work for the first time and guess what... Its brilliant!!

Loved it!

Erm... Me too hate Math.. Just like Arnav...

Oww Khushi is a Math Geek damn and she wears glass.. Hahaha Arnav called her ' Girl with 4 eyes' lol

Hmm.. So she changed his answers... And was blushing hoo hoo...

Waiting for the next part.
Pm me kay!

Love,
'J'
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: morning_star

..Res...
Why did You write Chapter 1 So soon...You just put up the prologue..today!!

Are You running away???šŸ˜†

I am not running away. I just couldn't stop myself to put chapter 1 so I updated.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sarunfanatic_Ji

Phew finally read your work for the first time and guess what... Its brilliant!!

Loved it!

Erm... Me too hate Math.. Just like Arnav...

Oww Khushi is a Math Geek damn and she wears glass.. Hahaha Arnav called her ' Girl with 4 eyes' lol

Hmm.. So she changed his answers... And was blushing hoo hoo...

Waiting for the next part.
Pm me kay!

Love,
'J'

There will be a lot of things that you will find out although in here Arnav is not that aukat type here at all.

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