ArHi SS: Spark: Chapter 12 UPDATED - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys!!

I know a lot of guys were confused and I am answering all the questions you have:

1)What happened to Khushi father and brother?

Well the last update everything that is happening right now in the update is after a week so when you saw the last part where Arnav and Khushi were with Rahul that was before a week. So everything was going great but after a week Akash there were guides that were in the town.

A lot of you guys are confused with what is happening in the chapter. Well everything will be clarify in next chapter. If you still have questions PM me and I will answer your questions.

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Posted: 12 years ago
The Story is crystal clear to Me but I just have one doubt- What are guides?

And Urrghhh...Your Previous update was so AWESOME...I have lost my thinking power.I am supposed to update my stories tomorrow...I will just blame You if my updates look mysterious...😃

Unreserved My comment on Page 21.

Edited by morning_star - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
precap in chap 8 said that arnav was scared...but there was no mention abt it on chap 9...
both the chapters was nice...
khushi's father is sick...
n rahul is so cool... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: morning_star

The Story is crystal clear to Me but I just have one doubt- What are guides?

And Urrghhh...Your Previous update was so AWESOME...I have lost my thinking power.I am supposed to update my stories tomorrow...I will just blame You if my updates look mysterious...😃

Unreserved My comment on Page 21.


Everything will be revealed when I update chapter 10- Part 2.
Hahahaha I am glad that you like my update and lost your thinking power LMAO. Mystery is cool in the update. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_roks

precap in chap 8 said that arnav was scared...but there was no mention abt it on chap 9...
both the chapters was nice...
khushi's father is sick...
n rahul is so cool... :)


The mention will be there in the next update. I purposely left it.

Thank you so much that you like my update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the note, even thought your story was clear😃, and I understand that you left on purpose some things unresolved because you are going to tell them in the up coming chapters, every writer has to put some mystery 😊


P.S. edited on page 21
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update sorry to hear about khushi father and brother,please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: HK90

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oh no Rahul and Shashi are dead 😭
where is Arnav and where is Khushi, hope they are fine.
A question, why Payal's aunt is upset with Payal's mom because she married Payal's dad?? What was Payal's dad??
Who are guides?? They where attacked by people form witch word, that means that they are deangerous persons.
One more question how is called person like Arnav with powers?
A lot of suspance 😲, I love stories where there is a lot suspense, mystery, and in this was there is also a pinch of magic; you have to read storie like this with your mind full open, because sometime a word can give you a clue, but if in your update there was one, I didn't find it lol 😆
Btw superb, mind blowing update 👏 👏 👏 👏, continue soon!!!

P.S. Me first

P.P.S. now I will put a lot of suspanse in my story too, and I think Sabah will cook me after reading it as she is already plannig to do so as I'm not giving an update 😆



I just saw your comment LMAO.
Hahahaha your all questions will be answered in next update and the person like Arnav power is called Elemental because he has a power of an element of the four things in this world.
I know there is always a clue but I ignore them as I don't want to know about them. I like to ask questions myself like what will happen next? or what is the raaz between it? I will not give the clue in their at all muahahaha.😈
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here you go guys the update for you. I hope you guys like it.

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Chapter 10- Part 2

Arnav and Khushi had been running for past one hour and Khushi had told Arnav to stop but he had been encouraging her to run.

"Arnav I can't run anymore." Khushi said panting and catching her breath and she sat on the corner.

"Khushi I know you are tired but we have to get as far as we can from here" Arnav said kneeling in front of her. He noticed Khushi paled face and he could also see the pain in her eyes. "Arnav why does god take everything away from me?" Khushi said and tears start to roll down her cheeks. Arnav hugged Khushi and whispered soothing words to her. "Khushi'.Calm down. Everything will be fine" Arnav said and hugged her tight. Khushi sobbed for 20 minutes but for Arnav it was 1 painful hours for him. Arnav moved her head away from his chest and looked in her eyes and asked "Are you OK Khushi?" Khushi nodded and hugged him tight. "Arnav I am tired. Could we spend a night over here?" Khushi asked in a tiring voice and Arnav just nodded "Come on we need to get the woods for the fire" Arnav got up and he moved his hand forward for Khushi and she grabbed her hand with a smile on her face. They collected woods. Arnav also got the leaves to make a bed on the floor for them.

They were sitting around the fire when Arnav noticed Khushi shivering. "Khushi are you cold?" and Khushi replied with a nod like a innocent kid and Arnav took his hoodie off and Khushi came in the view of Arnav creamy body with six abs and his jeans hanging low on his waist. Khushi mouth watered just looking at this and felt heat rising on her cheeks.

"Khushi stop staring at me and wear this jacket" Arnav said to her smirking and handing his jacket to her. Khushi blushed and put on her jacket and instantly she felt safe. She could smell Arnav and she looked at Arnav and he was looking at her smirking. Arnav came sat next to Khushi and Khushi want and hugged him. Her head on the chest listening Arnav's heartbeat. Arnav hugged her and moved her closer to him so he could smell the rose smell that Khushi always had. "Arnav I had a question?" "What is it?"

"Who were those people that attacked us?" Khushi said biting on her bottom lip to stop her sobs and Arnav hugged her tight because he knew that Khushi is very much upset with what happened but he have to tell her. "Khushi those were the guides and they were trying to attack me but not you" Arnav said. "But why you? What did you do? And they had a power same as your siblings right?" Khushi asked all those questions at one and Arnav sighed and he knew it is the time to tell her everything. "Khushi the guides are like our president. Guides are the most powerful and they control all the four elements except spirit."

"So you mean Payal is the spirit? Do guides know about this?"

"No Khushi they don't and that is another reason. Do you ever believe that witch exists in this world?" Arnav asked.

"Really Arnav? What are you? Five?" Khushi said in mocking tone and Arnav frowned at that.

"Well when we go to the town that is next to our city you will know that witches DO exist" Arnav said. "Anyways Payal mom is a witch and Payal mom's used magic to protect her daughter. She cast "no tracing spell" Payal and if you try anything you won't be able to trace Payal." Arnav took a deep breath and he moved Khushi more close to him. "Guides have been powerful until me, Anjali, Akash, and NK were born. People were shocked first when they found out that there are four elementals born together and we are powerful together than anyone else but nobody knows that. I think guides found out about the fire that has been happening and they think I am the one doing it that's why they are behind me." After hearing this Khushi got a little bit scared and she hugged Arnav tight although she was already sitting close to him but she hugged him so she could comfort him and finish the fear that she is having.

"Arnav than how did your parents died?" Arnav body went stiff but he needs to tell her. "I killed them. I was 14 when it happened. When we were kids we used to get bully a lot because we never said anything to them although everybody knew we could take them over easily but we feared because of guides. We feared that if guides found out that we are 4 Elementals they will kill us. One day people were bullying us and in anger Anjali used her earth power and mistakenly killed a kid. The family was pretty rich at that time and a lot of people gathered around our house and start protesting and start threatening us. My mom and dad made the agreement with them that we will not use our powers and will not do anything but I think it was too late for them to understand because they burst into our house and our parents tried to stop them. I couldn't control my anger and lost myself in the power and burst the house in flame. A lot of people died on that day but thanks to Anjali we were saved." Arnav finished his story. Tears were threatening to come out of his eyes and Khushi looked up at him and she moved to his lips. Her breathing close to his lips and both were staring each other. Khushi stared into his eyes and she noticed the love for her in those caramel eyes and she leaned and kissed him. First it was a slow kiss but the kiss became intense. Arnav but Khushi lips and she gave the permission to enter his tongue in her mouth and as soon as his tongue entered she moaned out loud and Khushi hand went on Arnav's hair and she tried to make the kiss deeper. Arnav groaned and he let go of Khushi and said "If you don't stop than I will not be able to stop myself" and Khushi blushed.

"Come on we should sleep" Arnav said and they both hugged each other and went to sleep.

End of chapter 10- Part 2

I hope you guys the update.

I know it is not the best work of mine because I don't think it is. I worked on this on my school. I hope you like it.

Please ask if you have any questions. Now you guys know who the guides are.

Chapter 11: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3358091/arhi-ss-spark-chapter-12-updated

Edited by AbdulloveIPKKND - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
GET ME TWO ASPIRINS FIRST...😆😆😆

God! What an Update.

OK. So, Khushi and Arnav are on the run away from the Guides.

Awww...Feeling bad for Khushi...Poor thing lost her brother and Father...😭

OMG! Arnav killed His parents because of His fire element fury...God! this is more than intriguing...

Awww...Khushi and Arnav still going strong in spite of all the road blocks in their way.Awesome.

But Still You need to give more information about the Guides...😕

Thank You for Updating after I had updated My stories or else I would have added more than enough twists like You...😆


Edited by morning_star - 12 years ago

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