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jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Woooww, Unique Concept =) 🤗

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AbdulloveIPKKND

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

I know I was suppose to be starting the chapter where Arnav was shocked TBH I forgot to start from it and in the middle of writing the chapter I remembered it and than I thought that maybe it is better if I keep it like that and make it a purpose. OK So here is the update.

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Chapter 10-Part 1

"Arnav you need to get here right now. I think the guides are in town" Akash left the voice mail on Arnav's phone. He has been trying to call Arnav for past half and hour and Arnav was not picking up the phone.

It has been a week and everything was great until Akash saw a parallelogram on their house door and he knew that guide is in the hometown. He informed everyone and he asked from Payal about Arnav but she didn't knew where he was. "I hope you are OK Arnav. Who would he be with right now? Khushi" and Akash went to Payal.

"Payal do you know Khushi's number?" Akash ask.
"No but I know where she lives. Do you want to go and check over there?" Payal asked in reply Akash nodded and got his car keys and in seconds both were in car and going to Khushi's house.

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After half and hour they got to Khushi's house and Akash heart beat stop when he saw the fire trucks over there and and house half burned.

"No this can't happen. They don't even know Khushi." Akash said gripping the steering wheel.

"Akash it is Arnav who did that. I could feel his powers" Payal said.

"Could you sense him? Could you tell me where he went?" Akash said getting impatient.

"Akash I am a spirit power I could only sense but I can't tell you where he went." Payal said. Akash was getting frustrated and he didn't know what to do and than he remembered that Khushi's brother and her dad. "Payal Khushi's dad and her brother, could you sense them?" Akash asked.

Payal closed her eyes and she took a deep breath and than she tried to sensed those two souls that she is familiar with and than she opened her eyes. "What did you find?" Akask asked panicking when he saw Payal face turn pale.

"They are dead" Payal said and she fainted.

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"Payal please wake up. Please Payal" Akash said panicking.

Payal tried to open her eyes and she closed her eyes because of the brightness that hit her eyes. She tried to slowly open her eyes and saw her mom and Akash sitting right next to her staring at her worriedly. "What happened? Why did I fainted?" Payal asked confused.

"Child there was a lot of negative energy around you at Khushi's house. Arnav fought with the guides over there. When Akash bought you over here I felt a negative energy in you guys too." Payal mom said.

"Khuhsi dad and her brother?" Payal said tried to get up but Akash stopped her and when Payal looked at her he shook his head in a negative.

"Yes. They are dead but right now we have to find where Khushi is and why would they attack Khushi's house and how did Arnav got over there or more where is Arnav?" Payal mom said.

Akash and Payal nodded. "I will be back. I have to inform Anjali. Mrs. Agarwal can I use your phone?" Akash said. Mrs. Agarwal, Payal mom, nodded and Akash left the room.

"Is there something you are hiding mom?" Payal asked looking at her mom's lost expression.

"I think we need to contact your aunt" Mrs. Agarwal said. "But mom you know she broke the contact with us when she found out that I was the spirit and you married dad." Payal said.

"I know but she could be the only one who could tell where Arnav and Khushi is by using the tracking spell." Mrs. Agarwal said.

"And how will you do that?" Payal asked in reply her mother smiled. At the same time Akash entered the room. "We need to go to my house. Payal guides are over there. They are attacking Anjali and NK and we need your power to makes them stronger. Come one" Akash said. Payal got from the bed and as soon as she stood straight she start feeling light headed. She was about to fall but Arnav caught her around the waist. "You will always be there for me" Payal said smiling. Akash chuckled and carried her bridal style to the car.

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When they got to Akash house it was a chaos going on over there. There were cracks on the road which indicated Anjali using her earth power and when Akash and Payal got out of the car, a huge, heavy rock flew Akash and hit a person right behind him who was about to attack Akash. "Your Welcome" Anjali said smiling at him,

"Anjali don't you find anything wrong. There are not guides. They are just normal person." Akash said while they were running to their house.

"I know. They are from the witch world." Anjali said and Akash was shocked and when he turn to Payal she was beaming like an idiot.

End of Chapter 10- Part 1

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PM's later. OK So this whole chapter is based on Akash and Payal and I think they do deserve some light. I put them in spotlight too.
I hope you guys like this.
OK So more suspense and in the next update you will see all of those things changing. You will know who the guides are and well the people attacking Akash house. Well there is a history that I will tell you later.

I would recommend you guys to watch this. This is really inspiring and it is made on Maroon 5 song "Daylight": https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N17FXwRWEZs&NR=1&feature=endscreen

Chapter 10- Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76589554

Edited by AbdulloveIPKKND - 12 years ago

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Preet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

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oh no Rahul and Shashi are dead 😭

where is Arnav and where is Khushi, hope they are fine.

A question, why Payal's aunt is upset with Payal's mom because she married Payal's dad?? What was Payal's dad??

Who are guides?? They where attacked by people form witch word, that means that they are deangerous persons.

One more question how is called person like Arnav with powers?

A lot of suspance 😲, I love stories where there is a lot suspense, mystery, and in this was there is also a pinch of magic; you have to read storie like this with your mind full open, because sometime a word can give you a clue, but if in your update there was one, I didn't find it lol 😆

Btw superb, mind blowing update 👏 👏 👏 👏, continue soon!!!

P.S. Me first

P.P.S. now I will put a lot of suspanse in my story too, and I think Sabah will cook me after reading it as she is already plannig to do so as I'm not giving an update 😆

Edited by HK90 - 12 years ago

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

wait a minute...khushis bro was with arnav and khushi rght?? then how did payal tell that rahul and khushis dad are dead??
where is khushi and arnav??
this is going so interesting...
continue soon

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allegro

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Khushi's dad and brother is dead?
But it doesn't make sense somehow.

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..MorningStar..

@..MorningStar..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Res...Going to be here tomorrow..:*

Unres..

OMG...What is happening here??

Its like Harry Potter's Indian version with a bit of mystery...
Oh No... Khushi's Dad and Brother dead??😭

WOW...This update is AWESOME!
Payal's Aunt is going to come in to the picture now.

and those people who are attacking Aakash's house are related to Payal's Aunt??

God! Hope You update sooner.

Edited by morning_star - 12 years ago

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please6

@please6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

rahul was with khushi and arnav then what happened and khushi is the person who arnav payal and aakash were talking about

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

1stly brilliant concept

i love films with a wicken theme or to do with controlling elements

have a few ideas shootin in my head want to share sorryif too far fetched

1) khushi's mum disappeared, what if there was a prophecy that say that the women in Khushi's family 1 could Ayre the reckoner or that the Ayres would have special powers, what if Khushi's mum was proved not to be the mother of the reckoner so they got rid of her or she ran n they decided it must be Khushi . i got this idea because of the prophecy payal told

2) her dad tried to kill her to prevent somethin but was stopped by his friend were they in some kind of cult?

3) what if there is some kind of prophecy between Arshi that his mum n dad knew about n they were killed to protect secret?

4) what if Khushi's uncle n bro is her protectors, Khushi might be in dark of all this, were Khusi's uncle n bro really killed in fire or was it made to look like that hope so really like her bro

5) other senario is Arnav is reckoner but Khushi is some kind of catalist

anyway pls update soon

n pls PM me as this sounds like it gonna get even more interesting😉

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AbdulloveIPKKND

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: kamalapushpa
wait a minute...khushis bro was with arnav and khushi rght?? then how did payal tell that rahul and khushis dad are dead??
where is khushi and arnav??
this is going so interesting...
continue soon

This is happening after a week. Everything happened after a week.

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riafna

@riafna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Just one doubt Arnav who save Payal from falling or Akash???
Wow read last two chapters and like it
What was Payal had seen she saw some familiar faces there?
Where is Arshi?
Mr and Mrs agarwal had some secrets? they kept some thing coz how they are going to contact her aunt? or they too from evil world?
Accept my buddy request and do send me pm when you update
Thanks in advance