'I see Right Through You'(Thd:4)Pt:33 Pg:45 feb 14

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Welcome to thread 4 of

(Yayyy we made it to Thread 4 Thanks for all the love and supports guys🤗)

When two people both rich and with huge attitudes come face-to-face than was is there to expect? Two people who think there names is enough for people to bow down to them, that keep encountering each other through fate, let alone fighting is nothing else you can expect from them. And their names are " Geet Handa" and " Maan Singh Khurana" although there is more than meets the eye. Geet Handa who may seem as very simple and innocent is not really so or is she? She doesn't believe in love and has a past that has influenced the person she is now. Maan Singh Khurana doesn't believe in love either, but once it happens he can't run away from it and neither can Geet. Join the fun journey of these two similar and yet different people and see what fate has in store?




Character Sketch:

Geet Handa-



VS.



-24 years old

She is a rich and spoiled girl that attends college. She could kill the world with her beauty . She is completely breathtaking. She has a past, which has influenced the girl she is today. Her life consists of only having fun! Be it partying, drinking, or having one-night stands. She doesn't believe in love, but is with a different guy like every week. She has a step-mother who she could care less about, because she believes nobody could take the place of her mother Rani! Ever! She keeps a pretense of being a simple and innocent girl infront of her family wearing salwar kamizes and such, but in other places she is completely westernized. If you mess with her than get ready to handle her attitude. She will not go down without a fight.
Her group of Best friends consist of Meera, Pinky, Adi, Dev Khurana, and Vicky Khurana. They are closer to her than her own family. People she really cares about, but they don't know how her one-night stands. They do know she likes to party, drink, and spend time with guys, but don't know anything more than that.
Maan Singh Khurana:




-26 years old

He is also a rich guy with a big attitude. He has a very high and respectable name in society. which adds to his ego. He never completed finished college and got his MBA degree, only a semester was left. He had to leave his studies for personal reasons. He does not believe in love, which eventually starts to change when he meets Geet. He has never been with a girl before or has ever touched one. Nobody had ever caught his attention for that matter until he meets Geet. Although in the beginning their relationship is rough, nothing but fighting.
He is Dev Khurana and Vicky Khurana's older brother.
His family consists of his Father: Yash Singh Khurana
mother: Naina Singh Khurana
and Grandmother: Daadima




STORY SO FAR:


Geet Handa is very much a spoiled brat who fools people with her innocent look. Nobody ever tries to get in her way or come face to face with her! She knows which strings to pull to make them do whatever she wants. She especially knows what strings to pull from their hearts!

But i guess fate thought it was time she met someone with the same high ego and attitude. Someone who wouldn't back down from a face to face showdown with her! And that's exactly what happens. One morning Geet Handa finally meets Maan SIngh Khurana. It was a clash of titans! Maan singh khurana ruins her dress by accident, but Geet handa instead breaks the headlights of his car with her high heel shoes 🤣!!!

They keep on meeting and as well as having some crazy moments between each other there also was some intimate moments! Maan finally realizes he has fallen in love with his pagli, GEET!

Geet's father tells Geet that she has selected a guy for her to marry! She denies and says she doesn't want to get married!
SOme time later Geet misunderstands Maan! Especially when she finds out that Maan is the man her father wants to marry. She thinks Dev, her best friend as well as Maan's brother set her up to marry Maan.

She had warned Maan not to come close to her or else he would find himself in such a situation that he wouldn't even know where to escape! And that's why she thought it was time to get revenge and show the real GEET HANDA!!

She breaks his heart to pieces that night! Shows what it means to mess with Geet Handa. Maan was really hurt! He was drowning in the pain she gave to him! But he saw through her lies and now he is back to play and finish this game that Geet Handa has started!

He has come back to her life even though Geet thought he wouldn't be seeing the last of him anymore. But guess it looks like she is wrong. Maan is back and will make sure he gets what he has come for!!!




Part:23

" Weakening "

Recap:

Meera: So what's the plan? Let her bleed herself to death in trying to escape? Do something Maan.
Maan: She is what?? Ughhh she can be such a crazy bitch sometimes!

Fine you guys go eat. Everything is in the kitchen. I am going to go give some food to Geet and bandage her wrist.




Maan slowly walks up to her. She was so drained, dried tear marks on her face. She was still weakly yanking at the handcuff trying to break free as she absentmindedly stared at nothing.

"Geet" he whimpers trying to hide the pain from his voice.
But she doesn't budge. She continued to stare at nothing.
"Geet" he places his hand on her hand, his familiar touch jolting her awake.
"Shabash Mr. Khurana, look at what state you have brought Geet Handa. I underestimated you. You are a little like me who would of thought!" she weakly chuckles looking at him from the corner of her eyes.
"Guess I have to blame myself for that. I was the one who broke your heart.. But I am still going to f**king finish you once I break free".
Maan couldn't help but chuckle a little.
"I am glad you find this amusing you bas***d" Geet grins feebly.
Geet: But I don't have energy to fight with you so get lost!
Maan: That's one thing I always loved about you. You're so strong. Never let your guard down. I like your confidence.
"and just to let you know I will be waiting for you to f**king finish me. I accept your challenge" he softly whispers winking at her.
" you got to be kidding me" she laughs softly.
"You call this vulnerable drained state I am not letting my guard down? If I didn't let my guard down I wouldn't be here right now. I wouldn't of let you get inside my head and fall into your trap. I wouldn't of let you get under my skin with that dance of yours in the rain. I wouldn't of let you manhandle me and hold me captive. Hell, I wouldn't even be talking about how I feel right now with you like this, when all I want to do is slap you mercilessly across your face, until the fire burning in me dies out" she says so dryly looking straight at his eyes.
"really? Is that how you feel right now? You want to slap me black and blue" he raises an eyebrow.
"that and much more. For that you will just have to wait once I break free from here" she halfheartedly grins.
Maan: The last time I checked only one hand of yours is handcuffed, not your other one.

Geet looks questioningly at him? What was he asking her to do? To slap him?
Geet: You know for someone as bright as you to be able to trap Geet Handa, you sure have more mood swings than a pregnant lady.
Maan laughs really loud, "is that how you see me? More hormonal than a pregnant lady? I am trying to be nice here and let you fulfill your hearts desire, but here you are wounding my ego. Ouch!" he pouts a little and then smiles.
Geet smiles, his smile was contagious.
"Oh the things I want to do to you bas***d! You don't think I know what you are doing right now? Taking advantage of the weak and vulnerable state that I am in. Your one lucky bas***d to see this side of me tonight. I don't blame you for taking advantage of it, because there won't be a next time."
"I kind of miss your other side though. In fact I can't wait for it to come back. It's fun fighting with you. Your so boring when you don't fight back."
"Mr. Khurana your such a liar! I can tell your lying" she smiles.
"Oh yeah and how exactly can you tell I am lying?" he whispers coming closer as he runs his nose along her jaw line and Geet's hands unknowingly moves to his hair, yanking his head up, so their eyes were boring into each other.
"Because you never fell for that girl" she whispers looking deeply into his eyes as if she wanted him to see through her. Help find that girl that she buried away a long time ago.
Maan breath hitches. He was taken aback. Was this the Geet buried in her talking or the Geet Handa acting? She looked so vulnerable, it pained him to see her like this.
"You hate that girl with a passion" she whispers.
Geet: we have a lot in common after all. . .who would have thought?
"Geet" a whimper of longing escapes from maan's lips, a whimper to want to kiss all her pain away. He comes closer grabbing her face between his hands, forcing Geet to look up into his zealous warm eyes.
"Don't" she says panting against his proximity with eyes searching his.
But it was too late. She gasps as his mouth swoops down, kissing her slowly.
"Don't What Geet?" He groans into her mouth, his hands framing her face, holding her to his lips as their tongues thrash against each other.
"Don't. let. Me. Go. Please." she breaks from the kiss and looks straight into his eyes.
"Oh Geet" Maan slams his lips back onto her lips, claiming and possessing her and she reveled in the force he used. The nanosecond when their lips touch, the nature of the kiss changes. It was like wildfire spreading through Geet's veins from this intimate point of contact, driving her to him. Maan could feel her need, her anxiety, her thirst.
Suddenly Geet realizes what she is doing and instantly shoves Maan off her.
" oh for f**k's sake! Why are you here Maan!" still trying to catch her breath.
Maan: I came . . I came to bring you food and bandage your wrist.
"what is it? Prisoner food? Thanks but no thanks! And my wrist is fine" Geet says coldly not meeting his eyes.
She was frustrated with herself yet again! Why did she let him kiss her? She wanted to say Don't kiss me, but instead she says don't let me go. "Ughhh" she mentally grunts!
"Eat Geet!" Maan says sternly.
Maan: I am not asking anymore!
Geet: Make me!
"I guess you didn't learn your lesson the first time. No worries I am hear to teach you" he smirks before putting a spoonful of pasta in his mouth and crushing his lips against hers.
She had no time to protest, he used his hips to pin her against the wall. His mouth softly closes on her lips, coaxing, coercing her lips apart slipping the pasta into her mouth with his tongue. She lets out a soft moan. Again her body defying her!
He assaults her lips repeatedly with pasta, and all she did was close her eyes as her insides uncoil and melt against his touch. Her blood heats immediately, and even when the plate of pasta is wiped clean, Geet doesn't notice and is returning his kiss with her own passion. Every single muscle south of her navel clenches hard! She wanted him. . .right now and then!
Suddenly someone walks in not knowing these two were getting it on.
"Oh shit!We uhh. .We are sorry" Meera blurts out turning around covering her eyes and giggling with pinky.
"ummm. . you guys continue" Pinky manages to blurt through her giggles.
"You bas***d" Geet shoves him off herself!
"I can charge you for sexual assault!" she fumed as she panted.
"Umm Geet I think Maan could charge you from the way you were eating his lips" she bites her lip trying hard not to laugh.
Maan smirks. Not a second did he move his gaze away from her eyes as his hand reaches for her pallu and pates it against his lips, using it as a handkerchief. Geet tugs on her pallu and grabs it away from him. He grins then moves his hand and wipes the empty bowl with his index finger, "All clean. . .boy were you hungry Geet. I'm just a holler away if you still need my services to eat" he teases before walking away passed Pinky and Meera leaving with the first aid kit. He would come back for that later.
"oh this is just f**king great! Yeah just walk away you bas***d! That's just what I need" She fumes again yanking that damn handcuff.
She gives up all irritated, frustrated, and aroused!
Meera and Pinky burst into a fit of laughter again!
"haha! I am glad I am amusing to you guys!" Geet blurts out irritated!
"I don't get you both at all. You love just like you hate each other!" Meera giggles.
"One second you are at each other's throat and the next second dancing in the rain or licking and eating from each other's mouths! Which by the way is gross .. .ewww Geet! I am scarred for life now thanks to you" Pinky makes a disgusted face but couldn't hold her laughter in either.
"Shut up" Geet closes her eyes and ears with her hands.
"Are you blushing Geet?" Meera asks shocked!
Geet flutters her eyes open and gives both of them a dangerous glare.
"It's called rage!You two are lucky I am chained to this damn pole or else my nails would be on your faces right now" she hissed.
"We saw what your nails can do Geet. Poor Maan its like he has been attacked by a werewolf" Pinky teased.
"I don't remember forgiving you both. So scram" she yelled, but she didn't sound scary or if she even meant it.
"Geet, you started this war with him. And right now it's so obvious you're attracted to him. Your dance in the rain. . .I can't even explain how filmy and romantic you both looked! And then after all the crazy drama between you both and you getting handcuffed, you guys were getting it on with PASTA! Hot and disturbing, but still HOT!" Meera giggles.
"All this anger you have is because you're falling for him Geet." Pinky says putting her hand on her hand, trying to comfort her.
"Bull shit. Please spare me this lecture. I don't believe in this love crap!You very well know its not my thing" she scoffs.
Meera: Ask us Geet. We have seen you with your so called boyfriends over the years, but you guys have the potential to charge a huge room with your charge and electricity that attracts you both to each other.
"She is right. I am getting Goosebumps sitting here Geet" pinky giggles.
"Admit it Geet" many voices say at once.
Geet: yeh lo! Sirf yeh bakhi ti!
" Why are you guys standing in the corner. Join the circle" she forces on a fake smile.
At first Geet thought it was 2 or 3 people, but it turns out it was the whole group of 30 guys and girls, not including Maan, Dev, and Vicky.
"Come on Geet. He likes you , you like him, Case solved! If you admit it, maybe we can get you out of these handcuffs and enjoy the rest of the night" Vicky says joining in.
Geet rolls her eyes, "You guys are unbelievable. I don't like him! Get that in your heads! Geet Handa doesn't do romance!"
Raj, "Did you hear that guys? She doesn't do romance!"
Everyone starts to laugh. Geet eyes enlarge with rage, and usually they would shut up, but not today.
"Show those eyes to Maan, not us Geet! He knows how to melt them" Pooja teases.
"Chalo show her the video and pics of her little flimy Yash raj moment in the rain!" Simran gushes.
"You guys didn't! Omg some friends you guys are!" Geet fumed and pouted her lips.
"Come on Geet. Watch it!" Emraan teased.
But Geet just looked the other way.
"Fine. Bring the projector guys. We have something to show Miss Geet Handa" Vicky smirked!
Geet: OMG nooo! You guys are so lucky I am chained to this damn pole otherwise you would get it!
"I know Geet. You are so unlucky. I bet you still wished to be chained to Maan" Adi says nervously laughing.
Everybody whistled and cheered, not being able to believe that came from Adi's mouth!
"ENOUGH!" a voice roared and silenced everyone.

Precap:

Lights are out!

Maan has Geet pinned Geet and encaged her between his arms, with only the flame of a lighter between them! Mr. Maan Singh Khurana is hungry for some answers!


My updates are like a pregnant lady's mood swings . . not just MAAN 🤣🤣
That should send you a little red flag, things may not seem of what they appear right now. Hope you liked the update 😳

Index
Thread #1 (Parts 1-9)

Thread #2 (Parts 10-14)

Thread #3 (Parts 15-22)



Thread 4:


Part:24
Love ya Dhoka?

Part:25
Don't Get to close, it's where my DEMONS hide

Part:26
My Demons

Part:27
Not Again

Part:28
Taking the pledge to set both of us free

Part:29
Checkmate

Part:30
Don't tear me down

Part:31
The Irony Called life

Part:32

Close Yet So Far

Part:33
Beginning of a new kind of relationship


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love4all thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome part dear
Oh game is just begin
But it will be very hard for geet to accept if she loose
the kind of character geet have it will be very difficult for her to come to maan not because she did not love him but because she loves him like no one else and this is the main thing . She will think herself not worthy of maan and then its to maan to bring her our of that .
For now nice part both are trying to play hard and they will win both as in love no one loose and no one win its a game of love .

I hope maan will able to be with her when she need him most .

cont soon waiting

with love
seher 😊
Edited by love4all - 12 years ago
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wow lovely update zee dear
this geet is so stubborn and maan is so clever lolz
continue soon dear
Edited by ana56 - 12 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread...

so they all r teasing geet...

seems geet like is also liking it all but hiding it behind her anger...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Can we have Geet winning
Because im kind of hating her seeing loose
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Originally posted by: -afsha-

Can we have Geet winning

Because im kind of hating her seeing loose


Like i said it's just the beginning, and Geet is not going to lose anytime soon . . i promise you that. I still have yet to decide who i want to win. Don't want to spoil anything, but it will be clear in the next 5 or so updates, what is really going on in Geet's head.

Thx for commenting. . feel free to ask me anything else.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow, fantastic. dr fighting & eatting, feeding☺️ awesome.
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congrats on new thread
loved the update
is maan really breaking her or is geet acting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: preethia

congrats on new thread

loved the update
is maan really breaking her or is geet acting


Thank you dear 🤗
so happy you liked the update.

That's the million dollar question!
No one knows except Geet!
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congratulations for the thread..
and update was mindblowing..!!

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