'I see right through you' NOTE PG:152 Jan 18

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When two people both rich and with huge attitudes come face-to-face than was is there to expect? Two people who think there names is enough for people to bow down to them, that keep encountering each other through fate, let alone fighting is nothing else you can expect from them. And their names are " Geet Handa" and " Maan Singh Khurana" although there is more than meets the eye. Geet Handa who may seem as very simple and innocent is not really so or is she? She doesn't believe in love and has a past that has influenced the person she is now. Maan Singh Khurana doesn't believe in love either, but once it happens he can't run away from it and neither can Geet. Join the fun journey of these two similar and yet different people and see what fate has in store?


CHaracter Sketch
Geet Handa- 22 years old

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She is a rich and spoiled girl that attends college. She could kill the world with her beauty . She is completely breathtaking. She has a past, which has influenced the girl she is today. Her life consists of only having fun! Be it partying, drinking, or having one-night stands. She doesn't believe in love, but is with a different guy like every week. She has a step-mother who she could care less about, because she believes nobody could take the place of her mother Rani! Ever! She keeps a pretense of being a simple and innocent girl infront of her family wearing salwar kamizes and such, but in other places she is completely westernized. If you mess with her than get ready to handle her attitude. She will not go down without a fight.


Her group of Best friends consist of Meera, Pinky, Adi, Dev Khurana, and Vicky Khurana. They are closer to her than her own family. People she really cares about, but they don't know how her one-night stands. They do know she likes to party, drink, and spend time with guys, but don't know anything more than that.
Maan Singh Khurana-26 years old


He is also a rich guy with a big attitude. He has a very high and respectable name in society. which adds to his ego. He never completed finished college and got his MBA degree, only a semester was left. He had to leave his studies for personal reasons. He does not believe in love, which eventually starts to change when he meets Geet. He has never been with a girl before or has ever touched one. Nobody had ever caught his attention for that matter until he meets Geet. Although in the beginning their relationship is rough, nothing but fighting.
He is Dev Khurana and Vicky Khurana's older brother.
His family consists of his Father: Yash Singh Khurana
mother: Naina Singh Khurana
and Grandmother: Daadima

STORY SO FAR:


Geet Hands is a spoil brat. She does not like her step mother. One day, Geet parked her bmw near a coffee shop and changed and came out in different avatar and this time a mercedez came and splash muddy water on her salwar. That was how maan and geet met for the first time.

It was like clash of titans then we got to knew about real Geet.
pinky, meera vickey, adi and dev were friends of geet.Dev,younger brother of maan loved her which was known by geet but still she didn't ove him back.
All knew about life of geet but nobody knew about her one night stand.
Then geet tells everybody about her encounter with msk and dev purposely told Vicky to hide that they were msk's brother. On the same day at night, geet's car broke down and maan helped her and for the first time called her pagli.

Maan started to fix the car and saw geet was asleep bt when he woke her she started to whimper like to leave me alone maan assures her. Then they, share some intimate moments .After this maan dropped geet at her home after reaching home geet's father asked her where was she till now she told that her car broke down.

Geet's father told her that her mother dream was to see her get married. Then she goes to her room and opens a locket from her neck and tells that i would never marry anyone. Here in maan's house dadi also tells him to get married and they have selected a girl.

Maan's brother starts questing maan about his changed behavior and maan tells that he loves someone and both of them teases him.
Next day maan drops her at college and everyone get shocked to see Geet in salwar and also with msk.
There geet comes to know that dev and vickey are msk's brother.
So she decides that all would pay for playing with her.

Before the party geet talks to her mother rano in her imagination and her mother tells her that he has came and would see right through u
in party geet comes to know that it is maan with whom she is going to get married and she thinks that dev and vickey had set her up for maan. So she decided to show maan who really is she.

Written by abi and shreya😳

Part:10

Beautiful Monster

Geet clicks on the send button on her phone and sends a text message to dev, and soon a winning smile started to creep on her face.
She looks at her watch and there was 5 minutes to 11:00 left. She got this weird feeling and looks at the door. For some reason she felt like he was here already. She brushes it aside and get's herself ready for the interesting night she has planned.
Maan walks in confused out of his mind. Why would Geet tell him to come here? Why would she want to meet him here? She didn't look like the type at all. This was a disco club for GOD'S SAKE!!! Not that he really minded Geet being here it just didn't feel right. This was not who Geet was. . . she was different and that is what attracted Maan to her so much. Maybe he came to the wrong address.
Geet didn't know why her breath hitched when she saw him. He looked so innocent and lost in love trying to look for her through the crowd. She screams at herself mentally for calling him innocent. It was because of him she was trapped and set up to marry him, how is that innocent???
Instantly Maan get's a text. It was a text from Geet, which said, " Spot me if you can".
He is about to turn around to see where she was. She could see him, so she had to be nearby. Why was she playing this hide and seek game. "Itni shararati" he said with his sexy smirk.
Suddenly the lights turn off and the atmosphere gets masked with darkness. The spotlight falls on her; her back was faced toward everyone. Silence envelops the whole place and she could feel the breaths getting caught in everyone's throat.
She was angry and hurt so she was going to let herself loose tonight. Time to show everyone what Geet Handa is about and does BEST. She turns around and the stage lights sizzle around her while the music blasts as the same time. Her beauty got all the more illuminated under all those sparkling lights. The crowd roars with cheers.

She knew he was watching and saw her and that is when she starts to move with the drumbeats of the music. The crowd roars with cheers.
Dancers started to gather around behind her and sway with her in sync.
(imagine Geet as Kaitrina)

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=alZDrBR4Ink[/YOUTUBE]

One guy sings,
"Alright it hurts. . . TOUCH!
ohhh can I get ya'
ohhh can I touch ya'"
Geet sings:

oh zara zara touch me, touch me, touch me
oh zara zara kiss me, kiss me, kiss me
oh zara zara hold me, hold me, hold me
oh zara zara o o o o o...
A little little touch me, touch me, touch me
A little little kiss me, kiss me, kiss me
A little little hold me, hold me, hold me
A little little o o o o '.
touch me, touch me, touch me
zara zara kiss me, kiss me, kiss me
zara zara hold me, hold me, hold me
zara zara o o o o o...
A little little touch me, touch me, touch me
A little little kiss me, kiss me, kiss me
A little little hold me, hold me, hold me
A little little o o o o '.
Her hips moving left and right, her hands swaying with the wind.
Her sexy moves combined with her beauty knocking the breath out of everyone, especially one person in particular. He couldn't get his eyes off her. He was held prisoner within her hypnotizing eyes. She was attracting him like a flame. But the whole time he was wondering why she was showing herself like this to captivate him, when she had already won his heart?

Why break through the bounds to impress him when she was perfect just the way she was.
She was different and unique with her simplicity and innocence, which is what attracted him to her first, so why is she changing herself tonight? So many questions itching through his brain, but at the moment he was just letting himself sing for him.
(bin tere sanam iss jahan mein, bekraar hum dam da dam da dam
bin tere sanam iss jahan mein bekraar hum) - (2)
without you my love ,I am restless in this world
She starts to chug down a glass of alcohol and then approach her target. . .MAAN.
She starts to slide her finger sensuously against the side of face, sending ripples of desire down his body and then sings:
oh zara zara touch me, touch me, touch me
She starts to move her lips up against the nape of his neck up his collarbone and stops inches away from his luscious M shaped lips while singing:
oh zara zara kiss me kiss, me kiss me
oh zara zara hold me, hold me, hold me
oh zara zara ohhh...
Slowly touch me, touch me touch me
Slowly kiss me, kiss me, kiss me
Slowly hold me, hold me, hold me
Slowly Ohhh
Geet was actually finding it hard to control herself around him, but she had to focus.
She turns herself around and wraps her arms around his neck and starts to dance against his body driving her hands down his shirt unbuttoning his shirt going lower and lower.
Then she comes up driving her hands up his chiseled and Greek body abs. She was actually enjoying herself. HE was very HOT she couldn't resist herself from not feeling him for herself.

Who said she couldn't enjoy herself while she got revenge?
She slowly reaches the edge of his ear and gives a tight squeeze against his earlobe, leaving her love mark and singing:
touch me, touch me, touch me
zara zara kiss me, kiss me, kiss me
slowly touch me touch me touch me
slowly kiss me kiss me kiss me
Then she grabs the collar of his shirt and brings him in closer singing:
zara zara hold me, hold me, hold me
slowly hold me, hold me
zara zara ohhh...
Slowly ohhh...
Then she leaves from his embrace and Maan tries to grab her hand, but in vain as she runs away.

She starts to dance with her back up dancers and sway with the music.
Then her eyes fall on the door where she sees Dev finally come.
Perfecting timing she thought to herself.
She walks up approaching Maan, and he was ready to have her in his embrace, but to his surprise she gives a " do I know you look" to him and walks passed him and starts to approach Dev.

Dev had received her text, which stated that if he wanted for Geet to forgive him for hiding the truth than she had to come to this address.
Dev thought that she was probably drunk and was about to go the other way sensing the naughty look she had in her eyes. He didn't want to ruin the friendship at least they shared, once she wakes up in the morning and she is sober and realizes what she has done. But Geet wasn't drunk.
Geet quickly grabs his hand and starts to sing,
(tera hi tera hi intzar hai, mujhe toh bas tujhse pyar hai
tera hi tera abb khumar hai, khud pe na mere ikhtiyar hai) - (2)
(bin tere sanam iss jahan mein, bekraar hum dam da dam da dam
bin tere sanam iss jahan mein bekraar hum) - (2)
i am waiting for only you, i love only you
its only your intoxication, i dont have control on me
without you my love, i am restless in this world
without you my love, i am restless in this world
She pushes him up against the wall entrapping him within her sexy long arms.
Dev was losing control; never in his dreams did he imagine Geet getting this close with him. He has loved her for a few years now, and seeing her approach him like this he forget the world around him.
She starts to inch closer and blow her sexy scent down the side of his cheek singing,
oh zara zara touch me, touch me, touch me
oh zara zara kiss me kiss, me kiss me
oh zara zara hold me, hold me, hold me
oh zara zara ohhh...
Slowly touch me, touch me touch me
Slowly kiss me, kiss me, kiss me
Slowly hold me, hold me, hold me
Slowly Ohhh
And before anyone could of have guessed she crushed her plump lips against his. At first Dev couldn't believe it, but then started to reply back, and move in sync with her lips. Geet didn't feel anything it was just a part of her plan to break these two brothers apart who both loved her.
She slowly inches away breaking the kiss. Then she walks away and turns around to find Maan with shocked eyes sending a million questions of hurt and pain right at her . . .his eyes asking her why? But she didn't feel anything. NO remorse, no regret, no pain. She blocked out all those emotions a long time ago. It made life so much easier for her that way. She gets to break hearts, something she does BEST, and not feel guilty about it.
Dev turns around to see who she was looking at and to his surprise he finds his big brother Maan whose face displayed nothing but pain. That is when he put the pieces together and looked at Geet with crushed hopes and a crushed heart.
Dev: You were using me. . . your best friend? You played with both our hearts? Kyun Geet?
She didn't even reply back she just walked over to Maan, who was expressionlessly like a statue starting at her. He not only lost his heart, but his tongue not being able to believe what he just witnessed, the love of his life, do right before his eyes.
"ssshhh. . . ." Geet hissed in pain as she quickly retracts her hand from Maan's face.
" Your burning Maan" she says with a worried look, and then an evil smirk starts to creep on her lips.
She chuckles and then grabs the color of his shirt with one hand and says, " I had told you not to come to close to me. I warned you didn't I?"
Maan just stood their lifeless, soulless, and with the remaining pieces of his heart. How could someone be such a beautiful monster? He wished he had the answer.
You don't know how right you were when you said I am different and was trying to portray myself to be something that I actually was not. You fell for a Geet that didn't exist Maan. This is who I am Maan.
How could you even think I could fall for a person like you? We are worlds apart! You are boring, serious, and not to mention to good. I am the total opposite. I am not innocent at all. I am with a different guy every week Maan. I don't think you would want a wife who even after marriage sleeps with someone else other than you . . .do you?
Maan head does a double take as her words sinked into him 'one particular part kept echoing and ripping his soul and heart into pieces, " I don't think you would want a wife who even after marriage sleeps with someone else other than you . . .do you?"
Now that I have ripped your heart into pieces you will never make the mistake of falling in love.
She inches closer to his ear and whispers "Let me tell you a little secret. Love doesn't exist. It's only lust JAAN I would know"'She emphasizes the word Jaan and an evil smirk comes on her lips.

"I usually sleep with the guy and then break his heart...so be happy i let you go so easily".
She is about to turn away when Maan grabs her wrist. The hold he had on her was just getting tighter and tighter.
Geet: Choro mujhe Maan.
I said let me go. You're hurting me.
She struggles with his grip'he was actually really hurting her now. With one tug she comes crashing into his chest.
Maan: What about the pain you have caused me. Uska kya Geet. . . hain? Jawab doh mujhe? What gave you the right to do this to me Geet? You have played with Maan Singh Khurana's heart?
Geet: Who gave you the right to fall in love with me Maan?
" This is who I am. I break hearts. Ask your brother Dev he knew and yet still he fell for my trap. You both did" she says chuckling.
Maan couldn't believe her. Who was this girl'he couldn't be Geet. This is not the person he saw in her. What happened to the other Geet? This couldn't be Geet. It just couldn't.
Just then a man calls Geet's name.
Geet pushes Maan away, and hugs the guy screaming, " Sameer!! I missed you".
Sameer: I missed you too babe. Is this guy bothering you?
Geet: Who? I don't even know him?
Come on let's go I want to feel you in me tonight.
She said it loud enough for Maan to get the message.
She entwines his hands with Sameer's and walks out giving a winning look to Maan before she disappeared into the crowd.
" Maa he has lost the key in his own ocean of pain. Now I will see how he will open me" geet scoffs of mentally inside her head.
A dark cloud of darkness and pain was hovering over him, drowning him to the ground. A tear escapes from his eyes. How could someone be such a beautiful monster? HOW? But there was nobody to hear his pain. There was no one to answer his question. There was just a beautiful monster continuously killing him with her words and memories.

Hurting so much that I cannot hide it any longer and a
river of tears flow down my cheeks to my pillow.
Crying until I cannot anymore.
Words the invisible knife that goes deeper with each
word spoken until it makes it through.
Words that then make a knife slice downward more each
time with it's painful intention.
In the end, what is left is a broken heart, sitting inside
depressed crying in pain.
My mind can't stand the heart this way.
Thoughts fluttering in of the possible solutions all no
good to be thought; let alone acted upon.
My heart feels so weak it can't go on; there is no hope
or support.
Time to end it, my heart can't take any more and either
can I.
slowly taking a knife and slicing my will to
live.
Sitting in the corner in the fetal position, my face to the
wall and my back to the rest of it all.
Silently awaiting my fate as the blood trickles all over and my blurred vision sets in.
Could this be the end?
Oh please let it be!!
I can take no more.
Set me free of this life and bring my heart to the joyful
beats it once had.
Bring me to the place of ecstasy and harmony so that for
once I may be happy.

from bloomysunday😳

Pre-cap:

Maan: Okay Miss Handa. Time for you to meet Maan SIngh Khurana.


Hit the like button and comment...i want to know how u liking the story so far.

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KTPROCKS thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the update
i love the precap
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hey
gr8 update..
cont.soon
Congrats for new trend..
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this is one nasty geet yaar, poor maan but now the war is on. lovely update, congrats on another thread.
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WOW!!! Nice part dear =)...Hmmm,,, i really dont like Geet behavinng like this BUT i guess and sure there is a reason behind this all and im sure its more heartbreaking than we can imagine...Hmmm,,,My heart went our for Maan when he had tears in his eyes and when his heart shattered into pices...Hmmm,,, And the precap is interesting,,,Hopefully our MSK will find the real Geet Handa...Our Geet,,,Maan's Geet...And poor Maan saw his Geet kissing his bro...And then he talk with Sameer...ewww...Poor MSK but fake Geet Handa get ready to face MSK and the key u though was lost in the ocean of pain was not drawed but captured saved and treasured by our MSK and u get ready to be opened by our, ur MSK and he will surely find that Geet who have locked and sealed forever BUT the forever is soon to disappear...Bice part dear =).x.
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Originally posted by: x.Maaneet4eva.x

WOW!!! Nice part dear =)...Hmmm,,, i really dont like Geet behavinng like this BUT i guess and sure there is a reason behind this all and im sure its more heartbreaking than we can imagine...Hmmm,,,My heart went our for Maan when he had tears in his eyes and when his heart shattered into pices...Hmmm,,, And the precap is interesting,,,Hopefully our MSK will find the real Geet Handa...Our Geet,,,Maan's Geet...And poor Maan saw his Geet kissing his bro...And then he talk with Sameer...ewww...Poor MSK but fake Geet Handa get ready to face MSK and the key u though was lost in the ocean of pain was not drawed but captured saved and treasured by our MSK and u get ready to be opened by our, ur MSK and he will surely find that Geet who have locked and sealed forever BUT the forever is soon to disappear...Bice part dear =).x.


awww thank you for such a long and beautiful comment 😳

well dear u just hit the bulls eye mark!!! u have no idea how right you are. Geet has to watch out...if she thinks what she did tonight will keep him away, she is wrong. I have some fun twists and track in store for these two...so stick around and see how their story unfolds.

Luv,

Zee
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awesome update,

poor maan but geet underestimated MSK, he will surely bring her real self...

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congrats for the new thread... well nw maan hd seen transformed geet... let's see wht wil maan do nw... we knw he won't back off so easily...
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Nooo it was such a saaad part.
Nw i cant sleep in dis depressed mood 😭
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Congo on new thread...Oh boy, so the real Geet came out and "played"...fiesty and cold-hearted.
But, I'm guessing that MSK is not going to take this one sitting down, Geet wants to play with fire and I'm sure MSK will give her plenty.
Bring on the war...

Great update

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